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PostPosted: Tue Oct 02, 2012 7:21 am


Name: Blair Holmes

Nickname: None, really

Age: 14

Birthday: August 3

Sign: Leo

Gemstone:  Amber

Blood Type: B+

Fav. Food: Cookies! Who doesn't love cookies?

Hated Food: Haggis. Bleurgh. It may be the food of her parents' people, but it is gross.

School:  Crystal Academy

Hobbies:
Otaku || Blair loves anime and manga. She cosplays, she goes to conventions, and she is always looking for new shows to watch or new manga to pick up. Her parents sigh and allow it, since it is a fairly social hobby and she can talk to just about anyone about it.

Fanfiction and Fanart || Blair ships. She ships all of the ships. And she draws fanart and writes fanfiction for every last one of her beloved ships. Some of it can get a little...steamy (though for her, that means approximately third base), but clearly no one but her readers needs to know about that stuff. She also loves to browse fan sites to get her shipping fix. She has a small online following for both her fanfics and her doujinshi (illustrated fan comics) and is hoping, maybe, to translate it to a following for original manga or fiction someday.

Dolls || Blair loves dolls. She especially loves Nendoroids and various anime or manga figurines, but she also collects ball-jointed dolls. She loves to buy dresses and also sometimes makes her own custom outfits and figurines, but she prefers to just buy and collect. Her room s a doll sanctuary. Do not enter if they make you uncomfortable.

Virtues:
Inquisitive || Blair is incredibly curious. She wants to know anything and everything, and is never afraid to ask questions. She is also perfectly happy to research things on her own if whoever asks cannot provide a satisfactory answer. 

Take-Charge || Blair is a leader. She is not afraid to step up if she feels like things are coming apart, and she loves doing it. She likes feeling like she's in a position of leadership, and is very comfortable there, be it in a group project at school or forcibly directing fellow Senshi in a crisis situation.

Thinks on Her Feet || Sudden complications? No problem! Blair is very good at being flexible with her plans and adapting to unforeseen circumstances. Can't find any information on a research topic? Switch to another one. Current plan not working? Modify! Life doesn't follow your plans, so you've got to be quick to adapt instead of sulking over what's gone wrong.

Flaws:
Pushy || Blair does not know how to drop things. She does not care if you are not comfortable sharing the answer to whatever question she asked, she asked it and she wants an answer now. She will push and push until she is either very directly shut down or Until she gets what she wants. This has a tendency to piss people off.

Bossy || Once Blair takes charge, Blair is In Charge. She will boss and bully and push and harass to ensure that things get done. This tends together even worse if she feels people aren't taking her seriously because of her age or some other factor. Damn it, she was chosen as The Boss, she is going to be The Boss.

No Filter || Blair says what is on her mind. Sometimes, what is on her mind is not necessarily something that should be shared. Blair does not always realize this. She will cheerily inform you that you and x person would make a really cute couple, or that x thing reminds her of some series or another, or oh this would make an amazing fanfic.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Blue, almond-shaped

Hair: Black, mid-back length with a slight wave

Face: Round, with pale skin, a small nose, slightly full lips

Clothes: Crystal Academy Uniform
PostPosted: Tue Oct 02, 2012 7:22 am


Senshi: Sailor Adelaide, Dark Mirror Senshi of Dolls

Challenge:  "Come play with me!"

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Pink
Secondary Color: Cream

Fuku:
Overall, I want her fuku to be as cute and adorable and Lolita as possible while still staying within the guidelines for a Dark Mirror!
Collar -- Traditional sailor collar with a single stripe
Bow -- Big, cute, and adorable. 
Bodice -- Sleeveless, black with cute pink or cream ribbon decorations and lace. Very lolita styled.
Sleeves -- Detached, cute, poofy, elbow-length with lace cuffs, closed-ended
Brooch -- Eyeball
Bottoms -- Cute full skirt, with some lace and ribbons, knee-length
Tiara -- Something cute, like a little girl's princess dress up tiara
Choker --  Ribbon choker with a bow in the back
Shoes -- Black Mary janes with a slight heel, stockings
Gloves -- Cute gloves, up to just below the elbow, with lace edging
Accessories -- I'd like her hair to be up in pigtails or a half-ponytail with some kind of ribbons! I'm not sure where I want her Dark Mirror overlay to go, so that's up to the colorist~ Also, silver bracers at the wrists <3

