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 Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2013 9:21 pm
Hello.
This is where I shall be posting all of the poems that I deem not to weak and abhorrent to show to you fine people.
If you would like me to right a poem about a specific subject or thing please let me know by posting your idea below.
Thanks for reading.
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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2013 9:36 pm
A Hidden Path
What do I see in font of me?
A hidden path for all to see.
What do I feel in front of me?
An ice-cold hand what could it be?
Why all the questions?
Should you not be content?
Do you not rejoice In time well spent?
What do I see in font of me?
A hidden path for all to see.
Are we all blind?
Do we just walk on?
Forget the past, as time long gone?
I stand upon this path and look ahead.
I see not the path...but me instead.
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 1:03 am
War Not
Rage, then reload
Fire, then breath
Flip the switch, Auto mode
Do you feel that rush?
Charging blind down the road
that Adrenalin kick?
Rage, then reload
It makes me sick
War not on my homeland
Turn not my forests to bitter sand
You wanted blood
It shall be yours
Fire fills your eyes
as your heart thaws.
Rage, then reload
Fire, then breath
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 1:04 am
The Wolf,
I walk in Silence through winters night.
Under shadow of Bertramus flight.
I sing of sorrow and friends past
This unspeakable pain, to be the last
Am I alone here and forever more?
I wander here over forests floor
Where are the howls under the moon?
Is this the end? has it come so soon?
I am the Wolf and I shall Find home
Paw steps beside me, I am not alone.
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 5:13 am
The Road
Walk to the beat
And follow the road
the trail beneath my feet
the life that I have sowed
Walk to the beat
And follow the road
All the people you will meet
All the visits that are owed
Walk to the beat
And follow the road
The desert heat
and secrets it has showed
Walk to the beat
and follow the road
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2013 8:59 am
Hmm I really like your poems ^^
It flows well and I like the feelings I get when read your work. It's simple but keeps the reader in hold through out 4laugh
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2013 1:58 pm
Solarknight7 Sleeping Shrine Maiden Hmm I really like your poems ^^ It flows well and I like the feelings I get when read your work. It's simple but keeps the reader in hold through out 4laugh Thank you. I am really happy that you liked them. If there is anything you would like me to write about please tell me. No problem. I'll have to look out for your work ^^ Hmm sure 3nodding What kind of poems do you like? 4laugh To write I mean?
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2013 3:18 pm
Solarknight7 Sleeping Shrine Maiden Solarknight7 Sleeping Shrine Maiden Hmm I really like your poems ^^ It flows well and I like the feelings I get when read your work. It's simple but keeps the reader in hold through out 4laugh Thank you. I am really happy that you liked them. If there is anything you would like me to write about please tell me. No problem. I'll have to look out for your work ^^ Hmm sure 3nodding What kind of poems do you like? 4laugh To write I mean? I enjoy writing poems about life, how to enjoy it and staying on the right path. Ahh okay. Would you be able to write about being hopeful and trying not to give up? sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 8:37 am
Good poems. I know there are a lot of haters out there who rank on stuff that rhymes but I like this kind of stuff and I think it's enjoyable to read.
You should post some of it in the arena. heart Hehe, jk, I wouldn't want to pressure you into that, I'm just looking for arena buddies. I used to have some ages ago but they are all gone now. crying
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 4:00 pm
Solarknight7 Sleeping Shrine Maiden Solarknight7 Sleeping Shrine Maiden Solarknight7 Sleeping Shrine Maiden Hmm I really like your poems ^^ It flows well and I like the feelings I get when read your work. It's simple but keeps the reader in hold through out 4laugh Thank you. I am really happy that you liked them. If there is anything you would like me to write about please tell me. No problem. I'll have to look out for your work ^^ Hmm sure 3nodding What kind of poems do you like? 4laugh To write I mean? I enjoy writing poems about life, how to enjoy it and staying on the right path. Ahh okay. Would you be able to write about being hopeful and trying not to give up? sweatdrop Not a problem. I will start work on it right now... wow thanks!
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 8:03 pm
Still as deep as ever I see ehh Solar 3nodding your words are truly inspiring heart promise me you'll never give up on writing ok 4laugh
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2013 8:04 am
kagome1026 Still as deep as ever I see ehh Solar 3nodding your words are truly inspiring heart promise me you'll never give up on writing ok 4laugh I promise
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