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Evorg

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2013 5:55 am


─Basic Character Information─

Username: Seth Maxion Devoncroix
Character's Full Name: Tezcatlipoca
Alias: The smoky Mirror
Nickname(s): Tez
Race Arrancar
Age: 796
Birthday: October 21st
Zodiac: Libra
Gender: Male
Blood Type: A-
Sexual Orientation: Hetero
Disabilities/Phobias: None that he is aware of, though he has a strong preference for the ground.

─Appearance─

Appearance: A man covered in armor. Under his armor is a handsome man with long dark hair. He is well built, but slim as if more dense. He is quite tall and imposing for an average person and has a military like build. His hair is long and flows down to his shoulders, though it is normally tied up in his helmet.
Height: 6'4
Weight: 230 lbs
Eye Color: Jade
Hair Color: Obsidian
Mask Fragment and Location: A jaguar jaw covering the lower half of his face.
Hollow Hole Location: Abdominal/lower
Number Location: Left shoulder blade
Tattoos/Markings/Scars: A cyan line across the top of his face.
Unusual Features: His skin changes shades. From obsidian/ebony to almost a dark dark brown.


─Personal Information─

Personality: A quiet and reserved member of the espada. He isn't incredibly smart, one too many knocks to the head. He also is very obedient, a perfect soldier. He rarely if ever questions his orders unless asking to clarify them. He isn't independent at all. Outside of combat he isn't much fun to be around. He has very simple tastes, many of which revolves around repetitive labor and using his body. He only strays from this archetype for two reasons; the first is that he is quite a fan of meditative and relaxing settings. He is often meditating when not working and the second is when on the hunt, where he is almost like a wild beast.

Hobbies: Sand Garden, Crystal Garden and Meditation
Favorite Color(s): Obsidian, Jade, Cyan
Favorite Activities: Hunting and martial arts practice.
Favorite Foods and Drinks: He enjoys many diverse foods, because he really doesn't care what he eats.

Least Favorite Color(s): black, green and blue (these colors are close but not close enough to his likes)
Least Favorite Activities: Any kind of mental problem he can't smash his way through
Least Favorite Foods and Drinks: N/A
Other Personal Dislikes: Not being able to move, being confined or tied down.

Aspect of Death: Obsession
Personal Possession(s): A vast collection of crystals and shiny rocks and geodes.
Personal Secret(s): None

History:Scott Frank was an obsessive collector. A hoarder in fact. In childhood it started in school with his locker being stuffed with useless papers and notes and the space under his bed with candy wrappers and used tissue paper. As he grew older his need to keep grew and grew. His collections became more obscure and excessive. His home was a mass of stacks upon stacks of just things. Things that were a part of him, things that protected him. Sets that had to be completed no matter what. It was a successful completion of a my little pony collection that he tripped over a collection of remote controls into a collection of dice and starved there to death unable to be rescued, and no one really noticing he was gone until months later.
In death his obsession with collections carried into his death. As soon as he started to gain the hunger of a hollow he had to eat every single hollow he came across in a ocd like pattern. Often jumping hollow to hollow eating them as he went. His will and hunger soon lead him to become a gillian. He was lucky. His will was strong and he survived with his mind intact. This process of survival and luck was repeated until he met a hollow woman. A queen of swords her attacks ripped through his defenses. She would have eaten him then and there, but decided to spare him on a whim, as she did all things. He never knew of her, and in fact the wounds and shock of being an arrancar seemed to have wiped most of her details from her memory. Only the feeling of discomfort as if facing a stronger predator in the wild remains in his subconscious.
He pulled himself up and felt more power than before. After many struggles to gain control of his new form he lead himself to the espada and gaining his new position amongst them. As the hollow with the ultimate defense.


─Zanpakuto Information {Sealed}─

Zanpakuto Name: Pele
Zanpakuto Appearance: Almost like a giant club. A hexagonal prism connected at the base by a long handle. The edges of the prism are all sharp. The prism is five feet long, and the handle is two feet long.
Special Sealed Abilities:
Flake: The ability when fighting for the hexagonal prism blade to flake layers away and become sharper.


─Release State {Resurrección}─

Incantation: Erupt
Appearance: His form shifts gaining muscle, especially around his torso and shoulders, but otherwise physically he doesn't change much more. His eyes are black scalera with jade green irises. His torso, arms, and legs are now covered in precisely placed obsidian colored crystal orbs. These orbs are about one inch in diameter and there are 30 across his whole body. The pattern replicates the complex molecular structure of some crystals. His jaguar hollow mask fragment gets more 'intense'. This meaning that the teeth are longer and sharper, and at the edges near the sides they have grown longer and seemingly sharper. The whole intensifying effect rather means sharper and more menacing. More sharp edges. This effect makes him seem more bestial. The cyan line across the top of his face is gone and there are now several cyan dots on his mask fragment.

Resurrección Special Ability:
-Resonance: In his release form, Tez's crystals resonate with all physical objects near by. Thus allowing him to release a sonar through them to find enemies. The sonar is so precise that when connected to the ground he can feel the size of far off opponents and number of opponents. Up close it allows for him to more accurately control his other abilities to more devastating effect.
Special Techniques:
-Geomancy: The ability to mentally control earth like substances with incredible precision and power. For several reasons in Huecco Mundo this ability's power increases drastically. These are the more reiatsu in the area and the mass amounts of sand that he can control.
- Dissonance: Using the the resonance ability to destructive ends. Finding the weakness of opponents or structures in his resonance range and then hitting those weaknesses to cause more damage than a normal hit would usually accrue.
- Eruption: The obsidian orbs start to glow volcanic red. His strength, speed and durability drastically increase as he resonates his own body hardening himself and adjusting his weak points to be harder to detect and destroy. This mode is a last ditch effort.


