Welcome to Gaia! ::

Bleach: Darkened Swords

Back to Guilds

A fun Bleach community with great semi-literate to literate roleplay and awesome people. 

Tags: Bleach, Shinigami, Arrancar, Soul Society, Hueco Mundo 

Reply Profile Graveyard
Auroya Shihoin-Kuchiki [Squad7Captain(to be approved)] [U/C] Goto Page: 1 2 [>] [»|]

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Stu-Stu13

Tipsy Tycoon

8,250 Points
  • Guildmember 100
  • Contributor 150
  • Person of Interest 200
PostPosted: Mon Oct 01, 2012 12:46 pm


Name: Auroya Shihoin-Kuchiki

Nicknames: The Merge

Gender: Female

Age: appears roughly 21

Hair Colour: Black

Eye Colour: Green-ish

Height: 5’6”

Weight: She wouldn’t tell you anyway

Blood Type: O+

Reiatsu Color: Blue/Purple mix

Appearance: I has a picture…

Affiliation: Shihoin family, Kuchiki family, Seireitei

Squad: 7 (Previously 2)

Rank: Captain

Family: Shihoin and Kuchiki

Personality: While cocky and a bit demeaning, she knows when it’s time to be serious. She tends not to put faith in other’s abilities over her own. She takes pride in her noble blood and embraces both the Shihoin and Kuchiki families.

Likes: Competition, alcohol, flirting(though only to fluster people)

Dislikes: Fancy, formal events (though she attends and acts respectful to reflect well on her families)

Biography: Auroya was the very first merge of the Shihoin and Kuchiki bloodlines. Her mother was a notable member of the Shihoin family and her father of the Kuchiki family. She hyphenates her name to boast her noble blood. Although, because of her being the first merge of these two great families, other kids always gave her a hard time. Therefore, she spent most of her time with her tutors, practicing Shunpo with her Shihoin relatives and Kidou with her Kuchiki relatives. She spent so much time on her training, she came to excel at both. She was a shoe-in for a position on squad 2 when she came of age, but she never expected to be immediately slated as the 4th seat. She slowly climbed up to Lieutenant, proving herself as a capable warrior. A vacancy arose in squad 7 for captain. Auroya loved squad 2, but wanted to further her career as fast as she could, so she applied. She was tested and won the title by the skin of her teeth. Everyone believed she was given the title merely because of her nobility. To prove her worth, she challenged another captain, well respected and long-serving to a sparring match. He gladly accepted; she lost, but not without putting up a fierce fight that left her audience in awe and her opponent impressed. He congratulated her for a well fought battle and declared she was definitely worth her rank. Her ability was made known and gradually, her comrades came to accept her. The members of squad seven even began to look up to her as they did their previous captain. Despite the important job, she found herself with much free time, so she looked into politics. The Kuchiki family had a Head, but the Shihoin family’s head had been vacant for some time. She took on the official title as Shihoin clan head to be sure to secure it's name in the Seireitei. She now serves as both Shihoin clan head and captain of squad seven.

Zanpakuto Name: Kishijosei

Sealed Description: I has a picture

Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: I has a picture

Zanpakuto Spirit Personality: Kishijosei is a VERY noble woman who believes in honor in battle. She only fights fair battles and always respects her fallen opponents for their bravery. Despite her seriousness in battle, she is very competitive, like Auroya herself. They even compete with each other on a regular basis.

Inner World: A lush palace full of amazing, beautiful objects and fantastic-looking food. Although, as soon as she touches any of these things, it turns to dust; only Kishijosei can touch.

Shikai Status: Achieved

Release Command: Fight with honor, Kishijosei!

Shikai Released Appearance: Sword remains the same, but the gauntlets Kishijosei wears appear on Auroya’s hands as well. The fingers are very sharp and poisoned.

Shikai Abilities: Adrenaline is released at an increased rate throughout Auroya’s body and her maximum speed and strength capacities are raised.

Bankai Status: Achieved
Bankai Description: Auroya is fully clad in Kishijosei’s armor, but it is light as a feather to her.

Bankai Abilities: Auroya’s strength and speed capacities are maxed out to incredible speeds, making her the fastest in the soul society while in Bankai.
Any wound Auroya inflicts will fester at an alarming rate due to a toxin that coats the surface of her armor.
Her armor is as resistant as an espada’s Hierro.

Kido: All Known bakudo and Hado EXCEPT forbidden techniques

Abilities and Special Training: Shunpo expert, on Yoruichi’s level

Motto: There’s always a new challenge to conquer.

Quote(s):

Theme Song(s):

Trivia:

Other:
 
PostPosted: Mon Oct 01, 2012 3:20 pm


Hi, I can see you're a new member. c: Just a little heads up, I really doubt the moderators would accept your character, since its a "Former" captain. That's basically a cheap way of being high in the ranks. If everyone did this method of being a Former this, or a Former that, then there would be basically no balance.

