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PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2013 5:20 pm


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Name: Kiyomi Bloodraven

Nicknames: Princess of Destruction

Gender: Female

Age: 25 (1500 shinigami years)

Hair Colour: Red

Eye Colour: Red

Height: 5'8"

Weight: 135 lbs.

Blood Type: AB

Reiatsu Color: Crimson Red

Appearance: Kiyomi is portrayed as a tall and slender woman with red colored hair and intense red eyes. Despite her scary looks at first she is quite social and kind. Kiyomi usually wears an armor under her captain's haori, the armor is made of alloy metals which makes it very easy to move in and not as heavy as usual armor. Kiyomi usually wears her hair loose although it can be seem in the shape of a ponytail at times.

Affiliation: Gotei 13

Squad: 7

Rank: Captain

Family: Deceased

Personality: Kind,Quiet,Intelligent,Determined,Brave

Likes: Sweets,Tea,Kind people,People who have manners.

Dislikes: Arrogance,Betrayal,Liars.

Biography: Kiyomi was born into the Gremory family one of the few females to have been born into the prestigious clan, as a girl nothing much was expected of her in battle. Kiyomi was mostly ask to stay away from the boy's training and just help her mother with woman stuff but she refused everytime claiming she one day would be a great warrior and bring pride to her family just like her father had. Kiyomi's father was a warrior named Hayato Gremory an amazing swordsman and proud Captain of the Royal Family, Kiyomi looked up to her father due to his devotion and determination to protect the people of the clan as well as his family. Kiyomi succeeded at Zanjutsu (Sword Arts) just like her father, as a result her father decided that if it was ok with her mother she was going to assist to the academy and become a warrior just like him. Kiyomi's mother was hesitant of the idea as she was scared that she wouldn't make it and her dreams be broken, but after the many insistent conversations and Kiyomi's will her mother agreed and she was sent to the Academy.

Kiyomi's years at the academy were not a piece of cake as most people looked down on her just because she was a Gremory, she payed little to no attention to the rumors that her father was a traitor and what not. The fact was that she didn't know her father had betrayed the clan and become a rogue warrior, as she went home that night she discovered her mother alongside the guards lifeless in the floor. Her father had killed them and he stood in the corner with his sword at hand awaiting for Kiyomi's arrival waiting to end her life, The kid was heartbroken and devastated by the actions of her father and began to cry as she cared little about dead but the fact that her father had betrayed her and the family. The Head Captain of the guard arrived in scene knocking her down and ordered the other warriors to take her away as he did not want her to be around when her father was executed.

Kiyomi was ask to return to the Academy by her grandfather who was the only Gremory who remained alive and had ties to her, she began her life again yet hunted by the sight of her father standing there with a blade full of blood which belonged to all her relatives and loved ones. Indeed it was a very shocking moment for the girl but she used this as an inspiration to give her all, and become an strong warrior that wouldn't have to worry about her past but rather forge her future and defend the clan. As the years went by Kiyomi finally graduated form the academy excelling in every subject their was and graduating with honors. She became the princess of the Gremory clan not soon after taking over the long work of Axel Gremory.

Few years after, Kiyomi became very sick and her body began to decay until the young lady of age 25 was consumed completely. After her death many questions were in the girl's head such as if indeed someone had poisoned her to get power of the Clan or if the rival clans had planned some scheme but that was long gone now, now she was in a new place which she new nothing about and would seem to be filled with people. Where people really here or was this just a dream she was having due to her illness, the truth was Rias did not know if she was dead or still lived somewhere until she met a man. This man seemed to be dressing in a different manner than others which sparked the young's woman curiosity right away as she had never seen anyone sport such clothes around the area.

This man was in fact a shinigami, his name was Nobunaga Misuzu and he was part of the 11th Squad. Kiyomi began to socially connect with this man who would explain to her the principles of the Rukongai and Soul Society and prove to her that she was in fact dead. Nobunaga also explained to Kiyomi about the hollows and their frequent need to exploit on the souls of the Rukongai. The years continued to pass and Kiyomi's friendship with Nobunaga grew intensely to the point where they spent most of their time together, but one day a group of man dressed just as Nobunaga came to Kiyomi's door and told the lady that her good friend had died devoured by a hollow and the he could no longer would be visiting her. As Kiyomi heard those words the anger began to build inside her and an aura like mist began to form around her shocking the shinigamies around her, it was in fact her spiritual pressure which was begin to manifest due to the anger inside the girl.

The soldiers alarmed by this intense power spoke to one of the captains which decided a girl with her talents, should be put to good use and be enrolled in the shinigami academy. After many years of attending the academy and excelling in every subject due to her determination Kiyomi graduated with honors and was asked to take the Captain's test by one of the captains. Kiyomi who at the moment was still undergoing a bit of a mental breakdown accepted and took the Captain's test.

