Welcome to Gaia! ::

Bleach - The Spiritual Divide

Back to Guilds

 

Tags: Role Play, Bleach, Liberation, Romance, Combat 

Reply Approval
Saisei Kusanagi Rogue Shinigami U/C

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Sasori00923

Ruthless Lunatic

6,850 Points
  • Partygoer 500
  • Risky Lifestyle 100
  • Brandisher 100
PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 1:04 pm


─Basic Character Information─

Username:Sasori00923
Character's Full Name: Saisei Kusanagi
Alias:
Nickname(s): Mass Destroyer, Oblivion
Age: looks to be in his mid 30's but he is somewhere around 1500
Birthday: May 7th
Zodiac: Taurus
Gender: Male
Blood Type: AB-
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Disabilities/Phobias: N/A

─Appearance─

User Image
Appearance: He has a tan skin tone with medium length dark black hair and a beard and mustache. He is a large and muscular man with numerous cuts and gouges all over his torso and arms, the most prominent gouge being on his right shoulder in the form of a large gunshot, this was made by a quincy arrow in his younger days. His beard is scruffy and his eyebrows are a bit bushy, his hair is also very unkempt and shaggy because he doesn't have time to worry about his hair when there are more pressing matters to attend to. He has a large piece of straw in the corner of his mouth most of the time because he says it helps him think and relaxes him. His face shows a very serious almost deadpan stare which is just the look on the surface. Whenever the situation calls for it he touches up and fashions his hair back (much like Aizen’s).

Outfit: His attire consists of a modified Shihakusho with the legs of the Hakama being torn at the bottom and sporting silver flame designs going from the feet up towards the thigh area, at the waist it is tied off by a worn and discolored brown sash which also holds his zanpakuto in place. His Kosode is a long sleeve but he never wears the sleeves themselves, he rests his left arm on the torso fold and sports his right side naked with the kosode flowing freely. The Kosode itself has very worn and torn sleeves much like the Hakama and is also modified with silver tiger dragon designs on the back and sleeves and a deep red line that runs around the whole neck and torso section. His old squad insignia is still emblazoned on the front of the left shoulder in a worn white almost a gray that is now barely visible. He also sports wooden clog sandals. He also wears oversized ceramic prayer beads with two red bell like tassels hanging from them. They are worn across his torso from his left arm to the right side of his neck (much like an arm brace).

Jewelry: Prayer Beads

Height: 6'3

Weight: 230 pounds

Eye Color: Brown

Hair Color: Black

Tattoos/Markings/Scars: He has no tattoos but many scars on his torso and arms.

Unusual Features: High quantity of scars


─Personal Information─

Personality: Although he appears to be a serious man he is a comical nut, he is a down to earth person who enjoys teaching and conveying kindness towards most people. In his years within the Gotei he lead by example and was a rather hard working man even despite his normal comical detachment from the obvious. He has a very large sense of pride and honor on the battlefield that does not allow him to kill enemies who have lost the will to fight or enemies considerably weaker unless absolutely necessary he would rather talk than mindlessly kill, this however can shift in an instant if it is necessary or justified he will strike down any who dare stand in his path with sheer power, the duality in his persona makes him to be a rather vindictive and cruel man with harsh methods when it comes to his enemies, he will not hesitate to utterly destroy anyone who would dare threaten him or those he cares about, he will gladly put his life on the line for his comrades and expects his comrades to do the same for him. Nowadays he rather enjoys being a pain in the a** to the people around him, he enjoys being the vagabond which everyone tends to avoid and is often found peddling his paintings and sketches.


