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 Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2012 9:13 pm
 ♦Victoria Constantine ♦  Main Name: Victoria Constantine Nick Names: Cat. DO NOT CALL ME VICKY OR I SHALL STAB YOU WITH A SPOON *hisses* Alias: N/A Alliance: Revenant Race: Lycan: Were Tiger ❧Physical Characteristics Age: 23 Hair: Black Eyes: Blue Skin Tone: Pale-cream Ethnicity: American Scars, Birthmarks, Tattoos: A pair of angel wings tattooed on her back. Height: 5’3” Weight: 122 lbs Marital Status: Single Physical Structure: Thin but lean. Orientation: Straight ❧Personal Info ❖Transcripts: Alignment: Neutral Criminal Record: Tried to steal a chinchilla out of a pet store. Level of Education: High School Graduate If Collegian: N/A Current Occupation: Freelance artist, hoarding stray cats. Past Occupations: Part time help at a pet store. Family: My loving mother and father who have graciously raised me and which I no longer live with. Lovers, Friends, and Others: Friends: Imaginary people she made up when she was a kid, a strange hobo she met on the street once, the grocery store bakery clerk, the pet store owner, Ferdinand. ❖Personal: Personality: A quirky introvert, unless you’re a good friend, because then you must also contend with my bouts of randomness. People Skills: Mild case of sociaphobia. Goals: To be a zoologist and own my very own African Grey Parrot… *daydreams*Fears: - Large groups of strangers - Vacuum cleaners (zuigerphobia is real thank you)- Chihuahuas (weird little rat dogs)- Spider webs Favorites: Color: Purple Food: Kiwis Animal: Bearcats (they smell like popcorn, end of story)Instrument: Piano Role Model: Richard Parker (“Life fo Pi” fans anyone…?)Catch Phrase/Motto: “There’s no such thing as too many cats sir/ma’am.”❧Skills, Abilities, and Powers Skills: - Drawing - Animal knowledge - Simple hand-to-hand combat Abilities: Unfortunately none… Powers: Shapeshifting, partial shifting, slow aging, enhanced speed/durability compared to normal humans. Weaknesses: Holy Water and Artifacts, Silver, Vampyre Venom, adorable animals. Technology/Weapons/Paraphernalia: Laptop, Bamboo Create tablet, Xbox 360, pocket knife. History Victoria was born into a simple family with no huge problems growing up. Besides the fact that she couldn’t control her transformations very well; it happened spontaneously when she became angry. She was home-schooled for a few years until she could control it well enough to enter a half-way normal middle school and then continued on to graduate high school in the top 20 of her class. Victoria had taken as many art classes as her schedule allowed and practiced drawing in all her free time. Becoming a free-lance artist she has made enough to sustain a living on her own. Albeit skipping a few meals here and there. Her parents moved away for what they called “work related reasons” which most likely meant some kind of Lycan dealings. Victoria hasn’t spoken to her parents in quite some time due to her belief in the Revenant. She's unsure if the group knows she even exists, but she overheard her parents speak of it once and she wanted to consider herself part of them. Hoping one day she might actually be able to talk face-to-face with another member, but it seems taboo around her fellow Lycan family. She finds no reason to fight others; maybe because she honestly just wants a peaceful life, or maybe because she’s lazy. Her antisocial nature leads to her not having many run-ins with vampyres, lycans, and the sorts. Her home is filled with stray cats that she hoards as her companions. Not being around a lot of people, she has decided to own pets for talking to. They don't talk back, well, not always anyway. You can’t have too many cats. Never. Her strange obsession with the fluffy little creatures known as "chinchillas" stems from her working at the pet store and befriending a chinchilla named Ferdinand. Victoria swears she can talk to chinchillas (might be paranoia) so she tried to help Ferdinand escape his caged existence, which the police called "theft". Silly police. Theme Song:"Against the Tide" by Celldweller -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------*whew* That's the longest character profile I have ever made! I'm quite proud. Serious characters with a bit of humor are the best. Alright, I'm ready for the inevitable backlash of everything that's wrong. I've seen it on everyone elses profile and honestly, I'm scared. xD I'm not great at writing biographies. I wanted to keep it simple because I dislike "My whole family died! I am out for revenge!" cliche bios. Sorry, not my forte. Constructive criticism is welcome. c:
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2012 9:43 pm
... I wanna live with this character! XD
All right, review time, and don't worry... I'm not gonna turn into a Profile Nazi or anything like that (though I have come close on several occasions).
A. She has a spoon? I have a sledgehammer... and a spork... and cookies! XD *ahem* Okay, for real this time... there's not much I can find wrong in the profile, though I can list a pointer for the Lovers, Friends, etc. section. Even if you or your character doesn't know anyone in the guild, it doesn't hurt to make up a few people; pretty much everyone does it. Go nuts.
B. Shapeshifting would be a Power. An Ability is something your character can do naturally- Gymnastics, cooking, that kind of stuff.
C. Hmm... you may need a bit of an explanation as to how your character came across the Revenant since they're a secret organization. I would personally recommend to go into a bit more detail with her history; for example, the reason for her cat (and chinchilla) obsession.
Other than that, unless one or more of the other Crew members finds a few more things, I've got no objections other than the ones I've mentioned.
On a side note, the more you practice, the better you'll become at writing a character's biography. Trust me, I've been through it myself... and I've been out of the "my family was killed, now I want revenge" cliche for a while... *looks around a bit* Yep.
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Leonidas Pelagios Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2012 9:49 pm
Leonidas Peridot ... I wanna live with this character! XD
All right, review time, and don't worry... I'm not gonna turn into a Profile Nazi or anything like that (though I have come close on several occasions).
