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[AP] Yejide - the Bone Collector

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kaname423
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 19, 2012 9:31 am



Name: Yejide (Yeh-jee-day)
Race: TBD
Gender: female
Base Traits: Solitary, Inflexible, Mature Self Sufficient
Class: Swordsman > Knight > Assassin
Personality: Yejide has never taken well to companionship in any form, whether it be family, friends or significant others. Her attitude toward life is one where she is better off alone, if only for the reason that others can't be relied on. She keeps to herself in all aspects and is slightly confrontational when dealing with others. She's brash and stubborn to a fault. She knows what she wants and can't be changed either way. Her always-right attitude creates this overwhelming need to be sarcastic when others question her. And this inflexibility only encourages her thoughts that others' affection is a useless concept. She's happy being alone, though there are those occasional flickers of doubt.
This self-cast solitude also means that Yejide has matured abnormally fast. She likes to do things herself and can't think of others helping her, creating wisdom about things that others her age haven't achieved yet. This maturity conflicts with her stubborn streak. When her ways are quesitoned too vigorously, she wants to create physical pain in the other person she's talking to, her version of a tantrum and something that she's not proud of.
Description: TBD
Clothing: TBD
Accessories: TBD
History: Yejide grew up with her mother. Her father had left them early on when Yejide was barely old enough to talk. This created tension between Yejide and her mother as Yejide grew older and her mother avoided the subject. As she grew tired of asking her mother, she grew tired of talking to anyone. In her opinion, nobody was worth her time anymore. She would rather be alone. Eventually Yejide stopped talking to her mother altogether and with the first chance she could, she moved out on her own. This brought incredible sadness to her mother, but Yejide had already cut her losses and moved on.
She hasn't talked to her mother since and roams Tendaji doing odds and ends jobs to feed herself when necessary and hunting for herself whenever she can just to avoid talking to others. She doesn't have a permanent place to stay, but rather settles down outside wherever she is at the time.
Her perpetual hunting has given her a nickname of Bone Collector among those who have met her. She cleans and bleaches bones from her meals and uses them to create things as well as keep count of her kills.
PostPosted: Mon Feb 18, 2013 4:36 pm


So I'm gonna make a crit for you, ok?
I've been doing an interesting review strategy that can seem a little piecemeal


This name is awesome. Just to start. Awesome name.

Seems to me that her race is going to be really important here. I'm a big fan of visualization, and as I read her she felt like an alkidike, to me. Don't mind my musing, but she really feels like an alkidike/leaf.
Or Leaf wind.
I just like the leaf tribe okay? XD

Personality:
I don't want to poke at her personality too much- you know how I feel about overdeveloping a character, but there are a few things I am wondering about.

How did her need for solitude help her mature 'abnormally fast?'
It doesn't sound like shes very mature in the typical sense of the word...
Especially at “When her ways are quesitoned too vigorously, she wants to create physical pain in the other person she's talking to, her version of a tantrum and something that she's not proud of. “

Brash and stubborn is an archetype I can get behind. Sarcasm, too.
But I'm a bit puzzled by “only encourages her thoughts that others' affection is a useless concept”
How does it do that?

And I'm also puzzled by “occasional flickers of doubt.”
Do you mean that she sometimes wonders if being alone is so good after all? If she might not like a companion?


I'm not seeing how self sufficient, anti social, and wise fit together properly. Why does she feel that other people are unreliable? Is it because of her father? Her mother? Her friends?



Okay maybe more than a few things.


History: So she's basically a wanderer from a dysfunctional family who wants to be a killer and collects bones from her kills.


Tell me more about her mom?

Otherwise, I have little more to say.


In general, Yejilde is a skeleton character but I wanna play with her eventually...

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kaname423
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 8:49 pm


Thanks for the questions :] and I'm glad you like the name. Me too emotion_awesome

I don't think she'll be Alkidike and I want her to be pure something but leaf is an interesting idea. I was toying with ice for a while but I'm not totally committed yet. Yejide is still on the back burner for now lol

I guess mature isn't exactly the right word; I think self sufficient or independent would be better descriptors. Since she's constantly alone she's learned to take care of herself and since she travels she's seen more of the world than most including the cruelties that can be; so worldly could also work but isn't exactly what I want to get across either.

Her stubbornness sets her in the mind frame that she's always right, and if she's always right, why would she need others opinions when it'll just make her mad that they're obviously wrong. The apparent stupidity of others just creates another reason why she doesn't want to get to know anyone else and pushes away a need for companionship.

Her base needs as an earthling (since earthlings are social creatures by nature as she's well aware) can push her to sometimes doubt her choices to be alone. While she enjoys it most if the time, there are nights when she wonders if she would be happier sitting under the stars with someone beside her. During these times she also questions how different her life would have been if her father hadn't walked out on them.

Her father walking out at such a young age left her changed for the worst. Her memories of him are almost non existent but what she does remember is her mother's reaction. Her mother secluded herself from Yejide for years after her father left and by the time that wore off and she tried to reconnect emotionally with her daughter, Yejide had already grown bitter with her father that she never knew as well as her mother who emotionally abandoned her when she needed her most. Even though her mother eventually began to talk to Yejide again, she refused to answer any questions about her father or even acknowledge his existence.

And Yejide's not a killer really, just an adept hunter. Her bones are from animals and to her are a sign of her skill and pride.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 8:58 pm


I would write more but typing via tablet is tiring lol

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