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Veijari Starling

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 31, 2013 10:08 pm


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Name: Mircalla (Mir-kal-lah)
Cert: [ x ]
Orientation: Undecided.
Gender: Female
Parents: Unknown
Siblings: None.
Mate: None.
Offspring: None at the moment
Friends: None at the moment
Enemies: None at the moment

Background: Some journeys of the past are best kept in the dark. Mircalla's past is one of those journeys that she will never let see the light of day, just like herself, Until the day she could find a cure for the curse laid upon her. A cure to have a chance for a new life, for she knows she can never return to how things once were. However one thing remains unclear, what does fate have instore for her, if and when she finds the cure? Also will she be able to trust again as the one she loved betrayed Mircalla with this horrible life that she has been living & wandering the world with for years. Tales were told to her when she was with 'him' about these creatures of the night. He was possessive & emotionally abused her when he found her as a fawn. He used her low immunity system to his favor. He raised her to be his perfect mate, however deep down it just build an hate for him instead. Marking her & telling her tales of such creatures cannot live without one another, he was setting her up to make very sure she could never escape him.


Personality: Being withdrawn from the rest of the world, living a solitary life alone. Mircalla observes from afar various species and studies their way of living. Due to this she is envious of those that can enjoy their lives in peace. Whenever Mircalla very seldom socializes with other creatures she collects information, about them or other topics, although when confronted about this she never gives reasons as to why she does. Holding herself in high regard Mircalla gives thorough lashings with her silver-tongue.Mircalla has a bit of a trust issue with others, after being betrayed by the one you love tends to do that. Even though she has trust issues with others, she cannot but help but have a weakness whenever seeing a damsel in distress. Mircalla cannot help but aid a beauty.



Likes:

☥ Solitude
☥ Cold crisp night air.
☥ Ancient history

Dislikes:
☥ Sunlight
☥ Fictitious tales & those who don't take folk lore seriously
☥ Her favorite foods before she "turned".


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PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2013 11:37 am


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Poisin Ivy Josephine
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Thy Reaper
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 08, 2013 3:42 pm


Veijari Starling


I can't in clean conscious approve this herla, not because of who she is but because the lack of a backstory that you hint is much larger than what is posted. If we were given a bigger more full backstory that I could look over and pick apart to see if it works, that would be one thing, but there is just too much with her that is left obscured.

It appears to me that she's suppose to be a vampire, but that really wouldn't fit in with the shop realm. Perhaps she could have heard tales and began to believe that she was because she's allergic to the sun or something like that, but if she's actually a vampire, that just doesn't fit and it needs a little bit of rethinking.

So for now please...
• Rework the whole "turned" thing.
• Give us some more backstory.
• Explain a little bit more about this "cure" and why she's looking for it.

Overall, I think the concept and idea behind her has a lot of potential. I just need to see a little bit more of it polished up before I could approve. :')
PostPosted: Sun Sep 08, 2013 7:48 pm


Thy Reaper


I had reworded her info _both personality and history) a while back but just updated it in my profile for my herd instead of updating it in here too. But yeah, I was going for the vampire thing but I added some more stuff to her backstory to explain why she thinks that. Let me know if it's alright.

Veijari Starling

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Poisin Ivy Josephine
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 09, 2013 8:28 am


Thank you for adding that <3 And for what it's worth, there are a couple of herla who 'think' they're something else. Like um, one of Solar's herla thinks he's this couple thousand year old phoenix, when he's really not. And it was great to watch him rp that herla becuase no one knew any better to correct him xD
PostPosted: Mon Sep 09, 2013 1:56 pm


As long as she only "thinks" she's something and isn't actually that thing, then it's fine. Like Poi said, it's okay for them to believe that they are something, even if they're not.


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Veijari Starling

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 09, 2013 2:56 pm


Thanks you two!
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