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Mental Neko-Senpai Captain
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 Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 12:54 am
_____Rules
1. Must have a weakness.
2. Detailed descriptions.
3. Actually read your post and tell me its not OP.
4. No more than 15 custom kekkei genkai jutsu.
5. YOU MUST pick a name, it doesn't have to be creative, but please do it and try to make it different from previous names, we need to keep the kekkei genkai threads updated and it's hard to do if some have no name
6. All customs made may be subject to change at a later date. This is to safeguard against people managing to slip overpowered things past us and then insisting that it stays because it's already been accepted. By creating a custom bloodline/clan, you agree to and accept that parts of your customs may be changed or removed entirely at a later date.
Below is the form that you should fill out if you wish to have your custom bloodline/clan approved:
[align=center][b]Clan/Kekkei Genkai Name:[/b]
[b][u][size=20]Write Here, Include if Clan or Kekkei Genkai[/size][/u][/b]
[b]Three Words Describing the Clan/Kekkei Genkai:[/b]
[i][size=9]Three, Words, Here[/size][/i]
[b]Clan/Kekkei Genkai Picture[/b]
[b]Clan/Kekkei Genkai Description, History:[/b]
[/align][b] Strengths[/b]:
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[b]Rules and Requirements[/b]: •
[b]Clan/Kekkei Genkai Stages:[/b]
[b]Clan/Kekkei Genkai Jutsus:[/b]
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2012 8:24 pm
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Mental Neko-Senpai Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2012 9:15 pm
It looks good, however there should be draw backs to each seal release, increasing with each rank for obvious reasons. ^-^
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2012 10:58 pm
Clan/Kekkei Genkai Name: Kōsetsu - 降雪 Three Words Describing the Clan/Kekkei Genkai: Calm, Stoic, Cold  H i s t o r y:
Along with the birth of the Yuki clan, the Kosetsu clan was born. They had similar abilities, originating from two brothers, twins in fact, deep within the heart of the land of water. The Yuki clan, powerful and quick would grow to become a massive tool of war. The Kosetsu clan however would grow to become quiet and calm, sitting in the snow that they ever generated, loyal to their nation, but avoiding the battles that approached with every passing moment, every passing day, one way or another, they were Shinobi.
As the civil war within Kirigakure came to fruition, the Kosetsu were seen as Shinobi with a kekkei genkai no different than that of the Yuki clan's, so they would be forced into hiding, or death. Many of the clansmen would move on to hide in the open, acting as if they were not Shinobi, living normal lives, while others would scatter outwards, some becoming Missing Ninja, while others would settle into new villages, becoming Shinobi for a new nation. From that day forth, snow would fall no more in Kiri...
While the Yuki clan has great manipulative abilities regarding ice, the Kosetsu clan has similar manipulative abilities, however their abilities lie within the natural weather patterns of snow. These abilities include being able to make the weather change drastically, creating dark clouds in the sky, turning sunny days into cold snow covered mornings. Their abilities are rather fantastic as they can summon forth a torrent of snow from their gullets, or create fantastic sculptures for use of battle as they change the field completely for their own advantages. Among other things, the Kosetsu clan is rather agile, their movements fluid and competent.
• *The Polar Bear summonings are common among this clan. Strengths:
• Ninjutsu Proficiency
• Wide scale attacks and proficiency with crowd control.
• Great speed and agility, being able to move fairly well.
• Strong healing abilities.
Weaknesses:
• They lack proficiency in Genjutsu.
• Members of this clan tend to be rather weak physically.
• Their skin is very cold to the touch.
Restrictions:
• All members of this clan must have water and wind as their chakra elements.
• All Kosetsu clan techniques are a variation of Yukiton.
Attribute:
• Toketsu: The air around the Kosetsu member is cold, and as such, they are not affected by any change in heat. However, because of this, their presence is easily noticed.
Clan/Kekkei Genkai Jutsus:
Jutsu Name: Ten no Yuki [ Heavenly Snow ]
Rank: A
Element: Yukiton
Classification: Supplementary
Description: Despite its rank, this is one of the signature techniques of the Kosetsu clan. After forming the required hand seals, a large multitude of light grey clouds will form in the sky above, drastically changing the environment. After the formation of the clouds [1 post] a large amount of snow will begin falling to the earth, in a blizzard like amount, quckly blanketing the area around.
[ Lasts [6] posts ]
Jutsu Name: Fierce Snowing at Will
Rank: A
Element: Yukiton
Classification: Supplementary
Description: Similar to pain's ability to make it rain, a high ranking Kosetsu clan member can easily cause the area around to begin snowing, easily transforming a nation into the land of snow. The snow created falls slowly as though created by natural means.
