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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2012 3:56 pm


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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2012 4:08 pm


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I haven't read through it properly but you need to put up the PLs, otherwise I can't judge them at all.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2012 4:12 pm


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I haven't read through it properly but you need to put up the PLs, otherwise I can't judge them at all.

I honestly don't know what to put as the power levels. Maybe give an idea on what you think they should be ?
PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2012 4:19 pm


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I haven't read through it properly but you need to put up the PLs, otherwise I can't judge them at all.

I honestly don't know what to put as the power levels. Maybe give an idea on what you think they should be ?


Sorry I don't have the time right now (exam in 1 hour) but you can PM one of the active crew members about it if you want. But personally you should be the one to make them.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2012 4:24 pm


Midnight Xsis
The Monster of the Mist
Midnight Xsis
The Monster of the Mist


I haven't read through it properly but you need to put up the PLs, otherwise I can't judge them at all.

I honestly don't know what to put as the power levels. Maybe give an idea on what you think they should be ?


Sorry I don't have the time right now (exam in 1 hour) but you can PM one of the active crew members about it if you want. But personally you should be the one to make them.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2012 3:44 am


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Okay~ A few issues / fixing need;

1. You can't have a famous title unless you undergo a trial. If you're willing to then we can work together to get a plot behind it and we can conduct it separately.

2. I personally don't like Shinigami turned Espadas going around being ancient so please put in a Real Age that's less than 10,000.

3. Nice Biography (not an issue, just saying XD)

4. Family / Bloodline. Please put no. Don't put unknown.

5. Shikai is so Haribel~ (Not an issue either)

6. Defensa del agua - It should also have a defensive PL. 3/5?

7. Esqueleto de los ondenados / Sacraficio - I think you should make it water-based, just to go along with your zanpukuto.

8. I don't think I can allow you to heal all your wounds when you go into Segunda, you can say all minor injuries heal. Also, the "overall abilities increase etc." should go under boosts not physical changes.

9. Samurai de los cielos - again make it water-base?

10. Brillar Cero - PL should be 7/10?
Muerte - 6/10?
Also you need PLs on your Bala + Ceros

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2012 5:16 am


Midnight Xsis
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Okay~ A few issues / fixing need;

1. You can't have a famous title unless you undergo a trial. If you're willing to then we can work together to get a plot behind it and we can conduct it separately.

2. I personally don't like Shinigami turned Espadas going around being ancient so please put in a Real Age that's less than 10,000.

3. Nice Biography (not an issue, just saying XD)

4. Family / Bloodline. Please put no. Don't put unknown.

5. Shikai is so Haribel~ (Not an issue either)

6. Defensa del agua - It should also have a defensive PL. 3/5?

7. Esqueleto de los ondenados / Sacraficio - I think you should make it water-based, just to go along with your zanpukuto.

8. I don't think I can allow you to heal all your wounds when you go into Segunda, you can say all minor injuries heal. Also, the "overall abilities increase etc." should go under boosts not physical changes.

9. Samurai de los cielos - again make it water-base?

10. Brillar Cero - PL should be 7/10?
Muerte - 6/10?
Also you need PLs on your Bala + Ceros


Do you have any issues with Capula de agua within the resurreccion? Also for Sacraficio it has to be reiatsu due to what the fact the weapons she makes are condensed reiatsu.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2012 3:20 pm


The Monster of the Mist


Do you have any issues with Capula de agua within the resurreccion? Also for Sacraficio it has to be reiatsu due to what the fact the weapons she makes are condensed reiatsu.


Regarding the PM, no it's fine, queries are welcome wink I just didn't have the time to answer yesterday.

For Capula...it technically shouldn't last that long. 2-3posts? That's about it. Personally I dislike you making your weapon out of condensed reiatsu, but condensed water with reiatsu is fine.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2012 6:37 pm


Midnight Xsis
The Monster of the Mist


Do you have any issues with Capula de agua within the resurreccion? Also for Sacraficio it has to be reiatsu due to what the fact the weapons she makes are condensed reiatsu.


Regarding the PM, no it's fine, queries are welcome wink I just didn't have the time to answer yesterday.

For Capula...it technically shouldn't last that long. 2-3posts? That's about it. Personally I dislike you making your weapon out of condensed reiatsu, but condensed water with reiatsu is fine.


The reason for it is because people will argue the fact that they can cut through it. If it's reiatsu then they can't. However the Capula was reduced to three posts. Actually I think I've made a middle ground. Take a look at them now. The creation of blades and sacraficio
PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2012 7:26 pm


Midnight Xsis
The Monster of the Mist


Do you have any issues with Capula de agua within the resurreccion? Also for Sacraficio it has to be reiatsu due to what the fact the weapons she makes are condensed reiatsu.


Regarding the PM, no it's fine, queries are welcome wink I just didn't have the time to answer yesterday.

For Capula...it technically shouldn't last that long. 2-3posts? That's about it. Personally I dislike you making your weapon out of condensed reiatsu, but condensed water with reiatsu is fine.


Also what's the stat cap?

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2012 8:25 pm


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