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PostPosted: Sun Mar 31, 2013 2:21 pm


What Do You Look Like:
User Image
What Were You Known As: Exotic
Do You Have Another Name: No
How Old Are You: Unknown (looks 16)
What Are You: Doll (Puppet)

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What Is The Color Of Your Eyes: Yellow
How Tall Are You:
How Much Do You Weigh:
What Is Your Job: Ranged Fighter
Where Did You Live: Altera
Do You Have Any Family: Her little sister.
Do You Have Any Pets: two bots
What Are Your Favorite Things: None
What Are Your Least Favorite Things: Feeling emotions
What Type Of Weapon(s) Do You Use: Two morphic bots that can turn into blades.

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What Do You Like: Unknown
What Of Your Past: Exotic was once an empty body shell, given life to her by her mother and knowledge of being able to give life through magic, Exotic was born. Her mother gave her an amulet that contained the memories of a past life. Her mother told her to flee the area that same moment, she told her very little about the situation and told her about her little sister. Exotic awakened her sister and fled the island with her.
What Are You Able To Do:
1.Metal Dust Aura: Exotic creates metal particles that revolve around her inflicting damage to those who get close.
2.Spear Burst: Exotic creates spears in the air drives them into the ground sending an eletrical wave.
3.Electronic Ball: Exotic charges her hand with electric energy. Once she releases it she immobolize an enemy.
4.Elegant Steps: This allows her to hover above ground or water. When in air she can glide.
5. Hornet Sting: Exotic sends one of bots like a missile exploding on impact. This doesn`t harm her bot.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 31, 2013 3:22 pm


Ok, this is three times you've used elsword pictures and half characters of them. So I am going to through alternatives into these characters also.

- Instead of calling them Nosad's which is an elsword term for their race. I would think that it would be more appropriate for them to be Half Golems. Changing the back ground a little bit to something like. Your family is a strong lineage of Golemmancy. A powerful magic that focuses bringing golems to life. Your mother created your family. Saving your lives with the knowledge. (Because maybe you were all destined to die at birth for some reason.) This would explain your lack of emotions from the beginning as you all wouldn't have any. Not only that, but it would explain your control over the 'drones' Which could be a golemmancy term. These 'drones' would just be another form of Golemmancy that would allow you to use your powers. In this way, they could keep all there abilities. That would also explain their unknown age and looks, as they would be created into there current age.

That is my alternative, if you found another way good job.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 31, 2013 3:28 pm


godofwar1337
Ok, this is three times you've used elsword pictures and half characters of them. So I am going to through alternatives into these characters also.

- Instead of calling them Nosad's which is an elsword term for their race. I would think that it would be more appropriate for them to be Half Golems. Changing the back ground a little bit to something like. Your family is a strong lineage of Golemmancy. A powerful magic that focuses bringing golems to life. Your mother created your family. Saving your lives with the knowledge. (Because maybe you were all destined to die at birth for some reason.) This would explain your lack of emotions from the beginning as you all wouldn't have any. Not only that, but it would explain your control over the 'drones' Which could be a golemmancy term. These 'drones' would just be another form of Golemmancy that would allow you to use your powers. In this way, they could keep all there abilities. That would also explain their unknown age and looks, as they would be created into there current age.

That is my alternative, if you found another way good job.

Actually I was just talking about that too the captain, he likes the idea of them being along the lines of "Dolls, they look human on the outside (somewhat) and contain life on the inside. As for the drones thats one thing I havent come up with, so I guess golemmancy is an idea for them.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 31, 2013 4:44 pm


Good to go.
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