Hobbies: Drawing
Favorite Color(s): All colors
Favorite Activities: Drawing, Reading and Training
Favorite Foods and Drinks: Sushi and Sake
Other Personal Likes: Literature

Least Favorite Color(s): N/A
Least Favorite Activities: Recon
Least Favorite Foods and Drinks: N/A
Other Personal Dislikes: Bullies

Personal Possession(s): N/A
Personal Secret(s): His Bankai is not 'normal'

History: His journey in the Soul Society began in the Kusajishi district in North Rukongai. He was a strong soul since his arrival, yet he led a normal life. He met a woman named Kira and got married he even had a child, he led a happy life. Everything changed when an unknown attack on the Seiretei blew back on the Rukongai, rampant hollow attacked and killed residents in many districts, his wife and son were devoured by a lesser hollow and it was at this moment that his presence became apparent, armed with his katana he defeated the hollow that had killed his family, he received some injuries but nothing that he wouldn't recover from, when he did he was sought out by a shinigami and he was quickly prompted to join the academy an offer which he quickly accepted. Once there he began his training in the shinigami arts. His abnormally high reiatsu was quickly taken note of as he excelled in basic techniques. His sword skills were quickly taken note of and his unusually high strength, he graduated in 2 years and was admitted into the Advanced Academy Classes. He showed great promise and skill within his first year and over the course of 3 years he had graduated the Advanced Class, something only done few other times before him. He was classified a genius and quickly offered a position in squad 11 thanks to his swordsmanship, he kept his blade abilities a secret as he trained each day, he was highly motivated to improve his abilities, never to allow something precious to him to be taken by monsters, this was his promise to Kira and Kyo a promise he would now keep even at the cost of his life.

As time went by he was promoted to a seated officer and eventually when the time came for him to be promoted to Lt. he refused, he requested admittance to the Advanced Expeditionary Unit to Hueco Mundo and was granted a pass, he killed many hollow in his stay, gained valuable battle experience and grew in power. Some Years passed and his unit returned to Soul Society, his actions rewarded by making him a Lt. this time he accepted the offer and continued his training, sent on eradication missions most of the time he un-hesitantly agreed to carry out his orders and was responsible for many deaths. One of his missions was a quincy eradication, rogue quincy were disturbing the balance of souls. The mission was a success and the quincy were killed, yet something clicked within Saisei, the meaningless destruction of the weak had rocked the very core of his being , he let his guard down and a quincy that was thought dead put his life for one final arrow, the latter was aimed at Saisei’s heart and missed it’s mark because one of his comrades managed to push him causing it to pierce his shoulder instead. This is when he made another promise, to never kill those who had lost the will to fight, not unless it was necessary and justified.

After this incident he continued his training in secret achieving bankai and prompted to become a Captain, he accepted and began working to become the Head Captain, this was his new ambition. He was a particularly strong individual, receiving notice from several of the older Captains taking note of it, he was a man worthy of admiration and beloved by many within the Gotei; This however did not last long, there was something wrong, something unusual; his bankai was not normal, the spirit of Akuma Ryu no Arashi had undergone a change, a corruption. The darkness in Saisei's heart mutated the the spirit and made it corrupt, Central 46 ordered him to be executed and he fled, he took refuge in the world of the living. His day now consists of hanging around Dorobo's Sushi place and being a vagabond, while in Dorobo's Restaurant he draws people that come in and sometimes sells the portraits to earn some money or Dorobo pays him himself on special occasions to paint the clients. He isn't exactly a welcome guests but since he pays his bills Dorobo and Amaterasu have no choice but tolerate his presence, he is really just annoying but every now and then he proves to be useful in some obscure sense of the word. He has been trying to stay out of the way of Gotei 13 matters since his defection, though he sometimes hears and sees information pertaining the balance, but oddly enough he shows no signs of it. He buts out of their issues and hopes that in return they stay out of his way.


─Zanpakuto Information {Sealed}─


Zanpakuto Name:Akuma Ryū no Arashi - 悪 魔 龍 の 嵐 (Storm of the Demon Dragon)

Zanpakuto Appearance:Saisei’s Zanpakuto is sealed in 2 blades, a Katana which he wears on his waist and a Wakizashi he conceals within his Kosode. They both have black handles and sheathes, the Wakizashi has a dragon decoration in the sheathe and some Japanese symbols on the blade itself. (( FOR KATANA LOOK TO APPEARANCE PIC, WAKIZASHI ))

Zanpakuto Spirit: It is a dragon of fire and ice, in plain sight it has no wings but when it wishes to fly it creates one wing of fire and another of ice from it’s power, it is a stoic and proud creature that controls the demon storms of fire and ice. It grants the user control over the elements and is a spirit of legend. Spirit

Inner World: A rocky mountain area covered in snow with and active volcano at the summit making it seem like the top and bottom are 2 separate places.

