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xoxomenai

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 02, 2012 11:10 pm


AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM

Name: Maddox
Nicknames: Maddy
Gender: Male
Age: 16

Faction: Demon

Race: Cait Sith/Sidhe

Natural Ability: Feline Form - Maddy's natural form is that of a black cat, roughly the size of a large dog, with a white diamond mark of fur across his chest, and glowing pale eyes. In this form he is graceful and sleek, fur hackled and dark. His eyes radiate with a wispy silver glow, and his tail may be a bit more wild in form than his human appearance, with a white tip adorned with a few silver bracelets and bangles, perhaps a kerchief around his neck on occasion.


Personality:

I Can Do Bad All By Myself: Maddy's a bit of a stickler. Having been raised in a world that's taught him he's the next screama-donna of enterprise, he tends to be stubborn in accepting help from others. Only if it's absolutely necessary will he behoove himself to work among lesser species. Seriously, why did his pàpa even send him to this institution?? :<

Let's hope time will change that |D [Yes, yesss it will :>]

All But Rotten: It's easy enough to see that Maddy is spoiled. Having grown up in one of the richest families of a very wealthy society to begin with, he's used to getting what he wants, when he wants. Trading in his luxury penthouse for a school dorm though, how will he possibly adjust to Amity life??

Curiosity Killed The Cat: It's well known Cait Sith have a bit of a mischievous streak. For Maddy, it's no different. He delights in the thought of torturing humans, and to some degree, Halloweeners themselves. Don't be surprised if you find your latest eyePhone has suddenly vanished from your pocket. He may be toying with you, and then again, he may be borrowing it to return later. Cats are fickle creatures, after all.

The Face of Business: Maddy can be a tough nut to crack. He's been groomed since youth to be a businessman, and succeed in the family company. He thinks very analytically versus emotionally, and is quite intelligent, often wracking his brain to find solutions to the problems he encounters. As well, he has a bit of an ego issue, and often thinks the world at his feet. But if you can manage to break through his barrier, underneath all that stony solitude is the barest bridge of friendship. When Maddy knows he can rely on you, you're a friend to the end. Don't expect him to admit it though, his lips too, are loyally sealed.

Loyalty Above All Else Having been raised to respect his elders, Maddy does in fact have a certain sense of loyalty about him. He will generally respect those older than him, if only out of habit, and knowing the value of keeping his own secrets, will not hesitate to keep any secret given to him. 'Stitches will hear about it later, to be sure, but really, what's the harm in telling all your dirty secrets to a soulless plush that can neither protest or tattle?? :T

Spendthrift Given the mass sum of money his family has acquired, Maddy is able to afford just about anything, and is not above and beyond buying comforts for himself, and others as well. If you ever find your character in a financial bind, he's the boil to see. Some unlucky students may even find he offers these loans for a nominal favor.


Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy?

Maddy's particular family have a longstanding and noble reputation, choosing to live in an older community of Halloween. Some might call them 'old money'. Maddy's family own one of the most successful businesses around, and Maddy himself has been molded since a small child to be the ideal entrepreneur. His household are taught to uphold the laws rigorously, take pride in everything they do, and seek to do the task to the absolute best of their ability. The elders in the family are the ones who occupy the highest positions in business, and to a family dedicated to hard work and reputation their word is all but absolute. Youth however are still expected to know how to properly reap FEAR from a human, and Maddy himself is just reaching that ripe age when he too must know how to do so. For that reason his father and grandfather firmly insisted that he attend Amityville Academy.

And an elder’s word is absolute, yes??


Hobbies:

A Soft Spot: Maddy has one fuzzy warm weakness in that black heart of his. He loveeeesss stuffed plushies. In fact, he collects them, and has over half his room packed with their soft, staring warmth. If you want a one-way ticket to his heart, buy him a plush. He'll love you forever for it. His most prized however, is Mr. Stitches, a stitched together black and white cat, that also doubles as his backpack when he needs one. Though 'Stitches doesn't talk, something in his large saucer eyes makes Maddy feel that he does seem to comprehend what his owner is saying, and is sure to keep all the boil's 'terrible secrets'.

Fashionista: Being in business, and the upper crust of that besides, Maddy has been exposed to high end fashion since he was a small scareling in his mother's arms. He believes religiously in dressing sharp, and in his free time enjoys going through his wardrobe matching outfits and patterns. Sometimes he even pauses to sketch new designs. Just don't question his taste.


Random Facts:

- Of all the bright and beautiful colors, pink is his favorite. He secretly hoards pink things. Don't judge him, 'kay?? :V

- He hates being touched. Kind of like a certain bubble of space around him that he hates being invaded. That doesn't mean I don't have plans for him to warm up to people >:> [Cuddle Club yesss ♥]

- His family are also known for their rich and often embossed history, a history that can sometimes border on the absurd. Don't be surprised if he starts on about his gran-mama and how she once took down a human armed with nothing more than a malevolent glare.


FEAR Ability: Nine Lives: (The Mind - reduces accuracy) - Maddy is able to summon several illusionary copies of himself that fan out around the opponent and mimic his movements and voice in an attempt to confuse the opponent. The signature technique requires summoning eight illusions besides oneself, therefore having 'nine lives'. But Maddy hasn't yet mastered this technique, and is only currently able to summon four.

Just don't ask him why it's called 'Nine Lives' when there are only five images total. He might decide to show you why >V


Physical Description:

Eye Colour: Pearly silver with a soft glow.

Hair Colour/Style: Pitch black, asymmetrical, layered, short in back, and falling across his face into long bangs at the sides.

Height: 5'7-ish??

