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PostPosted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:20 pm


Captain Mist
Played By:Henry Cavill
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Basic Statistics

Real Name:Alexandra
Alias: Alex
Age:99
Gender:Male
Nationality:He look's American but isn't from America
Race/Species: He comes from Planet Chindolas, he is a Chinnodalla
Current status (marital/dating): Single
Police/Criminal/Legal record:He was considered a Criminal on his home planet for trying to over throw the enemy that lived on the planet
Occupation: Wounder er
Title/Rank: Wounder er
Hobbies/Pastimes: Watching the skys
Talents/Skills/Powers:ability to shoot lasers from eyes, to hear far away, to control water, To breath flames from mouth, and to be able to form water into any working machine, weapon, or color.


Physical Characteristics

Height:6'5
Weight:160
Hair:Blondish
Eyes:Blue
Tattoos/Scars? none
Distinguishing features:Clothing
Costume: Above
How does s/he dress or what do they typically wear? He wears the hoody clothing in the picture.
Other accessories:Sunglasses
Weapons: Sword that can turn to Flames, Ices, Water, Lightning, Darkness, and Earth
Health:More then the advanced Women/Man
Physical Flaws: Is skinny, not as strong as the Huk
Physical Qualities: Speed, sight, hearing,


Other Characteristics

Are they generally balanced or clumsy? He can be Clumsy
Mannerisms/Poses/Movement: The move quick and rough, they pose with arms crossed over their chest, and legs softly spread 2 feet.
Habits/OCDs/Obsessions: Is obsessed with the ocean, and water
Unique phrases/words: Ocean's are simple words that could kill


Psychological/Personality Attributes and Attitudes

Intelligence Level: High
Character's long-term goals/desires in life: To go back home and make it right
Character's short-term goals/desires in life: To defend the earth
Secret desires: To fall in love
How do they see him/herself? A failure to his planet
What is the character most proud of? His ability
What does the character like least about themselves? His social awkwardness
Patience level:High
Most at ease when: When waiting
Ill at ease when:listening to issues
Character/Personality/Mental/Social Strengths:Way with words
Character/Personality/Mental/Social Flaws:Socially awkward
If they could be described with one of the seven virtues, which would it be?Courage
If they could be described with one of the seven sins, which would it be? hatred
Biggest Vulnerability (non physical):Scared of losing and goes into panic
Optimist or Pessimist:Optimist
Introvert or extrovert:Extrovert
Greatest Fear: Losing his planet to evil
Other Fears/Insecurities/Phobias: Phobia of failure, and of other people
Emotional/psychological/social peculiarities: On home planet, Upper class, on earth Low class (do to what happened to him on home planet)
Biggest regret:Not stopping his home planet leaders
Other regrets: Failing the people he love
Biggest accomplishment: Escaping the prison and escaping to earth
Minor accomplishments: Mastering his skills
Character's darkest/deepest secret:He is the one who caused his planets miss fortune
Minor Secrets: His love of his life doesn't know he loves her


Likes/Dislikes

Likes:Enjoys the ocean
Dislikes: The darkness
Favorite:The stars
Simple Pleasures:sticking feet into the water
Greater Pleasures: Flying in space, seen everything
Where does this character like to hang out? He mainly hangs close to the water, ocean, lakes, ETC...
Motto/Personal quote:Water, is just a liquid that causes destruction
Mode of transportation: Uses his water ability's to create a motorcycle
Most prized possession: His sword