So unless you already consulted with a moderator to have this character, I suggest that you should re-edit this character, c:

Also, it isn't my place to judge your character for I'm not a mod, but I'm am sure they're going to ask you about your abilities, so you should explain your abilities more, like what do you mean that your speed and strength are raised? To what extent?

iGummi B a r e

Newbie Noob

4,650 Points
  • Member 100
  • Wall Street 200
  • Gaian 50


huggable ghost


Anxious Senshi

PostPosted: Mon Oct 01, 2012 4:06 pm



Oh Gummi honestly.. I missed you XD

Any who he's quite correct on a few accounts, I understand you asked my permission, but it seems the profile was posted before I could respond.

We tend not to allow formers in almost anything, it's even quite rare for us to accept a Piravon Espada. Like Gummi said, too many people use it as means to be high in the ranks. Especially with other ranks available to be filled. Also with the timeline of our guild it's technically impossible for a former captain in squad two at this point without being ancient. My temporary character in a story arc was formerly the Squad two captain, after that Squad two was held by Sun Kai the current Head Captain, then Kyon and finally Ray if my memory serves me correctly.
In short a Captain that young couldn't possibly be a Former Captain.

I also feel a new captain beating another captain that quickly is unrealistic and possibly overpowered in it's own respect.

Also it's asked that even if you have a picture that a short description of character appearance be provided, it's not a strict rule, but it's still something that is appreciated, especially because so many characters have personalized uniforms or a featur unseen in the image.

In additon the abilities are nowhere near descriptive enough I'm afraid and leave much to be desired. For example the description says her claws are poisoned, however the poison is not listed as an ability. This is especially cruicial because there is such a wide variety of things to consider when it comes to poison such as poison type, length of effects, antidotes, ect...

I understand the profile is under construction but I'm mentioning some of this now in case you forgot or just didn't realized.



PostPosted: Mon Oct 01, 2012 4:44 pm


And now.... *looks around* its my turn... >.> <.<

Anyways, both Nyx and Gummi gave out some good pointers, and I would like to reiterate that a bit.

The Former Squad 2 Captain deal is a no go for me, its my opinion, if Nyx would like to make an exception than by all means go for it, but I don't like it. It would confuse alot of people because of the recent changes to the Captains (Which you were correct on Nyx) and also if you are going to be Shihoin/Kuchiki... Then wouldn't that mean you would know Bokyaku Kuchiki (Current Captain of Squad 6, and if I do believe his character is Byakuya Kuchiki's brother, I may be wrong)

Anywhom, I would also like to state something about your Bankai, yes I know you have this profile listed as U/C I just couldn't help wonder... What are the limits of your speed? An Espada's Heiro is powerful, but its not impenetrable so it would be easy for an High Ranking Captain or a high ranking Espada to be able to break through it (If they were able to catch your character) Now I have nothing against having alot of speed factored into your Bankai (hint hint, Ichigo) but, in my opinion, by you saying "fastest in the Seireitei" that would imply that there may be other beings faster than your character. I am correct in this on how it was implied.

Aero Diskence

Unsealed Hunter

7,450 Points
  • Partygoer 500
  • Marathon 300
  • Wall Street 200

Stu-Stu13

Tipsy Tycoon

8,250 Points
  • Guildmember 100
  • Contributor 150
  • Person of Interest 200
PostPosted: Mon Oct 01, 2012 5:31 pm


Ok so lots to address.
I am going to defend myself on a few things, but please don't take me for being confrontational or hostile, just getting the whole picture out there.

1) Instead of being a former squad 2 captain, can I fill a currently vacant captain position and be squad 2's former lieutenant? Auroya is just designed for squad 2, I need her to be connected.

2) I was planning on detailing my abilities, this is my rough outline to be improved after approval/rejection of captain level

3) Obviously, if you allow #1 to go by, her past will be corrected, thus the god mod defeating of the other captain will be erased.

4) I haven't put up the picture because I am still drawing it, which is also why I didn't include a description; the picture is drawn specifically to be her.

5) I have started contact with Byokyaku's user and I plan for them to know each other very well, as they'd be related.

Ok...ready for correction round 2 :]
PostPosted: Mon Oct 01, 2012 5:47 pm



Lieutenant is more reasonable, but that's something that also she should be slightly older for luckily there was a gap for squad two lieutenant that had been open for a bit. I won't force you to change her age however just for that tiny detail.
May I suggest the Omnitsukido? That is as long as Aero also agrees to it being reasonable, I like a second opinion on these things.

The rest seems reasonable enough I believe, like with the other issues though I suggest waiting for feedback from Aero and Gummi, they tant to catch things I miss.



huggable ghost


Anxious Senshi


Stu-Stu13

Tipsy Tycoon

8,250 Points
  • Guildmember 100
  • Contributor 150
  • Person of Interest 200
PostPosted: Mon Oct 01, 2012 5:55 pm


I swear I'm not just trying to grab power for the hell of it, I'd just like her to be captain level if at all possible because, that's how she is in my head. I understand if my skills aren't up to your standards though. I've erased her actual age so it can be left to the viewer to determine. I'll just provide her appeared age.