Jutsu Name:
Rank:
Element:
Classification:
Description:
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[ W i l l C r e a t e M o r e T e c h n i q u e s L a t e r ]
Will you be the head of the Kekkei Genkai (heads must be approved NPCs)? If not, who will? Yes, my new character Kona Yuki will be the clan head I suppose. ^-^ 
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Mental Neko-Senpai Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2012 5:51 am
Mental-Neko Master It looks good, however there should be draw backs to each seal release, increasing with each rank for obvious reasons. ^-^ I concur with your statement! I will be getting to that as I complete each respective move. Thanks for your feedback so far!
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2012 8:09 am
Clan/Kekkei Genkai Name: Tetsu no chi ( Iron Blood ) - Shouka Clan Three Words Describing the Clan/Kekkei Genkai: Blood, Discipline, Honor  Clan/Kekkei Genkai Description, History: There have been many blood kekkei genki over history, but the Tetsu no chi is barely known. Using the blood from their body along with chakra and zinc, they are able to make their blood as hard as steel. This can be used to make many things, keys, sembon, needles, and even up to swords about two feet in length. Along with the ability to make hardened blood, this also helps them with strength, for they can ( momentarily ) harden their blood in their veins, making it very hard to penetrate the skin or even blow it up
Tetsu no Chi is found strictly in the Shouka Clan, their jutsu being a rare cross-over of Doton and Katon single element users. The mixture somehow created a Kekkei Genki that uses blood, with certain Doton/Katon additives, like setting the blood on fire or hardening it at will. Hand seals are needed for a majority of the jutsu but some don't and others are passive.
The Shouka Clan is seriously religious about honor, in fact they have their own god, named Sountei. He is appearently the god of honor and tears and basically rules everything they do. There are customs that the Shouka Clan learns and uses from birth.
One: They can never interrupt anyone, no matter how important what they are going to say is. This results in physical punishment, often unneeded bloodletting.
Two: They must always pray four times a day to Shountei: once in the mouring, twice in the after noon (once before lunch and once after) and one at night. Disrespecting this causes a great punishment of fasting for two whole weeks and eating nothing but bread.
Three: A Shouka Clan member cannot, under any circumstances, kill an animal for any reason other than food. If done, they have to pray for twenty four hours for forgiveness.
Four: Cannot eat cinnamon, it is considered impure and evil. Mostly because almost everyone in the Shouka clan is allergic to it, this often causes health problems that they consider being infected with evil. On top of being in physical pain from a constricting throat, they have to endure and hour of torture of any type from the head of the clan.
Five: A Shouka man or boy cannot hit a woman, therefore, most of the time, they forfeit from the chuunin exams. This is considered an evil act and any Shouka Clan member who does it must pray for 24 hours every other day for a month.
Six: Shouka women or girls are not aloud to wear proactive things. This results in physical punishment along the likes of a fight with the Clan Head.
Seven: Nature is supposed to be there for a reason, no Shouka can chop down a tree or burn wood or anything of that sort before praying to Shountei in advance for forgiveness.
Eight: Shouka must respect any person, even younger than they are. Each person has ideas and goals and those must be respected as well. The Punishment for not obeying this is bloodletting.
Nine: Shouka can not intervene in a battle if it is for someone's honor, goal, or for revenge. This is seen to be a very rude act and can be punishable by extreme blood letting and jail for two days.
Ten: Failing to repay for any sins is unforgivable and can result in assassination.
The Shouka Clan lives outside of Iwa and lives in the mountains. They are very peace loving people and try to ignore fighting as much as they can. They think war and fighting are very evil things, but even so, they do admit that it exists and ready for it whenever they can. Strengths:
• Heightened Immunity to Taijutsu
• Speed and strength increases
• Intelligent
• Multitasking suddenly becomes very easy
Weaknesses:
• Extremely Weak to Raiton release
• Cannot fight women
• Often OVER think things
• Cannot kill animals including summoning animals or ninja hounds
Rules and Requirements:
• Must have Doton and Katon as two of their chakra natures
• Cannot wield wepons ( Requires both hands at all times )
• Cannot be a mean or rude person ( Unless rogue )
Clan/Kekkei Genkai Stages:
--- Stage one:
This is where Genin start, they can barely wield their blood abilities and can use some doton jutsu but no Katon, or if they have Katon as a main element, they cannot use Doton techniques. They are able to make a wield small projectiles and daggers. ( Sembon, shuriken and daggers up to two inches ) They can only learn techniques up to a B rank.
--- Stage two:
This is where Chuunin normally are. They have learned to wield their blood jutsu and can each about reach the higher end of A rank jutsu if trained often enough. At this point and time they can make medium projectiles like thick sembon, Kunai, 4 inch daggers and a small foot long sword. They can now Use up to B techniques in their other element.
