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Sleet Tempest Snape

Noble Vampire

PostPosted: Wed Jan 23, 2013 1:31 am


Name: Ian Bach

Nickname: I (Said as 'E') a half assed way of shortening an already very short name.

Age: 18

Birthday: September 3rd

Sign: Virgo

Gemstone: Carnelian/Sapphire

Blood Type: A

Fav. Food: Chicken. Almost anything with chicken involved, aside from fried chicken.

Hated Food: Anything fast food or greasy.

School: Dropped out of Hillworth. Has his GED, will be in college in the fall.

Hobbies:

Reading: He might not act it, especially with dropping out, but Ian is a bright child. He likes to read, a lot, and has quite the book collection in his room. Jackets have been removed from the books, and unless the cover art is good they've been thrown out. He'd really rather not deal with ruining a possibly nice cover on a book and in the name of keeping everything uniform he's removed the dust jacket from every other book he owns. Also, in the name of being consistent every book he has is hardcover. For those books that only come soft cover...well he has them downloaded on his Kindle Fire, a nice Christmas gift from his mother. It's really not unusual to see him curled up in a window sill, laying on his bed, or curled up in the corner of the living room couch with a book, or his Kindle, in hand and reading. Normally when reading, in order to keep his focus, he'll have his head set on playing low classical music (it's less distracting than his usual taste in music). Ian reads all kinds of books though a lot of them are odd ones, at least to most people. They aren't popular or well known titles.

It's a case of Ian walking into the bookstore and randomly picking a section in the store and looking over titles and reading the backs and inside covers of books, to get an idea what it's about. He picks his reads by this. There is a collection, though small, of books he's bought and read and didn't like - some he's never even finished.

Music: Music, oh god! Ian loves music. From classical (to block out distractions so he can work) to Kill Hannah, Nightwish, and other louder groups. He isn't into metal, well not the normal type. He also isn't a fan of the type of music where you can't understand the words, it's pointless really. While he's not really the type to go to concerts, he isn't big on the crowds and being shoved about, he has gone to a concert or two - for really good groups. Ian is more a fan of the little underground places that have good bands show up, sometimes really good ones. These sorts of underground places are more his scene, less people, less noise, and with a crowd he knows to a point. He doesn't feel like such a loner, even though he is.

Politics: Ian being a smart child is also the sort who thinks that anyone old enough to vote and does should be informed; well informed. Taking that in mind he does keep up with politics, what laws are being passed, what people are trying to pass, fights for certain rights, and what platforms people in office are running on. When he's up late at night, being the night owl he is, he is either reading on politics or perusing his other hobby - hacking. Both sort of go hand in hand really. Not the type to go to political protests or any such thing there has been the odd time or two that he's been made to go, surrounded by several masked friends. But it's only been that time or two and he has no plans to do so again - too many people for his taste.

Hacker: It was something he learned from a friend of his, someone he's still friends with, and he took it to the next step. Really it was only a matter of time, it shouldn't surprise people really, that given his strong liberal opinions and his opinion on things that he would put his hacking skills to good use after fine tuning them. Ian has a guy fawks mask hidden in his closet. He's one of the collective, a member of anonymous. Hacking is no longer something done just for the lulz or simply to see if he can hack this or that site. There is now a purpose behind it and not being the type to go to protests and such this is Ian's way of being involved in politics and voicing his opinion; even though it's not technically voicing anything - it's taking action.


Virtues:

Loyal: Whether it's a friend or a belief, or set of beliefs, Ian is a loyal person - unless given a reason to be otherwise. If no reason, back stabbing for instance, takes place than Ian is loyal to a fault. He will always see the best in a person he's friends with until the bad in them smacks him right in the face. This loyalty of his has shown itself in him sticking with his friends through everything and always being the shoulder for them to cry on, the ear for them to whisper their every trouble into, the person who will help them whenever he can in whatever fashion they need help (provided he's able to help them). This loyalty has been the cause of him going to a protest, when he's much more comfortable behind his computer screen, in order to stand at the side of friends who wanted his support. It's not hard to become an acquaintances of his but to become a friend it takes a lot more. Ian isn't the most social of people and the few who can handle his awkward moments, odd sense of humor, and other varied quirks. For those who don't pass the test, even if it's not stated as a test it is mentally, Ian's loyalty extends only to supporting you if your right and just in whatever you might be saying or doing. If your wrong - your wrong. He isn't so blinded by his loyalty, after all your just ilke every other person out there.

