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PostPosted: Sat Nov 24, 2012 11:12 pm


Viviana Morozovinskaya ♦
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Name: Viviana Morozovinskaya
Nick Names: Vivi.
Alias: Vanya Ivanova
Alliance: Sadly, The Fallen
Race: Bear Demon

❧Physical Characteristics
Age: Physically about 21
Hair: Green
Eyes: Silver
Skin Tone: Fair/Pale
Ethnicity: Eastern European
Scars, Birthmarks, Tattoos: Across her shoulders, in Latin, are the words Bestia Sin or 'Beast of Sin' which are burned into her skin.
Height: Five Feet Eleven Inches
Weight: Somewhere around one-twenty
Marital Status: Single
Physical Structure: Curvy and slightly lanky
Orientation: Pansexual

❧Personal Info
❖Transcripts:
Alignment: Peaceful Neutral
Criminal Record: She got caught smoking weed back in the sixties, other than that she doesn't want to talk about it.
Level of Education:
Collegial
If Collegial: Doctorates in both Mythology and Medical Science
Current Occupation: Owner of a Book Shop
Past Occupations: Far to many to count on just fingers and toes
Family: Deceased
Lovers, Friends, and Others: None as of yet

❖Personal:
Personality: Kind and motherly. Though she has a tendency to snap and quite literally become a wild animal if cornered or provoked.
People Skills: She's really good with people and those around her tend to gravitate to her subconsciously.
Goals: To just basically survive.
Fears: Being condemned to death for something she had no part of.
Favorites: Chocolate, for starters. Oh and Sunflowers, they're pretty too. She likes,most things actually. Just not lemons, she hates those.
Role Model: No one really...
Catch Phrase/Motto: "Perfection is purely Imaginary, so just be Yourself."

❧Skills,Abilities, and Powers
Skills:
Quick thinking
Hacking
Singing
The ability to control her strength
Omnilingualism
Abilities:
Inhuman Strength and The Nose of a Bloodhound
Powers:
Shape-shifting into a Demon Bear, Project her thoughts, and Mind Blast, which can take away one of the senses the enemy is weak at using for a short period time.
Weaknesses:
Having her past read aloud and being forced to have to change her form. Both will break down her mental bock and she'll lose her mind and go on a rampage or pass out because of the stress. Oh and the basic, holy water hurts, silver is a no, and blessed salt.
Technology/Weapons/Pharpenilia: She carries a revolver, just in case of emergencies. Viviana wears a cross set with an emerald, it hurts a little now that she's worn it for so long but it's a constant reminder of what she's done.



History
xxxViviana's past isn't a short one so I suggest you take a seat. She was born some thousand years ago to a small group of demons like herself. They had chosen to live on Earth to be away from the chaos of hell and raise their children in peace. The had been granted the ability to do this but as we all know, demons lie.
xxxThen when she reached the physical age of four the ones from hell came and tore her happy home apart, killing off all of the adults in front of the children and exposing the true nature of what the were. In reality most of the children believed themselves to be human so this made their whole world collapse in on itself. It hit Viviana especially hard.
xxxWhen they were back in hell they were 'reprogrammed' to be fighters, mindless warriors that they could control with easy. It worked on some while others destroyed themselves in the process. During this time Vivi was with a young girl named Miah. They were friends on Earth and the were friends here was well. The two would defend each other against the older demons but eventually, Viviana turned on Miah and destroyed her mind from the inside out. When it was over she panicked as she came back to reality, she wouldn't let go of her friends body for three days and when they finally pried it away from her she had crushed all of the bones in the corpse. The elders laughed at her, called her a monster, and mentally ruined her. They forced her to wear her friend's necklace, a green stone on a piece of leather cord, and she's worn it from that day on.
xxxBy the time she had escaped, no one cared about her. Everything she knew had come apart at the seams. So she started over and wandered across the land until she found a village of humans. By this time she appeared to ten years of age and landed herself right in the middle of what is now Italy in the 1200's. Everyone around her spoke a strange language she didn't understand and with what little coin she could make from begging it was hard for her to communicate with shopkeepers as she what she wanted. It was a month after her arrival that she was stuffed in a church where a priest called her a monster and forced holy water down her throat. It made her show her horns and that's when they branded her with 'Bestia Sin'. She fled from there as soon as she could see straight from the pain they caused her.
xxxFrom there she could only travel and learn what the world had to offer, never staying in on place for to long otherwise she'd be discovered. She's seen wars, empires rise and fall, nations come and vanish into thin air. Viviana has even done things that she regrets like aiding the infamous 'Jack the Ripper'. She hated the fact that women would do the things that they did when it seemed everything was against them. In reality that was no reason to kill them, all people are flawed. Though that one side of her never could take the way people carelessly destroyed themselves.
xxx Now she masquerades as a human, never letting herself get too attached to those around her because she knows at one point or another she'll have to leave.
Theme Song: Hirari Hirari sung by Miku Hatsune


