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StarshineAngel01

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 21, 2013 11:49 am


Name: Florianne Mitchell

Nickname: Flora,Anne

Age: 17

Birthday: June 7th

Sign: Gemini

Gemstone: Aquamarine

Blood Type: A+

Fav. Food: Soup

Hated Food: onions,pickles & tomatoes

School: Crystal Academy

Hobbies: Shopping,Stargazing,Fashion

Shopping --What girl does not love to shop?! Florianne loves to be fashion forward even at times when the new fashion style does not suit her taste. She loves shopping for a variety of clothes but is more likely to be seen buying dresses and every so often buying outfits that fit her curves.In other words form fitting clothes, that emphasize her hour glass figure. If she doesn't find what she is looking for she simply just moves onto the next one. She would jump at the opportunity to buy amazing outfits for less or when there is a sale going on. If it's on sale, you better watch out or she will rush past you in hopes to get what she likes first so no one else gets it. If she can find other girls who share the same love of shopping, she will invite them along so she gets different opinions about any outfits her or her fellows shoppers put on and she believes that shopping with friends is a lot more fun then shopping by herself.

Stargazing --Florianne Mitchell has a passion for stargazing, she loves watching the stars in the night sky twinkling away. They give her a sense of tranquility and it gives her time to think about her life and what she wants to do when she reaches an age where she needs to figure out her own destiny. She absolutely loves sitting outside on her porch and staring up at he night sky and seeing if she can identify any constellations that stand out. She owns a telescope that her parents bought her and she uses it all the time except for when the night sky is covered in clouds. She loves the tranquil and relaxing feel stargazing gives a person after a long day of running around and doing errands. There are times when she would like a friend to stargaze with but as far as she knows there aren't many that enjoy the tranquility that stargazing provides and it gives her an oppurtunity to reflect on the direction she wants her life to go as well as the activity that occurs around her. But then again, there are people who think that stargazing is boring. Although if a meteor shower occurs she would so ask friends to enjoy it with her.

Fashion --Florianne is the type of girl who keeps up with the latest trends,buys fashion magazines,sometimes blogs, keeps up with shop brands and sales. Her favourite brands are Gucci and Coach, if she sees any of these brands in a store she will not hesitate to buy them but at the same time she takes time to decipher whether it is a want or a need. Which in turn results her in maxxing out her card. She aspires to be a fashion designer of her own clothing line but at the moment she is still in school and will jump at the oppurtunity to work in a boutique. Hopefully at the end of her school year she will be able to find a fashion mentor who will help her and give her advice.

Virtues:
Outgoing -- Florianne is a very outgoing and passionate person about everything she does. She enjoys making friends and loves sharing her thoughts. She enjoys spending time with her friends and if it came to it a boyfriend. She will not hesitate to share her thoughts or comments on topics or on people. She absolutely adores hanging out with her friends and family and loves sharing stories she has and sharing her experiences, even when it is a bad one. She enjoys learning new things about people she just met.She adores talking about topics that she is passionate about and enjoys life to the fullest. She is known to talk non-stop, about shopping and whatever else. If you need any fashion advice she is always open to offer it.

Diplomatic--She is very open-minded and can adapt to anything that is thrown her way.If she was to encounter a situation where both parties have different opinions she will try to adapt her way of thinking to understand their point of view on the subject.There are times when the situation is not adaptable because each party is so passionate about their side of the situation, and want a ruling because they think their side of the situation makes a lot more sense. In truth, being adaptable has its pros and cons and in some cases more than the other. If she encountered a situation where both her good friends have opposing opinion she will adapt her opinion to her friends' point of view so both parties are happy with the result. People are known to admire her for her diplomacy in emotional situations because she helps them look at the bigger picture of the situation and gives her insight on how to come up with compromise, with this comes the ability to assess the situation with a calm and rational eye. In most cases her judgemental nature doesn't come into play because she knows it will not help defuse the situation.

