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So my opening line and paragraph sucks in my opinion. I don't know how to change it around. Any help will be appreciated.

I don't really want to rewrite your opening for you, however I have questions for you that should help you to flesh out your opening.

What time of day is it? Does this orphanage have a reputation and, if so, is it positive or negative? What does the owner look like? What material is the gate made out of (is it wrought iron or a white picket fence or something else entirely)? Are the children afraid or just cautious? What does the child (bundle) look like? What does the building of the orphanage look like? What is the setting (on a hill overlooking a city or near the city limits)? What does Orad look like? Is the dialogue between the owner and the deliverer of the bundle significant? What do they say? What do the grounds look like? Is this a place that would make you feel peace or does it all look intimidating?

Those are all the questions I can come up with. You should be able to flesh out your opening even more by answering those questions. I would be happy to help out further if you need.