((I think I killed my brain on the Latin. It took me an hour just to figure it out then I remembered I could have used Google translate...))
PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2012 7:56 am


*stretches* My, it's good to be back. There're quite a few issues here, and I can tell you right now most of 'em pertain to your lack of guild-universe understanding. To the list:

1. Undoubtedly the biggest issue here is your character's race. The Fallen, Grigori, are "born". They are angels, Seraph, which fall from grace and become twisted, dark creatures of great power. They're not "born". They're made.

2. "Bear Demon" is not an applicable race. The Grigori are not given aspects of animals, so from what I'm seeing you should just go with werebear and fix pretty much everything wrong here.

3. Okay, if this character is a "Fallen" why would she need an alias? That just doesn't make any sense... The Grigori are pretty open about the fact that they're massacring demons with little regard for decency.

4. Demons of any kind would not be considered Peaceful Neutral unless they had a damn good reason for it. If the Fallen had access to someone who could hulk-out and destroy things like this character, you can bet your a** they'd be massacring everything on a daily basis.

5. Demons don't live peaceful lives... It just doesn't happen. The only reason the likes of Sahara Grei have real lives, is because she's the Mother of Demons, and therefore more advanced.

6. This skills list is incredibly iffy. Where does hacking come from? How can that apply to anything with a Demon? "Ability to control her strength" is way more of a power, instead of a skill, and yet you put "Inhuman Strength" as an ability... Eesh...

7. A demon... who carries a revolver... *sigh*

8. For the biography, as I've said, demons aren't born. This character is basically primed to be the willing pawn of greater demons who would want her to tear mortals to shreds... If that's what you want...

9. Things are just not working here. All demons will either live in Hell, or in special Grigori-crafted realms which serve as their personal dimensions. In short, demons are not human. They don't act like humans.

Alright, I can wrap this up here. Try asking more questions about exactly what the races are before making a sheet completely based off your incorrect perception of what they are. Make edits. I recommend going for a werebear, if you're determined to have a bear-form for this character.

Malith of Praxius
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2012 9:52 am


Praxius the Mad


As for your concerns about the 'Bear Demon' I got the round about okay on it. Now then, no need to be so cold my dear, I don't speak English so I made do with what I have in order to understand everything. That's why there's an edit button.

She's a deserter, wants nothing to do with everyone who just wants to fight. Something in her just doesn't click with the who 'I'll kill you' think quite right. It's more of a defect then anything else, the same with the small group she was raised with. They were all defective and the demons in hell simply wanted them gone.

As for 'Fallen' I did it as a generalization until I could find a better translation for the sections on demons.

*See her defect*

It's a work in progress, nothing is ever set in stone... Unless that's all some one had to write on at the time. But that's another matter entirely.

Also, if I may, you speak as if I am simply a machine and not a human who is also flawed. So condescending and down right rude. Breaking it down I understand but not only do I get the feeling you are younger then myself this gives me the feeling I should have declined the invitation to this guild. I don't wish to start a fight but just be a bit more, human. And sorry if that's just my analysis of you from the way you write, for all I know you could be a very nice person.

