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 Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2013 3:14 pm
This is where everyone must try out for top positions. Everyone will be given a rank based on their rping level. Classes will be based from tier three to one. The v/c and myself will be able to rank the material and decide if you are able to carry a top position.
Tier 1- Perfect, many paragraphs with no errors.
Tier 1.5- Excellent, three paragraphs on average and little to no errors.
Tier 2- Average, 1-3 paragraphs sometimes more, some errors but not anything major.
Tier 2.5- Needs some work.
Tier 3- Bad, shouldn't even be roleplaying.
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2013 3:20 pm
When was the last time he saw daylight, felt wind run through his hair? Kasai had lost count years ago. He was Alone, Forgotten, Isolated. Kasai looking up at the ceiling, eyes unfocused staring off into space laying there on the mattress that was there long before he was brought here, Kasai could do nothing, nothing but stare at the ceiling while thinking about his isolation. Soon his years of isolation broke as he heard a scream that ringed throughout halls outside his cell. Kasai looked up in disbelief, there was never sound from outside no one ever spoke from outside. Another scream, only this time a bit closer, "H-H-He-llo?" Kasai's voice, ragged,hoarse and foreign to his tongue.
Gunshots, Kasai stepped back from the the hite door that blended in so well with his white walls "HELP ME!!!!! PLEASE!! OPEN THE DOOR PLEASE!!!!" Kasai heard as the unknown person stopped banging and it quieted down. Kasai walking towards the door "He-o?" His words diced up barley understandable, An explosion as Kasai flew back banging his head against the white wall that had imprisoned him. Kasai standing up barley able to regain his balance, Kasai walking towards the large hole made by the explosion he tripped putting his his hands out to catch himself from falling he caught a metal pipe then lifting himself up, There was the sting and warm liquid dripping from his letting go of the pipe he noticed the jagged edge of the pipe that was slightly tinted red from his hand. Kasai no longer having the knowledge of how to treat an injury dropped his hand to his side and began walking through the hall he soon came to a stair case and began climbing.
Kasai coming to a door with a sign above it saying EXIT, what did that mean? { To leave.} Kasai thought to himself lifting his injured hand up to the door knob he lightly gripped the knob and twisted. Opening opening the door he was assaulted by sunlight and fresh air, Oh how he longed for the taste of fresh air to be free see others. Blinking to adjust his sight the large smile that had grown on his face disappeared quicker then he could breath . Kasai opened his eyes to see that he was on top of a tall building about forty-eight story's tall and looked around he realized that building were destroyed or on fire, car alarms going off, and . {What’s going on? What am I supposed to do?} Kasai thought to himself as he went into a small panic attack, as the fresh air he had yearned for was replaced with a sour smell that made him keel over and empty the contents of his food from some time ago. Kasai straightened up looking over the city again he realized the world he knew of was no longer there, What was there now was a living Hell.
Okay how was that? Trying out for Akatsuki Leader. This was used before in a different guild, So i took it and changed it a tad........
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2013 3:55 pm
Hakkyou no Oto When was the last time he saw daylight, felt wind run through his hair? Kasai had lost count years ago. He was Alone, Forgotten, Isolated. Kasai looking up at the ceiling, eyes unfocused staring off into space laying there on the mattress that was there long before he was brought here, Kasai could do nothing, nothing but stare at the ceiling while thinking about his isolation. Soon his years of isolation broke as he heard a scream that ringed throughout halls outside his cell. Kasai looked up in disbelief, there was never sound from outside no one ever spoke from outside. Another scream, only this time a bit closer, "H-H-He-llo?" Kasai's voice, ragged,hoarse and foreign to his tongue. Gunshots, Kasai stepped back from the the hite door that blended in so well with his white walls "HELP ME!!!!! PLEASE!! OPEN THE DOOR PLEASE!!!!" Kasai heard as the unknown person stopped banging and it quieted down. Kasai walking towards the door "He-o?" His words diced up barley understandable, An explosion as Kasai flew back banging his head against the white wall that had imprisoned him. Kasai standing up barley able to regain his balance, Kasai walking towards the large hole made by the explosion he tripped putting his his hands out to catch himself from falling he caught a metal pipe then lifting himself up, There was the sting and warm liquid dripping from his letting go of the pipe he noticed the jagged edge of the pipe that was slightly tinted red from his hand. Kasai no longer having the knowledge of how to treat an injury dropped his hand to his side and began walking through the hall he soon came to a stair case and began climbing. Kasai coming to a door with a sign above it saying EXIT, what did that mean? { To leave.} Kasai thought to himself lifting his injured hand up to the door knob he lightly gripped the knob and twisted. Opening opening the door he was assaulted by sunlight and fresh air, Oh how he longed for the taste of fresh air to be free see others. Blinking to adjust his sight the large smile that had grown on his face disappeared quicker then he could breath . Kasai opened his eyes to see that he was on top of a tall building about forty-eight story's tall and looked around he realized that building were destroyed or on fire, car alarms going off, and . {What’s going on? What am I supposed to do?} Kasai thought to himself as he went into a small panic attack, as the fresh air he had yearned for was replaced with a sour smell that made him keel over and empty the contents of his food from some time ago. Kasai straightened up looking over the city again he realized the world he knew of was no longer there, What was there now was a living Hell. Okay how was that? Trying out for Akatsuki Leader. This was used before in a different guild, So i took it and changed it a tad........ Personally I think this is complete crap, what are you even doing here? Just kidding, I think it's awesome.. Approved T-1.5