Activist: Need someone to sign a petition, hack a website, make a petition and collection signatures online, or just in general do something? Ian will do that something, provided he believes in it and it doesn't involve going out into a crowd (otherwise he so would have gone to one of the Occupy sites and...well occupied). Ian isn't the type to sit on his a**, watch what's happening in the world, and b***h and moan and do absolutely nothing. He will sit on his a**, at his computer, and get to work on trying to help solve what he sees as problems or shine a huge a** light on the problem so it gets fixed. But really it doesn't stop there, it's not all dealing with large scale problems and situations, no. Should something happen in school that he deems unfair, cruel, or just something wrong he will make sure everyone is made aware of it. Maybe he won't go around shouting about it and causing a scene but he most certainly will put all eyes possible on the issue at hand. Whether he need to post it every classmates facebook and tweet it for people to see or if he needs to hack into the schools system and post it on the wallpaper for all the computers in the school he will do it. He's not afraid of being caught, who would look his way anyway? he's the quite one, though don't they have that saying about it always being the quite ones? Either way he will do what he has to in order to handle a situation and right a wrong, including ones he sees while out and about; as rare as that is. Social media really does have it's uses and he likes to take advantage of them, though he certainly doesn't see it as taking advantage of anything - he's just using the tools provided him.

Strong Willed: Like a mountain that's what his beliefs are like. They are solid and unmovable. He will not budge on what he believes in and while some might think being unyielding and unwilling to bend is a problem, he's certainly not like the willow in this case, Ian sees it as a good thing. He's loyal to his beliefs and your not going to make him even doubt his beliefs for a moment. Because he's got this ideal world in his mind and his beliefs coincide with what he thinks is a perfect world. A perfect world where everyone is equal no matter what, among other things. He knows what he's about and doesn't need someone to tell him who he is or what he should believe or do. He's quite capable of deciding things for himself - thank you very much. Amongst his friends where two people can be best friends one day and enemies the next Ian seems to be the one constant, perhaps that's why everyone comes to talk to him? Because he won't think less, or differently, of them? He won't try and change their minds on things either, unless it's something dangerous or potentially so. And he expects people to not try and change his mind, out of respect, though there are always people who will try and change your mind. Too bad they don't know that their words, no matter what they are, won't change his mind one iota. His ideas, opinions, and beliefs are just that - his. And he won't give them up because someone else wants him to because he stays firm in his convictions and could never turn his back on a worthy cause.


Flaws:

Socially Awkward: He's not one to jump and make friends nor is he a loud person. Ian is in fact a rather socially stunted person in many ways. While everyone else around him is loud, gossiping, and just social he's the one to sit in the back and talk, in a soft voice, to a few people and observe those around him. He doesn't go to parties, he's simply too uncomfortable to put himself out there that much. He really does miss out on those sorts of things, his friends tend to invite people he doesn't know to parties, and so there are always references and inside jokes that he just doesn't get - cause he wasn't there! It's only in private and with his friends that he's comfortable enough to be almost as loud as them and almost as crazy, he's still more restrained than the rest of his friends. With his friends he can be himself and will cuddle his friends, tease them, making teasing passes at them, crazy and sometimes sexual comments - he really can be just like them when in private. It's never been easy for him to make friends, and he's never been the first one to make a move - he just doesn't know how. He'll second guess himself, think it's wrong or odd however he plans to break the ice and then just...scrap the whole thing. Most of the time his ideas for breaking the ice involve talking about things he knows, politics, hacking, and the evils of certain things, or he will want to just butt into a conversation with either some lame add in or random fact that he knows no one wants to hear. Really he needs his friends to make more friends for themselves and for him! If only everyone could be like the people he talks to online! It would all be so much easier, he doesn't have to worry as much online talking to people. They get what he's saying and share his opinions and are smarter than his friends, no offense to them! Some of his friends are simply immature and don't share his views; those that are strong in their opposing opinions he avoids talking about those topics with or in most cases makes it light and playful rather than serious. For his friends he'll do this; they don't have to share all the same views and opinions as him - just a few (they really need to accept him though).