Flaws:

Perfectionist --Florianne has been known to be a perfectionist in everything she does. Such as making sure her hair was perfect and looked good. She is also one to zero in on small details. If she spots something that is in the wrong she will try to fix it so it looks the way she wants it to. She is one of the girls who think that everything and everyone around has to be perfect and to her liking even though everyone else is unhappy about it.yes there are moments when she gets obsessive over it, especially when it comes to special events such as weddings, prom or even anniversaries because she wants everything to be perfect during the event. She will freak if something goes wrong which in turn will hinder her ability to get other things done in a timely matter, and will frustrate her to an extent where she will give up on it and let it pan out on its own.

Judgemental--Florianne can be very judgemental of people she meets for the first time and any other encounter after that. So you will have to put extra effort into making a good impression on her, and if she spots something that throws her off she will not hesitant to voice it even though she does not take into account the person's feelings.She does not care if she hurts someone's feelings when she is being vocal about her opinions, but it does cause her to assume and draw conclusions about the person,which usually gets her in trouble. Which sometimes ends up with her not making any friends in the first place. She has a tendency to be blunt when a color combination of an outfit doesn't work together. It is the one thing that gets her in trouble but she only offers it because she thinks she knows what's best for the person. If its an outfit that she does not like she will not hesitate to tell you straight out that the outfit looks really bad.

But,when it comes to judging people outside of the fashion world she doesn’t care if she hurts the person’s feelings. In some cases she is too caught up in judging the person’s outfit that she doesn’t hear what they have to say on the topic and tunes them out. She feels that if you don’t have the same interests as her you are not worth interacting with. In some situations she will judge a person on their taste in say men, because if she meets the man she will automatically brush him off because of what he wears and doesn’t really pay attention to whether or not the person is happy with the guy. She will also judge people who believe that everyone needs a second chance because she believes that if you screw up the first chance you won’t do any better during the second chance and no change will occur. In truth her judgemental trait takes over and she forgets about everyone around her and any important appointments.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Green and oval shaped

Hair: dark brown

Face: Heart-shaped

Clothes:Typically wears nice,cute and functional dresses that go up to her knees and loves wearing sandals or ballet flats. She loves wearing dresses and outfits that show off her long tan legs.  
PostPosted: Thu Mar 21, 2013 11:49 am


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Senshi: Sailor Asteria,Senshi of Moonflowers

Challenge: "In the Name of Moonflowers, I'll punish You!"

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Main Color: White
Secondary Color: Silver: #C0C0C0
Teritary color: Pale Yellow

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Attacks: These are your senshi's abilities, which will be used in battle. These abilities correspond to your senshi's element. Think of it as a "summary" of what your senshi can do in one word.

Sailor Scout Attack: Moonflower Pollen shower
Elvira will grasp her skirt and shake it and it releases the moonflower pollen. It can hit one opponent within six feet of her and causes them feel almost as if they are daydreaming. Feelings of sleepiness, distraction, and possibly actual daydreams follow the opponent for 20 seconds. Like real daydreams they can be ignored/or made less distracting if one concentrates enough. Can be used three times per battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Moonflower Pollen Daydream
Elvira will grasp her skirt and shake it and it releases pollen and it releases the Moonflower pollen. It can hit an opponent within six feet of her on all sides and causes them feel almost as if they are daydreaming. Feelings of sleepiness, distraction, and possibly actual daydreams follow the opponent for 30 seconds. Like real daydreams they can be ignored/or made less distracting if one concentrates enough. Can be used twice times per battle.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Poison Seed shower
Elvira will grasp her skirt and shake it releasing the Moonflower seeds. The seeds themselves are more of an annoyance then anything else, but upon being hit by the seeds the opponent is 'poisoned'. Symptoms include rapid pulse, fever, and headache or nausea. Symptoms last 40 seconds before fading, can be used twice per battle, only one opponent per attack.  

StarshineAngel01

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 30, 2013 10:53 am


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PostPosted: Sun May 12, 2013 10:28 pm


StarshineAngel01

Hi Starshine! As a fellow plotter in the Koronids, I'm really excited to see this lady get accepted so you can go for her - so let's get on that!

ON THE CIVILIAN SIDE:

I'd like a little more information about how Floria's hobbies are social! Does she shop with friends? Does she invite others to stargaze? If she does both these things alone, does she have other social hobbies? Hobbies are jumping-off points for RP, so a little more detail here would be super!