Emotional Characteristics

Describe character's sense of morals: Aelxandra, AKA Mist views his morals as the since to fix the wrong, weather if evolves killing the enemy, they had their choice for good but threw it away so he much fix their wrong.
What do they consider taboo (something they personally would never do):Kill an Innocent human, creature, or alien.
Spontaneous or structured? Little of both
Instinctual or logical?Logical
How does this character act in public? Mysterious
How does this character act in privacy? Happy, funny, joyful
Has this character dealt with the loss of someone they knew? Yes, Alexandra watched his parents executed for his mistake
How has it affected them? He has realized his failure and only wants to fix it
How does this character deal with or react to:
Conflict/Danger:
This character reacts to death, as part of life but murder in rages him and causes him to attack. If its dangerous he use logic to prevent damage
Fear:Failure
Change: He is ok with change
Loss: Losing is a bring down for him
Pain: He is able to deal with pain
Stress: He visits the ocean during stress
Peer pressure: Is easily avoidable for him
Guilt: He feels guild daily
Being wrong: Is fine by him
Being criticized: Is fine by him
Being insulted (superficially: name calling, etc): He is not a fan, but can handle it
Being loved: Scares him, he is afraid of hurting them
Being hated: is A-Ok by him
How does this character express:He doesn't show his emotions towards others, unless they are in danger
Dislike (of a person, thing, or idea):Idea of the world be controler
Approval (of a person, thing, or idea): Life is equal
How does this character generally express themselves?
Love:
He doesn't show emotion towards people, around a girl he loves he is little clumsy
Friendship/Other relationships: He is nice and respectful
Destiny/Duty:He lets destiny come to him, and his duty is to protect
Their past: He doesn't talk bout his past life
Their future: His future is something he thinks about daily,
Their role in society/job/etc: He is nothing, he stays hidden and uses nature for food and a home.
Drugs and alcohol: Forbidden
Killing/Murder: Only those who he knows will never be able to be with stained in jail.
Education: He was grad student in Callo University (Harvard but his planet)
The foreign/unknown: Friendly towards
How does the character view life? He views life as a welcome to a chance to make a diffrence
How does the character view death? the ending of the mark you made towards life
How does the character view society? Society is, the joyful experience of friends and family been together
How does the character imagine his/her own death? He imagines dieing for the sake of his planet
What does the character want out of life? To save those who can't save them selfs
What does this character consider "success" to be? Success is winning the battle of your biggest dreams
What would the character like to change in his/her life? His failure to save his parents
What motivates this character? His parents last words as they were on the execution ropes, His father screamed to the heavens as Alexandra watched from jail, His father said. "BY THE CREATOR HIS SELF, ARE SON SHALL FIX THIS PLANET NO MATTER HOW LONG IT TAKES. WE GIVE HIM ARE FULL FAITH! WE LOVE YOU S-" And that was it.
What discourages this character? Him failing his parents
What makes this character happy? Viewing the Ocean sparkle as the sun sets
What makes this character sad? Viewing the death of others
What makes this character angry? Viewing people been murdered
What humiliates this character? Someone finding out his past
What most describes this character's personality? Alexandra is described as the moral of man kind. He is described this because his morals fill people when they hear them, this allows them to realize that he is no an enemy.
Psychoanalysis (Describe why they act the way they do): He acts the way he does because of his parents death, and his fathers last words.
Does it stem from childhood or an event, or chemical?It stems from an event


Relationships with others (non-married)

Relationship Skills: He has amazing skills with making friends, but he is not really talkitive as he should.
Loves (non sexual):No one
Crushes: A girl on his home planet
Marital status: Single
Pets: None
Describe their sense of trust: Bad
What type of individuals does s/he like or associate with?They associate with good guys, and people who do nothing bad.
Do they know anyone who's died, and if so who and how were they affected? He knows that his parents were executed, and it affected him to be a better human bean



Family (they were raised with)

Birthparent(s):Father-Alexandra, Mother- Julay
Are they still alive? No
Caretaker(s) None
Are they still alive No caretakers
Siblings (if any):None
Are they still alive, if not who died and when? None
How did s/he get along with the family as a whole? They were great
How did s/he get along with the siblings, if any? None
Describe their family life/dynamic, growing up:They were around often, and always cared for him.
Describe their family life/dynamic now: Dead


Family (that they have created, if at all)

Partner(s):none
Mistress(es)/Secret Lover(s)/ Lover(s) outside of marriage:none
Any illegitimate children with them, and if so who?none
Children and their ages:none
How does (each) son/daughter treat of this character?none
How does this character treat (each) son/daughter?none


Spiritual Characteristics

Religion: Christianity
Superstitions:Karma


Background Story: Alexandra was a normal young man, he loved the girl he went to school with and they always seemed to hang out. He never told her his true feelings before he was sent to jail for conspiracy. When he was 79 He had just finished Collage and started a new career as the leaders top man, until he found out that they were planning on selling the planet to slavers. Outraged, Alexandra began to watch them closely and he seen the slaver. The Slaver was an big guy, and he looked like he was no one to mess with, but Alexandra made a plan. He mapped it out and he attacked, planting bombs on the ship of the Slaver. When the ship exploded and the Slaver was still alive, he was outraged and 2 years went by before Alexandra was finally convicted of more then a simple ship explosion, in those two years Alexandra had brought down two of 6 leaders of the planet, the slaver fell threw and he never returned, and 600 guards were taken into jail for failure to keep watch. While in Jail Alexandra would watch the ocean outside of his bars, he never stopped watching either until they convicted his father and mother for his crimes, and he was forced to watch them been executed . In anger, he lashed out at walls all around him, punch after punch, swing after swing, he finally screamed and the water in the ocean outside up roared and exploded with fury, Alexandra screamed more, swing hand after hand at wall after wall, he finally pictured a fist in his head breaking threw the wall and swung towards the wall pointing at the ocean, when his fist collided a giant explosion happened that sent him flying threw the bars of his cell and a fist of water threw the brick wall. He looked at his hands and back at the fist of Water, he stood up and just like that he was gone. years gone by before he approached the council again, he didn't show mercy he slaughtered man after man going up the highest tower as he came to the 4 leaders that were left, he went to attack but they fought back, 3 died and the last one knocked him threw the window and sent him plummeting down below. With a simple picture of him escaping the planet, when a rocket ship flying by hit him, and took him to a town called small ville, he escaped and hid by the ocean in metropolis, for years.