This social awkwardness extends to school where he's quite and almost guarded. Not wanting to be himself in front of those who would tease about it, mock him, or say anything about him. Even in a classroom when it comes to answering questions he's not one to raise his hand, though you can at times catch an eye roll or a nodding of his head or some other movement from him. He just doesn't want to deal with people - classmates - saying things to him or teachers praising him, in anyway.



Opinionated: With those he's close to and will openly talk to Ian is known to be rather opinionated and unwilling to change those opinions. He's not one to be swayed and is rather vehement in his opinions and amongst his friends it's known that certain topics, mostly political ones, are to be avoided. He can go on quite the tangent about such topics (gay marriage, abortion, gun control, legalization of pot...ect...). For those who don't know him well he's rather quite and shy and those people would be in for quite the shock if they were to become a close friend of his. Of if they ever found out what he did at night one his free time. Not only is he one of those mask wearing, computer hacking, members of the collective known as anonymous but Ian is one of the ones who likes to throw peoples opinions back at them while putting holes into their opinions and beliefs by pointing out every single flaw he can think of. He isn't exactly very nice about it either, he's rather blunt and to the point. Some of his nights while he's busy reading things online are spent also listening to idiots on youtube and dropping them happy little comments about what idiots they are while questioning them and their beliefs and such. He finds it a nice way to try and get them to open their eyes and see how wrong they and their personal beliefs are, and really he feels he's doing them a favor and helping society if he can open their eyes.

Blind Eye: He may not have rose tinted glasses on but he certainly doesn't see the real world for what it is either at least not where his friends, and family, are concerned. He's loyal to those close to him and sometimes that just blinds him to certain things. He won't not see the bad in them, until it's staring him in the face. He won't think the worst of them such as seeing them as back stabbers and such, as least not until it's too late. If two friends, or family members, get in a fight he won't see it as fighting, not right off the bat till something dramatic and drastic happens, he'll see it as teasing and joking between friends. Perhaps it's just that he doesn't want to see it? On some subconscious level he doesn't want to see them in the same way he sees the rest of the world? Because they are his friends and so they have to be different?

He doesn't like to get involved in fights between people, being dragged into all that drama? No, that simply isn't his thing, he doesn't know how to handle the drama for one and for two he's not good with the back stabbing and gossip and all the name calling and such - save that for the internet. Once things escalate to others taking sides and fighting Ian is sort to be stuck in the middle with everyone trying to tug him this way and that, both sides just wanting to grab up every person for their side that they can. These are all things he has no clue how to handle and so it leaves him all rather drained feeling. It's due to this, and wanting to avoid it all, that when such fights do happen he distances himself and gives all his those involved the cold shoulder till it passes over, let it all end how it wishes. He can't handle it, he doesn't need to emotional drain and stress.

The downside to this method of dealing with things is when people think it's his way of saying he doesn't care for them, or not as much as they thought he did. He has had friends accuse him of not being a true friend, not caring for them, and has been backed into a corner and put on thin ice with them (in an emotional sense) as he scrambles to right this slight against them that he didn't see. It's an emotional thing which has him a nervous, stomach tied in knots, shaking mess that needs to be off the thin ice with his friends. And despite this having happened in the past he still handles fights between people the same way.

Really, he wishes they were like his friends online.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Green

Hair: Black, I got the style in the ref pic.

Face: Heart shaped face. No real stand out features save for the silver balls on either side of his lower lip.

Clothes: See the ref's I'm including.