Florianne's "Outgoing" and "Talkative" virtues read really similarly to me! They basically both just seem to be saying she'll talk to anyone about anything. However, there's mention of her being adaptive buried within "Talkative" - maybe you could pull that out and flesh it into a virtue of its own!

"Perfectionist" really doesn't read as a flaw to me at all. It's actually kind of a good thing as its phrased - she wants to do her best and make things nice, yay! The only negative thing is that it upsets people - how? Does she get obsessive over this, to the point where it seriously hinders her ability to get things done in a timely manner? Does she ever get frustrated and quit on something because it isn't perfect?

As for "Judgmental" - is it just clothes? Or does she judge people based on other things too? If she thinks you dress poorly, will she shun you?

I think the two flaws work really well in concert, though! 

ON THE POWERED SIDE:

My biggest issue here is that there is no super-clear relation between Elvira's powers and her sphere! Some quick Googling tells me moonflowers are often thought to symbolize dreams of love, so I'm guessing that's what you're getting at with her first two attacks - is the third actual effects of consuming moonflower seeds? (My Google adventure gave me very different results, so!) 

As they are, I would have no idea what your sphere is from your powers. I'd be able to guess it was something floral, but not much more. Please make this connection a little clearer in the direct text of the attack! A really simple way would be to indicate they're being showered specifically with moonflower pollen/seeds. Other than that, the general effects/durations/descriptions seem just fine, not over-powered or anything. <3


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PostPosted: Sun May 12, 2013 10:31 pm


I guess it depends on what keywords you put into the google search bar
PostPosted: Sun May 12, 2013 11:04 pm


humm...

StarshineAngel01

Interstellar Moonwalker

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StarshineAngel01

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PostPosted: Sun May 12, 2013 11:11 pm


I think that covered it all, if not feel free to tell me to add more to it
PostPosted: Mon May 13, 2013 8:35 am


StarshineAngel01

Your updates on her personality look good; just one thing - she seems really really fashion-obsessed (she offers advice about it, judges people based on what they wear, etc) - it feels like this should be a hobby in and of itself, almost?

Also, your first two attacks are still missing the clear connection to the sphere! I know it seems silly, but I can still look at the first two and not be able to figure out her sphere, since there are a number of plants associated with daydreams, etc. Just calling it moonflower pollen is really all you need to do here, since otherwise it fits right in with their symbolism!

Quote me once you've gotten these fixes down~


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PostPosted: Mon May 13, 2013 6:36 pm


humm..not sure how else to word it
PostPosted: Mon May 13, 2013 6:54 pm


Songstress Kitsune


So i added fashion as one of her hobbies and I added Moonflower to the front of her first two attacks

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PostPosted: Mon May 13, 2013 9:15 pm


StarshineAngel01

Alright! I'm sorry to keep dragging this on, but I did look again and see a few more things to tweak!

-Her "Adaptive" virtue isn't really reading as adaptive; it's more like "conciliatory" or being good at reasoning; she's not really adapting, per se, unless her opinions actually change to fit her friends'! If that's the case, could you make it a bit more clear?

-Also, for her powers at regular and Super stage, please specify a casting motion! Either she simply calls out her attack or she shakes her skirt, but it must be the same every time, not two different options.

-Also, I'd meant to insert the mention of moonflowers into the attack DESCRIPTION, not the name! (It's fine to have it in both, but I'd like to see it in the description for sure please~ I know it's a little nitpicky but I want to make sure you're all in the clear when a GM comes by! ;; <3 )
PostPosted: Mon May 13, 2013 9:15 pm


-flops- oi! -goes to hit the profile again-

StarshineAngel01

Interstellar Moonwalker

15,915 Points
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  • Blazing Power of Friendship Wave 200
  • Spirit of the Smackdown! 100

StarshineAngel01

Interstellar Moonwalker

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  • Spirit of the Smackdown! 100
PostPosted: Mon May 13, 2013 9:18 pm


Songstress Kitsune


not sure how much clearer I need to be..I did say her opinions change to fit her friends point of view.

edit: and its already too wordy for my liking
PostPosted: Mon May 13, 2013 9:33 pm



Ah, so you do, I mist have missed it!

I think she's good to go for a trial stamp!

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PostPosted: Mon May 13, 2013 9:33 pm


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