Body Size: His figure is slender, a bit androgynous, with minimal muscle definition. His face is more heart-shaped, boyish with a slender pointed nose, thin lips, and chin.

Skin Colour: Black everywhere up to his chin, save for a large pale skin-tone diamond-shape that stretches across his chest from waist to collarbone. His face too, is the same skin-tone.

Clothing Style/Colours: Monochrome! Black, white, and greys are much loved by this little dude. Not that he doesn't indulge in color pretty regularly too. He simply finds the stark natural colors of his race to be more comforting and complimentary to his natural appearance; so he will usually base his wardrobe off these, even when adding some color in.

He definitely has a pair of chic thick-framed rectangular reading glasses he wears on occasion, both for reading purposes and fashion statement, as well as a newsboy cap (see the tektek below) that is probably one of his favorite accessories. And he is usually never without a neck kerchief of some sort, and on occasion, a scarf instead.

General clothing he might wear include ripped skinny jeans (skinny/close fitting jeans in general), black and white patterned shirts, hounds-tooth, long tight sleeves to his fingers, 3/4th sleeves, cropped jackets over a shirt, neck kerchiefs and scarves (always), silver and black bangles, bracelets, and jewelry, all manner and number of belts, be it spiked, studded, embossed, plain black leather, etc. as well as pointed or normal boots, black gloves/fingerless gloves on occasion, and anything else that would be considered classy, edgy, modern, a bit punk, as long as it is in overall blacks/greys/whites. The artist can still feel free to add some touches of color to his clothes or jewelry, especially bright pinks, blues, greens, purple. Just take all this crazy info and go wild, okay! :>

Extra: His ears are tall, fluffy and pointed, and if he were ever to smile, one might notice the subtle hint of sharp canines. His tail is long, narrow but fluffy, and pitch black, with a white fluffy tip often adorned in some silver/black bracelets. Just before his shoulders his arms fade from a pale skin-tone to solid ebony as they reach his fingers, where narrow razor-sharp white claws grace his fingertips. The same goes for his legs and feet. See Skin Colour and this sketch for a clearer idea of this.

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Have a beautiful example of his feline form!
PostPosted: Tue Oct 02, 2012 11:10 pm


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PostPosted: Tue Oct 02, 2012 11:11 pm


PostPosted: Tue Oct 02, 2012 11:12 pm


Any suggestions on his FEAR or history especially would he helpful. All crits welcome! :>

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chiickadee

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 03, 2012 11:35 pm


hee hee e v e <3

i think the natural ability is sort of too much for a first year? like you have both a natural ability thats "natural form w/ heightened abilities" and "shadow melding." Shadow melding sort of bridges on the grim reaper's natural ability, so to me it seems like it should be an either or type of thing. maybe just shadow melding or just natural form? might wanna ask a GM on it though.

i know its just added for silly flavor text, but amityville is literally one of the top schools in halloween. it wouldn't be a "common school" xDDD <3

"a soft spot" seems less personality and more hobby. also i think imbuing it with FEAR/sentience bridges too much on reaper 8c ... again, ask GM i suppose, but usually enchanted objects go to reapers u o u

his history ... i think its okay, but i'd be careful on the whole "super ancient" and "rivaling death itself." It's a little meta u w u;;

other than that, looks good! e v e ! <3
PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2012 10:57 am


ovo Thank you Chi! /you're so helpful to my quests, always <333/

I've edited things to fit a bit better with what you recommended, as well as added a hobby section, and rearranged some things a bit, so hopefully it all checks out.

Now for a FEAR ability. x.x

EDIT: I've added a FEAR ability, expanded on some things, I should be pretty much finished editing, minus any future crits ♥ ♥ ♥

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Carhop Cavalier

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2012 5:03 pm


Heeeey! I like the fact that he's got the plushie quirk! It's always a good idea to set a character like this off with a fun quirk like that. Looks solid!
PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2012 5:15 pm


Thank you Carhop! ♥

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xoxomenai

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 02, 2013 8:22 am


♥ Ready! ♥
PostPosted: Mon Feb 04, 2013 11:36 am


HOKAY

IM rolling in menaiiiiiiiii
(hi)

I'll try to point out stuff and help with possible solutions and shiz.

-Okay because you've tied it so much into profile and reasons, I'm going to point this out first. Avoid anything and everything that sets up a 'blanket' over a species. Making statements like 'The Cait Sith are a longstanding and noble race living in an old community of Halloween.' Well, someone down the road question may not want that.

A really simple fix is rather than attributing many of the social, economic, class, upbringing qualities to the species on a whole, make the info pretain to his family/lineage/clan/etc. This is a really simple fix that allows a lot more flexibility both for yourself and for other future questors. Like the information is a-okay, just don't have it as all encompassing.


Personality:
-sell assured, stubborn, spoiled, He's got some solid traits but what makes him appealing as a person. What would make people want to be his friend? Is he philanthropic? Honest in certain way? Does he have a a keen wit?

reason- Reapers are the only ones who deal in souls w/ humans. just nic that part :>


Other then that, everything checks out!


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xoxomenai

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 04, 2013 1:33 pm


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sfksjaf Thank you so much Vamps <333 I've curbed his social status to his family, and shortened his history to nix the Reaper-esque qualities. Added loyalty and spendthrift traits (with a little demon deal-making thrown in) and I even added some info to his plushie section. tl;dr buy him a plush, he will insta-love you. I hope that's good ;; <3
PostPosted: Mon Feb 04, 2013 1:44 pm


A+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++


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xoxomenai
Maddox has been accepted! You may contact your artist to begin creating his art. In the meantime, you can create his journal and begin to RP!
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