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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2012 8:40 pm


Name: Zachary Calloway, little brother to Christabelle Calloway

Nickname: Zach, Buttface, Weasel, Womanizer (oh)

Age: 16

Birthday: February 2nd

Sign: Aquarius

Gemstone: Amethyst

Blood Type: Badass (Type AB)

Fav. Food: Pizza, pastas, sausage and all sorts of other delicious, delicious Italian things. Also JOLLY BURGERS.

Hated Food: Green stuff. Food isn't meant to be green! Green is gross unless it's garnish or something!

School: Meadowview High School

Hobbies: Mr. Handy - As a very hands-on kind of person, Zach loves to create things, especially if they end up being useful. It started out as playing with Tinker Toys and other small building-block type toys and has blossomed into a love of wood and metalworking. He moved from toys to the campground favorite of building birdhouses. From there, his interests brought him into shop class at high school where he learned to make stools and small tables. In his spare time, he's set up a space in the garage with a power saw he borrows from the neighbors to either fix something in the house or make replacements if something can't be fixed. Granted, he doesn't have the skill or the materials to make anything particularly fancy or complex, but they're functional, minimalist pieces. Currently his big project is a table big enough to comfortably seat six!

Punkcessorizing - Zachary likes the "edgier" styles in a stereotypical sort of way. He likes belts, chains, checkers, studs, that sort of thing. He hasn't yet delved into the whole mohawk hairstyle but he thinks it's pretty rad. Zach's not interested in the lifestyle, just more of the clothing. Whether that makes him a poseur is really up to debate. If the clothing he already owns isn't "punk" enough for his tastes, Zach goes out of his way to make it so - sewing odds and ends, adding belts, pins or studs to it, fraying and edge or two and making it his own. Typically he doesn't like things straight off the rack, he has to modify it to fit his tastes first!

Screen-printing - One day, Zach hopes to either be a fashion designer or create his own clothing line. To that end, he's taken up screenprinting. It started as a introductory/exploratory summer school course before his freshman year at Meadowview and the interested gathered from there. Zach has a small screen-printing setup in the garage with fabric paints, silk screens and the necessary accessories. So far, he's only designed small logos and patterns to add to existing shirts for friends and family but he hopes to one day get good enough with a computer to do a lot of his designing digitally and open a local clothing line from there.



Virtues:

  • Genuine - Despite his flaws, with Zachary, you get exactly what's on the label. He does his best not to misrepresent himself in any way and for all his ups and downs, he simply is who he is. Zach isn't deceptive or looking for an ulterior motive. If he does wrong, he'll admit to it and accept the punishment. He's unabashedly himself, regardless of the situation, even if it means Zach gets into trouble or becomes a thorn in someone's side. He'd much rather be true to himself and who he knows he is than to change himself to please someone else.

  • Hero-at-Heart - Deep down, Zach wants to be someone's knight in shining armor and to rescue the princess from the evil sorcerer and ride off into the sunset with a happily-ever-after ending. It's a little embarrassing but he gets a real thrill out of saving someone or something, even if it's a cat out of a tree. In mundane situations, helping someone out by carrying groceries or leading an elderly woman across the street counts as being a hero in his eyes. Zach's even stood up to a bully at school and gotten injured for his trouble, but to Zach, it was worth it. You don't need to save the world to be a hero.

  • Trustworthy - As much as he mouths off, Zach will not spill your secrets if you trust them with him. He's trusted secrets to "friends" before and had it severely backfire on him in the form of his once-secret crush never wanting anything to do with him ever again. Zach knows how awful and crushing it is to be betrayed by people you thought you could trust and he is determined never to make anyone else feel that way. So Zach strives not to lie about anything, to keep his promises to the best of his ability and to always do what he says he's going to do. If he died right now, Zach would want his tombstone to read, "Dependable and Honest" (and Handsome, but that's a whole other ball of wax.)




Flaws:

  • Competitive - Zach's competitive spirit has gotten him into trouble more often than not. Sure, he'll set himself up as a rival to someone else in his class when it comes to test scores and that ends up working to his benefit (pushing him to get better grades) but he usually gets far too caught up in up in things. Sports should be played without worrying about winning or losing, but Zach hates losing and will get angry or frustrated if he's on the losing team, taking this out on his teammates. He's lost friends this way. He also competes with his sister despite the fact that they have completely different paths in life - if she does something, he has to do it five times better and will actively work to achieve this. He's also concerned when it comes to ladies - if he has his eye on a girl and someone else is vying for her attention, Zach will get right in there and wage war if he has to - he has to win.


  • Gullible - Zach likes to believe that there's goodness in all people and takes what people say as truth. He doesn't like to think of others as liars or cheats and it's backfired on him a few times. If someone presents something as concrete fact, Zach will be inclined to believe them and may be horrified at finding out the truth at a later date. Someone he believes to be a friend may turn out to be using him for money or the like and Zach would be totally heartbroken, unsure of what to do or how to cope. Pain and betrayal hasn't hardened his heart... yet... and his naive, wide eyes will continue to get him into trouble until he learns not to blindly trust people.