Zanpakuto Name: " Sōkyoku ōjo (双極王女) "

Sealed Description: As mentioned before Rias's Zanpakuto is a regular sized katana with a blade coated in silver and a rapier's handle. The handle has engraved the name of all her dead family members including her father and a name that does not belong to the family but it was her first friend of the Soul Society, a former shinigami. Her blade is 12 inches long and 5 inches wide, despite this proportions the blade is as light as a feather due to the amazing work on the handle.

Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: Zanpakuto Spirit

Zanpakuto Spirit Personality: Kiyoshi's relationship with her zanpakuto is rather twisted due to her bipolar personality. In addition her zanpakuto spirit has portrayed herself as a very determined and keen fighter when this two crossed blades. Kiyoshi's zanpakuto also has a sense high of pride and could be hurt easily.

Inner World: Zanpakuto Inner World

Shikai Status: Achieved " Fukitsu burēdo (不吉ブレード) "

Release Command: " Konagona ni shite en kigō (粉々にして円記号) "

Shikai Released Appearance: Shikai Appearance
- When her Shikai is released her body would change in a appearance just as shown in the picture above. In addition her shikai blades change into two steel daggers that are at all times coated in reiatsu (due to reiatsu manipulation the reiatsu contains poison so getting cut by her shikai will induce poisoning. )

Shikai Abilities:

* " Shikei rōtasu (死刑ロータス) " - Rias spins in place throwing daggers at the enemy with incredible speed and accuracy. ( The daggers can be up to 10 in count and they will be made of out pure reiatsu. In other words as Rias spins she fires reiatsu daggers that emanate from her actual daggers.)

* " Fukitsu suchīru (不吉スチール) " - Rias slashes towards the enemy on an "X" shaped pattern unleashing two waves that would fire towards the enemy and explode upon contact causing an small explosion 3 feet in diameter which would cause mild burns.

* "Burēdo o haneru (ブレードを跳ねる) " - Rias would throw a dagger at the opponent pin pointing a vital organ while, in addition the dagger once released will increase its speed faster than normal. If the dagger hits it would explode inducing poisoning directly unto the nerves and paralyzing the enemy completely for a post.

* Rias can explode her daggers at any given time and recall it to her hands. (Note this explosion is similar to a clone technique so it wont induce any damage to her enemies.)

Bankai Status: Achieved " Ha no odori (刃の踊り) "

Bankai Description: Once her bankai much like her Shikai her appearance changes this time her hair becomes an onyx black color and her attire resembles that of a musketeer in certain aspects. Her bankai blade now is divided in between a rapier and 4 daggers that are located on the back of her attire. All blades are coated in poisonous reiatsu like the ones in her shikai.

Bankai Appearance

Bankai Abilities:

* " Tanken kōu (短剣降雨) " - Rias tosses all 4 daggers in the air and points her rapier towards her target as all 4 daggers begin to fire needles of pure reiatsu from above Rias and towards the enemy's position. (This reiatsu needles contain poison and could add up to 120 (30 per dagger), the poison amount on this needles is rather small and could only cause temporarily paralysis of a certain limb they hit if more than 10 hit the same limb or nerve. )

* " Gōkei shōmetsu (合計消滅) " - Rias blade will increase in length expanding her reach, in addition her reiatsu will become more dense around the blade ensuring the poison levels are higher. ( In other words a single slash with this certain ability will cause paralysis of the limb it touches instantly and for a duration of 2 posts. Note the slash has to be successful and slash through the limb to take effect.)

* " Kyūkyoku no yūgai (究極の有害) " - Rias would place her sword horizontally in front of her as her reiatsu will begin to flow through her blade and spread evenly. A ray of pure reiatsu energy will fire in the length and width of the blade towards the opponent in the shape of an arc. (If the arc hit any part of the enemy this limb would become paralyzed permanently until they pass out or loose consciousness , Whatsoever this ability can only be used once and will revert Rias to her shikai, she can not enter bankai again for 6 posts and even after entering bankai again she can not use this ability.)

Kido:

Hado:
#4. Byakurai(白雷, Pale Lightning): The user fires a concentrated, powerful lightning bolt from their finger.
#31. Shakkahō(赤火砲, Shot of Red Fire): Fires a ball of red energy at a target.
#32. Ōkasen(黄火閃, Yellow Fire Flash): Fires a wide arc of yellow energy at a target.
#33. Sōkatsui(蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down): Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to #31, but over a wider area and with more power.
#63: Raikōhō(雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Cannon): Fires a massive wave of yellow energy at a target.
#73. Sōren Sōkatsui(双蓮蒼火墜, Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down): Essentially a doubled version of #33 (labelled as #73 in anime), this spell fires two shots of blue fire with greater potency than the single-shot variety.
# 91. Senjū Kōten Taihō(千手皎天汰炮, Thousand-Hand Bright Heaven Culling-Sear): Summons several spears of light that are all fired towards the same focal point where the intended target resides. The culminating explosion is exceedingly devastating.

