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PostPosted: Wed Feb 13, 2013 8:26 pm


Name: Isha Chaudhary (Of Indian Descent)

Nickname: Isshie (Ish, like squish, then ee, like Whee!),

Age: 15

Height: 5 Feet 4 inches

Birthday: April 26th 1997

Sign: Taurus

Gemstone: Emerald

Blood Type: O positive

Fav. Food: Blue Crabs, Red Snapper, and Pupusa

Hated Food: Sharp Cheddar, Squash,Zucchini and Mushrooms

School: Azure Valley Academy

Hobbies:

Fishing: Ah.. Nothing's better than casting out early in the morning when the sun is barely making a dent in the sky! Of course, a close second is crabbing! Either way, when he has the time, he'll go out fishing at the local lake, or, if it's a weekend, he'll head back home to take a trip to the eastern Shore with his family. Most of the time, however, when he DOES catch fish, he lets them go, since he has no idea how to cook it. He tried the "put it on a stick and roast it over a fire" method, but it was really gross. Crabbing, however.. He'll take that sucker and stick it in a post with a ton of Old Bay and be as happy as can be!

Listening to Stories: One of the fascinating things Isha can think of to do is to listen to stories that people have about their lives. The adventures of every day people fascinate him the most, and can spend hours upon hours just sitting with someone and letting them tell him everything! His ideal community activity is spending time at the old folks home. Watching documentaries has also become a past time for him, but he doesn't find himself wanting to read biographies. Part of the fascination with this is the fact that he can hear the words coming right from the person who experienced this. He hopes that one day, he can write something so fascinating that everyone else will want to hear his own story!

Role Playing: Isha very much enjoys playing the role of a prince, or of the dragon slaying paladin, or even an annoying bard gnome! As long as it's during a table top game! The idea of going on such fantastic adventures thrills him, as he idolizes how his parents enjoy doing so before they had found him. This does not apply to the theater or what not, as Isha has a terrible memory when it comes to lines. But if you ask him about the latest dungeon adventure, he'll talk and talk and talk some more! This love of role-playing does, however, relate to video games and such, and he has almost all of the most popular role-playing games, from Skyrim to Final Fantasy!

Dancing: More specifically, Internet sensation dances, hip hop dancing, and Bollywood dancing. When in the mood, which is pretty often, he'll turn on his laptop, and practice any dance that comes up as popular, whether anime related, or just dances that go along with the most popular songs at the time. His love of Bollywood dancing came from watching movies his parents thought would help him understand the culture he never really grew up in. He'll pop in his head phones, and if he has the room, he'll begin to boogie down the roads, not really caring who sees! He doesn't take dancing classes or do the flash mob thing, as he doesn't really enjoy the whole "being told exactly what to dance" thing, but he's all for teaching other's how to get down with him! Isha IS one of those people would start a dance off on a cardboard stage with a boombox off to the side, though!

Virtues:

Innovative: Isha has always had a creative streak, not in the artsy kinda way, but by being able to solve problems in new, almost absurd ways. Although he's not incredibly book smart (he's quite honestly terrible at math and English), the way his mind works is by solving problems in the quickest most efficient ways. Say you are given a project to improve the everyday shopping cart. He'll figure out a way to cover almost all angles and even consider things that may not have been thought of (What if the customer could just scan things at the cart, and pay as they leave? Then what of the security aspect?) Under pressure, his mind still will act in such a way, but ideas may not come in such large quantities, since he'll try to think of the best solution, rather than trying to find something completely new.

Diligent: "There's no point in doing anything if you don't enjoy doing it and put in all you got!" That is the motto Isha goes by when he's interested in something! He'll spend night after night and any free time he has trying to complete the project he's currently working on. From piecing together the newest robot on his Academy's robotics team, or working on perfecting a new dance technique he learned, once the project is started, he won't stop until it's finished (of course, not accounting for the time it takes to eat and do about the tasks he's obliged to do.). However, if there is a task he doesn't enjoy, or has no interest in, you can be certain that he'll rush through it in order to get back to the tasks he actually wants to do!

Obliging:Once he likes you, you have an eager little puppy on your hands. He'll be out and about to do even the littlest things to see a smile on your face. This isn't just for person he loves, it's for all the people he cares about. That candy you like... Those flowers that you thought were pretty... He'll spoil his friends like no other! Anything he can give you, whether it's his time, gifts, or simply just a smile, he'll hand it out with no objections!

