thegoodsamaritan
And it is exactly this displeasure at the ending, so fresh in my mind, that has driven me to finally get off my a** and write my magnum opus fanfiction. Let's see how the Catalyst deals with...
AUGMENTED.Read it and weep at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9524023/1/Icarus-Down
...And now I am ashamed because of my shameless attempt at advertising. Sorry.
Ah, didn't understand at first.
AU crossover, okay. >.<
I'm not too familiar with the Deus Ex story though.
This story seems interesting though.
If you're interested in opinions:
Maybe a bit more background for those of us unfamiliar with what you're writing about.
It was a little off putting to me that you threw all of these big characters together so soon, but I guess that's what a fanfic is for. I'm a little canon-minded myself, so this is probably just me.
Cuddly Wrex seems a little odd without an explanation. xD Even though we start to see this through the games, we don't know his background in the AU, so maybe a little bit of background on Wrex would be nice.
I am a little biased towards more canon interpretations of things, and of course, having my own idea of Shepard, but it seems pretty good to me. Definitely makes me want to keep reading.
I had started writing an alternate ending, myself, starting at about the three colored paths to the same ending and going in a different direction... My main copy got deleted, but I think I have a copy... Makes me want to start on that again...