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Can you please go read and critique my story? ^__^

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RavenDarknessAtarashi

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 1:21 pm


Click here for the whole thing!

I have a lot of different parts, chapters, and arks. The main story is XxSuki no VampirexX but I have others and fanfiction too! I'd copy and paste them all in forums but there's soooo many and I don't wanna spam y'all! So please click my journal, read them, and tell me what you think! Thanks in advance! ^-^ <3
PostPosted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 8:33 pm


ill read/ critique yours if you critique mine
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php/?t=23593759&page=last&_gaia_t_=5844

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RavenDarknessAtarashi

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 8:34 pm


Ravyn94
ill read/ critique yours if you critique mine
]http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php/?t=23593759&page=last&_gaia_t_=5844


Sure! Pardon if mine's not that great I'm not much of a critic!!! ^__^;
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RavenDarknessAtarashi

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Ravyn94

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 9:03 pm


RavenDarknessAtarashi
Ravyn94
ill read/ critique yours if you critique mine
]http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php/?t=23593759&page=last&_gaia_t_=5844


Sure! Pardon if mine's not that great I'm not much of a critic!!! ^__^;
its fine, anything helps, also where do i start at? you have so many mixmashes you should straighten it out
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