Excitable: "Hey look at the new flowers planted!" "Ooh, I woke up , and my room wasn't cold!" "I found an extra pencil in the school yard!" Every day little things can make Isha smile in the easiest of ways. Anything good he finds or happens to him can put him in a happy mood. He'll be way more excited for his friends too when good things happen to them! Once he's up in that high, happy mood, it takes quite the event to bring him back down!

Flaws:

Compulsive Liar Isha has always had a problem with lying, ever since he was a little trouble maker when he was a kid and had to cover his tracks. Since then, he's grown out of causing havoc around his parent's house, but has not grown out of his lying. He just can't help himself but lie. It could be about anything, from something as complicated as to why he built something the way he did, to something as simple as what he ate for breakfast. He rarely thinks "Oh, I'm going to lie about this", instead, it simply comes right out. He tells different lies to different people about the same thing, and it pulls him into trouble when those people start to share about the overlapping stories.

Gullible: It doesn't take much to persuade Isha that something is true. Not outrageous things, like saying that his bedroom was infested by a swarm of leeches, but things that can come off as even remotely possible are likely to be thought of as real by the boy. With all the stories told to him about the adventures his parents went on, everything else seems all so possible! Most people can say whatever they want to him, within reason, and he'll believe it without hesitation. When he does find out he's been lied to, he'll either laugh it off (a joke about their being a pool on the roof for example), or become irate (telling lies between friends).

Vindictive: Beware of the offended Isha! He is a strong believer in karma, the belief that what happens to you is a direct reflection of what you did, though he takes it a step further. Once he belives that he's been wronged, he'll make sure, whether directly or indirectly, that you're gotten back at twice as badly. Have you hurt his feelings in some petty way? You can be certain that as we speak, he's thinking up of some way to make you end up sniveling in a corner.

Meddlesome: Isha has always seemed to have a problem with keeping his nose out of people's business, and has trouble recognize when the time is inappropriate to be asking, "What's going on?". Even when something happens and it's in no way his fault, he'll put his nose in and try to fix things. In fact, he's lost friends to this before, when two friends had a falling out, and he tried to force them back to being friendly. Not only did the two hate each other more, that found themselves sick of Isha's nosiness, and ignored him too.

Quick Bio: Very simply put, Isha is a rich kid! Not an overly spoiled, snooty one, but he is indeed wealthy and throws money around quite often. He's very obviously adopted, as his parents are a pair of eccentric world traveling blokes, who plucked him out of an orphanage in India. He also has a little Chinese brother, a younger sister from Mexico, and an older sister from Norway. He's very well loved, and encouraged by his parents (an interracial couple, the mother Mexican-American, the father Polish-American, the father gaining riches from investments, and the mother is a Computer scientist, though really didn't make all that much) to embrace his culture, if he chose to do so. He kinda doesn't care too much, and just lives out his life happily as a rich kid.

He grew up in the state of Maryland, near the sea, from which he gained his love of crabs and fishing. The parents, however, found that the youngest boy was having trouble with all the pollution in the area around their home, and decided to move further south, to a mountainous area. However, their lovely new home had no real schools around it, and the closest city was Destiny City. Of course, the parents had to enroll their children in the best of places, his sisters going to Crystal Academy, and himself going to Azure Valley Academy. His youngest brother stays at home with their parents, having a private tutor to help improve his English before being allowed to join a regular school in the area. Although Isha stays on campus during the week day, during the weekends, most times, he goes back up to the mountains to hang out at home.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Almond shaped, with icy blue/gray colors.The most accurate picture I have is here! ( Eyes! ) It's a pair of doll eyes!

Hair: He has curly, red/brown colored hair (#330000) hair that goes to about his Shoulders. A good example of this is here, in the bottom right corner. This is pretty close to what he looks like, except that there wouldn't be a cow lick at the top of his head.

Face: He has a darker complexion, from this chart, he'd be under the darker colors section, shadow's row, forth from the left. Or somewhere in that range. His face is, according to this chart, more of a round shape.

Clothes: Uniform! Though he DOES wear a pair of rather big, coke-bottle glasses.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 13, 2013 8:27 pm


Senshi: Sailor Avior: Senshi of Walls

Challenge: "Building myself up to smash you down!"

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Goldenrod yellow
Secondary Color: a more pale green. Colors that just look good on Isha, to be honest

Fuku: I'm not sure what I want him to look like, except that he has sorta a factory worker look about him. Sorta like this, but not copied, because that is wrong!

