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 Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 3:55 pm
Raven, a girl from 21st Century London, is as normal as one could be, at least at first. Sure, she has basic weapons knowledge, and her fashion sense is a little on the... dark side, but she has always lived a normal life... Until now.
Ramses is a general in Egypt, one the rise in politics after his recent victories in so many battles, but he cannot get over the one woman he lost to the Hittite Emperor. Yuri will forever be on his mind, the Ishtar goddess from the future, but as his life becomes more difficult and plans to have him assassinated before he can become Pharaoh arise, what can he do?
One day on her way home, something grabs her ankle, and she finds herself being dragged into a nearby pond, unable to stop the mystical hand that had gripped her. When she finally breaks the water's surface, she is in Acient Egypt.
Raven pulls herself out of the Nile, barely able to keep herself alive before she fainted on the bank. After being awoken by yells and soldiers feet pounding the ground, she realizes she is in danger and makes a dash for it.
Ramses, on his way home after discussing battle plans, sees the woman and tries to save her, only to have her slip from his grasp somehow as Yuri always did, but now he's intrigued. Who is this woman, and why are his step mother's guards after her..?
Unable to keep out of the guards grasp, she realizes what she is there for. A virgin sacrifice to the gods in order to place a curse on Ramses and serveral of his brother's in order for the Queen's, Ramses step mother, son to take over the throne.
She escapes, but only when she was about to be sacrificed in public. Ramses quickly takes her to her home, but finds himself both attracted to her and confused by her. Why does she seem so much like Yuri, his unrequited love from the future..?
Wars rage and an internal battle starts, but why are the people now shouting that Raven is the reincarnation of Isis?
Ramses cannot let Raven fall into her stepmother's hands any longer, not when she is so important to the people, but is she important to him now just as much, or maybe even more?
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Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 3:55 pm
Name - Raven Tornin Age - 16 Bio - Raven was a normal girl who lived with her mother and father in downtown London. At a young age, she realized she was good at fighting, but somethign else caught her attention. Fashion. She loved the designs all of the darker fashion designers came up with and now she designs her own clothes, a mix of scene and emo, which many people compliment her on. She was actually contemplating starting her own line before destiny caught up with her. Before she was taken, she had just experienced her first kiss with her first love, but now her life is to be turned upside down. Now, she has no idea if she can stand up and handle the pressure of her new life. Appearance - 
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Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 6:23 pm
 Name - Ramses Age - 20 Bio - Ramses is a general in ancient Egypt that has lead an army across egypt and much of the surrounding area. His step mother is plotting against the rising star of egypt so his half brother could take the throne instead of him. Will he stop his evil step mother in time and keep the girl from the future safe from the queen's cruel grasp or will he fail and fall victim to his step mother's curse and die before his time? Only time will tell and time is running out for the young general
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Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 6:34 pm
Raven was walking down the streets of London, the cobblestone clicking under her high hill shoes. Snow had fallen just the other day, so of course she was bundled up in her jacket and avoiding the puddles as much as she could. A bus passed by her and the wind that went with it sent a chill through her. As she wrapped her arms around herself and tried to press forward through the streets, she felt as if she was alone. Her eyes widened and she looked up, only now noticing that no one else was there. How could she have gotten so far without noticing anyone at all? Turning back around, her pace quickened, only thinking of getting home to her family as fast as she possibly could. Something did not seem right, and she did not want to be around to find out what it was. Just as she was leaving the light of a lamp post, she felt something grab onto her ankle. What was going on here?? A tug pulled her back a step, and just as she looked down, she suddenly lost her balance and fell. Quickly, Raven turned in the air so she landed on her side instead of hitting her face like she almost had. At the moment, she could not deal with a wound when something was happening to her. Turning to look behind her, all she saw was what appeared to be a hand wrapped around her foot that was made of water of all things!! Raven tried to kick out of it's grip, but nothing helped her. The only thing she knew was that she was being dragged backwards and into a pond, only to seemingly drown and disappear.
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Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 6:50 pm
I Am Alucard Hellsing Ramses was walking home, leading his army from their last war. They were battered and bloodied, but they looked like they had the time of their life. They were victorious in their conquest of the lands to the west and were eager to get home to their wives and Ramses seen a strange thing happening at the Nile. "By the gods what is going on?" The young general asked himself in a murmur as he watched the river bubble and was about to move on when a girl in strange clothes appeared on the riverbank. He was about to help her when some guards from the palace came by and carried her off. As the soldiers that accompanied him walked, the palace guards dragged the strange girl away and out of sight. Ramses decided to follow them and made his way through the town a safe distance behind the guards so he wouldn't be spotted, but not far enough back to loose them.
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Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 1:07 pm
When she was finally able to move, she was in a large river, but she could feel her strength draining away. She swam to the surface and barely pulled herself onto the bank in time. By then, her vision was so blurry she could hardly see anything and she was too sore to move. It almost felt like something had drugged her. Her eyelids were too heavy for her to keep open and soon she fell closed her eyes and feinted. The guards, after being warned by the Queen of her location, came after her and found the girl lying on the bank. After testing to make sure she wasn't dead, they picked her up and carried her back to the city. The stone walls of the Majestic palace stood as their beacon as they made their way towards it. Soon after they entered the gates of the city, Raven started to wake. She opened her eyes slowly before she looked up, still thinking she was dreaming until she felt a soldier tug harder on her arm. Automatically, fear gripped her and she started to struggle against her captors. She tore from the grip and dashed towards the crowded buildings and into an alleyway, hoping to take one of the many paths and to get away, even though she had no idea why they had been dragging her anyway. The only thing she knew was that she could not let them take her.