Joushin Testu no Chi
--- Stage One:
This is where Jounin are. By now they have nearly mastered their blood jutsu and can wield large blood like projectiles like larger kunai, Fuma or demonwindmill Shuriken and their swords are about two feet long. They can now use both elements up to an S rank. For some reason they gain a weird white and black checkered pattern on their skin when using their technique. It is very faint, and can be barely seen.
-- Stage Two: Mastery
Kage or Sannin belong here. They have pushed the limits and have been rewarded with newer techniques. They can now make their own jutsu and can throw and create overly large projectiles and their swords have reached about two and a half feet in length. By now the checkered pattern on their skin has become very bold and their eyes turn a weird shade of gold, this is caused by a rush of Zinc and Iron to the eyes.
Clan/Kekkei Genkai Jutsus:
Ketsueki o hojū [ Replenishing Blood ]
Rank: E
Element: Blood Release
Classification: Passive
Description: The Testu no Chi user's blood replenishes faster than a normal human being, allowing for a ton of Blood-Related Jutsu.
Range: --
Kaifuku [ Illness Recover ]
Rank: E
Element: Blood Release
Classification: Passive
Description: It's the Tetsu no Chi's natural immunity to any poison below or equal to B rank. This is mostly because of the high amount of white blood cells and antibodies made along with the red blood cells that the Tetsu no Chi uses.
Range: --
Ketchū no kōtai o hakai [ Blood Antibody Destroy ]
Rank: D
Element: Blood Release
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: The Antibodies in the blood stream are slightly different and can be burned in order to put special effects in to the blood. This only lasts up to five [ 5 ] posts.
Acidic- Through the use of manipulating the number of white blood cells the blood can take on the properties of a corrosive acid. Depending on what types of anti-bodies are found within the body will determine what the blood can eat through.
Toxic- Through manipulating the antibodies in the blood stream the blood can take on a more hazardous property to others than its original. The type of toxin can be controlled by burning up antibodies in the blood stream. Once exhausted the user then become highly receptive to that type of toxin or illness.
Range: --
Tetsu hari [ Iron Needles ]
Rank: E
Element: Blood Release
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: By pricking their fingers, harden blood spills out and instantly harden. The user can shoot these small inch length needles can be shot from the fingers.
Range: Close Range from 5-10 feet
Ketsueki moeru [ Flaming Blood ]
Rank: C
Element: Blood Release, Katon
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: They can flick their blood at a oponent and catch it on fire after a hand seal. The blood does not harden. The needles can cause first degree burns and can be canceled by any normal suiton jutsu
Range: Close Range from 3-4 feet
Chi hari moeru [ Flaming Blood Needles ]
Rank: C
Element: Blood Release, Katon
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: Is similar to Tetsu hari [ Iron Needles ], but instead of normal needles, these needles are now on fire. Like Ketsueki moeru, these needles can only cause first degree burns and the fire on the can be canceled by any normal suiton ninjutsu. HOWEVER, the needle does not get destroyed with it.
Range: Close Range from 5-10 feet
Kōka tetsu no chi [ Hardening Iron Blood ]
Rank: C
Element: Blood Release, Doton
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: The person flings their blood at the opponent, this blood, once the user makes a single hand seal, will suddenly harden. This can stop a projectile from the weight of plaster it to a surface. This, if stepped on before the hand seal is made, and then hardened, can stick the opponent's feet to the ground and or wall or ceiling.
Range: Close Range from 3-4 feet
Rokkī chi hari [ Rocky Blood Needles ]
Rank: C
Element: Blood Release, Doton
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: Close to Tetsu hari. The user shoots or throws the same blood hardened needles at the opponent. These needles produce rock that envelops the immediate area, casing in something for about a foot or so. For example, if it were to hit the arm of the opponent, and then be activated, it would surround the arm in rock all the way around and one foot with the needle being in the middle.. which means 6 inches. This can weight down an opponent or render their hands useless if placed right.
Range: Close Range from 5-10 feet
Buraddi shuriken [ Bloody Shurkien ]
Rank: C
Element: Blood Release
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: Blood Is used to make various small Shuriken out of bloode
Range: Short to mid
Ketsueki Tate [ Blood Shield ]
Rank: C-A
Element: Blood Release, Doton
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: 6 x 6 ft (rank C) 15 x 15 feet (Rank B) 26 x 26 ft (Rank A)
Using his blood from an exposed wound the Akabane will create a shield ranging in size depending on how much blood is used. Once the shield is formed it will become like that of a steel wall protecting him from oncoming attacks. The more blood used the thicker and more powerful the shield becomes.