Collar --Undecided
Bow -- More like sashs in places~
Bodice -- Not sure...
Sleeves -- yes!
Brooch -- Not quite sure..
Bottoms -- a pair of long pants
Tiara -- Not sure, maybe just a tiara tiara with a solid gem
Choker -- It's just awesome.
Shoes -- Sorta... Calf high Steel Toed boots!
Gloves -- of course! Workers gloves!
Accessories -- He Keeps his glasses of course, but they change into fancy safety goggles.

Your MAIN COLOUR should dominate. Your SECOND COLOUR should be used for trimming.

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Build that Wall!
Avior calls out his attack while punching the ground before him and from there, a magical, invisible wall springs up before him, enchanted to be impossible to jump over. It is only 10 feet wide, blocking him from any frontal assault. The wall is only up for 10 seconds, from which Avior would have to hit the ground again to build it up.. For an equal level character, it could be nearly impenetrable, and the stronger the enemy, the quicker the wall comes down. A 4th level character could instantly smash the wall to bits, a 3rd level character in a few hits, and a 2nd after a good bashing, though it would probably just be easier to walk around the wall. This can be used three times a battle, though there is a 10 second cool down between each summoned wall.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Build that City!
The wall from his first attack has increased in size to 15 feet wide that lasts for 20 seconds. It forms up thicker as well, and those who are 2nd level or lower cannot break through it. With a 3rd level character, they would have a hard time breaking through it, though a 4th will have moderate difficulty breaking through the wall. One can still simply walk around it.

Eternal Sailor Attack: The Walls Are Closing In!
You've pissed Avior off, and now it's time to get you back! He puts his forefingers and thumbs together, like so forming a box shape, and around you springs four magical walls and a ceiling that encases you like a box with no opening. The walls that spring around you are dark on the inside, though from the outside, you are visible, and as Avior watches you, he moves his fingers closer and closer together, causing the walls to squeeze his enemy tighter. It will close as tightly as it can around a person, without causing any damage, and fully restricts the enemy from moving. It non-lethal, and more of a psychological scare, though it can cause soreness from potential awkward positions that one might be trapped in or from the struggle against the walls themselves.

The attack lasts for 30 seconds, as long as Avior keeps his eyes on you. If eye contact with his box is broken, or hands come apart, the box vanishes instantly. This attack also leaves Avior winded, as for the whole 30 seconds, he holds his breath, as if to concentrate on keeping the enemy trapped is the only thing that matters. It can be used only twice per battle.

Sunflower-Seeds

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 2:57 pm


Open for Crits!

CHANGES

1: Added: A new Hobby of Roleplaying

Edited: Sailor Attacks

2: Slightly Edited Gullible Trait.

3: Renamed Sphere, and Edited Last attack a bit to fit new sphere.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 24, 2013 1:10 pm


Cooro Cooro


Hey, Cooro! Thanks for your patience and I'm sorry it took me so long to get to this!

Firstly, I love Isha's name! Secondly, his hobbies through flaws all seem to work well together, and I've got only one question out of all of that! For his 'gullible' flaw, you say 'Due to the fact that he can't help but lie all the time, he finds himself wanting to believe that everyone else around him tells the truth most of the time,' and while I think I know what you are getting at, I feel like someone who is a compulsive liar might be more inclined to believe that everyone around them was lying rather than think that they were always telling the truth. I feel that it might make more sense [given his other flaws] that he has become such a good liar through his compulsive lying that he feels as though he can tell when others are lying to him, but because he really has no ability to tell when someone is lying, they are always tricking him? It's just an idea! Otherwise, could I have a little more clarification on why he wants everyone to be telling the truth if he is so used to lying?

Other than that, his civilian side looks good!

I know we discussed the powered side of this over PMs, so I'm not going to touch on those just yet, but depending on what you decide, I might have something different to say about the attacks, so I hope you don't mind if I wait to work on those! [And if you want to go to them, you can either quote me here or shoot me a PM!]


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Sunflower-Seeds

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 29, 2013 11:00 pm


Okay~ I went ahead and made the changes you talked about~ biggrin I took out the belief thing, and changed that to sorta.. Fantasies placed into his head~ biggrin
PostPosted: Thu Apr 04, 2013 10:56 pm


Cooro Cooro


All right! Thanks so much for working with me on this profile, it's been a blast! I wish you the best of luck with getting this character because, as of now, you are stamped!

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