Basic Zanpakuto Attacks/Powers: N/A


─Zanpakuto Information {Shikai}─


Shikai Incantation: Ten Kara Hyō, Funka Suru Chijō kara - 噴 火 す る 地 上 か ら (Hail from the Heavens and Erupt from the Ground)

Shikai Appearance: Both swords now change shapes, the Wakisashi takes the form of a broad cleaver with a flat top end rather than a tip which renders is useless for stabbing, it is decorated in its center the whole length of the blade with markings and ranges from a bright fiery orange close to the hilt to a dark icy blue near the end of the blade. The Katana takes the form of a single large ice spike like blade. Fire Blade ; Ice Blade

Shikai Abilities: Upon releasing his blade Saisei gains an increase in reiatsu as is natural, in this state, the blades posses the powers of fire and ice. He may engulf the Wakizashi in fire or super heat the blade to increase its cutting power. He may coat the Katana’s blade in a thin layer of ice thus increasing its cutting capability.

Shikai Techniques:

Shikai Attack 1: Ryū no hi no hashira - 龍 の 火 の 柱 (Pillar of the Fire Dragon): By slamming the top end of the Wakizashi on the floor a path of fire travels through the ground and erupts upwards beneath the opponent in a fiery explosion of power, the user may control the trail of fire for 1 post and must have the Wakizash’s top end in direct contact with the ground while doing so. 3 post cool down. 1 Post cool down between this technique and Hiryū no shippo.

Shikai Attack 2: Hiryū no shippo - 氷 龍 の 尻 尾 (Tail of the Ice Dragon): By swinging the Katana a thick wave of sharp ice is sent towards the opponent, the attack resembles the tail of a dragon and has the potential to partially freeze opponents hindering their mobility for 1 post. 2 Post cool down. 1 Post cool down between this technique and Ryu no hi no hashira.

Shikai Attack 3: Hakai no Ibuki - 破 壊 の 息 吹 (Breath of Destruction): By pointing both blades at the desired target the user fires 2 blasts, 1 of fire and 1 of ice. Both beams snaking over each other until fusing, the impact generates a wave of concussive energy due to the chemical reaction of sub zero temperatures with extremely high ones colliding with a flat surface, the wave has enough power to cause cuts or concussive injuries equal to the power of a hand grenade. 5 Post cool down.


─Zanpakuto Information {Bankai}─

Bankai Name:

Bankai Incantation: Sora o Tōketsu Shi, Chikyū o Moyasu kara kaminari de utsu – 空 を 凍 結 し 、 地 球 を 燃 や す か ら 雷 で 打 つ(Freeze the Heavens and Burn the Earth with lightning from the underworld)

Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance {While Bankai is Active}: He turns black and grey, the yellow accent on his face still visible yet paler, the fire that once surrounded parts of its body is now extinguished, he now also has visible devil wings, these wings grow when it is poised to fly. This is form was created by the darkness in Saisei’s soul, the bitterness from loosing his family and his short comings in life, this form is a twisted being of evil. Bankai Spirit

Bankai Appearance: In his bankai Saisei’s Kosode is either discarded or blown off by the increase in reiatsu and a black electrical current which circles his whole body, the electricity has no effect other than to accentuate the fact of the large power contained within. There is fire swirling around the arm holding the flame blade and ice circling the arm with the ice blade both have changed form into wyvern blades, still the fire blade is a Wakizashi and the ice blade a Katana. Fire Wyvern Wakizashi, Ice Wyvern Katana


Bankai Attacks/Abilities: While in his bankai he holds power over fire and ice. His elements of fire and ice. His body is circled by a constant electrical current which is symbolic of the the dark energy within him. His bankai is perceived as an ‘Evil’ or ‘Corrupted’ form of his zanpakuto which came from the darkest recesses of Saisei’s soul and as such holds great power, Central 46 ordered him executed for the shift in his power, his dark desires and wishes actually changed the Bankai of the blade and his own demeanor. While in Bankai Saisei’s demeanor is of a cold and ruthless killer, a vengeful and bitter man who will stop at nothing to destroy all his enemies utterly and completely while inflicting as much pain as physically possible.

