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PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2012 1:03 pm


This just popped into my head and I wanted to ask other members here how you outline your stories? I've been horrible at them and would like to see what works for others to see if something will help me.
PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2012 2:36 pm


It seriously took me YEARS to find an outline system that worked for me; it's evolved into a sort of expanded snowflake type thing. Here's what I do:

Step One: Write down EVERYTHING you know about the story. Stick everything in chronological order. This is basically a bare-bones summary of your story.

Quote:
1. Joe meets Anna.
2. Joe decides he likes Anna.
3. They get married.
4. PROFIT


Step Two: Once you have your basic summary done, go back through and add your specific-y details. I do this by adding letters to the numbers (1a, 1b, 1c, 2a, ...). This is when you can leave yourself notes about how you want to write a particular part of the story.

Quote:
1. Joe meets Anna.
1a. Joe lives in a small town where nothing happens, then one day some new neighbors move in. His life is incredibly boring. He goes to investigate after work one day.
1b. Joe meets his new neighbor Anna, who seems like a really nice girl. She invites him to her housewarming party. Joe is immediately taken with her, as evidenced by his internal monologues.
1c. Joe and Anna hit it off at the housewarming party, and make a coffee date for the next weekend.

2. Joe decides he likes Anna.
2a. Joe and Anna's coffee date goes really well, and Joe leaves feeling very good.
2b. Joe's friends tell him that Anna is divorced and not looking for a relationship. Joe is sad, but doesn't give up.

Etc...


Step Three: Write your story! Because of how your outline is now structured, you are free to write whichever part you want; you are not limited to writing in chronological order OR jumping around and losing track of where things belong in your story's timeline.

One thing that I felt really held me back before I started doing this was my inability to write the parts that I wanted to write. With this, I can get all of my ideas out of my system whenever I want, rather than needing to wait until I overcome my writer's block about part 2b in order to reach the fun part in 3a.

I find this works better for longer stories than shorter ones; this has been keeping my thoughts organized for a few years now about a work in progress. It's a great help for me, I hope you find some use in it as well. smile

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2012 2:46 pm


Wow, thank you so much! It seems like a very good system and I'll definitely try it out to see if it works or if I fail miserably. ^_^
PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2012 8:28 pm



i write without outlines c:


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PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2012 6:52 pm


@AJKline
That's a really good outlining system biggrin
PostPosted: Tue Dec 18, 2012 10:44 am


I dont outline at all. I just sit down and start writing...

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2012 3:22 pm


I haven't outlined at all for the story I'm working on now, but as of this minute, I have writer's block. Anyone have suggestions of overcoming this?
PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2012 6:16 pm


Do everything except write.

That's the only way I can get over it.

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 30, 2012 3:46 pm


neasa_six6
I haven't outlined at all for the story I'm working on now, but as of this minute, I have writer's block. Anyone have suggestions of overcoming this?

Here's some things that work for me:
1. Take a walk (ya, it's cold this time of year, but the scenery is still beautiful).
2. Re-read what you already have written before you go to sleep, I usually come up with some ideas before I go to sleep or I have a dream that I can take from.
3. Don't be afraid to write nonsense. A lot of my writing starts out being nonsensical, then I revise it or add something so it makes sense.
4. If you have an idea but can't put it in words, sketch it out. I drew stick people in a scene once and later had a way to put it into words.

I hope these will work. The walk usually works best for me. I get ideas from looking at a tree (yes, a plain tree gave me an idea for a book I recently started).
PostPosted: Mon Dec 31, 2012 2:35 pm


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neasa_six6
I haven't outlined at all for the story I'm working on now, but as of this minute, I have writer's block. Anyone have suggestions of overcoming this?

Here's some things that work for me:
1. Take a walk (ya, it's cold this time of year, but the scenery is still beautiful).
2. Re-read what you already have written before you go to sleep, I usually come up with some ideas before I go to sleep or I have a dream that I can take from.
3. Don't be afraid to write nonsense. A lot of my writing starts out being nonsensical, then I revise it or add something so it makes sense.
4. If you have an idea but can't put it in words, sketch it out. I drew stick people in a scene once and later had a way to put it into words.

I hope these will work. The walk usually works best for me. I get ideas from looking at a tree (yes, a plain tree gave me an idea for a book I recently started).


haha. i'll try rereading it first. I just sat down to my laptop now. this way, i can also edit my previous writing.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 01, 2013 3:53 pm


I found a good video with an outlining system that I personally like:
Here's the video {x}
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