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MysticHoneyRose

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2012 10:32 pm


Gaian name:elegantvictiorainrose

Picture:User Image

Name:Aliron

Age:19

Height:5'11"

Weight: 198

Personality: He has a dark personality. He does not enjoy being around large groups of people or even one person. The happier the person he is with the more of an annoyance they are to him. Very little makes him smile, except for sea salt ice cream. The quickest way to get him to tolerate you is to buy him large amounts of the stuff. He has little to no patience and gets angry very quickly. If something doesn't interest him he will not get involved even if ordered. It is this attitude that most likely prevents him from advancing higher in the ranks. Though if you do get him to trust you then you will have a rather strong ally even if it doesn't seem that way 98% of the time.
Faction: dark

Likes:
sea salt ice cream
being alone
kicking the crap out of things
sea salt ice cream (he's obsessed)
high places

Dislike:
loud people and children
being in crowded places
happy people
not having sea salt ice cream
being stuck in one place too long

Hobbies:
he doesn't have hobbies, when not fighting he pretty much wanders around. If he finds a good book he may read that but other than that the guy has no life.

Relationships:
None

Theme Song:Monster by Skillet

Bio: Born and raised in Twilight town Aliron has known nothing else. Never bothered by this he did not seek to find other worlds. All he wished for was to have time to himself. Twilight town was perfect for this. It was mostly quiet except on certain days such as tournaments. On such days he would escape to sunset terrace and just look out over the city. Occasionally he would leave for the beach as well. One of his favorite parts of the town is it's well stocked supply of sea salt ice cream.

Aliron can never say for sure how he gained his ability to use the keyblade. Around the age of fifteen strange creatures seemed to multiply from no where. It was a strange thing though he left it for other to deal with. It was when he saw people vanishing that he began to take notice. For a time he simply watched, finding a sick fascination and pleasure in watching the people whom he had no heart for vanish. Then the beings turned on him. They seemed to flock to him like moths to a flame. Almost devoured he found a strange weapon in his hand. He didn't know what it was but heck it helped him kill of the creatures and keep them away. For the next four years he used his blade to defend himself and occasionally others if there was something in it for him. If someone looked like they couldn't "pay up"he'd walk on by. Despite this he still has no desire to leave town. It is only by force would he move on .
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Class

Statistic


Statistics
Offense:60
Defense:50
Physical Strength:100
Magic Attack:100
Magic Defense:40
Agility:75


Keyblade Name
Fallen Guardian

Keyblade Picture and/or Description
User Image

Keyblade Abilities

Name: Shattered Shield
Description:An attack that when performed correctly breaks through any defense. If done wrong the effect can backfire.

Name:Act of desperation
Description:a shield that protects against 3 hits while dealing damage with spikes/spears that cover it. Weak attacks cannot penetrate. Keyblades and stronger enemies can break through easily. Mostly used as a distraction or stalling method.
He can form one shield at a time with a two post cool down from when the shield is destroyed and any 3/5 physical attack or above (unless multiple), projectile attack that is 4/5 or above or any magic attack that is 3/5 or above can destroy the shield. It would take 4 to 6 projectiles to break the shield and at the least a -ra level spell to break it though a very strong attack can easily break through with no damage to the attacker.

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Abilities:

Name: gluttonous greed:
Description:Takes energy from his own abilities to give him a one post boost that allows him to deal a large amount of damage. Lowers his energy to half the strength/energy that he was currently at. He can only use this once each battle. Though he will only use this when needed. Aliron considers this one of his simpler "emergency" attacks.

Name: Lingering Shadow
Description:Covers the field in a dark shadow that obstructs the vision of enemies and ally's. (it is like a heavy black mist, when close enough to another you can see them) five to ten foot radius.