Bankai Attack 1: Taiyō to tsuki Parusu - 邪 悪 太 陽 と 月(Pulse of the Moon and Sun): The user gathers heat, frigid air and reaitsu and lets out a violent pulse of of fire, ice and reiatsu the ice takes the form of small spears that can pierce through rock and the fire takes to form of small compact and condensed fire ball with enough heat to melt through metal. The reiatsu output carries the fireballs and icicles at great speeds. The blast can also knock-back solid projectile techniques such as knives and things of that nature as well as low strength energy based attacks of Bala level. This technique has 3 post cool down.

Bankai Attack 2: Kokuryū Hi to kōri - 黒 竜 火 と 氷(Black Dragon of Fire and Ice): By pointing the blade to the opponent the user can send forth a dragon of fire and a dragon of ice, the dragons seek out the target for 1 post and are intertwined in a weaving motion as they move forward. These dragons explode on contact with any foreign surface or reiatsu based attack or structure with power equal to that of an Espada’s Cero. The dragons are charged with electrical energy giving them an outline of black lightning as they make their way to the opponent the lightning has no effect on the attack other than the visual effect of it. 5 Post cool down.

Bankai Attack 3:Akuma Hanketsu - 悪 魔 判 決 (Demon’s Judgement): This move is Saisei’s most devastating technique, reserved for those select few that Saisei has vowed to kill in the cruelest of ways. Saisei focuses all of his remaining reiatsu and power into one strike, 1 strike of incredible strength. By holding his black blade pointed at the sky several bolts of black lightning fall upon it super-heating it and making it glow hot red with black electricity arching across the entirety of the blade, while this is happening he focuses his ice blades power and creates an ice dragon as a distraction that goes towards the target, then by using shunpo Saisei will attempt to strike the foe down, if this connects the electrical current will severely damage the opponent and will make it very difficult to move due to the massive overload to the electrical system, or it could flat out kill them via mass electrocution, the process would blow the innards of the opponent due to the amount of electricity within the body and would die of massive and systematic body failure. After using this technique the user reverts back to his sealed state and can not use shikai or bankai for 1 full day.


─Kidō Information─


Bakudō Level: 1 - 81 With Average Skill

Hadō Level: 1 - 92 With Average Skill.

Yusō Chūdō Level: N/A

Chiyu Chūdō Level: N/A

Shien Hōhō Level: N/A

Hybrid Techniques: N/A

Forbidden Kidō: N/A


─Physical Information─


Hohō Level: Below Average

Hakuda Level: Master

Zanjutsu Level:High


─Relatives─

Mother: N/A
Father: N/A
Siblings: N/A
Aunts: N/A
Uncles: N/A
Grandparents:N/A

─Relationships─

Love Interest:N/A
Friends:
Enemies:
Other Relations:


─Professional Status─

Affiliation: His Own
Previous Affiliation: Gotei 13
Occupation: Vagabond
Previous Occupation: Squad 13 Captain
Team: OPEN
Partner: OPEN


─Skills Information─

Intelligence: Average

Athletic Skill: High

Strength: Monster

Speed:Low

Agility: Below Average

Stamina:Monster.

Durability:High

Endurance: High

Flexibility: Close to None

Any Special Skills:
(Unusual skills your character may have that make them unique from others, well more unique)


─Other Information─

Character Theme:
Other:
(Anything that wasn't covered in the Skeleton that you'd like to include.)

PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 1:11 pm


POST STYLE:

Sasori00923

User ImageUser Image
s α i s ε i к ʋ s α и α g i
▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥


To never again allow someone precious,


actionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactions
actionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactions
actionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactions
actionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactions
actionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactions
actionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactionsactions.


"wordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswords
wordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswords
wordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswords
wordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswords
wordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswords
wordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswords
wordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswords
wordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswords
wordswordswords "


to be killed by monsters, that is my promise...


▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥▥
Tɧε Ӎ α s s ∂ ε s t r o y ε r
Vagabond Artist


Sasori00923

Ruthless Lunatic

6,850 Points
  • Partygoer 500
  • Risky Lifestyle 100
  • Brandisher 100

Sasori00923

Ruthless Lunatic

6,850 Points
  • Partygoer 500
  • Risky Lifestyle 100
  • Brandisher 100
PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 1:14 pm


YummyBiscuits

Now before I get told that he is on the upper end of the power spectrum and that I have too many accomplished characters, he is not meant for use as of right now. he is just a concept imported and modified from another guild in an attempt to enteratin myself. I formally ask the permision of Yummy Biscuits to have my character and his character Dorobo Hason have an existing social relation, if not then i will modify the information to better accomodate him. To anyone who judges the character be blunt and to the point.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 4:00 pm


x Please remember the rule I tend to go by. I've held other profiles to this standard, within this guild.
If you have more than one element, the power of both elements will be lower than that if someone has a single element. For a simple example, Dorobo's fire skills will be exponentially more powerful than Saisei's. That is because Dorobo trains only with his fire abilities, while Saisei trains with his fire and ice; Naturally giving Dorobo an edge in that field.
I also want to make a point. In canon there is NO SUCH THING as a Dual element zanpakuto. NO SUCH THING. That's why it's rare for me to ever like a dual type. I hate them with a passion. If you change this to a single element, I'll love you.

x Hakai no Ibuki - I gotta say, this attack is not only cliche, but it is also somewhat overpowered. Based on the rough power of a shikai, and that of the weakened state of both elements, a ' Harsh ' explosion seems to much. At most, I'd say you should remove the explosion bit, and maybe have it create a large wave of concussive energy. Na' mean? I'd leave this up to you, but go with either weakening the attack, or deleting the explosion bit.

x Bankai, Bankai, bankai. Cliche as ********. CLICHE AS ********. HATE HATE HATE. WINGS.
I'd rather go along the lines of something much more unique. Like a tail made of awesome, or possibly even having no weapon, and instead summoning a creature of sorts.

x Adding another element seems over the top. It would weaken the control over all three elements as a whole, and I REALLY don't like that. Each attack, taking that in, wouldn't be much more than a bother to most of the people in this guild.

x Taiyo no Tsuki Parusu - Block back projectiles is a very vauge term. I could assume you could throw back a Gran Rey Cero from an Espada classed individual with this attack, and I won't have that. Be specific here.

x Kokuryu Hi to Kori - Lightning does not make something faster. If anything, the lightning would be faster than the rest of the attack, and land much faster than the rest of the attack. If you get rid of the lightning like I REALLY WANT YOU TOO, this isn't an issue.

x Akuma Hanketsu - Firstly, I hate final attacks. You never see a final attack in canon, and people mostly make this an excuse to have a crazy powerful attack. It's something of a Godmode, and I remember there being one person ( HYMN YOU KNOW WHO ) that would keep going after shooting out their final attack.

x Physical and Skills information - You have WAY to many masteries/high levels of skill. When you dedicate your life to something, that is how you attain mastery. Sometimes, you can have multiple masteries, because they funnel into each other. However, this is crap.

