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Chun Chun Boom

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 23, 2013 2:51 am


Name: Hadia Klasson

Nickname: Hadi (pronounced like Hade)

Age: 16

Birthday: November 1

Sign: Scorpio

Gemstone: Ruby

Blood Type: AB+

Fav. Food: Cinnamon Apple Pie

Hated Food: Anything diet or fat free

School: Horizon Institute for Technology and Science

Hobbies:
☀ Babysitting - Hadia has always been able to work well with kids. She really does babysit as a hobby because she voluntarily does it. Normally, people get paid to care for kids but she does it for fun. Most of the time, she cares for her neighbors' kids. She helps them with homework, takes them out to do fun things, or just takes care of them while the parents are out.

☀ Swimming - Hadia really enjoys swimming. She does it for fun and to stay in shape, plus she likes having a nice tan. The sun is something to be enjoyed. What better way than to go swimming on a nice, hot day? For the most part, she isn't the best swimmer out there but she is good and steady. Her favorite style is the breast stroke. She also taught herself how to pump her legs as if she were a dolphin in the sea.

☀ Slam Poetry - Hadia finds that slam poetry is great for her to put down her opinions and thoughts. Any time she feels the need to, she'll write down her thoughts, forming them into a cohesive poem. She likes to go down to cafes and any other venue that hosts competitions or open mic events. Unfortunately, slam poetry isn't a big thing at HITS, otherwise she'd start up a club.

Virtues:
☀ Caring - Hadia was born as an only child. Having no brothers or sisters made her develop a kind of maternal side that comes out around anything she can care for. She really enjoys helping kids and playing with them. Even those her age and older can see a part of 'Mama Hadia'. If someone gets injured, she'll help them get cleaned and bandaged up. If someone is hungry, she'll buy them food or make them something to eat. Animals are also pulled under her wing if they don't run away from her.

☀ Optimistic - Hadia tends to view the world in positive tones. She always likes to think that something is achievable. Even though life may not always be fair, she believes that good things do happen to good people. Many things in the world is unknown but working hard can ensure that your goals become something you can reach. She believes in the law of attraction. If one thinks good thoughts, then good things will happen. Negative thinking doesn't go well with success.

☀ Resolute - Hadia is a very determined individual. She is capable of focusing on what she wants to get done. With her, there are no half-measures. Once she makes up her mind, she puts her all into it. She is able to use this for the good of others too. Helpful is not a word normally used on her but when she makes up her mind to help someone, they'll find that she gives them a hundred percent. Being resolute also means she's not afraid of roadblocks or foes. It's just a test of how much she truly wants her goal.

Flaws:
☀ Controlling - Hadia likes to be the one in control. Often times, she pushes herself into a position where she is in charge even though others didn't agree on it. This stems from her childhood. Her parents were very strict about what she could eat, wear, and even read. After she became old enough to physically push them out of her room, she took control of every aspect of her life that she could. This causes her to be a bit bossy when it comes to group projects at school so it's best if she works alone.

☀ Opinionated - Sometimes having a brain isn't a good thing, especially when it comes to Hadia. She is quick to form opinions whether it is based on true facts or not. Having an argument? Hadia will have an opinion on who is right. It's not so much that she has opinions as to how much she likes to express them. One time she got off the bus just to yell at some pro-lifers holding signs outside of a clinic that did abortions. Not to say she isn't willing to consider others opinions but if you can't convince her, be ready for an earful.

☀ Stubborn - Hadia may be resolute but the downside to that is she can be downright stubborn at times. It could be a point of pride but she doesn't like being wrong. Sometimes it's also a gut feeling that makes her not give in. There are moments though when she doesn't want to change her mind against all reason. One could throw any amount of logical explanations at her and she still won't budge. There was a time when she wanted a slice of pie and the restaurant she went to didn't have any. So she told them she'd wait there till they baked more in the morning. Though to be fair, it was that time of the month when all girls do irrational things.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: A pale pink color like this, Hooded eyes

Hair: This brown color with some beach blond streaks, long wavy hair that falls to her waist, no accessories

Face: Hadia has a square face with a square chin. Her nose is rather small and she has smile lines around her eyes. Thick, full lips and long lashes. Golden tanned skin.
PostPosted: Wed Jan 23, 2013 2:59 am


Senshi: Sailor Bestla, Senshi of Drumming

Challenge: "I'm gonna beat you senseless."