Range: ---
Ketsueki futtō [ Blood Boil ]
Rank: B
Element: Blood Release, Katon
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: Using blood on the floor a Tetsu no Chi can concentrate his chakra in to it to make it boil and become extremely hot. Not only does this give off the most disgusting smell, but it also can greatly burn the enemy.
Range: ---
Megurushi Hasu [ Lotus Mark ]
Rank: B
Element: Blood Release
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: After the correct hand signs are performed a lotus mark will appear on the abdomen. While this mark is on the flesh the body will produce blood three times faster than normal. After a certain amount of time passes the petals will disappear and the mark wears off once the last petal vanishes (time is determined by posts. The number of post the mark will appear will be determined by 6 sided dice roll, and counts down for every post after).
Range: ---
Ketsueki Daku [ Blood Clasp ]
Rank: B
Element: Blood Release, Doton
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: Using blood on the floor a Tetsu no Chi user can concentrate his chakra into it in order to create cuffs out of his blood grasping his opponent into place. This can be done by the blood becoming sticky gluing his opponents to the ground or manipulation to where the blood will grasp hold of his opponent and instantly solidify becoming as hard and thick as steel.
Range: ---
Suraiba no chi o bakuhatsu [ Exploding Slivers blood ]
Rank: B
Element: Blood Release, Katon, Doton
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: Using and blood from the body and or on the ground, the user manipulates it to harden, then explode after the temperature of the liquid blood inside has reached high enough to turn that blood in to a gas. It then explodes outwards in hardened shards.
Range: ---
Akurei Ketsueki Shikon [ Demon Blood Destruction ]
Rank: A
Element: Blood Release
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: Making contact with the large quantities of blood on the ground the user will use his chakra to control the blood and have the blood come up in rapidly solidifying spires. These spikes come up from the ground in every which way and continues to grow more spikes from the ones that have merged from the ground. These spires may be controlled as long as physical contact made.
Range: ---
Ketsueki Shigure [ Bloody Rain ]
Rank: A
Element: Blood Release
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: By using a large amount of blood the user generates a hanging mist. The blood can than be manipulated into projectiles and rained down on a target.
Range: ---
Ketsueki Yoroi no O-kami [ Bloody Armor of the Great God ]
Rank: S
Element: Blood Release
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: After a certain amount of damage is taken to a certain part of the body, the users blood will start to react in such a way to defend itself creating a very powerful armor around that part of the body. For instance if the users arm is severely damaged the blood will react and create a full armed blood gauntlet to defend itself. This will continue until the body is fully covered in this armor. The armor will goes as far as to replaced severed limbs. After the armor has been withdrawn back into the body if the user is not cared for they will die within 4 posts unless they receive immediate medical attention and multiple blood transfusions. This techniques also reduces anti-bodies count to 0.
Range: ---
Hakkekkyuu no O-Kami [ White Blood of the Great God ]
Rank: SS
Element: Blood Release
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: The blood burns all its remaining anti-bodies and becomes both poisonous and acidic. The blood changes from a dark red to white. While in this state the blood can be mixed with other liquids to extend the over all reach of any technique. This jutsu can only remain active for 7 posts. After which the blood will turn a red-ish black again. Exhausted and fatigued the user must seek immediate medical attention or death will occur in 3 posts.
Range: ---
[ More jutsu to come later ]
Will you be the head of the Kekkei Genkai (heads must be approved NPCs)? If not, who will? Nope. I really don't know, I guess the first person who applies for this position..
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Mental Neko-Senpai Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2012 10:49 am
A p p r o v e d
You bum, I was going to create a clan like this. :3 I had a character with abilities similar to this in a story I wrote a few months ago, I still might make an extension to your clan with the abilities my character had (If that's alright with you of course). Anyway, it looks good, approved. ^-^
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2012 5:01 pm
Mental-Neko Master A p p r o v e d
You bum, I was going to create a clan like this. :3 I had a character with abilities similar to this in a story I wrote a few months ago, I still might make an extension to your clan with the abilities my character had (If that's alright with you of course). Anyway, it looks good, approved. ^-^ Of course you can neko-san! And thank you.
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Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2012 10:13 am
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Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2012 7:17 pm
Mental-Neko Master It looks good, however there should be draw backs to each seal release, increasing with each rank for obvious reasons. ^-^ Alright, I have finally finished the clan, let me know if you think I need more, there are a lot of weaknesses, and a pretty good number of draw backs and requirements, I am happy to discuss any further changes though, let me know!
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Mental Neko-Senpai Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2012 6:00 am
Hi everyone, I'm sorry for my short absence, starting this afternoon, I will be active and rearing to go. ^-^
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