Ref's: Here
PostPosted: Wed Jan 23, 2013 1:31 am


Senshi: Chaldene senshi of Will o the wisp
Moon of Jupiter - Chaldene

Challenge:

Fuku Colour: White
Main Color: #2E37FE
Secondary Color: #3A66A7

Fuku:
Collar -- Uhh, will talk this out also.
Bow -- Sash would be best. And front bow of course.
Bodice -- Something swimsuity but more manly?
Sleeves -- Nope, or short sleeves.
Brooch -- We'll work this out in talks.
Bottoms -- Shorts or pants maybe. >.> I'm thinking pants.
Tiara -- We'll figure out an idea for this.
Choker -- Classic.
Shoes -- Something very a very, barely there, heel?
Gloves -- Uhhh maybe like arm warmers? One pushed down and one not?
Accessories -- Any civilian piercing's. Otherwise no.


Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Chaldene Whisp Lure.
Raising his hands, much like a child would when imitating a gun with their hands, Chaldene blows at the tip sending little wisps of blue energy at his opponent. These little wisps of energy would appear to do nothing at first, as they'd vanish upon "impact" with the opponent. But then the opponent would start seeing a wisp of light just in their peripheral and it would last twenty seconds. This wisp flashing in and out of being and in slightly different places, it would certainly be enough to distract most people. And that's all it is - a distraction, a distraction which can be used twice per battle.

If Chaldene is attacked the spell is broken and if the opponent is attacked it breaks the spell as well, snapping their attention to where it needs to be, for obvious reasons. If someone attacks the wisp it does nothing, the wisp will simply reform - it is after all just a wisp of light that vanishes and reappears anyway.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Chaldene Whisp's Secret.
This attack would go the same as above only this time the attack would last thirty seconds each time it's used and could now be used three times per battle. The significant difference however is that this time a person isn't simply distracted by the wisps appearing and vanishing only to reappear. But they are compelled, by magic and whispered words of encouragement, to look toward the wisps.

The same things can break the spell as before only now when the spell is broken the opponent would feel slightly confused and perhaps even a little disoriented.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Chalene Whisp's Compulsion.
Where the previous two attacks either distracted or compelled one to look this attack is different. This spell is different. Rather than just a wisp the opponent will see a bog or marsh with the wisps flickering in and out and hear a beckoning voice, whispering and beseeching them to come closer. The danger of this attack is that as it's a full illusion it will allow Chaldene to sneak up on them and attack, also who knows what an opponent may or may not walk right into (dumpster, a group of senshi/knights).

This spell will last thirty seconds upon which time the spell will end and leave the opponent rather disoriented, after all they were just in a bog or marsh, by the way where did that all go?!

This attack can be used one time in battle (twice if absolutely needed, and it will leave him drained) and like the previous attacks it can be broken early. Attacking Chaldene will break the attack as will attacking the opponent. And again attacking the wisps will do nothing. Since they vanish and reform anyway! Attacking anything within the scenery that is attacked also won't do anything, as they are all in your mind and no one else can see them!

Sleet Tempest Snape

Noble Vampire


Sunshine Alouette

Eternal Senshi

PostPosted: Wed Feb 13, 2013 2:18 pm


Hello, Sleet! You’ve got a wonderful profile here and there are just a couple of things that I want to touch on before stamping!

THE CIVILIAN

For the most part, this portion of his profile looks fine! Great hobbies, and a nice balance of virtues and flaws! There are just a few questions I wanted to ask to hopefully encourage a little more cohesion between Ian’s virtues and flaws!

Loyalty – I’d definitely like to see some expansion on this virtue, particularly in regards to other people or characters he might meet. What does it take to gain his loyalty? Friendship seems to be key here, so then what are his feelings toward people he might not consider friends? Does he see no need to be loyal to them?

Socially Awkward – This can often limit interactions and can even sometimes make RP difficult, though it is by no means unacceptable! I’d simply like to see a little more about how he actually goes about making friends! You mention his friends numerous times throughout the profile, and his loyal virtue seems to imply that his friends, in some ways, are rather important to him. Does he only make friends with people who share his views and opinions? Does this flaw extend further than conversation and social scenes? Does he avoid physical contact, perhaps?