Techniques:

Name: Black Knight
Description: He can summon a shadow stallion that rushes around the field causing damage to anything it hits.
Duration:two posts
Cool Down: five posts
Type of Attack +Power:magical physical 3/5

Name:Double vision
Description:He can separate himself into five extra clones. Each deal damage but only a quarter of his own power. He is very susceptible to damage during this time. (damage to him is doubled)
Duration:three posts
Cool Down: three posts
Type of Attack +Power:magical attack 2/5

Name: Guillotine strike
Description: His keyblade extends out in a large radius and slashes in a full circle, this does not harm ally's.
Duration:one post
Cool Down: three posts
Type of Attack +Power: physical (I think) 4/5

Magic:
Voidra
Fira
Aero
Blizzard
Slow
Gravity

Drives :
Name: Dark of night
Description: Overcome by darkness his body is enshrouded, skin and all in the black emptiness. His body acts as a black hole drawing everything close enough towards him.(unlike sora when he was in his dark drive he remains mostly human like in movement, appearance and state of mind though his anger is doubled) His clothes remain but become tattered and torn.He is able to wield two keyblades in this form. (picture to come soon)

Drive Keyblade :
Name:Oblivion & Rapture


Drive Keyblade Abilities:
Oblivion: a strong keyblade this weapon reflects the darkness that covers it's wielder. As he swings it pulls itself towards while pulling the target towards it to cause extra damage.

Rapture: It's the end of the world as we know it. A strike from this blade can cause nearly half a loss of energy and inflict numerous status effects such as blindness, confusion, and on extremely rare occasions leave you near death (this effect could happen every 100-200 battle posts)

Drive Keyblade Statistics:

Drive Statistics
Offense:85
Defense:50
Physical Strength:110
Magic Attack:45
Magic Defense:75
Agility:100


Limit Break:

Name:
Furious Rage
Description: Overcome by pure emotion his speed increases and he'll attack all enemies with a barrage of hits. His "black hole" effect increases slightly during this time though does not work on large enemies. Finally he finishes with a heavy slam which shakes the ground lifting the earth like an earth quake.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2012 10:18 pm


First off, I apologize for taking so long, I didn't know that you had finished your profile but I read it and it's looks pretty good, there are just a few issues

1. Your ability act of desperation is there a limit, I 'm asking because it's an ability and can be used all the time,

2. There is no health system implemented (and hopefully there won't be none, though if it was your moves would be op) so most of your abilities that require health would be kind of hard to utilize, so if you can find an alternative to Gluttonous greed and Rapture then your profile will be approved

3 Ok in your limit break, what "black hole" effect, also if he attacks if he using his keyblades then that would be " a barrage of hits", rapid fire sounds like a projectile type of attack, that is unless he's hitting them with projectiles, on which case my bad.

now this is a side note but Guillotine would be physical and Black Knight would be magical physical

And I apologize for my late response once again once you have dealt with these issues then tell me either by pm or post for a quicker response

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MysticHoneyRose

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 07, 2012 3:13 pm


Dein-zu
First off, I apologize for taking so long, I didn't know that you had finished your profile but I read it and it's looks pretty good, there are just a few issues

1. Your ability act of desperation is there a limit, I 'm asking because it's an ability and can be used all the time,

2. There is no health system implemented (and hopefully there won't be none, though if it was your moves would be op) so most of your abilities that require health would be kind of hard to utilize, so if you can find an alternative to Gluttonous greed and Rapture then your profile will be approved

3 Ok in your limit break, what "black hole" effect, also if he attacks if he using his keyblades then that would be " a barrage of hits", rapid fire sounds like a projectile type of attack, that is unless he's hitting them with projectiles, on which case my bad.

now this is a side note but Guillotine would be physical and Black Knight would be magical physical

And I apologize for my late response once again once you have dealt with these issues then tell me either by pm or post for a quicker response


It is no problem at all :3
I understand there is no health system ( I just used HP to give an idea of the strength of the attack.)
I'll get on that ASAP Oh and for the limit on his "Act of Desperation" attack he can get hit by one enemy three times and have no injury but he can cast it up again after it shatters. (if that makes any sense.)
PostPosted: Fri Sep 07, 2012 10:42 pm


Ok first Statistics can't have stats sadly (lol) so distribute those 35 points to any of those 6 categories.

There is no blind or confusion in this guild (at the moment, I might suggest some other ailments later on but at the moment there are only 3 major ailments). Now for Lingering Shadow could you change it so that instead of blinding, it "obstructs the vision" since blinding isn't in this guild. I mean, I see what you're doing, you're putting too much of the game's influence into your profile.

