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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2012 8:43 pm
August 4 - setting up new quest August 4 - feeling frustrated.
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2012 8:45 pm
Name: Galadriel Cole
Nickname: n/a
Age: 19
Birthday: May 6
Sign: Taurus
Gemstone: Emerald
Blood Type: AB
Fav. Food:
Hated Food: anything with Onions
School: Crystal Academy Hobbies:
Star Gazing - To Galadriel there is something very charming and mysterious about the sky especially at night. She would spend days on the roof of her house and looking at the night sky twinkling with stars. The vastness of the space is truly astounding. It is a soothing experience. The night sky has always been a mystery to her. She's not experienced but she can probably be able to tell what constellations is what. She can stare at the sky for hours upon hours and never be bored asthere is always a new star that hasn't been looked at yet or something like a fast beam of light racing across the sky. Tanning - Tan mom and Galadriel must know each other. Tanning is all she knows. Galadriel can't go a day without going to the tanning salon. The thought of walking around looking all pasty and pale makes her want to faint. Her parents wish she would use her money for other endeavers.
Virtues:
Listener When not asking people a million questions about their life Galadriel can be a good listener, someone to lend their ear to. She's also good at keeping secrets, just because she gets in other people business don't mean that she would ever tell anyone what she finds out. She treats what is shared with confidentiality and is trustworthy and sensitive with what is shared. Who would she tell besides the characters in her books?
Galadriel identifys areas of agreement with the speaker. Rina is attentive. She makes good eye contact, don’t interrupt what the other person is saying and always shows an interest in what is communicated.
Even if she won't want to speak up very much to offer a large amount of verbal support to accompany it.
Friends of Galadriel can rest assured that their secret is always safe.
Loyal Galadriel extremely loyal. She is loyal to those she consider her friends. She'll stick to you through thick and thin. She is always supportive or her friends needs and will always be in your corner no matter what. Galadriel is such a good friend that instead of bailing you out of jail she will be the one in the jail cell beside your talking about what a great night you two had.
Determined Something an individual will notice right away about Galadriel , is that she is extremely determined. One might get stubborn and determined confused, but there really is a fine line. When she puts his mind to completing a task she won't stop until its done. She's not one to give up on something because it's too hard to do. She doesn't give up, period. And if she does, then it's because what she's attempting to do is damn near impossible. If she can do it, and she sets her mind to it, then she'll do it. You can always count on her to try to see it through to the end.
Flaws:
Blunt Galadriel honest bluntness is one of her best, and worst traits. She's not smoke and mirrors, she's as crystal clear as water, and will tell you whatever she needs to tell you straight, no sugar coating, and no lies to make you feel better. Some people might consider her to be insensiitive or lacking compassion, but she not trying to be rude just brutally honest. She'll say what she mean, even if it might be offensive. Because of this, people view her as pretty harsh. But, also because of this, you know that whatever she does say is sincere.
Stubborn Galadriel 's known to be a rather stubborn woman, often times not listening to what people tell her and doing her own thing. Some say it's cause she's a taurus. She may know that she may wrong about something but her mind is made up and since she has already made a decision wrong or not she will stick to her point.
Personal space Galadriel grew up in a loving touchy feely kinda environment. She thrives on physical contract and doesn't really know what boundaries are. And being the compassionate person that she is she will be giving you lots of physical contract even if you want it or not. She is even like this to total strangers. She also doesn't understand why people get mad at her when she is like this. Nosey With her friendly personality and wanting to reach out to and befriend everyone, Galadriel doesn't know what the word privacy means. She will come and invade your personal space. It sometimes leads to poking her nose in where it...might not particularly belong. There is no pushing her away. She really likes to be in other people's business because the truth of it all is that she finds other people's life more exciting than hers. Be ready to be drilled with questions. Galadriel will want to know how a persons day went from the moment they woke up to the moment they go to bed. She would want every detail. It can be quite nervering. Some people don't want to be her friend because of this.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 8:07 pm
Senshi: Sailor Philia http://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/280_Philia Senshi of Diamonds Challenge: Attacks: Sailor Scout Attack: Shining diamond Galadriel emits a light that tempory blinds her oppontents. Super Sailor Scout Attack: Eternal Sailor Attack: workin' on need help
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 10:06 pm
Quote: It's a short crit, since I'm pretty rusty but I had a couple thoughts: On her Merits and flaws... well... I'm not sure where to start. My first reaction was that these are literaly the four most common merits and flaws I see in any quest ever, and I don't really see anything about them that sets their limits, or explains how she makes them uniquely her. I would like to see a little more information on what defines HER version of Stubborn an Loyal, and the points where any of these traits bend or break. Also: I had a suggestion on the senshi half. Have you heard about the legend about the RABBIT in the moon? ((Obviously she can't belong to the Moon, but this relates to Sailor Moon's nickname.)) Instead of going the obvious route with big silly bunny ears, why not go with the Rabbit Pounding Mochi? Her attacks could be themed after the legend, like "Mochi Pound". Also it would be a bit more 'real' rabbit like since rabbits don't actually attack with their ears.
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 10:07 pm
Thank you for your crit. I'm am now trying to work through the changes. I think the biggest problem I will have is comeing up with good attacks. Any help would be greatly appreciated
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 10:11 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 6:48 am
It's a short crit, since I'm pretty rusty but I had a couple thoughts:
On her Merits and flaws... well... I'm not sure where to start. My first reaction was that these are literaly the four most common merits and flaws I see in any quest ever, and I don't really see anything about them that sets their limits, or explains how she makes them uniquely her.
I would like to see a little more information on what defines HER version of Stubborn an Loyal, and the points where any of these traits bend or break.
Also: I had a suggestion on the senshi half. Have you heard about the legend about the RABBIT in the moon? ((Obviously she can't belong to the Moon, but this relates to Sailor Moon's nickname.)) Instead of going the obvious route with big silly bunny ears, why not go with the Rabbit Pounding Mochi? Her attacks could be themed after the legend, like "Mochi Pound". Also it would be a bit more 'real' rabbit like since rabbits don't actually attack with their ears.
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Posted: Sun Aug 04, 2013 7:48 pm
xdeathxbyxlovex August 4 - setted up new quest August 4 -feeling frustrated.
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