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LittleLilyKitty

Tiny Kitten

PostPosted: Sat Apr 06, 2013 4:04 pm


Uppgrade for this character... I would like to revise her civilian self as well if possible.

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Name: Shirina Yadira Sorah

Nickname(s): Jade

Age: 22 23

Birthday: September 2

Sign: Virgo

Fav. Food: Jade tends to like rich and strong flavours. She often finds dishes from asian cuisines delicious but she won't disclose any cuisine because she believes a good cook should try anything.

Hated Food: Fast food and convience food. They are not healthy and not tasty. They are not made with love.

Hobbies:

Cooking - Jade's love for cooking didn't really blossom until her teenage years. Sure, she had helped her mom as early as she was trusted enough to hold cooking utensils on her own but because of her father's weak stomacj and stuck-in-his-ways attitude her family rarely experienced with food.
When she reached those rebellious teenage years, she started to go out more and began to try different cuisines and tastes. She began more aware of what she ate and what kind of diet she wanted to follow. Around the age of 17 (when she moved out into her own apartment) she bought her first cooking book and really started her experienmental journey with cooking.
Nowadays, she cooks almost all her meals from the freshest ingredients, refusing to touch any convience foods. Her passion to cooking led her in the culinary school and eventually to the profession of a chef.

Self-Defense - The world is a dangerous place, that Jade has learned in a hard way. After surviving with sheer luck from a possible lethal attack few years back, she decided to not count her luck anymore. She did join the rape prevention class that was held by karateka and later took some karate classes hosted by the same teacher. She regularly practices these skills at home or in gym where she sometimes spars with others. She also keeps herself in shape by doing exercises and jogging. Her fightning style is more defensive than offensive but she is capable to fight successfully againgst a regular thug if needed to.

Tea Ceremonies/Parties - When Jade was in culinary school she had a roommate that was a big fan of japanese food and customs. She invited Jade to take part to a japanese tea ceremony. Jade (who had heard only a glimpse of japanese tea ceremonies) accepted the invitation and hadn't regret it since. Relaxing scent of tea calm her mind and sophisticated atmosphere gives her feeling she is a fine lady who knows etiquette and thus fits in the group.
She prefers japanese tea ceremony the most for it's ideals for finding the perfect harmony. Probably it being her first experience in tea culture might had an affect for her favoring this ceremony. However, in her opinion the best tasting tea is served in chinese tea ceremonies.

Virtues:

Perfectionist - Everything Jade puts her mind into, she does her best in it. When she is cooking she keeps close attention to food she is preparing, reguraly tasting and fixing it when necessary and making sure it also looks good. She has got good reputation of her cooking skills. Being perfectionist also means that she pays attention to how she looks and acts like in public. She considers her words carefully and tries to remain polite as much as possible. She takes care of her body and makes sure that her outfits are tidy and approciated for the surroundings she is using them in.
Behind this virtue lies a desire to be accepted and liked by people around her. She most often succeeds in this goal as her well-thought appearance and manners give people good impression of her. In general, people tend to find it easy to start interacting with her as she doesn't appear as rude person and doesn't look repulsive or out of place.

Calm - There is little that can shake Jade. It's hard to get an angry look from her and even harder to bring tears in her eyes. Did she failed to prepare the dish right? No panic, she will try harder and get it right at the next time. Did someone insulted her on street? Not a big deal, she won't even turn her head to respond. Having calm mind comes handy when she needs to do something under pressure. She is able to keep her head cool rather well in kitchen during a rush hour. She has no tendency to panic in battle situations either.

Dedicated - When Jade has set her goal (whether it mean being the best chef in Destiny City, the best fighter in the Negaverse, the best party host in her tea party group, etc.) she will do everything she can to get there. She spends a lot of time into studying the subject and practising it. Because she is willing to focus on things that spark her interest and that she is passionate about, she is actually quite good doing those things. She is far from perfect but people tend to like her passion and efforts to reach her goals.