Oh and it's Paraphernalia not Pharpenilia.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2012 10:19 am


Fatal Connections
Praxius the Mad


As for your concerns about the 'Bear Demon' I got the round about okay on it. Now then, no need to be so cold my dear, I don't speak English so I made do with what I have in order to understand everything. That's why there's an edit button.

She's a deserter, wants nothing to do with everyone who just wants to fight. Something in her just doesn't click with the who 'I'll kill you' think quite right. It's more of a defect then anything else, the same with the small group she was raised with. They were all defective and the demons in hell simply wanted them gone.

As for 'Fallen' I did it as a generalization until I could find a better translation for the sections on demons.

*See her defect*

It's a work in progress, nothing is ever set in stone... Unless that's all some one had to write on at the time. But that's another matter entirely.

Also, if I may, you speak as if I am simply a machine and not a human who is also flawed. So condescending and down right rude. Breaking it down I understand but not only do I get the feeling you are younger then myself this gives me the feeling I should have declined the invitation to this guild. I don't wish to start a fight but just be a bit more, human. And sorry if that's just my analysis of you from the way you write, for all I know you could be a very nice person.

Oh and it's Paraphernalia not Pharpenilia.


If I may step in, Fatal, Praxius has a sort of professional mannerism because he prefers to involve himself with skilled roleplayers; I'm not saying you're not one of those, because from your literacy level it seems quite the opposite and you look experienced. He is, and has admitted this freely, a bit of an a**. I'm the counterbalance to that and try to work with him on that.

Onto another matter, you failed to address that you were wrong on any points. This guild takes it's lore seriously, as the Captain and Crew, but the Captain especially, has worked very hard on it and, in our minds, this deserves to be respected by adhering to said lore. If the Crew says something is off, then it's off, no matter your explanations for why it's off. Another roleplayer, Shroud Sakai, has had problems with this. To put it simply, demons as a whole in this guild are not nice, they are not peaceful, especially towards humans (which is something Shroud had problems understanding as his characters were usually human-demon hybrids), and though there may be exceptions, they would be so incredibly rare that it is a moot point to bring up. Please, we ask that you follow the lore; if only out of respect for the fact that the Captain put a lot of effort into it. If you wish to make additions to it, I'm sure the Captain would be very happy to listen to your ideas and suggestions, but merely making things up because they suit you when they don't adhere to the guild lore is frowned upon. If you want to make a peaceful character, I would suggest a Fey; we're actually working on their particular history at the moment.

Also, whether or not Prax is younger than yourself is ultimately irrelevant, because he knows what he's doing; there's a reason he's in a Crew position. If you feel this isn't the guild for you, then by all means, leave-- No-one is stopping you. But I'd rather see someone like yourself actually stay in the guild and see what you can do.

Also, as for the "Paraphernalia" point... Blame the Captain on that, she made the skeleton; I've considered going in and editing it, but I've never gotten around to it. I should probably get on that...

Oncaro

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 26, 2012 7:58 pm


Fatal Connections


Ehm...first on the spelling XD I've noticed it but to be honest, never got around to editing either stressed Thanks for the reminder.

Now then, as for the Fallen bit.

1. Fallen are the Grigori, not demons.

2. Bear Demons: Ehm, again. IF she is not Grigori, she can be a demon who resembles a bear. I've yet to get the Lycan history up, it's in my notebook and the lap top isn't here. BUT Lycans were created by Belzeebub, who was a demon with animal traits. I would either select being a Were-Bear or simply a demon who takes a bear form as shape shifting magic.

3. Again, if not Grigori, can have Alias. In fact, Sahara is technically Grigori and has an Alias. Lilith had an Alias as well.

4. Peaceful neutral is fine too, considering the Fallen and Demon race are trying to stay out of the war with Sahara's prerogative.

5. Well, I would think she'd have some issues as far as living. Dark energy draws dark creatures.

6. Again, modern demons living in the human world could have hacking skills. So long as their bio and past fit that is.

7. I don't see why not...Really...

8.Now then: Can be born. I will be adding the demon history this weekend. Sorry but school's been swamped, but that WILL explain everything.

9. Ehm...If she has a good reason for living as a human, they can.
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