A. She has a spoon? I have a sledgehammer... and a spork... and cookies! XD *ahem* Okay, for real this time... there's not much I can find wrong in the profile, though I can list a pointer for the Lovers, Friends, etc. section. Even if you or your character doesn't know anyone in the guild, it doesn't hurt to make up a few people; pretty much everyone does it. Go nuts.
B. Shapeshifting would be a Power. An Ability is something your character can do naturally- Gymnastics, cooking, that kind of stuff.
C. Hmm... you may need a bit of an explanation as to how your character came across the Revenant since they're a secret organization. I would personally recommend to go into a bit more detail with her history; for example, the reason for her cat (and chinchilla) obsession.
Other than that, unless one or more of the other Crew members finds a few more things, I've got no objections other than the ones I've mentioned.
On a side note, the more you practice, the better you'll become at writing a character's biography. Trust me, I've been through it myself... and I've been out of the "my family was killed, now I want revenge" cliche for a while... *looks around a bit* Yep. Alrighty, I wasn't sure which section shapeshifting would go under. Thanks. xD I can make up people!? Yay, I will have friends! Until I make ones here anyway. lolz Oops, ha, I will add more to the Revenant part. ALL OF THE CHINCHILLAS. *ahem* Yes. xD I shall fix some things then. Thank you. c:
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2012 9:59 pm
No problem, glad I could help! ^^
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Leonidas Pelagios Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2012 4:48 am
Kamki-Chan Leonidas Peridot ... I wanna live with this character! XD
All right, review time, and don't worry... I'm not gonna turn into a Profile Nazi or anything like that (though I have come close on several occasions).
A. She has a spoon? I have a sledgehammer... and a spork... and cookies! XD *ahem* Okay, for real this time... there's not much I can find wrong in the profile, though I can list a pointer for the Lovers, Friends, etc. section. Even if you or your character doesn't know anyone in the guild, it doesn't hurt to make up a few people; pretty much everyone does it. Go nuts.
B. Shapeshifting would be a Power. An Ability is something your character can do naturally- Gymnastics, cooking, that kind of stuff.
C. Hmm... you may need a bit of an explanation as to how your character came across the Revenant since they're a secret organization. I would personally recommend to go into a bit more detail with her history; for example, the reason for her cat (and chinchilla) obsession.
Other than that, unless one or more of the other Crew members finds a few more things, I've got no objections other than the ones I've mentioned.
On a side note, the more you practice, the better you'll become at writing a character's biography. Trust me, I've been through it myself... and I've been out of the "my family was killed, now I want revenge" cliche for a while... *looks around a bit* Yep. Alrighty, I wasn't sure which section shapeshifting would go under. Thanks. xD I can make up people!? Yay, I will have friends! Until I make ones here anyway. lolz Oops, ha, I will add more to the Revenant part. ALL OF THE CHINCHILLAS. *ahem* Yes. xD I shall fix some things then. Thank you. c: Heya ^^ I've really got nothing to correct here. Leo is pretty much an Ace with profiles. But I was wondering if you would like to add more of the Were-Tiger powers to her?
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2012 9:08 am
Textbook Dreamer Kamki-Chan Leonidas Peridot ... I wanna live with this character! XD
All right, review time, and don't worry... I'm not gonna turn into a Profile Nazi or anything like that (though I have come close on several occasions).
A. She has a spoon? I have a sledgehammer... and a spork... and cookies! XD *ahem* Okay, for real this time... there's not much I can find wrong in the profile, though I can list a pointer for the Lovers, Friends, etc. section. Even if you or your character doesn't know anyone in the guild, it doesn't hurt to make up a few people; pretty much everyone does it. Go nuts.
B. Shapeshifting would be a Power. An Ability is something your character can do naturally- Gymnastics, cooking, that kind of stuff.
C. Hmm... you may need a bit of an explanation as to how your character came across the Revenant since they're a secret organization. I would personally recommend to go into a bit more detail with her history; for example, the reason for her cat (and chinchilla) obsession.
Other than that, unless one or more of the other Crew members finds a few more things, I've got no objections other than the ones I've mentioned.
On a side note, the more you practice, the better you'll become at writing a character's biography. Trust me, I've been through it myself... and I've been out of the "my family was killed, now I want revenge" cliche for a while... *looks around a bit* Yep. Alrighty, I wasn't sure which section shapeshifting would go under. Thanks. xD I can make up people!? Yay, I will have friends! Until I make ones here anyway. lolz Oops, ha, I will add more to the Revenant part. ALL OF THE CHINCHILLAS. *ahem* Yes. xD I shall fix some things then. Thank you. c: Heya ^^ I've really got nothing to correct here. Leo is pretty much an Ace with profiles. But I was wondering if you would like to add more of the Were-Tiger powers to her? You mean like the enhanced speed/durability, partial transformation, and slow aging?
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Leonidas Pelagios Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 2:39 pm
Kamki-Chan You mean like the enhanced speed/durability, partial transformation, and slow aging? Yep, those kinds of powers. ^^
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2012 10:11 am
Leonidas Peridot Kamki-Chan You mean like the enhanced speed/durability, partial transformation, and slow aging? Yep, those kinds of powers. ^^ Alrighty, I shall add them. c:
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Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2012 4:05 pm
So is she accepted? I would like to join in on the Winter Bash. c:
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Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2012 4:20 pm
Yep, she's accepted! ^^ ...I would like to remind the cats of the guild to run and hide before she steals you. Run! XD
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Leonidas Pelagios Vice Captain
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