I've begun constructing another character who I expect to be a 4th or 5th seat type of character.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 01, 2012 6:15 pm


Well, if she became the ex Lieutenant of Division 2 or the Onmitsukido (I say Onmitsukido, since they are the ones that specialize in speed, hand-to hand, assassination, which is how I see your character) , how would she be at a current Captain level? Also, your Kido/Bakudo. In my opinion, you should limit it to a certain number, for that not even all Captains right now are not experts in Kido.

Also since your character as of now, is not Captain level, you have to take out your bankai. Unless you get permission from Nyx.

And I leave the rest to Aero.

iGummi B a r e

Newbie Noob

4,650 Points
  • Member 100
  • Wall Street 200
  • Gaian 50

Stu-Stu13

Tipsy Tycoon

8,250 Points
  • Guildmember 100
  • Contributor 150
  • Person of Interest 200
PostPosted: Mon Oct 01, 2012 6:25 pm


If Aero is cool with it, I will have her be the ex lieutenant of Onmitsukido.

She's now captain level after being promoted to fill the vacant squad 7 captain seat (if, of course, it's approved).

I'll strike through her bankai if she is not granted Captain status.

Will make the Kido adjustments when I know what her level will be. (Even if she does make captain, I will lower them)
PostPosted: Tue Oct 02, 2012 4:46 am


Well, first off, thank you for the changes, and thank you for understanding about all of this. I would just like to state, that I do not think you should hold a Captain spot at this time. I would love for you to try again at a later date, but as Gummi and Nyx stated, I agree with them fully, your character should be Onmitsukido, which specializes in speed, assassination, etc. etc. I personally see your character more along those lines then holding a Captain Position at this time.

As for the Bokyaku thing, if he is alright with it then by all means keep it but if Vice Versa, then of course you have to change it. Its up to him on that.

Your real age vs. your apparent age, I'm fine with you having just the apparent age for now, but soon I would like to see you fill the void and state her age. It does not have to be now, it can be at a later date. But I would like to see it filled. So if Nyx and Gummi agree, I would like to put you in Onmitsukido.

Aero Diskence

Unsealed Hunter

7,450 Points
  • Partygoer 500
  • Marathon 300
  • Wall Street 200

Stu-Stu13

Tipsy Tycoon

8,250 Points
  • Guildmember 100
  • Contributor 150
  • Person of Interest 200
PostPosted: Tue Oct 02, 2012 4:24 pm


If it's because my RP skills fall below the bar of captain, then I will submit and accept a roll in Onmitsukido, provided all you Mods agree it's ok. But, if it's because my character doesn't seem captain-ish, I'd like to know what about her says that.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 02, 2012 4:55 pm


I do accept for you to be in Onmitsukido. But at this time, I do have to agree with Aero regarding your position as a captain. From my opinion, based on your sample your role-play skills are great.(such a vague word) However, you do lack some grammar and punctuation which a vital key.

Also, being a new member, it is hard to automatically give a high spot. Yes, we have done this in the past where we do give these spots to new members, and ones new to role-play, but it sorta threw things off. For one, those new members that were given these spots would start off great, but after the first or second week, they suddenly become inactive, posting rarely, resulting in termination of their position. So it is fair that someone with such a spot must have some experience in the guild first, and how it is run.

As for now, I recommend that you start off with a more basic character, than a high positioned one. And from there, who knows? You can eventually become a captain in the future.

iGummi B a r e

Newbie Noob

4,650 Points
  • Member 100
  • Wall Street 200
  • Gaian 50

Stu-Stu13

Tipsy Tycoon

8,250 Points
  • Guildmember 100
  • Contributor 150
  • Person of Interest 200
PostPosted: Tue Oct 02, 2012 5:06 pm


I promise the RP details(grammar, punctuation) will come soon. I've been away from RP for a good long while so I am very rusty.

After thinking it all over...Could I make another character, a low level soul reaper, and RP with him for a few weeks, THEN return to this debate about Auroya? I could just put her profile away into my archive until I've exposed myself to the guild further.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 02, 2012 5:11 pm


That's fine by me. I do realize that your character is your main dream/goal character, so I don't mind at all. Then when you've gotten used to the guild, I would be glad to re-consider this character of yours.

iGummi B a r e

Newbie Noob

4,650 Points
  • Member 100
  • Wall Street 200
  • Gaian 50

Stu-Stu13

Tipsy Tycoon

8,250 Points
  • Guildmember 100
  • Contributor 150
  • Person of Interest 200
PostPosted: Tue Oct 02, 2012 8:30 pm


Exactly how low in the ranks can you be and still have a Shikai?
Reply
Profile Graveyard

Goto Page: 1 2 [>] [»|]
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum