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oneironym

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 17, 2013 4:27 pm


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Name: Nisha Pawar Tristão de Silva

Nickname: none that she's aware of

Age: 18

Birthday: September 22nd (1994)

Sign: Virgo-Libra cusp

Gemstone: moonstone

Blood Type: O

Fav. Food: Anything spicy, including any and all curries. Also parfaits, which should not be spicy.

Hated Food: Meat that's not chicken, including fish.

School: DCU, studying sports medicine

Hobbies:
Fencing - Nisha is into sports in general, going through all manner of youth teams in her younger years before settling on fencing in particular. She attended Crystal Academy for high school on a scholarship for fencing, which she felt put her rather at the bottom of the totem pole in classes, but she turned her aggression to speed on the strip. Currently she competes for DCU, and is trying to decide whether to pursue it professionally with sports medicine as a back-up, or focus more on her studies and allow fencing to become a hobby instead.
Runway fashion - The crazier the better. She likes shopping as much as the next girl, but she loves seeing art to wear, particularly when it is novel and far out. Her class notes have long been filled with drawings of designs of her own, but Nisha has never pursued this as more than an idle hobby. Still, she follows runway show news when she can find it, and maintains collections of images of her favorite designs.
Slam poetry - It's a straightforward art form, like poetry in English except you can cuss and it doesn't have to rhyme if you don't want it to. Nisha loves attending open mic sessions both to read and to listen, because she loves the attention, and she also figures the most like-minded people will be out at the same events to express themselves with honesty and clever word-smithing.

Virtues:
Steadfast - This girl stands by her morals and is not known to cave to simple peer pressure. She also sticks up for her friends, physically if necessary, even though she may not be the biggest or strongest person out there. And if a friend ever needs a couch to crash on or a bowl of ice cream to cry in, Nisha will be there, too.
Up Front - Nisha is a no-passive-aggression zone. She strongly believes that no one can fix what they don't know about, and so if she has a problem with someone, she will let that person know. This also means that her friends will be aware of her support for them. Lying is not unknown to her, but she does try to avoid doing so.
Independent - If nothing else, Nisha is confident about who she is. In spite of being stubborn, she is also not prone to talking stupid risks. She is also not looking for anyone to fulfill any particular role in her life, and considers it a mark of personal pride that she can get by at her age without needing a boyfriend. She calls her parents occasionally for help with adult obligations, but tries to avoid this, preferring in general to seek her own answers.

Flaws:
Lazy - Nisha is decently intelligent, and learns well by doing in particular, but she has a lot of trouble with rote memorization. She scraped by in problem classes in high school with passing grades, but not without tutoring. As a result, now that she's in university and not required to pursue certain subjects anymore, the girl is not willing to bother trying. She harbors a particular hatred for mathematics because she can do the problems, but only if the test is open-note or she has a formula sheet. If something does not come easily to her, she is not willing to apply herself.
Rigid thinker - Her confidence in her own opinions makes Nisha reluctant to change them. She tends to be judgmental about people when she meets them, and is not often willing to take a chance on someone she thinks is too dissimilar from herself.
Indelicate - Nisha's fundamental flaw is that she has confused "freedom of expression" with "freedom to be a b***h". If she tells you that you look ugly in that skirt and you get upset, then clearly you just couldn't handle the truth. She will nearly always say exactly what she thinks because she can, and anyone who has a problem has something wrong on their end. That said, this does not represent a disrespect for authority figures necessarily - Nisha will step lightly around those she is afraid of, but if they ask for her opinion, she will definitely air whatever issues she has.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: Purple and always outlined in eyeshadow and liner to make them stand out.

Hair: Dark purple

Face: Round and typically framed by large dangling gold-tone earrings. Nisha has a small round gold stud on the side of her nose, and a larger gold stud in her lower lip.

Clothes: Polyvore outfit? Her skintone is dark Indian, and she likes tight jeans with loose flowing tunic tops in general.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 17, 2013 4:29 pm


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Senshi: Sailor Talos, DMS of Statues

Challenge: "Just try to lose my marble!"

Fuku: ==>

Attacks:
Sailor Scout Attack: Talos Brass Knuckles!
Talos lunges into battle with a burst of speed, fists shrouded in a golden glow. For 5 seconds, the next punch she lands hits with the bluntness and power of metal instead of flesh. She can hit with either hand, but after the first punch lands, the glow fades from both hands. If she cannot land a punch in her quick assault, the power dissipates, and the attack remains expended. Talos can use this three times per battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Talos Brass Retribution!
As above, except as she darts in for the assault, ethereal gold wings appear folded at her shoulders to help protect her head and upper body. Wings remain folded and close to Talos' body, and they remain immaterial until hit by an attack, at which point they block it with a metallic sound. Talos has the same short time frame in which to land her empowered punch as the lesser version of this attack (5 seconds), but the defensive wings remain for 20 seconds or until each has blocked one attack. Wings cannot defend against undirected attacks, such as smoke or poison clouds.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Talos Stone Vigil!
Talos turns her body completely to stone, also masking her energy signature. She retains her appearance in stone, and can turn at most one inanimate object to stone with her; she cannot extend this power to living targets, even willing ones. Talos remains aware of her surroundings, but cannot move or interact with them in any way as long as the effect persists. If her statue is attacked, she will be aware of it, but will feel diminished pain. If any parts of stone Talos are broken off, when she returns to her human form, those limbs will still be attached, but the bones will be broken. It takes Talos 5 seconds to shift fully into this form, starting from her feet, and 5 seconds to shift back, ending with her feet. She can maintain the stone form for up to 45 seconds, once per day.

oneironym

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oneironym

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 17, 2013 5:01 pm


Herpderp finally got off my butt to finish this up =3=
PostPosted: Sun Sep 01, 2013 7:24 pm


Asahi Kumoru


Hi Kumo~ I'm sorry you've had to wait so long for a stamp!

ON THE CIVILIAN SIDE:

I actually think Nisha is great <3 Don't see anything to change here!

ON THE POWERED SIDE:

I think her regular and Super attacks look great - just one small thing: is the timeframe for the empowered punch the same between basic and Super?

However, for her Eternal, five minutes is way too long for an attack to last. I'd cap it at about 45 seconds to a minute, since it's entirely defensive. It doesn't seem like a lot, but we consider most IC battles to occur in about five minutes!

Quote me when you've made changes and I'll be back for another look<3


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oneironym

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 01, 2013 10:19 pm


Songstress Kitsune
No worries! Changes made and highlighted in blue. I'd originally thought of the Eternal attack as something she'd use entirely out of combat, but it'll probably be more fun this way anyway twisted
PostPosted: Sun Sep 01, 2013 10:34 pm


Okay, looks good to me~

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 03, 2013 7:24 pm


Asahi Kumoru


Hey, Kumo! Talos' profile looks good to me, so I'm going to drop off a stamp. Enjoy playing her!

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