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Izuma-Kun

Greedy Raider

PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 11:49 pm


─Basic Character Information─

Username Izuma-kun:
Character's Full Name Ukoner The Prideful:

Alias:
Nickname(s): Ukoner the Relentless, The Prideful.
Race: Kembetsu

Age:Real Age Unknown, Appears to be in mid 20s
Birthday:October 27th
Zodiac:Scorpio
Gender:Male
Blood Type: AB
Sexual Orientation:Gay
Disabilities/Phobias: Spider's

─Appearance─

Appearance: [img][img]http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x31/live4wesker/RPC.jpg[/img][/img]

((When hiding presence, cloak folds in to conceal body and Ukoner keeps his head down.

Height:6'0
Weight:182
Eye Color:Red
Hair Color:Black
Tattoos/Markings/Scars: A series of odd ring's are on his stomach, roman word's being written along each ring to say "Only through my pride can I grow stronger."

Unusual Features: Red Eye's, natural.


─Personal Information─

Personality: Very cocky and outspoken, believes he is one of the best around. Ukoner has a hard time speaking to others on a common level, and can even be seen as a lone wolf kind of person. He trusts no one but himself, and will go to any length to ensure everyone knows this. He does, however, speak better with females then he does males, due to him seeing females as naturally better fighters than males due to their smaller bodies and faster reflexes. Aside from all of these unknown facts, Ukoner will keep to himself, finding words are useless on the fields of battle.

Hobbies: Reading, Fighting, making sure everyone knows he is the best
Favorite Color(s): Red and Silver
Favorite Activities: Training and growing stronger
Favorite Foods and Drinks: Sake and Sushi
Other Personal Likes: Learning different languages spoke in the world of the living.

Least Favorite Color(s): Anything bright
Least Favorite Activities:Sleeping, Swimming, Learning.
Least Favorite Foods and Drinks:Non in particular
Other Personal Dislikes: Authority, insubordinate, weak fighters.

Personal Possession(s): A silver ring worn on his left index finger with odd marking.
Personal Secret(s):Ukoner always worries there is someone better than him, and strives to never be beaten in combat.

History:Since Ukoner was young, he was always confident in his abilities. He excelled in almost anything, and what he lacked in, he worked to improve. He was as prideful as could be, which would explain why he is what he is today. Not much else is known, the man not looking towards his past but always fighting to become stronger. Thanks to his Pride, he had learned many things that other's would only dream of. ((Its terrible but im tired, once I dont have writers block, I will write a story for him))


─Spiritual Powers {Inactive}─

Deadly Sin: Pride

Power Name: The Pride of Fighters

Weapon or Item: A double bladed scythe ((As seen in picture))

Abilities razz rideful Draw- Ukoner's pride always him to draw his weapon from seemingly no where.

Eye of Truth:
Something that all Observers are capable of doing, by drawing, or carving, or anything similar to that of this symbol onto something by an Observer. It becomes a constantly activated symbol until its somehow destroyed or removed. This symbol allows either the one that created the symbol, people the creator allowed the single to share with, or various monitors in the Castle to view all in the sight of the symbol. This is because these crossed over eye symbol is a sign of the Observers, the eyes meaning that wherever that symbol is is constantly on watched, always being Observed.
The Gateway:
Each Observer also has the natural ability to create doors out of thin air, similar to that of a Senkaimon, however this creates a hole not just through space like a Garganta, but through space into another world, as its own Universe that is only accessible by an Observers Gateway.. This prevents intrusion of other beings into their world, as well as protects the innocent in their world.
High Speed Movement:
Though many Observers are that of a race with a Special Speed ability, those who lack such an ability still are gifted with the ability of High Speed Mobility, which, if they are of a high enough level, can keep up with that of a Shinigami's Flash Step or an Arrancar's Sonido.

─Spiritual Power {Activated}─

Incantation: Glory Befall my Pride!

Appearance: Ukoner's appearance does not change, but the scythe now glows a ominous blood red, where it glowed a bright red before the release.

Spiritual Abilities:
Pride of the Ages- This ability is what makes Ukoner one of the deadliest fighter's alive today. As the fight rages on, his power's seem to never fade, only by a death dealing blow will the man stay down, his pride always at the forefront to carry him to victory no matter what the circumstances. Fighting against higher level fighters will push this abiilty to its end quicker, being able to stay up for about 10 posts AT MOST. Afterwards, Ukoner will revert to a normal fighter, and any injurys he sustained before activating will take full effect.

Against those lower then him, Ukoner will be able to take plenty of attacks, where taking on people of higher levels will make the man more cautious on what attacks he will dodge and which ones he will take head on. It all varies on the level of his enemy compared to his level. Ultimately this ability will ware down, it will just depend on how strong the enemy is.



Spiritual Techniques:
Glorious Charge- This technique is used to quickly charge in and attack the enemy with uncanny speed and cunning, aiming for a major organ in the enemy. The movement is faster then most flash step's, and uses the double bladed scythe to quickly attack from both the front and back before escaping the area or keeping the combo going.

Whirling Death- Imbuding his Scythe with his reishi, Ukoner will toss his weapon at a target, the scythe homing in and attacking of its own free will. The blade can float around and act of its own accord by Ukoner controlling it with his body motion's.

Pride Strike- Using his small stature and CQC prowess, Ukoner will charge forward, attempting to first disarm his enemy and then begin a series of strikes aiming for vital organ's or limbs. Ukoner does not need to disarm his enemy for the attack's to land, but a successful disarment would leave his enemy seemingly hopeless unless they are able to distance themselves or use other means to guard against the quick and successive scythe attack's.





─ Power of the Deadly Sins {True Calling}─


Incantation:Through War and Through Blood may my Pride scrape the heavens!
Appearance: Pride Demon

Abilities:
The primary ability of Ukoner's ultimate form is his godly speed and physical prowess, able to take immense amounts of damage without falling. One swing from Ukoner holds enough force to level a small building, and his reishi can smother any weak being.
Techniques:

Soul Reaver- Swinging one massive claw at the enemy, his reishi is cast out in a jagged line that will break most defenses of lesser fighters and can even be used to guard against high level kidou attack's, though it is not guaranteed to rival masters of the kidou art, it will certainly push their limits if used in succession to break barriers or walls.. This technique is capable of terrible laceration and can easily cut soul reapers in two if they are not prepared.


Prideful Healing- In this form, Ukoner has a extremely quick healing ability, being able to heal any damage taken in 3 to 7 posts, depending on where, how bad, and how critical the injury is. The healing process can be done while in or out of combat.


Ultimate Attack: Pride Bomb- Much like his bankai, but on a far greater and more powerful scale. As the demon of Ukoner fights, Ukoner will gather the dust of the stars to create a far more powerful Stardust Bomb, which he now calls the Pride Bomb. The smallest bomb can level a large portion of the soul society, where his ultimate gathering could leave a large city in ruin.

5-10 post- Small
20- Medium
30- Pen-Ultimate
35-Extinction.






─Physical Information─

Hakuda Level:When unreleased, Ukoner can boast moderate proficiency in hand to hand, but does not choose this over his double bladed scythe.

Zanjutsu Level:
Ukoner takes immense pride in his ability to fight with his blade, knowing how to counter and fight on a level of brilliance that not many have been able to match over the years.


─Relatives─

Mother:None
Father:None
Siblings:None
Aunts:None
Uncles:None
Grandparents:None

─Relationships─

Love Interest: None is known at the time
Friends: None at the time
Enemies:Anyone that goes against him
Other Relations:None


─Professional Status─

Affiliation:None
Previous Affiliation:Unknown
Occupation: Unknown
Previous Occupation:Unknown
Team: None, Ukoner has a intense Lone Wolf Complex due to his pride being so high.
Partner:Same as above.


─Skills Information─

Intelligence: Ukoner relies heavily on his cunning and ability to analyze any given situation, using tactics to overwhelm his enemies effortlessly.

Athletic Skill: Having such a leen body, Ukoner is able to perform various athletic movements, including flips, hand stands, rolls, and other various movements.

Strength: In his unreleased form, Ukoner is average in physical strength, relying on his uncanny speed to quickly eliminate the opposition, but when he transforms, this changes completely, giving up his speed for undying endurance and physical power.

Speed: In human form, Ukoner can effortlessly move about, leaving no evidence of where he was or will appear next, but when he transforms, his speed is below average where his physical prowess can easily crush any opposition not prepared.

Agility: In Human Form, Ukoner is extremely agile, moving at great speeds while dodging, parrying, and finding weaknesses in the enemy's defense. When he transforms, he has no need for agility, having the endurance and power to destroy his enemy.
Stamina:In both Human and Demon form, Ukoner has great amounts of stamina, being able to handle the most rigorous of tasks for hours and hours on end.

Durability:In human form, the only defense he truly has is his power to regenerate, but his human body is as frail as the rest. In his demon form is when he truly comes to the forefront of his power, being able to take massive amounts of damage and still not go down.

Endurance:Ukoner can endure plenty of damage, but like everyone, he has a limit. In Human form, he can easily take on any attack from mid level hado to shikai attack's, but will most likely fall from high level kidou or Bankai attack. In his demon form, he can take several shots from high level attacks without falling, making it seem like his arrogance is for very good reason.

Flexibility: Due to his small build, Ukoner can easily flip or bend his way out of attack, but this all is blown out of the window when he transforms.

Any Special Skills: None as of now.


─Other Information─

Character Theme: ]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UfekpGnxaLk
Other: Ukoner had joined the Gotei 13 to keep tabs and assure that the soul reapers were not doing anything tricky. Aside from that, Ukoner loves to always see how they fight and see how weak they truly are when compared to him. In essence, his pride made him join. He plays off as a weak soul reaper, but in reality he is extremely powerful, hiding almost 90% of his power.

PostPosted: Tue Oct 30, 2012 6:53 pm



─Zanpakuto Information {Sealed}─

Zanpakuto Name: Dying Star, Galactic Fury
Zanpakuto Appearance: User Image
Zanpakuto Spirit: User Image
Inner World: User Image
Basic Zanpakuto Attacks/Powers:


─Zanpakuto Information {Shikai}─

Shikai Incantation:Tengoku no, ginga no sutā ni hi o tsukeru!
Shikai Appearance:[img][img]http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x31/live4wesker/Bleh.jpg[/img][/img]
Shikai Abilities:



Can split the scythes apart and dual wield

Shikai Techniques:

Void Cutter-When the scythes are together, Ukoner can throw the weapon at his enemy, the weapon vanishing to appear meters from the target, once the target is either hit or avoids the attack, the weapon return's to Ukoner. Can be used every other post

Star Flare- Gripping the center of his weapon, Ukoner will spin the scythes infront of him, imbuding his energy into it to cause a large bright light to explode from the center, blinding any and all enemys whose sight is on him at the time. Can be used once every 4 posts






─Zanpakuto Information {Bankai}─

Bankai Name:Shōtotsu sutā, ten fu~yūrī
Bankai Incantation:None

Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance Same as picture:
Bankai Appearance: When Ukoner enters Bankai, both scythes meld into one larger and far deadlier weapon. The Staff portion of his scythe extends out about 17 to 18 inches. Two jet black blades adorn the end, being decorated in white spots which seems to mimic the stars. Ukoner now wears a jet black cloak, as black as night sky, where several constellations can be seen coming in and out of view. In this form, Ukoner's face is also blocked by the cloak's hood, making him seem like a visage of the stars themselves.
Bankai Attacks/Abilities:


Void Reaver- Much like Void Cutter, only faster and more lethal. Ukoner hurls the scythe at the enemy, vanishing to appear before them with only seconds to react. The difference between this and the shikai ability is that Ukoner can guide the weapon with his hand, being able to engage the enemy from afar before the weapon returns.

Solar Flare- Spinning his scythe above him in a circle, Ukoner will swing down, forming a last lash of flame whose temperatures are on par with a solar flare from the sun. The attack will scorch the earth and break through low level kidou defense (60 and below unless fighting a master kidou used, which then will be 45 and below), If hit by this attack, the burns left will be severe and not easily healed by any means, kidou, natural, or otherwise. Can be used once every 6 posts but needs a one turn charge.


Stardust Bomb- The ultimate technique of Ukoner, and only used when the fight seems to be going no where. As Ukoner bleeds, or sweats, stardust will begin to fall with the sweat or blood. As the battle rages, more and more stardust will fall, which will allow Ukoner to use his final attack,

Gathering all of the stardust into a ball, Ukoner will imbed all of his remaining spiritual power into the ball. This will act as a mix which will send the ball floating towards the heavens before exploding. Depending on how long the fight had gone, how much blood Ukoner had lost, and how much he had sweat, the ball can vary from taking down a small area to being able to level large cities.


5-10 posts- small bomb
15-20- Medium
30- Ultimate.




─Kidō Information─


Bakudō Level:
Ukoner boasts moderate kidou control, allowing him to use up to binding spell 66, yet never dares to use any kidou above 10 to make him seem weak.
Hadō Level:
Ukoner can use up to Hado number 63 without incantation, yet only uses Hado 4 when around other soul reapers to seem weak...
Yusō Chūdō Level:
None
Chiyu Chūdō Level:
None
Shien Hōhō Level:
None
Hybrid Techniques:
None
Forbidden Kidō:
None

Izuma-Kun

Greedy Raider


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PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2012 3:44 pm


For the main Rpc:
One thing, though it's not something you have to edit.. It's something I want to point out for visual means.
You saw that everything on the rpc for the most part was in individual

[b][/b]

Right? That is to just label what it actually is, putting it in bold, while the part that is typed goes after the bold. Or else there would be only one set of
[b][/b]


Now, for actual judging.
First off, the personality. It needs a lot more detail, not just simply a sentence. You need at least a paragraph explaining the character rather than just the prideful part, that itself could be a few sentences.

