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 Posted: Wed Mar 08, 2006 5:09 pm
RED IS THE COLOR
Red is the color of my true love's kiss
The creation of a sweet sweet bliss.
The color of romance, the color of rosies,
And also the color of my niece's sweet toesies.
The color of confidence, the color of spunk
The color of my brother being a punk.
Hearts, roses, love, and poses.
All of these are red, not brown noses.
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Posted: Wed Mar 08, 2006 5:10 pm
I LOVE YOU
I love you forever in my heart,
I'll tell you when I'm ready so it will be a start..
Even though little it may be a lot.
We'll be together, I doubt not.
As of now I'll dream forever
And I'll never stop loving, never ever.
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Posted: Wed Mar 08, 2006 5:11 pm
TRUE LOVE
A crush on you was all it took.
My legs melted and my body shook.
I couldn't take my eyes off you
But I couldn't tell and it made me blue.
Even if you didn't know, I was happy to be around.
And I'll even spy on you without making a sound.
Even though you think me weird,
A broken heart is all I've feared.
You with your eyes, that sparkle in the light
The kiss I want in a romantic night.
This is true love, like a rose so bright.
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Posted: Wed Mar 08, 2006 5:12 pm
THE HOBBY
Baseball, Soccer, and Basketball too.
All of these hobbies are what I've played with you.
Teamwork is required, and support is known.
If you are selfish, you're game is blown.
Do the best you can and see if it's fame.
Woohoo, Hurray, you've won the game!
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Posted: Wed Mar 08, 2006 5:13 pm
DARKNESS (My best work yet!)
You cannot trust it, it will lie and it will hurt
It is not so much as a friendly pal flirt
It's under your bed, it's in your room
Its in your closet, its on a broom
There is no end there is no cure
It wraps around you, the bright light blurred.
Truth be tell you cannot say
All you want is it to go away
It's master is the darkest night
Make it disappear with the brightest light
Grace and style is not its type
It only likes the gothic spike
As for now turn on the bright
Don't hold back, make sure you fight.
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Posted: Wed Mar 08, 2006 5:16 pm
I love my poems! No on better copy them or else... ********!!!
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Posted: Wed Mar 08, 2006 5:26 pm
So much emotion... biggrin
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Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2006 3:51 pm
I enjoted that. I like short poems better most of the time anyway lol
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Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2006 8:30 pm
very nice.. and I would hope everyone here wouldnt even think of copying your work 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2006 8:54 pm
hmm, now this does not mean that I do not like them I am just noticing that they all have the same rythm.
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Posted: Tue Jul 04, 2006 6:42 pm
I would have to agree with Akaihari, the common rhythm that you have implemented in each one is easily construed, but that is indeed a genuine factor as to why I enjoyed them. ^^
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