─Energy Technique Information─


Specialized Cero:
-Volcanic Glass Cero: Creates a black cero barrier that when hit, explodes into many black bala shards that fire at the opponent.
Special Cero Techniques: Gan Ray Cero: Jade
Bala: Jade



─Physical Information─


Sonido Level: Poor. He is aware of how to use it but has never figured out why he should.
Hakuda Level: He has no specific style other than taking and delivering hits. However thanks to his disonance and resonance he tends to strike areas that do more damage than normal.
Zanjutsu Level: His skill is poor, but he is very strong and swift. No swordsman style to speak of, just swinging at blind spots.
Herrio Strength: His herrio perfected. His basic abilities make his skin harden constantly. It should take a captain specialized in cutting to do any type of damaging strikes, and punches should be done by the physically strongest captains.


─Relationships─

Love Interest: N/A
Friends: None really, though he'd like to make some of the other espada his friends.
Enemies: None
Other Relations: He respects his espadas' ability to take hits, but secretly believes he could do better.


─Professional Status─

Affiliation: Espada
Previous Affiliation: Himself
Occupation: Defensa
Previous Occupation: Eater of hollows
Team: Team Defensia
Partner: ??? Defensive fighters generally work alone.


─Skills Information─

Intelligence: He isn't stupid, more simple in nature. He would pass basic tests but anything advanced he just doesn't care enough to figure out. Orders and that is it.
Athletic Skill: He is highly athletic, he would by an Olympian of the arrancar. His olympic sport would be boxing, because he'd never go down.
Strength: Physically very imposing. His attacks are always strong and swift even though his true nature isn't in this skill. More often then naught his true strength is hidden because of the use of dissonance.
Speed: He isn't incredibly a fast move over distance, and he isn't very fast close up either. However he isn't a glacier, he will hit you if you are stupid enough to get close unless you are an absolute speedster.
Agility: He isn't very agile. He rarely needs to move to avoid attacks as he just takes them in the jaw and keeps on smiling.
Stamina: This man is a machine, being able to be active for weeks if need be.
Durability: He is in the defensa cell. He can take attacks for days. His defense is nigh absolute.
Endurance: His muscles will hold out for as long as necessary and then add a few day to that. He is of the defensa, he won't back down or stop for anything unless it's an order.
Flexibility: Isn't very flexible.

Any Special Skills:
He is quite knowledgeable in the area of geology.


─Other Information─

Character Theme: Resistance by Muse
Other: When hunting he becomes a monster seeking his prey or mission objective tirelessly and viciously.

PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2013 5:56 am


as always, please be brutal and thorough.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2013 4:01 pm


Just a heads up, I am much harder on espada profiles.

x This is not an espada leveled profile. Meaning, you don't showcase the needed skill set to be of a espada class. At the same time, your posts from before dont showcase the required skill.
You need to get a lot better before you can reapply for an espada seat. For now, I am putting you in the seat of Defensa Cuchillo.

x You need more description in the normal and released states. Simple adjectives and sentence structure would be perfect.

x The resonance ability needs to be toned down lightly. Feeling all of the muscle movement is just... Impossible, and somewhat unneeded based on your character's skill set. the Defensa espada is the type of person to pack down, take huge amounts of damage, before springing out with somewhat powerful attacks and techniques. Not only does this not fit, but it is likewise overpowered.

x Your sonido level needs to be much slower; like I mentioned, your character shouldn't be a mobile sort of person, since you have the incredible defense.
Likewise, make a larger note of the incredible defense. The Defensa cell is designed in mind with the persons leading it to take damage, and dole it back. They last forever, and almost constantly take damage. Things hardly hurt them, and this needs to be reflected as a perfected form of Hierro, while other areas suffer.

x Explain exactly what Aikido is, please. We need more than just a list of what you know.

x In the physical section, take away from speed and agility, and add onto endurance. As I've made a point of, The Defensa cell is designed to take hits, and rarely move around. Just... Imagine you're a shield, something rarely moved, and used to block everything.

x When and if you become the Defensa espada, you may create a Segunda Etapa.
PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2013 5:17 am


YummyBiscuits
Just a heads up, I am much harder on espada profiles.

x This is not an espada leveled profile. Meaning, you don't showcase the needed skill set to be of a espada class. At the same time, your posts from before dont showcase the required skill.
You need to get a lot better before you can reapply for an espada seat. For now, I am putting you in the seat of Defensa Cuchillo.

x You need more description in the normal and released states. Simple adjectives and sentence structure would be perfect.

x The resonance ability needs to be toned down lightly. Feeling all of the muscle movement is just... Impossible, and somewhat unneeded based on your character's skill set. the Defensa espada is the type of person to pack down, take huge amounts of damage, before springing out with somewhat powerful attacks and techniques. Not only does this not fit, but it is likewise overpowered.

x Your sonido level needs to be much slower; like I mentioned, your character shouldn't be a mobile sort of person, since you have the incredible defense.
Likewise, make a larger note of the incredible defense. The Defensa cell is designed in mind with the persons leading it to take damage, and dole it back. They last forever, and almost constantly take damage. Things hardly hurt them, and this needs to be reflected as a perfected form of Hierro, while other areas suffer.

x Explain exactly what Aikido is, please. We need more than just a list of what you know.

x In the physical section, take away from speed and agility, and add onto endurance. As I've made a point of, The Defensa cell is designed to take hits, and rarely move around. Just... Imagine you're a shield, something rarely moved, and used to block everything.

x When and if you become the Defensa espada, you may create a Segunda Etapa.


All things have been edited as you've requested.

Evorg

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2013 2:37 pm


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