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: #EACB8F ██
Secondary Color: #D62D0E ██

Fuku:

Collar -- Something that doesn't dip low with white ribbon woven through the fabric.
Bow -- Front bow will be a small plain one
Back bow will have short tail ribbons, they should only stick out as much as the bow itself
Bodice -- corset that laces up in the front with ribbon as the laces
Brooch -- Brooch will be like this
Bottoms -- Pleated mini skirt with a wide band top. Band in secondary color and skirt part in main color.
Tiara -- Wooden tiara with ribbon wrapped around it.
Choker -- Ribbon choker
Shoes -- White thigh high lace up boots with ribbon laces, short heel, beads attached to the lace at the bottom of boots
Gloves -- fingerless gloves that tie around the wrist with ribbons
Accessories -- Earrings that look like little cymbals. Hair half-up in a bun with two hair sticks going through the bun that look like drumsticks


Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Bestla Drum Beat!
Bestla pulls out one of the sticks in her her hair and beats at the air with it. This will cause the target enemy to get a headache and hears drums in their head. It is mostly a distraction. She can do this two times, using one hair stick each time. If any enemy can knock the drumstick out of her hand before she can start using it, it uses up that one stick and the attack.
Range: 5 ft.
Target: Only one enemy
Duration: 20 seconds

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Bestla Drum Blast!
Bestla pulls out one of the sticks in her her hair and beats at the air with it. This will cause the target enemy to get a headache and hear loud drums in their head. This time it causes a throbbing pain. She can do this two times, using one hair stick each time. If any enemy can knock the drumstick out of her hand before she can start using it, it uses up that one stick and the attack.
Range: 10 ft.
Target: Only one enemy
Duration: 30 seconds

Eternal Sailor Attack: Bestla Drum Explosion!
Bestla summons a small drum and beats at it with her hand. This sends a blast of force at any enemy she faces, knocking them off their feet. She can only do this once a battle.
Range: 40 ft. blast
Target: Any enemy within range
Duration: Instant

Chun Chun Boom

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Chun Chun Boom

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 23, 2013 3:01 am


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PostPosted: Wed Jan 23, 2013 3:03 am


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Tenko72

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 12:42 am


Her hobbies, virtues, flaws, and attacks all sound good to me. I actually think you could have more hobbies if you wanted. As far as CC goes, I saw a typo. "her neighbors kids." Here, I think you meant "neighbor's" or "neighbors'". IDK how many neighbors she has, so I can't say for sure. That's all I can think of, right now.
PostPosted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 1:45 am


Tenko72
Her hobbies, virtues, flaws, and attacks all sound good to me. I actually think you could have more hobbies if you wanted. As far as CC goes, I saw a typo. "her neighbors kids." Here, I think you meant "neighbor's" or "neighbors'". IDK how many neighbors she has, so I can't say for sure. That's all I can think of, right now.

Thanks so much for looking through it! <3

I'll definitely think about another hobby for her. Maybe something to do with science or experimenting or something like that.

I figured anyone in her neighborhood needing a babysitter could go to her.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 2:32 am


Chun Chun Boom
Tenko72
Her hobbies, virtues, flaws, and attacks all sound good to me. I actually think you could have more hobbies if you wanted. As far as CC goes, I saw a typo. "her neighbors kids." Here, I think you meant "neighbor's" or "neighbors'". IDK how many neighbors she has, so I can't say for sure. That's all I can think of, right now.

Thanks so much for looking through it! <3

I'll definitely think about another hobby for her. Maybe something to do with science or experimenting or something like that.

I figured anyone in her neighborhood needing a babysitter could go to her.
You're welcome! I don't think I'm the best, but I try when I can.

Good luck with that.

It'd be *neighbors' then.
PostPosted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 11:15 am


Tenko72
You're welcome! I don't think I'm the best, but I try when I can.

Good luck with that.

It'd be *neighbors' then.

Thanks again. ^^

Chun Chun Boom

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Verithe

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 12, 2013 7:00 pm


Hi, there! Sailor Bestla looks pretty awesome!

I just wanted to give you a heads up that the drum sticks used in your attacks might be construed as knight/negaverse-like weapons, which are typically frowned upon for Senshi attacks in this shop. You'd have to check with an official critter to be sure, but you could probably fix this by making them not a part the costume and specifically stating that they are a construct of the power and can't be used for anything else.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 16, 2013 10:40 am


Chun Chun Boom


Everything in this profile looks great to me! My only concern is the same as Verithe's~

For her first two attacks, you should note that they physically cannot be used at all, just for semantics' sake.

For her Eternal attack, I don't think she can summon a real, physical drum so if you say that it's an 'energy drum' ie. physically not actually there, then it should be fine. 40ft is also a huuuuge radius, so that should be dropped down a bit. :3

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