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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2012 5:30 pm


Name: Matthis Eichmann

Nickname: Matt

Age: 23

Birthday: August 13th

Sign: Leo

Gemstone: Peridot

Blood Type: O+

Fav. Food: Cheeseburgers, with lettuce, tomato, pickles, and onion rings on it.

Hated Food: Cauliflower. Especially when people try passing it off as mashed potatoes.

School: DCU

Hobbies: [Parkour] Introduced to him by his best friend Kaida, he took to it rather well, and joins her on her 'runs' when he can. He's been doing it for a couple of years less than her, and he enjoys it. To him, it's a good way to stay in shape, you don't need any fancy clothes or equipment to 'play', and it makes tag a hell of a lot more fun. He broke his left forearm once when he miscalculated a flip, but otherwise, he's not gotten more serious than scrapes and cuts in the course of learning.. The amount of time he does this a week tends to vary, as homework is killer, but it's a good way to get around!

[Anime] Matthis is a big fan of anime, especially anything sci-fi, cyperpunk, or giant robot-related. Two of his favorites are the Ghost in the Shell series and the Gundam franchise. He'll even sit through Kaida's favorite, Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha, because of the technological take on magic it has. But he'll pretty much avoid anything like Furuba or Cardcaptor Sakura. Waaaaaaaaaaay too saccharine for him! Kaida introduced him to anime around 3rd grade. He's never been so big a fan as to go to a con or cosplay if Kaida's not around (if she is, he'll happily run around as Duo Maxwell, as he takes little effort to cosplay for Matt), and he has gotten teased over it when he starts sketching out giant robot schematics or talking GitS or Gundam with Kaida...but for the most part, despite his love of the animation style, he's managed to avoid the good chunk of the teasing a lot of fans tended to get. The actual watching of anime is pretty much an everyday thing: his TV shows of choice tend to be anime, or anime style, and if there's nothing on TV, there's always the internet or DVDs.

[Tinkering] Matt loves taking things apart and seeing how they work or making them better. His room is cluttered with parts, pieces, and half-reconstructed electronics and mechanical items and school projects. About the only things safe from his tinkering are his cell phone and alarm clock. Even his computer gets tinkered with and upgraded once every few months. His favorite things to tinker with are his computer and those 'do-it-yourself' robots. He's hurt himself a few times in the process of learning, but he's never let that stop him. He just learns what not to do, and continues on his merry way. He got into the hobby himself, simply because he finds it fun, and he miiiiight want to make a giant robot someday. A couple of his professors that find out about that just sigh and roll their eyes nowadays.

[Video Games] Matt loves video games; RPGs, shooters, fighting games, strategy games; lay 'em on him! He tends to play at least a couple of times a week with his roommates (unless he's swamped with homework), with an attempt to do a full video game marathon every few months, and he's fond of more sci-fi and technology centered games, though it's not his exclusive genre-love. He loves things like Call of Duty, Halo, Street Fighter, Metroid, Xenosaga, and the Final Fantasy games. Dynasty Warriors is also nice when he feels like just causing mass damage. It's a hobby he was introduced to in early elementary school by his brother Aldric, and it's a hobby they still share. And it's how he met his best guyfriend Hiroyuki. He's even been dragged into Final Fantasy XIV by Kaida.


Virtues: Trustworthy - Matt is the guy you can call at 3am, drunk as a skunk, and he'll come get you if you're a friend. He tries his damnedest to not lie, tries to be reliable, and is loyal to those he calls 'friend'.
Clever - This is a guy who doesn't let himself be confined by the Box. He's quick-thinking, thinks of creative solutions, and pays attention to the details. The impossible only remains as such until someone actually does it!
Compassionate - Matt isn't the sort to kick a person while they're down. He's got an open ear, and a shoulder to cry on [for his friends!], and if he's not in the best place? He'll still try and point a soul in the right direction for some sympathy.