Bakudo:
#61. Rikujōkōrō(六杖光牢, Six Rods Prison of Light): Summons six thin, wide beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. The target is then unable to move any part of their body including the parts that were not struck by the beams
#62. Hyapporankan(百歩欄干, Hundred Steps Fence): A rod formed of energy is thrown towards the target before it disintegrates into numerous short rods which are used to pin the target to the surroundings and render them immobile.
#63. Sajo Sabaku(鎖条鎖縛, Locking Bondage Stripes): Similar to Bakudō No. 4, but stronger, this spell binds the arms of a target.
#81. Danku(斷空, Splitting Void): Creates an energy barrier in the form of a rectangular wall. According to Byakuya, it is capable of stopping destructive spells up to #89. This is seen also when Aizen uses it to block Tessai's Hadō

Hakuda: All Hakuda Techniques except Itto Kaso

Hoho: Utsusemi,Shunpo,Senka

Abilities and Special Training: Zanjutsu and Hakuda Special Training

Quote(s):"All creatures want to believe in something bigger than themselves. They cannot live without blind obedience. And to escape the pressure of that trust, those in whom faith is placed in turn look for someone higher than themselves. And then people in turn look for someone even stronger. That is how all kings are born. That is how all gods are born."

Theme Song(s): Theme Song  
PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2013 6:28 pm


1. We need an application for the Captain position.

2. The whole shunpo speed dagger attack seems might overpowered for a skill on the Shikai. Maybe if the dagger flew a little slower or if the attack wasn't aimed so precisely, then it would be a good idea. But the whole extremely fast and accurate is excessive

3. Disabling a simple with a single slash for 2 posts without it having to be multiple slashes or a slow build up of the poison is heavily overpowered due to how almost game breaking it could be in a one-on-one fight is ridiculous.

I'm sorry if I come off a little extreme but this is my honest opinion.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2013 6:55 pm


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1. We need an application for the Captain position.

2. The whole shunpo speed dagger attack seems might overpowered for a skill on the Shikai. Maybe if the dagger flew a little slower or if the attack wasn't aimed so precisely, then it would be a good idea. But the whole extremely fast and accurate is excessive

3. Disabling a simple with a single slash for 2 posts without it having to be multiple slashes or a slow build up of the poison is heavily overpowered due to how almost game breaking it could be in a one-on-one fight is ridiculous.

I'm sorry if I come off a little extreme but this is my honest opinion.


1. I will do that may I have a link to it please it would be deeply appreciate it.

2. Furthermore the speed is similar to shunpo not the same speed meaning it would be faster than any regular throw by any means is equal to shunpo. When I said mirroring shunpo it was to imply the velocity which it was thrown at furthermore it fly speed is nowhere said in the description so therefore the point you are trying to make would be pretty much nullified. ( This if my explanation wasn't clear enough then I might make changes so you understand)

3. In addition to this I would have to say the ability activates only one therefore all you have to do is block the blade and the effect won't take place is very simple is not like she fired it out of the blade by simply colliding blades or moving out of the way you could dodge this easily so I don't really see why would it be overpowered.  
PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2013 8:09 pm


1. Captain Test

2. and 3. Thanks for the clarification about that. Just make sure to add that information to your profile. My main qualm with the third one was simply the fact that it seemed like you could use it rapid fire without any possible drawbacks. But thank you again for the clarification.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2013 10:34 pm


Tesei Utakata
1. Captain Test

2. and 3. Thanks for the clarification about that. Just make sure to add that information to your profile. My main qualm with the third one was simply the fact that it seemed like you could use it rapid fire without any possible drawbacks. But thank you again for the clarification.


Ok made the required changes hope it is all good now and I will wait for the profile and Application to be accepted.  
PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 1:48 am


Rias Gremory Bloodraven


I read the profile and it looks good, one of your ability's made me laugh, not for the reason you might think though, PM me when you can if you would.

As it stands I accept the profile, I am going to review your application now though and see how it looks.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:11 pm


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Rias Gremory Bloodraven


I read the profile and it looks good, one of your ability's made me laugh, not for the reason you might think though, PM me when you can if you would.

As it stands I accept the profile, I am going to review your application now though and see how it looks.


Hey its me Rias this is my main account so I will be roleplaying from this account from now on  
PostPosted: Mon Feb 11, 2013 8:17 am


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So you r using this one again...interesting


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