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2013 3:58 pm
Archlord Ayperos Hakkyou no Oto When was the last time he saw daylight, felt wind run through his hair? Kasai had lost count years ago. He was Alone, Forgotten, Isolated. Kasai looking up at the ceiling, eyes unfocused staring off into space laying there on the mattress that was there long before he was brought here, Kasai could do nothing, nothing but stare at the ceiling while thinking about his isolation. Soon his years of isolation broke as he heard a scream that ringed throughout halls outside his cell. Kasai looked up in disbelief, there was never sound from outside no one ever spoke from outside. Another scream, only this time a bit closer, "H-H-He-llo?" Kasai's voice, ragged,hoarse and foreign to his tongue. Gunshots, Kasai stepped back from the the hite door that blended in so well with his white walls "HELP ME!!!!! PLEASE!! OPEN THE DOOR PLEASE!!!!" Kasai heard as the unknown person stopped banging and it quieted down. Kasai walking towards the door "He-o?" His words diced up barley understandable, An explosion as Kasai flew back banging his head against the white wall that had imprisoned him. Kasai standing up barley able to regain his balance, Kasai walking towards the large hole made by the explosion he tripped putting his his hands out to catch himself from falling he caught a metal pipe then lifting himself up, There was the sting and warm liquid dripping from his letting go of the pipe he noticed the jagged edge of the pipe that was slightly tinted red from his hand. Kasai no longer having the knowledge of how to treat an injury dropped his hand to his side and began walking through the hall he soon came to a stair case and began climbing. Kasai coming to a door with a sign above it saying EXIT, what did that mean? { To leave.} Kasai thought to himself lifting his injured hand up to the door knob he lightly gripped the knob and twisted. Opening opening the door he was assaulted by sunlight and fresh air, Oh how he longed for the taste of fresh air to be free see others. Blinking to adjust his sight the large smile that had grown on his face disappeared quicker then he could breath . Kasai opened his eyes to see that he was on top of a tall building about forty-eight story's tall and looked around he realized that building were destroyed or on fire, car alarms going off, and . {What’s going on? What am I supposed to do?} Kasai thought to himself as he went into a small panic attack, as the fresh air he had yearned for was replaced with a sour smell that made him keel over and empty the contents of his food from some time ago. Kasai straightened up looking over the city again he realized the world he knew of was no longer there, What was there now was a living Hell. Okay how was that? Trying out for Akatsuki Leader. This was used before in a different guild, So i took it and changed it a tad........ Personally I think this is complete crap, what are you even doing here? Just kidding, I think it's awesome.. Approved T-1.5 I do admit it could have been better, But I don't have the best grammar.
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2013 4:02 pm
Hakkyou no Oto Archlord Ayperos Hakkyou no Oto When was the last time he saw daylight, felt wind run through his hair? Kasai had lost count years ago. He was Alone, Forgotten, Isolated. Kasai looking up at the ceiling, eyes unfocused staring off into space laying there on the mattress that was there long before he was brought here, Kasai could do nothing, nothing but stare at the ceiling while thinking about his isolation. Soon his years of isolation broke as he heard a scream that ringed throughout halls outside his cell. Kasai looked up in disbelief, there was never sound from outside no one ever spoke from outside. Another scream, only this time a bit closer, "H-H-He-llo?" Kasai's voice, ragged,hoarse and foreign to his tongue. Gunshots, Kasai stepped back from the the hite door that blended in so well with his white walls "HELP ME!!!!! PLEASE!! OPEN THE DOOR PLEASE!!!!" Kasai heard as the unknown person stopped banging and it quieted down. Kasai walking towards the door "He-o?" His words diced up barley understandable, An explosion as Kasai flew back banging his head against the white wall that had imprisoned him. Kasai standing up barley able to regain his balance, Kasai walking towards the large hole made by the explosion he tripped putting his his hands out to catch himself from falling he caught a metal pipe then lifting himself up, There was the sting and warm liquid dripping from his letting go of the pipe he noticed the jagged edge of the pipe that was slightly tinted red from his hand. Kasai no longer having the knowledge of how to treat an injury dropped his hand to his side and began walking through the hall he soon came to a stair case and began climbing. Kasai coming to a door with a sign above it saying EXIT, what did that mean? { To leave.} Kasai thought to himself lifting his injured hand up to the door knob he lightly gripped the knob and twisted. Opening opening the door he was assaulted by sunlight and fresh air, Oh how he longed for the taste of fresh air to be free see others. Blinking to adjust his sight the large smile that had grown on his face disappeared quicker then he could breath . Kasai opened his eyes to see that he was on top of a tall building about forty-eight story's tall and looked around he realized that building were destroyed or on fire, car alarms going off, and . {What’s going on? What am I supposed to do?} Kasai thought to himself as he went into a small panic attack, as the fresh air he had yearned for was replaced with a sour smell that made him keel over and empty the contents of his food from some time ago. Kasai straightened up looking over the city again he realized the world he knew of was no longer there, What was there now was a living Hell. Okay how was that? Trying out for Akatsuki Leader. This was used before in a different guild, So i took it and changed it a tad........ Personally I think this is complete crap, what are you even doing here? Just kidding, I think it's awesome.. Approved T-1.5 I do admit it could have been better, But I don't have the best grammar. It's good, what mistakes you make weren't anything major. I hope Kenta doesn't get mad, I edited the T's and make them how they actually are in the roleplaying world.