Blind Eye – Here I can see how he might think he’s showing his loyalty to his friends by not picking sides, but some people/characters might not view it that way! Does this ever have a negative effect on any of his friendships?

THE SENSHI

Chaldene’s Senshi and Super attacks look fine! Though, in his Super attack, perhaps the Wisps could now whisper nonsensically to the opponent, to further encourage them to look toward the light—like an added distraction?

Also, make sure you throw some attack names in there! “Fairy light,” “hinkypunk,” and “hobby lantern” would be good synonyms/words to use here if you need any help with that!

His Eternal attack, on the other hand, might need to be reworked just a bit! You want to avoid forcing a specific reaction out of a character with your attacks! Even though his Eternal attack only has opponents follow the wisp with no other reaction, you could easily play more with the mythology behind the Will-o’-the-Wisp and come up with something a little more involved magic-wise, and less dependent upon a specific reaction from an opponent!

Will-o’-the-Wisps are said to be most frequently seen over bogs, swamps, or marshes. Why not have his Eternal attack create an illusion of such a place, with the wisps flickering in and out, beckoning opponents to follow? Will-o’-the-Wisps are also said to draw travelers away from safer paths, so if the opponent does indeed follow the Wisps, it could always lead them closer to Chaldene and, theoretically, closer to “danger”!

And that’s all for now! Feel free to quote me once you’re done and I’ll be happy to come in and give this another look! :3
PostPosted: Wed Feb 13, 2013 5:12 pm


Sunshine Alouette

Fixed things, I think I got the personality things right. Not sure on the eternal attack but I hope I got it!

Sleet Tempest Snape

Noble Vampire


Sunshine Alouette

Eternal Senshi

PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2013 12:19 pm


Sleet Tempest Snape


Personality looks great!

Just a little more tweaking with the Eternal attack and that should be good, too! Most Eternal senshi are only able to use their Eternal attack once per battle, though some may be able to manage a second attempt that leaves them quite drained! Either way, three times per battle for an Eternal attack is a little much! I would lower that down to one, with potential for an exhaustive second attempt should it be absolutely necessary!

Also, I would still steer clear of forcing an opponent's reaction, even when it comes to something so simple as them walking toward Chaldene! You're still going to want this to be a compulsion; they find themselves in the midst of an illusion of a bog or marsh, and see and/or hear the wisps beckoning them to follow. The wisps themselves can disappear and reappear closer to where Chaldene would be, but the reaction to that compulsion to follow you're going to want to leave up to player interpretation! Given that they'll be in the middle of an illusion and not see anything of the reality around them, Chaldene could easily approach them on his own without them even noticing!
PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2013 2:44 pm


Sunshine Alouette
Sleet Tempest Snape


Personality looks great!

Just a little more tweaking with the Eternal attack and that should be good, too! Most Eternal senshi are only able to use their Eternal attack once per battle, though some may be able to manage a second attempt that leaves them quite drained! Either way, three times per battle for an Eternal attack is a little much! I would lower that down to one, with potential for an exhaustive second attempt should it be absolutely necessary!

Also, I would still steer clear of forcing an opponent's reaction, even when it comes to something so simple as them walking toward Chaldene! You're still going to want this to be a compulsion; they find themselves in the midst of an illusion of a bog or marsh, and see and/or hear the wisps beckoning them to follow. The wisps themselves can disappear and reappear closer to where Chaldene would be, but the reaction to that compulsion to follow you're going to want to leave up to player interpretation! Given that they'll be in the middle of an illusion and not see anything of the reality around them, Chaldene could easily approach them on his own without them even noticing!

Edited, I think I got it now. ::Nods::

Sleet Tempest Snape

Noble Vampire


Sunshine Alouette

Eternal Senshi

PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2013 3:06 pm


Yup! Everything looks good! HERE HAVE A TRIAL STAMP! <333

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