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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 5:03 pm


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Name: Sanata Sandra Ramere
Nick Names: Sana
Alias: None
Alliance: Vampyre
Race: Vampyre

❧Physical Characteristics
Age: appears to be 19, real age is unknown
Hair: Black
Eyes: Crimson
Skin Tone: Tannish Brown
Ethnicity: Egyptian
Scars, Birthmarks, Tattoos: None
Height: 5'4"
Weight: She doesn't like to talk about her weight.
Marital Status: Married
Physical Structure: Slim-built, somewhat muscular, short for her "age"
Orientation: Straight

❧Personal Info She comes from a long line of Egyptian Royalty since in her previous life she was an Egyptian princess, but never took the throne because her older brother did just before the war had taken place (more about that later). She enjoys drawing, running, being silly, having fun, and just trying to live her life to its fullest, despite her vampirism. She gets bored with things that aren't interesting nor impress her much like politics and such.

Ever since becoming a vampire, she's more or less unaware of what to do next. She wonders if she should continue on or just give up, but nevertheless, she doesn't and moves ahead knowing there is something there for her--no matter the cost. She's brave in very aspect, even when it comes to her own family. Her older brothers and younger sisters have always given her the benefit of doubt--as does she--but she knows that they are very protective of her, but she also does have her own life to live.

She's not a fighter nor she's a risk taker, but she'll take what she can to survive. Survival of the fittest, they say.

"Of course, that doesn't mean that I'll always get my way. It'll just mean that I'm trying. My personality runs from happy to sad at times. I'm usually in a spiritually happy mood, but even so, I have some dark troubles in my past that make it seem hopeless for myself and my family." She says in a sorrowful tone. "It's not always easy trying, but I do make do with what I got, ya know? That's just how I am."


❖Transcripts:
Alignment: Good
Criminal Record: None
Level of Education: College
If Collegial: Music, Fashion Design
Current Occupation: Fashion Designer
Past Occupations: Waitress
Family: 2 Brothers, 4 Sisters, 1 son, and 2 daughters
Lovers, Friends, and Others: Her husband, Mahado

❖Personal:
Personality: Very hyper, wild child, silly, kind, and an overall respectful individual
People Skills: Avoids the idiots in the world who seem to think they care about everything, but does give a damn if they give her respect back.
Goals: None right now
Fears: Too many to list
Favorites: Music makes her the most happy and love makes her stronger.
Role Model: None
Catch Phrase/Motto: "Whaddup,homie?"

❧Skills,Abilities, and Powers
Skills: Magic, she was a presitess in her former life. (To be edited later)
Abilities: None
Powers: Spiritual reading, sees ghosts (or spirits), connected to the afterlife (Orisis's blessing)
Weaknesses: Not a fighter at all (doesn't like it, never learned), overbearing and shy, and is limited when it comes to her own strength.
Technology/Weapons/Pharpenilia: None



History
My story begins with some good, and then there's the bad, but what else is new in one's life, right? Am I right? She spoke aloud in a hopeful tone, wondering if anyone understood her.
Carrying on, my life begins when I had just started out as a simple priestess for the Pharaoh's Court (at that time, it was just training, nothing more). My brother was the Pharaoh and he was ruling over everyone. Boy, did everyone think he was the God all of Gods. Back then, it was quite common for a lot of people to think so. As for me, I just thought he was my bro and left it at that.
Anywho, I trained for a long time under the Head Priest Solomon. Strange dude, but he was pretty knowledgeable and trained me pretty well in Egyptian magic and the understanding of the gods, especially if I had to become a strong priestess. My sister, Isis (the ever-so reluctant one), wasn't too sure about me becoming a priestess, but I told her it wasn't gonna be too bad.
Until that day arrived.
Let me say that it was the day of my completion of my training and plus I was finally going to do something worth wild. That didn't happen--my family and I were attacked by a group of monsters, both werewolf and vampire.

I was bitten by a vampire and sucked dry; I was pretty much left for dead before I realized that the a*****e who bit me actually turned me into this horrid creature of the night. I was scared, confused, and didn't know what the hell to do. In fact, I was paralyzed with fear and wondered why I was cursed into being this thing. But I never gotten an answer. I was alone in finding the answer because my family had disappeared in the attack (I'm guessing they were turned as well, but I have yet to see them) and my then-boyfriend, now-hubby was gone.

What does a newborn do when he/she is hungry? Go out for the kill, to feed on humans. That's what I did for the past 300 years before I realized killing humans was pointless; it just didn't seem fair to kill them just because I was hungry all of the time. Maybe I'm a sympathetic person; I don't know, but I went for animal blood and to be honest, it's okay...not the greatest, but it's something to keep my a** alive. Specific Animals? Not really, but I guess I like deer the most. (Please don't ask if I killed Bambi's mom because that joke is really old and stupid.)

Anyways, I've lived this long to see the horrors and the goods of humanity and it's rather boring sometimes, but then again, we all have our preferences. People over time do change. Whether it's aging or society, people change and evolve into the better or worse that we expect or not expect. There are times where I wonder if there is anyone point to understanding ya'll, but then again, I like humans--they're different in so many ways and I do wish I was one again. Being a vamp is boring. You live a long time and you wish you could just die already, but then again, I'm wishing too much. (No, I don't wanna die now, but I'm just saying what's on my mind.)

As for my powers, they've enhanced ever since I've became a vampire, like I'm more connected to the spiritual world than ever before. It's weird. It's like I'm a different realm--or world--already and it's kind of cool. In a way, I am dead and I'm already passed over and yet I'm walking around on Earth like a human being. Like that Parallel Universes theory, that's what it's like to me.

In one "world", I'm dead. I'm in the coffin, already mummified, rotting for all eternity. In another, I'm walking around talking to people and just living my life because I can.
Like I said, it's cool but weird. What can I say? Being undead has its disadvantages and its advantages, no matter how you look at it.

If you want more about me, well that's another time, folks. (To be edited more laterz)


Theme Song: None at the moment (sorry)
PostPosted: Sat Nov 03, 2012 5:53 pm


Dang, it's been almost a week and no one's gotten to your profile... I blame the candy. XD

Anyways, time for the evaluation!

A. Hmm... for someone who used to be an Egyptian princess, I thought she would have an alias, like her former/actual name.

B. Yeah, I can understand the weight thing... most of us women don't brag about how much we weigh unless we lose a few pounds. XD

C. The stuff about her being from royalty should belong in the History. Matter of fact... you were supposed to fill out the stuff below the words "Personal Info." That itself is not a section. The categories below it should be filled out- which they were, and I acknowledge that. Still, that paragraph you filled out mostly belongs in the Personality section.

D. Could we have the names of the people in her family than just her husband, and whether or not they're alive, deceased, or missing?

E. Name a few fears, even if it's a long list.

F. ...The catchphrase is more of a greeting, but whatever. *shrugs*

G. Magic is not a skill. It's a Power. A Skill is something you were taught. Plus, specify what kind of magic she uses.

H. Abilities are something your character knows naturally. Can she cook? Do gymnastics? Listing one or two Abilities wouldn't hurt.

I. Um, could you explain the "connection to the afterlife" power more? And what do you mean by "spiritual reading"?

J. My favorite part: the History. Let's take a look...

One: I would advise using third person past tense next time when writing a character's biography.

Two: Why would they be attacked by vampires and werewolves on the same day? Those two groups are mostly biased against each other (with a few exceptions), so why would they invade an entire kingdom- or more specifically, the royal palace- at the same time, and why would they just go after the royal family instead of picking off several townspeople?

Three: She fed on people "for the past 300 years"? ...I thought she was an Ancient Egyptian princess. Wouldn't that make her age about 2,000 or more years? If she was feeding on people for the past 300 years, then she must have been steered off of the normal feeding course at some point in her long life. Now if she had fed on others during the first 300 years of her undead existence, that would make more sense.

Four: If she's bored with her life, then she could make something of it. And how is she more connected to the "spiritual world" than she was before? Could you elaborate on it? And no, saying it's like being in a parallel universe doesn't explain much... especially considering everything in the guild is in one single universe, with the exception of two characters. There are different realms, but not different universes here.

Well, that's all I've got to say about the profile.

Leonidas Pelagios
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2013 3:57 pm


Hullo! Do you still need help with this profile, or was Leo's summary enough?
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