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 5:00 pm
Super_Nova_Spirit This is old, I used it in Naruto: Rise of the shinobi at the academy. The only other naruto guild I tried getting interested in. "Hatered only spawns more hatred...." "So lets try to destory hatred before it can do so." At the ninja Academy, Ayperos had been in the room since the beginning of class, though he had been sleeping, with his mask on it was hard to tell. When Ayperos woke, it was because of the insturctor used a shadow clone to slap him on the top of the head. After he opened his eyes, he said "Ow, what was that for?!" and the instructor replied "Stop sleeping in my class!".
"But this is the best place to sleep, it's so quiet here..."
"It's quiet because you're suppose to learn!"
"But aren't you worried about me not getting enough sleep?"
"Sleep at home!"
Ayperos let out a shy, then repositioned his mask, as the instructor continued to talk about the basics of Taijutsu. He listened to him speak long leactures about how "Taijutsu is a basic form of techniques and refers to any techniques involving the martial arts or the optimisation of natural human abilities." and "Taijutsu generally require no hand seals to perform, occasionally making use of certain stances or poses, and are much quicker to use than ninjutsu or genjutsu. Taijutsu is simply put, taijutsu is hand-to-hand combat."
Ayperos hated setting there, he felt it was a waste of his time but he knew it was what he had to do inorder to progress and become a shinobi. ~Ayperos~
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 5:22 pm
Archlord Ayperos Super_Nova_Spirit This is old, I used it in Naruto: Rise of the shinobi at the academy. The only other naruto guild I tried getting interested in. "Hatered only spawns more hatred...." "So lets try to destory hatred before it can do so." At the ninja Academy, Ayperos had been in the room since the beginning of class, though he had been sleeping, with his mask on it was hard to tell. When Ayperos woke, it was because of the insturctor used a shadow clone to slap him on the top of the head. After he opened his eyes, he said "Ow, what was that for?!" and the instructor replied "Stop sleeping in my class!".
"But this is the best place to sleep, it's so quiet here..."
"It's quiet because you're suppose to learn!"
"But aren't you worried about me not getting enough sleep?"
"Sleep at home!"
Ayperos let out a shy, then repositioned his mask, as the instructor continued to talk about the basics of Taijutsu. He listened to him speak long leactures about how "Taijutsu is a basic form of techniques and refers to any techniques involving the martial arts or the optimisation of natural human abilities." and "Taijutsu generally require no hand seals to perform, occasionally making use of certain stances or poses, and are much quicker to use than ninjutsu or genjutsu. Taijutsu is simply put, taijutsu is hand-to-hand combat."
Ayperos hated setting there, he felt it was a waste of his time but he knew it was what he had to do inorder to progress and become a shinobi. ~Ayperos~ It is short but I know what you are truly capable of so tier- 2! Nice Job Ayperos! ^^
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 5:35 pm
Super_Nova_Spirit It is short but I know what you are truly capable of so tier- 2! Nice Job Ayperos! ^^ Kenji, let's be realistic... Why would I go all out for a simple sample? x.D Not even going to be used in rp. But it is still a few paragraphs that is greatness xD And as far as I could tell I did little errors. So I can continue my work as Legendary ninja and captain? Which captain should I be btw?