Flaws: Private - While he'll let others lean on him, he's not really one to lean on others, aside from a small, select few. He keeps his plans close, his heart beneath his skin where it belongs, and more than a few opinions to himself. He isn't going to share his life story with you.
Cynical - Matt knows the world sucks. He knows it's violent and messy and strange. It's why he's so willing to let others lean on him; because he is expecting the rest of the world to try and kick a person. He expects people to use his hopes and dreams against him, expects his projects to be yoinked if he isn't careful. He expects the worst in people, save a small few.
Flight, Not Fight - Matt hates confrontation. Sure, he'll pick your drunk a** up at 3am...but it there's a fight brewing, he's going to grab your a** and run the ******** away with it. This also tends to apply to arguments and is the reason he never did well in debate; if things get too heated, he'll just kind of shrug, sigh, and smile and nod.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

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Eyes: Medium blue, wide, almond shaped

Hair: Matt has chestnut brown hair that he keeps to his mid-back, usually braided or in a ponytail. He would try to grow it longer, but the 'gay' and 'girly boy' comments kinda make him twitch since hair is no indication of either. [And he's bi, tyvm.] His bangs tend to hang just above or slightly in his eyes, depending on when the last time he got them trimmed was.

Face: He's got a babyface, and it drives him nuts. Heart-shaped, still a little soft-featured, and made for smiling.

Clothes: Matt's style tends to lean towards 'punk' and 'slightly gothic'. He tends towards jeans and graphic tees, tank tops, cargo pants, pants like those you see coming from Tripp, hoodies, and the occasional dress blouse. He prefers black and other dark colors, but he'll throw the occasional brighter item in there to throw everyone off. He's also been known to don a Utilikilt now and again. He tends to wear little in the way of jewelry, mostly related to computers or anime/manga/video games somehow, and he has no piercings. He does, however, wear a small gold cross on a black cord under his shirt: the one thing he has from his birth mother.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 18, 2015 8:33 pm


Reserved!

No plan to power him for now. If I do, he'll be a knight, so no worries about age and stuff.

And yes, he IS that loyal to Kaida. No, he's not romantically interested in her.

Truth.Be.Told


Eos Galvus

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 18, 2015 8:58 pm


Truth.Be.Told


Hi Truth, welcome to Moonshop!

Okay, gonna cut into the meat and potatoes right away. His hobbies look good but I'm getting a little conflict between Lazy and Parkour that I'm going to get to in a moment.

On his virtues, first and foremost, his honesty seems a bit more skewed towards the flaw of blunt. You might want to adjust it so it reads as less negative. Things to think of are how people might appreciate his honesty, why they might even respect it and the fact he doesn't lie.

For cheering people up, you might want to skew it more positively as well. It has a good start and I like the seedlings planted here but at the same time it is a virtue that can easily risk being a flaw. How does it make people like him? What trait in it is appealing to others? Similar questions to help and its mostly for wording sake!

On his flaws, I like that yu brought up the negative side of honesty as well. You might want to pull a little from the virtue so it's all in one place but it's solid as it stands to me! Great job!

On Lazy... It feels a bit like it conflicts with his parkour hobby. Parkour is very active and movement based, using your environment to propel youtrself around. Often - not always - but often laziness includes a lack of desire to put out that much effort. I am not saying it is a bad flaw to have or that it isn't able to work with. He likes sleep- well, maybe that portion can merge in with his not paying attention at times (Sleeeeeping). As for general malayse and non-commital nature they might be mergeable as well- at least, parts may be. Laziness is a reason to screw with commitment, sometimes - you laze out and don't do what you promised, etcetera. But Laziness itself might do with a bit more if you'd like to keep it, to ecplain how it affects him negatively more, why people dislike it, and the form it takes and maybe a tiny bit on why he might enjoy active parkour and being lazy. Do they go hand in hand in a form of laziness regarding certain tasks? Things to think about~!

Commitment Issues. This looks currently like it conflicts with loyalty a chunk in writing. He's very loyal to Kaida and chosen family but this trait seems to revolve around her. I see where it works as a flaw, however it comes across as a bit two dimensional. Is it only due Kaida? How does this affect his loyalty to others? What if two people he was loyal to came into conflict, or is he loyal to only one?

You MIGHT want to strongly consider how this conflicts with his loyal trait specifically so you can ensure it works, or perhaps explain how it works together. It shouldn't be hard - mostly working - so I do want to point it out to you so you can work on it!

Once you've gotten through him with a comb, drop me a quote and I'll be happy to roll in so we can continue work on that stamp, and welcome again to Moonshop! c:
PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2018 11:38 am


The crit has been addressed!

Truth.Be.Told



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PostPosted: Tue May 08, 2018 8:58 pm


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Looks good to me, have fun!

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