  • Reckless - If someone's in trouble and in desperate need of help, Zach has and will drop everything he's doing to assist in some way without stopping to think about how this should be done or what sort of consequences could arise from his actions. He would be one of the first onto the battlefield despite a severe power disadvantage, believing good always wins in the end and the knight never dies to the dragon. In mundane life, he's fallen from trees and broken bones in an attempt to win a tree-climbing contest, and taken a shortcut through Destiny City's seedier parts of town just to get home in time instead of calling ahead and taking the bus. Zach generally doesn't look before he leaps, having much faith in his luck and abilities.



PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Dark brown like his sister's, wide and mischievous.

Hair: Charcoal gray and wavy, Zach keeps his hair short like Mamoru but without the part on the side (his bangs go all the way across his forehead).

Face: He's starting to get a little bishy and is losing his baby fat, but he still looks like that awkward between-kid-and-adult stage. Semi-rounded face, basically.

Clothes: School uniform usually but Zach's into the more punkish styles as of late.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2012 8:46 pm


Senshi: Sailor Themisto, Senshi of the Lost

Challenge: Where you going?

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Black Olive
Secondary Color: Phthalo Green

Fuku:

Colorist choice! I was thinking something of a fog-ish + ropes (like the Kusabi) theme but it's totally up to whoever wants to do the art. smile


Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Perditus Anima!
Themisto calls out the name and a semi-transparent and semi-horrifying lost soul appears about ten feet behind the target and shoots toward them quickly. The soul looks like a distorted, disembodied and ghostly skull that makes very low, guttural moaning/wailing sounds. If it connects, the target feels great bouts of heartache and fear. They themselves feel lost or forgotten just like the souls Themisto conjures up. The attack is meant to be a distraction more than anything else.

• Single target (unless two people happen to be standing very close or are holding each other, in which case the attack is split between the two for half duration)
• This attack can hit Themisto/allies/other people if the golden light is dodged.
• The attack lasts 20 seconds.
• Themisto can use this attack twice per battle.
• The attack can travel through solid matter, but since it dissipates after 10 feet, the solid matter has to be pretty thin for this to mean much of anything.


Super Sailor Scout Attack: Multorum Animos!
Second verse, same as the first. Themisto calls out the name and three semi-transparent and semi-horrifying lost souls appear about ten feet behind the target and shoots forward in a cone-like shape very quickly. The souls look the same as the first attack, issuing low, guttural moaning/wailing sounds. If it connects, the target feels great bouts of heartache, sadness and fear. They themselves feel lost or forgotten just like the souls Themisto conjures up. The attack is meant to be a distraction more than anything else.

• Multi-target cone (if there is only one target, this attack simply has a greater chance to connect due to its greater area of effect)
• This attack can hit Themisto/allies/other people if the golden light is dodged.
• The attack lasts 20 seconds.
• Themisto can use this attack twice per battle.
• The attack can travel through solid matter, but since it dissipates after 10 feet, the solid matter has to be pretty thin for this to mean much of anything.


Eternal Sailor Attack: Nebula Fletus!
Themisto calls out the attack name and blows across his open palm, creating a sort of fog that billows out in a cone shape in front of him. The fog fills an area about the size of a standard bedroom (maybe 12'x12' or something of the sort). While anyone (aside from Themisto himself) is standing in the fog, they feel intense fear and hear phantoms wailing, monstrous guttural noises or anything that is triggered by feeling lost, lonely and the feeling of being forgotten by family and friends. This attack does not inflict any damage in and of itself - it's simply meant to confuse/disorient/horrify the enemy and whoever else happens to be standing in the radius.

• AoE, but anyone (except Themisto himself), including allies, can be affected if they stand in the fog.
• Attacks dealing with wind or rain can dissipate the fog early.
• The fog lasts 30 seconds before it starts to clear.
• This attack can be used twice per battle with a two post cooldown between uses.
• If people wander out of the fog early, the effect on them clears.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 09, 2014 8:51 am


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Welcome back Lufo <3

Kao here critique you lovely young gentleman XD. Just a few things really, he looks pretty good!

Civilian:

His Girls, girls, girl hobby seem more like a flaw, more like just something that happens when girls are around, rather than an actual hobby. So I think their needs to be a bit of differentiation there.

His competitive flaw seems to singular seeing as it's only when girl's are around, though I can definitely see why its a flaw. He doesn't have a competitive drive any other time? Is he the type to ignore the bro code in favor of a girl (this is curiosity here), because it seems like it. Does it matter how the girl he's trying to impress feels?

His insecure flaw is rather singular as well. He's not insecure in any other ascept of his life? Whether is because of his appearance or not? Also it reads very internal, even though it seems like it may be what's driving his competitive and recklessness. If this is so mentioning it would help it read less internal.

Powered:

The attacks and their mechanics in and off themselves are fine, though for the super having the attacks being able to home on a target makes it seems like they are sentient which i do believe isnt allowed, maybe possible making it faster/ harder to dodge.

My concern right now is that while I understand the connect with the lost soul, the first two attack read more like he's just the senshi of confusion and this may just be the questions the attacks spur.

One more question though, if the attack is split between two people standing buttcheek close to one another, does it half the attack time, since the full attack didn't hit just one person?
PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2014 4:33 pm


Kaori_luv


Hiya Kaori~ Thank you for the crit! I've updated quite a few things per your suggestions (which were wonderful, by the way) and I hope he looks better now! If you have the time, would you mind looking him over again for me? Thank you very much! heart

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 17, 2014 8:47 pm


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