Flaws:

Perfectionist - While perfectionism has it's merits, it has it's flaws as well. Jade is very nit-picky about small details, sometimes even so much that it actually slows her. Should she make a mistake or face an unexpected problem, it could take minutes - sometimes even hours - for her to fix the problem or get over with it. Even tough she tries her best to prepare for surprises, things don't always go as planned. When they don't, she is stuck with the problem and finds it difficult to let the problem be if it's unfixed. This can be troublesome, especially in situations when she needs to multi-task or she doesn't really have time to spend on stuff like that.
She is her worst critic but she can be rather critical to others too. If someone doesn't meet her exceptions, in example by not taking care of their body or acting without thought, they get little respect from her. While she doesn't outright snap at those people, she might give them meaningful looks or simply just avoid their company. Thus, working with different kind of people is difficult to her at times.

Distant - It isn't easy to get to know Jade. She rarely talks about herself, her dreams or things she likes or dislikes. She is afraid to let out too much information of herself, fearing it would be used against her. She had been betrayed by the people she trusted before, what would stop that happening again? Only few selected people have earned her trust but even those people don't know her deepest secrets.

Serious - Jade is very serious girl. If she smiles, it is very small, controlled smile. If she is angry, it can be seen only from her lowered eyebrows. And her tears, she holds them until she is alone. Because she is so focused of maintaining a good public image and keeping her emotions in control she often forgets to take things easy and relax. She fears looking like a fool if she lets her emotions affect to her too much. The result ends up often herself taken as boring and unfun. It also makes her difficult to communicate with as she is rather hard to read.

Current Occupation: Chef in a small cafeteria called Union close to Destiny City University.

Eyes: Deep brown.

Hair: Light turquiose in color. When free, it reaches almost to the ground. She ties her hair up usually, in a complex looking chignon.

Face: She has tiny lips, soft pink in color. Her expression is serious almost always. Any emotions she may show are very minimal, like a small curve on her lips or her eye brow raising a little. Her skin color is quite fair, so light that her skin burns easily.

Fashion: Her style is very classic and simple. She doesn't like to stand out from the growth or wear clothes that reveal too much skin. She wears rarely any accessories except simple hair clips that keep her hair up.


Negaverse Alias: Lieutenant Turquoise

Challenge: I won't make mistakes.

Uniform: Sexy dress with militaristic feel that resembles cheongsam.

Main Color: Black
Secondary color: Turquoise (that matches her hair)

Weapon:
Lieutenant - 2 little porcelain saucers that look like they could be from tea set (Used as thrown weapons. Rather fragile, they break easily. If broken, they immediately disappear into the Negaspace.)
Captain - 2 little steel/iron saucers (Used as thrown weapons. Rather durable, not easily breaking. Blunt, can cause bruises but nothing more serious.)
General - 2 little steel/iron saucers with bladed edges (Used as thrown weapons. Rather durable. Bladed edges can cause some nasty cuts.)

Branch: Specs

Why Specs? Well, Jade is physically fit and she has some self-defense skills. She is rather calm too and not easily provoked. While she is observant, she isn't very charismatic or cunning so IntO branch might not be right branch for her. InfO even less as she is pretty much the loner type.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 06, 2013 5:27 pm


Could you please explain what a sayser is or link to a reference image of one? I can't find anything that resembles a holdable object when I google-search it.

Verithe

Hygienic Explorer


LittleLilyKitty

Tiny Kitten

PostPosted: Sat Apr 06, 2013 5:46 pm


My goodness, I'm sorry! I accidentally wrote 'sayser' instead of 'saucer'. This is what happens when writing stuff at late at night. sweatdrop Sheesh, I'm embarrased now. -.-

Anyway, fixed it. I hope it makes more sense now.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 06, 2013 7:00 pm


Oh, haha! My confusion is lifted. Silly typos.

Lt. Turquoise is looking pretty cool!

Verithe

Hygienic Explorer


LittleLilyKitty

Tiny Kitten

PostPosted: Sat Apr 06, 2013 11:09 pm


Thank you! ^_^ heart
PostPosted: Tue May 07, 2013 7:49 am


Hi LLK! Congrats on your win! Turquoise’s art is lovely!

Since Jade is an already existing character there’s no need to revise her civilian profile unless you want to, but it’s something I’d be more than happy to help you with! I’ve compared her new profile to her old one and it doesn’t seem as if you’ve made too many changes, just a little more elaboration here and there, which is fine!

I did want to ask a few questions to hopefully help you elaborate even more if you don’t mind!

Self Defense Hobby – is there a particular form of martial art she enjoys and/or is skilled in? If so, why? It would be a bit unrealistic if she was skilled in all forms of martial art, so picking one or even a few she is at least familiar with would probably be beneficial!

Tea Parties/Ceremonies – what got her interested in tea and tea parties/ceremonies? Does she prefer any over the other?

Perfectionist Virtue – I’m seeing a little more here about how this is projected in a physical sense (her cooking skills, her physical appearance) rather than something that affects her mentally or emotionally! Why is this something that would make people like her? Why is this something others would admire in her? How does this help her in her social interactions with other people?

Perfectionist Flaw – Conversely, why is this something others would not like about her? Has it caused others to pull away from her before? Why and how?

The powered portion of her profile looks great! Her weapon is appropriate and the progression is logical! How do you intend for her to use the saucers though? Just out of curiosity. I assume the saucers would be thrown.

Let me know when you’re ready for me to give this another look! :3

Sunshine Alouette

Eternal Senshi


LittleLilyKitty

Tiny Kitten

PostPosted: Fri Jun 14, 2013 1:39 pm


Hi!

Thanks for the helpful crit. heart

Sorry, it took so long to do all updates but well, real life can be so unpredictable. orz rolleyes

Anyway, I made some changes to her Self-Defense and Tea Parties/Ceremonies hobbies and to her Perfectionist virtue and flaw. I also added some details to her weapons section. 3nodding

I hope the profile looks better now! heart

Sunshine Alouette
PostPosted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 9:49 am


LittleLilyKitty


Not a problem! Real life is more important! Take as much time as you need to work on it and I can just pop back in whenever you're ready!

Right now both her "Perfectionist" virtue and flaw are reading much better! Great work! Now, though, I think her "Perfectionist" flaw might be conflicting a bit with her "Calm" virtue. In her "Perfectionist" flaw she comes off as a bit moody and snappy, which doesn't reflect her calm attitude at all! You might want to try coming at her "Perfectionist" flaw at a different angle! Rather than focusing on her appearance and food preparation (which she seems to be on top of most of the time, particularly in the realm of food) you might want to consider looking at things in her life beyond that! Maybe she's okay at looking at the bigger picture but sweats the small things! Maybe she's a little bit nit-picky when it comes to other people and their thoughts, opinions, feelings and activities! Does she legitimately think people should be more like her?

Or you could change the "Calm" virtue to something else if you're pleased with her perfectionism! Something like "Focused" might work for her. For example, is she good at sticking to the task at hand until its complete? "Dedicated" might also work! She does seem as if she's the type of person to give it her all, particularly when it comes to the things she's passionate about!

Sunshine Alouette

Eternal Senshi


LittleLilyKitty

Tiny Kitten

PostPosted: Sun Aug 11, 2013 3:20 pm


Sunshine Alouette

Hiya!

Re-look time! whee I made some changes on her Perfectionist flaw so that would not conflict so much with her Calm virtue. I also felt she needed another virtue and flaw so I added virtue Dedicated and flaw Serious there. 3nodding

I hope those changes gave her a little bit more depth and made her profile look better! heart
PostPosted: Sun Aug 11, 2013 8:51 pm


LittleLilyKitty


Everything looks great now!!! :3 Her profile is nicely balanced and the new virtue and flaw work very well!

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Sunshine Alouette

Eternal Senshi

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