Hi Genius!
You're off to a good start here, but I need more information about Viktor before I can approve him.
- Can you give me some more detail about his history? Where was he born? What did his mother do for a living, and how well off were they? How did he relate to other children and adult growing up, and did he ever consider a craft? How did he come to be a guard, was it always his dream or something he had to do out of practicality?
How have events of the metaplot affected him? How aware has he been of them? See
here for a brief guide.
Also, is he already at Trine Weyr and if so how long ago was he Searched and what were his reasons for accepting? If he's not there already, would you like a PC search RP?
- How does Viktor act around women? Keep in mind that pretty well all of the women he will be interacting with will be PCs, so his ability to get girls or not will depend on them and whether or not he acts in a way they IC find desirable.
- Fighting at Trine won't be accepted, and this will be made clear to him. How does he cope with having to reign in his temper? Does he lose it and thus get himself into trouble? Serious fights (if he badly hurts somebody) could get him barred from candidacy, less serious ones will probably land extra chores and warnings up to a point.
- I see that Viktor accepts authority: is this because he is a natural follower, or because while he wants to be a leader some day he can accept that at the moment he is young/inexperienced/etc and is willing to wait and earn his place?
- How does he act towards women he (correctly or not) believes want to date him?
- Could you tell me a bit more about him doing right and what's just? What do you mean by 'in the field' in this bit? And how does he deal with it when he thinks somebody is acting incorrectly; would it be different if they were a peer as opposed to authority?
- Is he a stubborn sort?
- Can you tell me a bit about his ambitions and dreams, and what fears he has and how he deals with them?
Thank you, and sorry it took me so long to get to him!
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