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Okay, so you know in these American horror movies where this girl is heading down these creaky stairs to a super dark creepy basement with a weak flashlight which is just flickering feebly. She heard some noises and decided 'hey lemme go check it out' even though it looks totally dangerous she still goes on and in your head you're thinking 'b***h, go silently back up the stairs, call the police and run away as fast as you can, or else you're gonna freaking die a sad horrible death!' but of course the skinny blonde chick will still go down and get her head chopped off before she can say 'watch the makeup' or something like that.
Well, I am currently in the very same situation, headed down the creaky stairs with a weak flashlight which I have to bang against my wrist a couple of times for it to light. There's this very loud voice in my head telling me to go back but of course like the silly blonde, I refuse to listen and go on. The only difference is that I actually know what I'm going to do, which is kick some serious monster butt.
Oh, I'm sorry. forgive my insolence. I guess I should begin by introducing myself. I'm Clary Clearwater, official monster hunter and total butt-kicker, kind of like Lara Croft, tomb raider. Yup, she's the one I love comparing myself to. Before I go on, allow me to say that this is in no way like any R.L.Stine Goosebumps. This is way more serious and true, so very true. That done, I can get back on track. Where was I? Oh, basement...no, introduction. I'm Clary (did I say that already?) I am not like your average teenage girl. Nope, in no way. Though I may seem like one, don't let the looks deceive you. And yes, I am only 16 years old.

Sounds interesting. I'm still a little sleepy so I can't really say what needs fixin...but its good, I'd love to read more.