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack:  Adelaide Doll Defender!
Sailor Adelaide holds her hands out in front of her and shouts the name of her attack. A porcelain doll version of her appears, and all attacks at Sailor Adelaide are taken by the doll instead, like an effigy. It can take up to four hits at this stage, or lasts as a shield for twenty seconds before vanishing if it is not destroyed. Sailor Adelaide can summon this twice per battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Adelaide Doll Protector!
Sailor Adelaide holds her hands out in front of her and shouts the name of her attack. At the Super stage, her doll can take up to six hits or, if not destroyed, lasts for a total of thirty seconds. Sailor Adelaide can only use this attack once per battle.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Adelaide Guardian Dolls!
Sailor Adelaide holds her hands out in front of her and shouts the name of her attack. At the Eternal stage, she can call on up to three dolls at once, but the more she summons the weaker they are. (Three dolls means each can take four hits or lasts for twenty seconds if not destroyed; two can take six or last for thirty; a single doll can take eight or last for forty seconds.) Sailor Adelaide can only use this once per battle.


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PostPosted: Mon Oct 08, 2012 1:50 pm


Family

Glenn Holmes, father
- 45 years old, a fairly well-known Arthurian scholar. He works as a professor at DCU, but does his best to make plenty of time for the family. He is a very caring man, if a bit prone to rambling about his passion for all sorts of legends.

Sorcha Holmes, nee Blackwood, mother - 43 years old, an Arthurian scholar as well known as her husband. She is a stay-at-home mom, and continues her scholarly pursuits as a hobby. She inherited a large sum of money from her grandfather, a famous author, which helps support her family. She is utterly devoted to her two children, and demands plenty of "family time."

Alistair Holmes, brother - 17 years old, Blair's idol. She looks up to her big brother as a role model.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 5:58 pm


Hey Songypoo~

I think Blair's hobbies are well-written and things that she can do both alone and with other people. Hi5 on those, they look great.

Onto Virtues and Flaws!

I was going to ask a few questions to get you to flesh some of them out a bit (when I read Virtues), but when I got to the Flaws part it kind of balanced them all out perfectly and answered my questions.

I think they're well-rounded and I actually don't think anything needs to be changed.

Awesome job on the civilian side!

For the Senshi (DMC<3<3<3)

I think her fuku will fit the guidelines just fine as long as her metal bracers get included in there somewhere as well.

First Attack: I think taking on 4 magical hits per battle, TWICE is way OP. Considering most Senshi can only use their magical attack once or twice and there aren't many times when there is a battle with multiple Senshi, she'd basically be shielded from magical attacks the entire duration of a battle. I'd say if you drop it down to 1 magical attack and/or 4 physical attacks for 20 seconds that would be more fair.

Second Attack: I have the same issue with this as I did the first- 6 magical hits is a LOT. To increase the duration, increase how many hits, AND add a second doll is a whole lot at once for something that should just be a slight increase. I'd either increase duration and how many hits for one doll, OR have 2 dolls with the same duration/etc as the first attack.

Third Attack: Since it's an Eternal attack, I think the limitations on this are okay for the most part. My biggest issue is still the amount of magical attacks per doll. 8 magic attacks just seems SO unlikely- in a 5 minute battle a Senshi will never use 8 magical attacks against them. >>" Obviously if she is using her Eternal attack however, that (in my opinion) means she is in a big group battle or she wouldn't need 3 dolls. I think 8 attacks is still overpowered for one doll (because realistically she would use her super or regular attack if she only needed one doll?).

What do you think? I like to bounce ideas when it comes to attacks. I like the idea of 3 dolls for her Eternal attack I just think that if she has the option to summon only one, it should maybe be dropped down to 5 magical attacks? I dunno. ;;

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 6:13 pm


Sylent Nyte

I tweaked her attack descriptions; I'm hoping what I intended is a little clearer now!
PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 6:30 pm


I'm thinking that is much better~ I'll drop you a trial stamp and a mod will be by shortly to tell you if I'm clueless and you need to change anything else wink

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 26, 2012 7:24 am


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