Additional Notes on This Character:
He doesn't know Superman was in the space ship, nor does he know who superman is.
(((( Adaptations from The Writer's Guide to Character Traits ))))
PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2013 9:51 am


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Hi~

Just letting you know that Original Characters need to go into one of the "Personal Characters" forums. DC characters are for Canon DC characters.

And while you're still working on the profile, you might want to read through it again and change or explain some areas of the profile. There are a few spots that are a little hard to understand, or leave plot holes. Such as if the character's powers are mostly water based, how can he also breathe fire when water would cancel that out.

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xxx_Mist_of_shadows_xxx

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2013 3:18 pm


Sapphire Spider
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Hi~

Just letting you know that Original Characters need to go into one of the "Personal Characters" forums. DC characters are for Canon DC characters.

And while you're still working on the profile, you might want to read through it again and change or explain some areas of the profile. There are a few spots that are a little hard to understand, or leave plot holes. Such as if the character's powers are mostly water based, how can he also breathe fire when water would cancel that out.


Water wouldn't cancel out the ability to breath fire, he can bend water to his will he isn't created completely of water or that would cancel it out.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2013 7:01 pm


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Water wouldn't cancel out the ability to breath fire, he can bend water to his will he isn't created completely of water or that would cancel it out.


Hello Gamer.

I understand what you mean, but ordinarily the powers of an OC would be limited or at least described in great detail along with weaknesses that balance the amount of power said character holds (ie, instead of 'sight' or 'hearing' you could further explain what that means. Does he have perfect vision, or better? Does this mean that he's super sensitive to light? Can he hear from great distances, and if so maybe a weakness could be loud noises. Most abilities come with a cost). We're not trying to completely break up your character profile but better describing his strengths, and giving your character plenty of flaws, makes for a more interesting and fun rp for you AND everyone else.

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2013 7:57 pm


Dear Gamer: I'm not attacking you personally but these are some points I find are in need of clarification. I am just a harsh person but I do it for a purpose. I am the critique. Please think about these as you read through them.

how does he make friends easily if he doesn't trust anyone
how is he a christian if he's not from earth

8:35pm
he killed many people but doesn't like to associate with bad people? Is he a hypocrite?

8:36pm
he went on a killing rampage after his parents execution, yet somehow it states his parents death made him a better human bean :I Literally, bean. You typed bean. What the crap, is his planet's race a race of beans? Can we eat them? Do they cause gas?

8:37pm
His people thought he was an enemy yet you say his personality is so MORAL that a person could tell he is a good guy just by looking at him. He is so moral as to kill people out of rage?

8:38pm
The grammar in his fathers last words please
Our not are* Please

8:39pm
he welcomes giving life because it gives people second chances.
but kills slavers :I

8:41pm
he has great social skills yet shows no emotion around others?

8:42pm
He's not willing to fall in love because he fears hurting his partner? out of rage? Or is it the sparkling morals he is supposed to have?

8:43pm
Murder makes him enrage "Hulk smash" but he can logic to prevent damage if he's being dangerous?

8:44pm
he believes in life and second chances but says bad guys had a choice for good and threw it away so they don't deserve to fix their wrongs?
he refers to waters more deadly side more than healing despite his "Good moral standing"?

8:45pm
Motorcycles are very useful on the ocean especially when created from water. Keep up the good work there Poseidon.

8:46pm
if he can fly into space why doesn't he fly all the way home? His girlfriend, she needs to know how you feel mist.

8:47pm
He is proud to have escaped to earth yet the coincidental ship that tore him from his love is what did it... shouldn't he want to go home? Rather than splash in the salty puddles of planet earth?
He has a way with words yet is completely socially awkward...

8:48pm
this bean loves the ocean so much... but can he breath water? Is he not prone to drowning and getting killed by a guy named manta? Just a question really.

8:49pm
I know he has a union jack but I don't think union jacks should be soaked in ocean water by anybody but Sealand...

Anyway, everyone has to start out somewhere and I hope this helps you develop a better more well rounded non-earthling character.


((I am for the sake of this not too concerned about my own grammar since I'm trying to make a point but you sir have a character we need to read... so please work on your own or keep practicing. Also... I am using the time codes to separate my points at the time I took those notes after reading through the whole character profile. I did spend some time but the minute between thought is to show that it should take very little time to find flaws with something like this. You need to read through it and pick out flaws rather than spend hours coming up with things that may not link together. ))
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