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 5:39 pm
Archlord Ayperos Super_Nova_Spirit It is short but I know what you are truly capable of so tier- 2! Nice Job Ayperos! ^^ Kenji, let's be realistic... Why would I go all out for a simple sample? x.D Not even going to be used in rp. But it is still a few paragraphs that is greatness xD And as far as I could tell I did little errors. So I can continue my work as Legendary ninja and captain? Which captain should I be btw? You can be anything you want! biggrin You should probably be captain of squad two. I realy have no clue. I haven't really seen bleach since something blah blah I forgot what I was gonna say. whee
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 5:41 pm
Super_Nova_Spirit Archlord Ayperos Super_Nova_Spirit It is short but I know what you are truly capable of so tier- 2! Nice Job Ayperos! ^^ Kenji, let's be realistic... Why would I go all out for a simple sample? x.D Not even going to be used in rp. But it is still a few paragraphs that is greatness xD And as far as I could tell I did little errors. So I can continue my work as Legendary ninja and captain? Which captain should I be btw? You can be anything you want! biggrin You should probably be captain of squad two. I realy have no clue. I haven't really seen bleach since something blah blah I forgot what I was gonna say. whee Lol, squad two is only would for those that have stealth Shikai, Ashidō has fire.
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 5:43 pm
Archlord Ayperos Super_Nova_Spirit Archlord Ayperos Super_Nova_Spirit It is short but I know what you are truly capable of so tier- 2! Nice Job Ayperos! ^^ Kenji, let's be realistic... Why would I go all out for a simple sample? x.D Not even going to be used in rp. But it is still a few paragraphs that is greatness xD And as far as I could tell I did little errors. So I can continue my work as Legendary ninja and captain? Which captain should I be btw? You can be anything you want! biggrin You should probably be captain of squad two. I realy have no clue. I haven't really seen bleach since something blah blah I forgot what I was gonna say. whee Lol, squad two is only would for those that have stealth Shikai, Ashidō has fire. I don't suppose each squad could have their own main threads can they? xp
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 5:47 pm
Archlord Ayperos Super_Nova_Spirit Archlord Ayperos Super_Nova_Spirit It is short but I know what you are truly capable of so tier- 2! Nice Job Ayperos! ^^ Kenji, let's be realistic... Why would I go all out for a simple sample? x.D Not even going to be used in rp. But it is still a few paragraphs that is greatness xD And as far as I could tell I did little errors. So I can continue my work as Legendary ninja and captain? Which captain should I be btw? You can be anything you want! biggrin You should probably be captain of squad two. I realy have no clue. I haven't really seen bleach since something blah blah I forgot what I was gonna say. whee Lol, squad two is only would for those that have stealth Shikai, Ashidō has fire. you could be in any squad really, cept maybe 2, 4, and 12
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 5:48 pm
You can be Head Captain since you are right for that spot.
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 5:49 pm
Super_Nova_Spirit Archlord Ayperos Super_Nova_Spirit Archlord Ayperos Super_Nova_Spirit It is short but I know what you are truly capable of so tier- 2! Nice Job Ayperos! ^^ Kenji, let's be realistic... Why would I go all out for a simple sample? x.D Not even going to be used in rp. But it is still a few paragraphs that is greatness xD And as far as I could tell I did little errors. So I can continue my work as Legendary ninja and captain? Which captain should I be btw? You can be anything you want! biggrin You should probably be captain of squad two. I realy have no clue. I haven't really seen bleach since something blah blah I forgot what I was gonna say. whee Lol, squad two is only would for those that have stealth Shikai, Ashidō has fire. I don't suppose each squad could have their own main threads can they? xp Their own subforum? That would cost a good amount.. 12 new subforums (since we're not using squad one where the head captain leads) 12*2.5k=30k Given that most of the squad forums (if we had them) wouldn't be roleplayed in my anything but the captains alone (if we're even that lucky), we shouldn't waste the gold.
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 5:52 pm
I just shat this out from the top of my head :B I made Cal a victim o wo Quote:   Rin bent over and picked Yukiko up with her right hand, throwing him into a sea of debris. "OYEE!!! You stole my cake!!!" The blow to her ego was devastating. The fact that someone stole her cake right under her nose pissed her off to no end. She unsheathed the kodachi that she kept safely tucked away behind her waist. The moment it was unsheathed, her reiatsu flared up, as the ground beneath her feet began to crumble from the tremendous pressure being exerted. The short 27 inch kodachi extended to 36 inches. However, she kept herself elevated with air walk, slowly approaching Yukiko with the sword that was never seen by human eyes.
"No soul has walked away alive after seeing my weapon....and you shall not be the first", she stared soullessly into the man's eyes. A few moments later, Rin strolled outside of the barracks holding a bloodied bag with only a head in there. She held up the bag in triumph and stared at it. "That'll teach you to touch my cake. Hah!" After a good while of mentally laughing off her actions, Rin would sling the bag over her shoulders and walk away all giddy and child-like. "Looks like I have another head to add to my collection!~"
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