On the topic of Lingering Shadow, it has to have a limit to it's size, for a field is to vague and too large. Also since this is an ability it can be used constantly so limit the size or limit it's use

Now Gluttonous greed is still considered puppeteer-ing, so have it so that you would need permission from an ally in order to use it.

Now back to Act of Desperation, the way it is now it's considered op. I say it's op considering as you stated, "he can get hit by one enemy three times and have no injury but he can cast it up again after it shatters." That would mean that your character has the ultimate defense against well everything. So let me ask how strong must an attack be to destroy a shield.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2012 12:00 am


Dein-zu
Ok first Statistics can't have stats sadly (lol) so distribute those 35 points to any of those 6 categories.

There is no blind or confusion in this guild (at the moment, I might suggest some other ailments later on but at the moment there are only 3 major ailments). Now for Lingering Shadow could you change it so that instead of blinding, it "obstructs the vision" since blinding isn't in this guild. I mean, I see what you're doing, you're putting too much of the game's influence into your profile.

On the topic of Lingering Shadow, it has to have a limit to it's size, for a field is to vague and too large. Also since this is an ability it can be used constantly so limit the size or limit it's use

Now Gluttonous greed is still considered puppeteer-ing, so have it so that you would need permission from an ally in order to use it.

Now back to Act of Desperation, the way it is now it's considered op. I say it's op considering as you stated, "he can get hit by one enemy three times and have no injury but he can cast it up again after it shatters." That would mean that your character has the ultimate defense against well everything. So let me ask how strong must an attack be to destroy a shield.


Oh ha that 35 was a typo, I had been using it to keep track of where I was in the distribution XD all I need to do is delete it, forgot to do that when I submitted. whoops.

Yeah I was mostly drawing from the game when doing the powers. Thanks for the suggestion help there.

The size would be within say five to ten feet. Would that be reasonable?

I see what you meant by puppeteering with the greed thing. Instead I'll switch it to him using up most of his own power, basically sapping energy from all of his own abilities(the lesser ones not his stronger ones) to let out an attack. Once finished he will be left rather vulnerable unless healed.Would that be an ok alternate?

And yeah I realize that about the shield I never meant it to seem invincible (sorry for not clarifying). No a normal weak attack can't penetrate it but a good hit from a keyblade can shatter it. Its more of a defense he'd use when running away to temporarily deflect an opponent or confuse them.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2012 12:29 am


Ok make sure to say 5 or ten feet radius also make sure you state that you only can form one shield at a time with a two post cool down from when the shield is destroyed and any 3/5 physical attack or above (unless multiple), projectile attack that is 4/5 or above or any magic attack that is 3/5 or above can destroy the shield. If this works for you then ok if not tell me your take on it. By this I mean it would take at least a technique or an attack with a person with high physical strength to break your shield with an physical attack, at the least 4 to 6 projectiles to break the shield and at the least a -ra level spell to break it, but note if the attack is really strong then your shield should break without blocking anything

Also if you want him to sap his own energy then ok.

Once the changes have been made then I'll accept

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2012 8:59 am


Dein-zu
Ok make sure to say 5 or ten feet radius also make sure you state that you only can form one shield at a time with a two post cool down from when the shield is destroyed and any 3/5 physical attack or above (unless multiple), projectile attack that is 4/5 or above or any magic attack that is 3/5 or above can destroy the shield. If this works for you then ok if not tell me your take on it. By this I mean it would take at least a technique or an attack with a person with high physical strength to break your shield with an physical attack, at the least 4 to 6 projectiles to break the shield and at the least a -ra level spell to break it, but note if the attack is really strong then your shield should break without blocking anything

Also if you want him to sap his own energy then ok.

Once the changes have been made then I'll accept


Alright hope I changed everything to your liking :3
Also the sapping his own energy part still works with the idea that that particular attack would be dangerous and only used when he was in dire need to. Otherwise he will not use it.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2012 9:10 am


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Ok you are free to rp, head on over to Twilight Town to start your adventure

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