Having great speed, great hakuda, and being a swordsmanship master is bullshit. Those are three different places of study, and likewise, you've already got the dual element training on top of this. At most, I'll allow ONE mastery in this group. As for the Skills area, your character is obviously a straight brawler of sorts. Having great speed is rare in brawlers; you tend to give up speed just to stand up to huge amounts of damage. I can't allow you to be quick/agile, extremely strong, and durable as a ******** all in one package. You need to Lower a majority of these to about average level, and decide exactly how you are going to work this guy in combat.

x Just for the sake of knowing, explain EXACTLY how your zanpakuto is corrupted/ ' not normal. ' As far as I can tell, it's the black lightning. I can't tell though, because you are very vague here.

x Also, I'd be happy to have you be a rouge with Ameratsu and Dorobo. We left the Gotei for different reasons ( I surmise from conversations with tanqela that the law system became corrupt, and both of their divisions, being connected through science and all that, suffered as a result. They refused to work under a corrupt legal system, and left on semi-good terms. ) I won't offer you a room though. Find your own damn place.

YummyBiscuits
Crew

Powerhouse

11,375 Points
  • Marathon 300
  • Brandisher 100
  • Partygoer 500

Sasori00923

Ruthless Lunatic

6,850 Points
  • Partygoer 500
  • Risky Lifestyle 100
  • Brandisher 100
PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 6:45 pm


YummyBiscuits
x Please remember the rule I tend to go by. I've held other profiles to this standard, within this guild.
If you have more than one element, the power of both elements will be lower than that if someone has a single element. For a simple example, Dorobo's fire skills will be exponentially more powerful than Saisei's. That is because Dorobo trains only with his fire abilities, while Saisei trains with his fire and ice; Naturally giving Dorobo an edge in that field.
I also want to make a point. In canon there is NO SUCH THING as a Dual element zanpakuto. NO SUCH THING. That's why it's rare for me to ever like a dual type. I hate them with a passion. If you change this to a single element, I'll love you.

x Hakai no Ibuki - I gotta say, this attack is not only cliche, but it is also somewhat overpowered. Based on the rough power of a shikai, and that of the weakened state of both elements, a ' Harsh ' explosion seems to much. At most, I'd say you should remove the explosion bit, and maybe have it create a large wave of concussive energy. Na' mean? I'd leave this up to you, but go with either weakening the attack, or deleting the explosion bit.

x Bankai, Bankai, bankai. Cliche as ********. CLICHE AS ********. HATE HATE HATE. WINGS.
I'd rather go along the lines of something much more unique. Like a tail made of awesome, or possibly even having no weapon, and instead summoning a creature of sorts.

x Adding another element seems over the top. It would weaken the control over all three elements as a whole, and I REALLY don't like that. Each attack, taking that in, wouldn't be much more than a bother to most of the people in this guild.

x Taiyo no Tsuki Parusu - Block back projectiles is a very vauge term. I could assume you could throw back a Gran Rey Cero from an Espada classed individual with this attack, and I won't have that. Be specific here.

x Kokuryu Hi to Kori - Lightning does not make something faster. If anything, the lightning would be faster than the rest of the attack, and land much faster than the rest of the attack. If you get rid of the lightning like I REALLY WANT YOU TOO, this isn't an issue.

x Akuma Hanketsu - Firstly, I hate final attacks. You never see a final attack in canon, and people mostly make this an excuse to have a crazy powerful attack. It's something of a Godmode, and I remember there being one person ( HYMN YOU KNOW WHO ) that would keep going after shooting out their final attack.

x Physical and Skills information - You have WAY to many masteries/high levels of skill. When you dedicate your life to something, that is how you attain mastery. Sometimes, you can have multiple masteries, because they funnel into each other. However, this is crap.

Having great speed, great hakuda, and being a swordsmanship master is bullshit. Those are three different places of study, and likewise, you've already got the dual element training on top of this. At most, I'll allow ONE mastery in this group. As for the Skills area, your character is obviously a straight brawler of sorts. Having great speed is rare in brawlers; you tend to give up speed just to stand up to huge amounts of damage. I can't allow you to be quick/agile, extremely strong, and durable as a ******** all in one package. You need to Lower a majority of these to about average level, and decide exactly how you are going to work this guy in combat.

x Just for the sake of knowing, explain EXACTLY how your zanpakuto is corrupted/ ' not normal. ' As far as I can tell, it's the black lightning. I can't tell though, because you are very vague here.

x Also, I'd be happy to have you be a rouge with Ameratsu and Dorobo. We left the Gotei for different reasons ( I surmise from conversations with tanqela that the law system became corrupt, and both of their divisions, being connected through science and all that, suffered as a result. They refused to work under a corrupt legal system, and left on semi-good terms. ) I won't offer you a room though. Find your own damn place.


I'll get on appropriately powering down the moves and abilities; I meant for him to be an average image in terms of sheer speed just having high reflexes, the way I see it it doesn't take the same amount of speed to run than to dodge a ball. If I'm not making sense I'll understand and edit that part to a much lower base, The bankai is in need of work; I agree with the wings being a cliche I just couldn't come up with anything else at the moment of his conception so I just went with that.

The explosion bit on Hakai no Ibuki will be revised, I went more along the lines of the actual reaction that both elements would have to each other when combined which is why all of his moves are meant to be used separately, and with usage gaps between each other except for the obvious 2 techniques that actually use both at the same time.

The lightning element will be revised, most likely removed. The whole corruption of the bankai thing goes like this: Central 46 has records of the known zanpakuto spirits and keeps close watch as to what soul reaper ends with what spirit and so forth, as exemplified in the movie when Toshiro Hitsugaya and the other dude whose name escapes me at this point get the same zanpakuto. They are made to fight to the death; In Saisei's case his bankai was supposed to be just an augmentation of the fire and ice elements he already possessed but thanks to his darkest desires and emotions it became corrupted thus granting the lightning element. Seen in it and causing the drastic change in his zanpakuto spirit which prompted Central 46 to have him executed because of it.

I never meant the actual element to make it onto the sword except for the attack Taiyo to tsuki Parusu but then I found myself putting a bit of it into all of them. I will remove the element from having an actual effect on his attacks but would like to keep it around for visual instance, mainly cause it'd look cool as hell and because it's the only thing that would qualify his zanpakuto for the whole corruption concept which is why he defected.

On the mastery; I'll tune him down, I meant for him to be well rounded for his back story, his motivation to one day be the Head Captain. I worded a lot of things wrong but here is the run down of what I want of him:

Below Average skill in Hoho type skills, Average Kido and Bakudo. Master Zanjutsu, Master or acceptable level beneath mastery for Hakuda.

Average Intelligence with momentary bouts of brilliance like we all have at some points. High Athletic skill due to training, Power house strength for being the only attribute he possessed on his own gaining an increase thanks to his training. Average speed for a man of his previous rank which would mean captain, probably less than the norm taking into consideration the fact that he is a brute when it comes to strength. If by Agility we refer to the speed of his reactions rather than his physical speed then I intended him to be somewhat agile but I see what you mean when it comes to his attributes so ill have him be the usual brute and power him down appropriately.

And I'm not planing on living in Dorobo's place, I intend to have him be a frequent goer and most of the time just a tolerated presence, A highly comical nut job with no sense of responsibility and certaintly no sense of knowing when he's not wanted (Much to the Married Coouple's Annoyance) so he is basically someone to annoy Dorobo and Amaterasu while proving to be somewhat useful to have around in some obscure and nutty instances; he is a vagabond artist after all.


So as I have it in my Head it would look like this:

No lightning element, just a visual reference not an actual effect.
Master Hakuda
High Zanjutsu?
Average Kido,Bakudo
Below Average Hoho
Average Inteligence
Below Average Speed and Agility
Monster Strength, Stamina
High Endurance, Athletic Skill
Close to no flexibility whatsoever
PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 6:54 pm


Sasori00923


Right on target. Tell me when you've got it down pat.

YummyBiscuits
Crew

Powerhouse

11,375 Points
  • Marathon 300
  • Brandisher 100
  • Partygoer 500

Sasori00923

Ruthless Lunatic

6,850 Points
  • Partygoer 500
  • Risky Lifestyle 100
  • Brandisher 100
PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:15 pm


YummyBiscuits
Sasori00923


Right on target. Tell me when you've got it down pat.


k made an initial edit look it over to see if something else needs a change
Reply
Approval

 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum