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tkh_hi

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 7:34 pm


HELP WOULD HELP
You hide in the dark,
But I know you too well.
You can’t keep your secrets
From me when I’m your
Best friend.
You can’t hide forever.
And I’m always here to talk.
But all you can see
Are the taunts people will say.
All you can hear
Are the bruises
Being made on your skin.
I try to lure you out,
But you’re determined to stay.
And after it’s all over,
It’ll be way too late.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 24, 2012 3:46 pm


it's okay.

I get the message, it's clear enough. simple but defined subject, and you can hear some tones of emotion. Keep trying and you'll get a lot better at this before you know it.

dancingdemise
Crew

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Pyro_Bandicoot
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 12:08 pm


Hmm is this a poem or is this for the contest ? :3
PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 1:53 pm


Pyro_Bandicoot
Hmm is this a poem or is this for the contest ? :3

I don't know anything about a contest..

tkh_hi

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