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 Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 9:01 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 4:01 pm
Ok Vice captains and any one else who been approving characters, this one is ready.
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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 5:06 pm
Please provide me with a viable rank, so I know how hard to judge the profile.
I think we discussed Cuchillo, yes?
Also, these powers may or may not be suited for the Historian cell, who would in most cases, be reishi and melee based, instead of mostly melee based as this character is. I could suggest you as the replacement Cuchillo for the Fourth Cell, who have touches of melee, while still retaining the level of intelligence you plan on exhibiting.
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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 5:23 pm
YummyBiscuits Please provide me with a viable rank, so I know how hard to judge the profile. I think we discussed Cuchillo, yes? Also, these powers may or may not be suited for the Historian cell, who would in most cases, be reishi and melee based, instead of mostly melee based as this character is. I could suggest you as the replacement Cuchillo for the Fourth Cell, who have touches of melee, while still retaining the level of intelligence you plan on exhibiting. I don't understand, how do magical energy blast fit more into history and information then melee attacks. I though his personality and mental capabilities which complemented gathering information would be enough. Oh, and yes this is for the Cuchillo rank
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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 6:14 pm
This is a system I created, dude.
The history section is not an outright melee based combat cell. Why would a historian be all blades ahoy? Same reason that a scientist will not be only melee or reiatsu.
In my views, this character seems to be more suited for a scientific job, and all that.
I'll get to grading soon. Tell me when you are ready.
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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 6:57 pm
YummyBiscuits This is a system I created, dude. The history section is not an outright melee based combat cell. Why would a historian be all blades ahoy? Same reason that a scientist will not be only melee or reiatsu. In my views, this character seems to be more suited for a scientific job, and all that. I'll get to grading soon. Tell me when you are ready. This system is confusing emotion_facepalm I did not create a character with any love for science who is opposed to creating senseless pain and yet his limited magical abilities land him a cell his personality contradicts with. Lets just place him Mysterio because with such limited abilities and none being magical it seems the most operate place.
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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 7:05 pm
Firstly, I need more information concerning the techniques. It needs a lot more descriptiveness to cover it completely.
In the skills sections, both of them, you've given yourself high class strengths, and not enough weaknesses to be considered for the Cuchillo seat. You're going to need to lower the skills and physical skills somewhat to fall in line with the seat.
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2013 4:55 am
YummyBiscuits Firstly, I need more information concerning the techniques. It needs a lot more descriptiveness to cover it completely. In the skills sections, both of them, you've given yourself high class strengths, and not enough weaknesses to be considered for the Cuchillo seat. You're going to need to lower the skills and physical skills somewhat to fall in line with the seat. all have been slightly tweaked, should be enough
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2013 10:12 pm
The wording of the lacerated technique definitely needs to be changed. Unavoidable is a word one must never use. Difficult to avoid is a much better choice of vernacular.
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Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 2:00 pm
Well lets get another review of this RPC
I'm aiming for the Chilo position of the 8th cell this time and accompanying the change is some change in personality.
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Posted: Fri Mar 15, 2013 6:02 pm
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