The history is something me and you will need to work out, to make it fit with the past of the Kembutsu.

Abilities:
Pride of the Ages; there has to be a limit to how long he can fight. Because if he is say, going against an extremely high level being, and he's just throwing attacks out without stopping, there has to be a limit to how much reiatsu/reishi he's throwing out, and his stamina.

Soul Reaver; There will be a limit to what it can break through, though it may be able to breka through high leveled Kido barriers, if an absolute master is using it it may not be able to break.

The ultimate attack has nothing to do with the previous techniques, which all seemed to be things that involved his own body, not something completely unrelated.
The ultimate attack can only be used if you're using your bankai at the same time, because the bankai is relevant to space, while the Sins abilities are not.

Shinigami half Zanpakuto:
Zanpakuto names are in japanese; not english. If you do not have a way to translate, I advise using Google Translate. It does wonders.

The scythe for the shikai you cannot use, another rpc already has that as a weapon. Please find another double bladed scythe.

How much does the speed increase? How much do the reflexes increase?

And we have.. Enough, dimensional things going on, being able to freely insert your body into another dimension, though temporarily, I would rather not, unless perhaps it's your own inner world, or a dimension that may only exist to you?

And something besides how long the battle lasts needs to determine the power of the Stardust Bomb, unless you actually divide it into a number of posts. Say, a ten post.. Or fifteen post battle does the smaller explosion, twenty does a medium, and thirty post is the big one?
That number may have to increase or decrease.. I'll ask an opinion of someone I know who has been in a fair number of battles about average battle length and what a good number for this would be, if you want to divide it into a number of posts.


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Edited.

Character is approved, partly. The abilities at the moment are not approved, because I still want the second opinion of Yummy Biscuits, so you must refrain from combat, or anything that would require the use of abilities.
 
PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 10:55 am


Just going through profiles, and I realized that toaster wanted me to post here. - sweat -

I'll begin, concerning abilities only for now.

x Alright, first of all, I HATE THESE POWERS. HATE HATE HATE. But I'll be fair nevertheless.

x Pride Strike - This is total BS. Not only is it worded horribly, but it's an obvious godmode type of attack. You can not disarm an opponent instantly; someone may be better, faster, stronger, etc. that your character. You need to reword this to say something along the lines of attempting to disarm.

Soul Reaver - Really? C'mon now. Any defense being destroyed by a single attack? Hell no. Either reword it to fall along the lines of being a defense destroying attack, that can destroy most defenses, or remove it entirely.

x I'll say it again. Shinigami do not gain physical buffs from their zanpakuto. You will need to remove any physical buffs you gain in shikai and bankai.

x Void Warp - Just no. This needs to be deleted.

x Solar flare - Like before, you need massive rewording here.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2013 2:31 am


YummyBiscuits
Just going through profiles, and I realized that toaster wanted me to post here. - sweat -

I'll begin, concerning abilities only for now.

x Alright, first of all, I HATE THESE POWERS. HATE HATE HATE. But I'll be fair nevertheless.

x Pride Strike - This is total BS. Not only is it worded horribly, but it's an obvious godmode type of attack. You can not disarm an opponent instantly; someone may be better, faster, stronger, etc. that your character. You need to reword this to say something along the lines of attempting to disarm.

Soul Reaver - Really? C'mon now. Any defense being destroyed by a single attack? Hell no. Either reword it to fall along the lines of being a defense destroying attack, that can destroy most defenses, or remove it entirely.

x I'll say it again. Shinigami do not gain physical buffs from their zanpakuto. You will need to remove any physical buffs you gain in shikai and bankai.

x Void Warp - Just no. This needs to be deleted.

x Solar flare - Like before, you need massive rewording here.



Better??

If not id really appericate your help in making the profile better.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2013 8:34 am


All you really need to do at this point is hash out some solid information throughout the profile. You can just add some more descriptive words around the profile to get the approval.

If you want any tips, I'd say read it bit by bit, section by section, technique by technique. Compare it to what you see in your mind's eye. Is there something missing? Could you word this better? Maybe describe the sound a technique gives off, or the facial expression your character wears on a normal basis.
That sort of thing.

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