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Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 3:36 pm
"Why do I have such a bad feeling about this?" He muttered as they neared the palace. He knew the guards were loyal to the queen, his step mother and he knew his soldiers would follow him to the very gates of the underworld if he said they were to fight on the grounds of the land of the dead. He then seen the girl running his way and grabbed her before he pulled her into the shadows before the guards came after her. "You're safe now. Who are you" where do you come from? And how did you get here?" The young general asked as soon as the guards were gone.
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Posted: Fri Mar 15, 2013 6:54 pm
She found there was no escape when they followed her everywhere she went. Raven had no idea what she should do next, but something pulled at her from the shadows. A small yelp left her mouth as she found herself against someone, ad from the look of his body and the feel of him, she knew he was a man instantly. Her eyes widened and she looked up quickly, wondering if the soldiers had caught her. She had been prepared to plead for her life and her innocence when a sound of rushing footsteps came from her side. Gasping softly, she watched as the soldiers ran, still trying to find her. When they were gone and the stranger finally spoke, she looked up at him, but she couldn't understand him at all. He wasn't speaking English.. Where was she? Looking around at the dust and the stone, an image of Egypt popped into her head and she bit her lip, fear and confusion leaking into her eyes. How did she get here...? What... What time was this???? Was this some sort of joke? But of course it wasn;t a joke. It was too complicated... Staring up at the strange man against her body, she whimpered, fear consuming her. If this was the time period she thought it was, English hadn;t even been invented yet to her knowledge. "W-Where am i..?" she asked softly, even though he would not understand it.
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Posted: Fri Mar 15, 2013 7:16 pm
Victor looked at the girl with obvious confusion wondering what she was saying. He tried to write his questions down for her, but they were in ancient egyptian and judging from her words he doudted that she would be able to read his words. He even wrote his name down for her. She looked like she was roughly sixteen, which was the age of childbirth at that time in egypt. "Come with me if you want to live." He said as he guided her to his personal home away from the palace. It was kept secret from his own step mother and his soldiers, so it was a safe place to stay.
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Posted: Sat Mar 16, 2013 8:05 pm
She looked up at him quizzically as he started to write something and bit her lip as she tried to read it, though it was like utter gibberish to her. Of course, she realized they were hieroglyphs, but she had no idea what they said. Looking back up at him, she shook her head slightly, trying to say she could not read anything he had written, when he grabbed at her and started to pull her towards the road. Her eyes widened and she pressed close against him, not having any idea where they were going, but somehow trusting this strange man, though she did want to run far away from here so she could get away from all of this. Later, after a few minutes of walking down a dirt path, which eerily was completely silent except for her in her black and silver skirt, high heel boots, and t-shirt, and him in his silk robes dyed with purple to show he was royalty. When they finally arrived at a large palace, she knew it was his. Looking up at him, she blinked in confusion, wondering why he had brought her here.
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Posted: Sat Mar 16, 2013 8:32 pm
As soon as they got into the smaller palace, Ramses guided Raven to a room full of traditional egyptian robes and took a pinch of the fabrick of her shirt and then a pinch of her skirt and briefly shook them before letting them go and shook his head before gesturing to the robes in the room and nodded, hoping that she understood what he was trying to say. He then walked out of the room and waited for her to get changed so she would blend in a little bit more. He could always tell anyone who asked she was sick and didn't get much sun as a possible cover. after a few minutes he walked back into the room with a tablet of paper and started drawing, knowing pictures were a universal means of comunicating.
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Posted: Sat Mar 16, 2013 8:38 pm
She followed him, staring around in wonderment as he took her into his home. When he ushered her into the changing room and gestured at the clothes, she sighed softly and nodded, knowing what he was saying but something told her to keep her clothes... Shaking her head, she reasoned she was just being irrational since she was in a place she had no idea about and had not wanted to come to in the first place. After he had left the room and had left her alone, she turned and picked out a beautiful silk silver and deep purple cloth. After putting it on and making sure it covered what needed to be covered, though it was short, barely coming down to the tops of her thighs. Turning as the door opened, she looked up and watched as he walked in and started to draw. Curiosity overwhelmed her and she walked towards him and peered down at the clay tablet as he drew, wondering what he could possibly be trying to draw.
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Posted: Sat Mar 16, 2013 9:16 pm
Ramses tried his best to do a drawing of himself and below it a ram and the sea with the sun setting on it so she would know what it was he was drawing. as soon as he seen that she understood what he had drawn, he erased the pictures and drew something else for her to look at. it was a drawing of her with what looked like a question mark and his way of asking who she was. he was a little troubled by their inability to communicate through words, but he refused to let it affect him and continued to use pictures to communicate. he had a second clay tablet for her to use to answer his questions.
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Posted: Sat Mar 16, 2013 9:21 pm
She watched him draw and her eyes widened as she put together his drawing and their meaning. His name. His name was Ramses... Looking up at him, it finally clicked that he was the famous Ramses, THE Ramses from all of her history books.... It was almost too impossible to be true. She saw what he wanted her to do, and she looked at the other tablet before taking it and biting her lip before she started to draw a large Raven. She took time on the details so he could tell exactly what bird it was before she turned her tablet towards him. Raven looked up at him and waited for him to finally get what she had been trying to say. Too bad no one would believe her that she was talking to the Ramses. If they would have, she would have gotten him to sign a clay tablet or something and take it home so she could show it to everyone... Home... Would she ever be going home? At that though, tears sprang to her eyes and she looked away, not knowing what to do anymore. What was she supposed to do now? Was there a way to get home?
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