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PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 6:36 am


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Name: Ruelash (Rue-eh-Lash)

Race: Ice Tribe

Gender: Male

Base Traits:

Violent: Ruelash has violent, angry urges that he has trouble controlling. For now, he has put them to good use for his tribe's safety, but some wonder- and not in the good way- about what would happen if he became bored...

Bitter: Ruelash blames his problems and failings on external sources. He is never at fault; the world is! He never really takes responsibility for his issues or the consequences of his actions, aside from the act itself.

Chivalrous: If Ruelash has a soft spot in his angry turbulent soul, it is for women. The normally ornery male is respectful and polite to women, or attempts to be, going out of his way (to an extent) to provide small services (such as a blanket or a hand up), and pulling his punches if he should get into a fight with one. How he will react to the Alkidike is yet to be determined.


Class: Swordsman → Assasin

Personality:

Ruelash is a bitter, angry, violent young man. There doesn't seem to be any reason for his attitude: he has been this way since he was little, so you can't blame it on hormones, and he has a good family, so you can't blame it on them either. He can and does. He blames any problem he has on others, at least to himself.
Either way, his violent urges remain. When he was little, he used to hit other children and otherwise play rough. Seeing this, his parents and the elders tried to channel his anger into something benefiting the tribe, usually things such as scouting or checking a hunter's traps: things that get him away from the tribe.
As long as he's pointed in a direction, he is fairly livable to be around. This is in part because, on these missions, he has found that he likes to be away from his tribe in the middle of nowhere. Though he does return home, it is the main reason why he takes the tasks from his elders willingly and doesn't just act violently at being told what to do. That and he enjoys the fear of him that they show in keeping him busy. He knows that they fear him, and he almost enjoys how they try to control him. He is humoring them, for now.
He definitely doesn't take sitting still very well, and has a poor attention span when he isn't at least pacing. He likes to be active and doing something, preferably something violent: A fight would be the best. But if he cant do that, then at least moving around and doing something will keep him from starting something out of boredom.
In summary, Ruelash is kind of a vicious jackass.
He does, however, have a soft side towards women, bordering on the (slightly terrifying yet) charming. Violence and injustice with regards to women enrages him on a deep and primal level. He pulls his punches in duels against them, and, outside of a duel, would not willingly harm a woman.
Although he professes himself to hate interacting with other earthlings, he appears to do so in a very strength oriented way. If you can get past his uncouth orneryness and avoid getting challenged to a duel long enough, he might even say something insightful.

Further note: Definitely narcissistic. Highly self centered.

Description:

Eyes: Fierce, pale yellow amber.
Hair: Tangled or curly, up in a ponytail, nearly black.
Skin: Normal Ice Tribe coloration
Crystals: Neck and side, mainly on the right side. A few small stray crystals on the Left shoulder and one mid-arm.

Clothing:
~Wintery gear. Rough fur tunic and leggings with tassels and small trophies hanging off. Not as classy as other Ice Tribe Gear, as in it looks less fur lined and more like actual fur.
~stompy boots!

Accessories:

~ has a sharp piece of glass, attached to a thong of leather and bone on a belt made of rough hide.
~ Has the paw of some cute animal attached by leather as well, with a small crystal (you dont want to know the origins of that)... for luck.

History:


When Ruelash was little, he was a violent, tempermental child, lashing out at others and playing very rough with his peers. The elders decided to send him out on various missions where he could put his violent tendancies to good use, and hopefully ingrain in him the meaning of responsibility and, perhaps, mellow him a bit.
Its been a mixed success: he takes the missions willingly, but has no regard to the consequences of those missions. He just wants to get out there, do something, and hit stuff.
Early on, he was often assigned to assist his brother, a scout, which he took to with gusto as his brother was one of the few people he respected enough for 'like' to apply. Unfortunately in a stroke of bad luck, his brother took a fatal fall down a ravine. It was no fault of Ruelash and he knows it. But the village, knowing his tendencies, blamed him for the death, going so far as to spread rumors of murder. No evidence was found and his explanation was plausable, but it shook him up to no end and fueled his constant anger into a smouldering rage. After all, he hadn't done in his brother. And when he did kill someone, he knows that he would make sure they all knew.

Connections:
Father (Travelling): Ruelash's father, like his brother, is a scout and is often abroad, making sure the known paths through the wastes are clear, safe, and current. He's rarely home, but when he is he is a fairly amicable guy. He loves to play with his grandchildren. Ruelash is neutral towards him.

Mother (Deceased): His mother was a hunter, and very protective of him. She died of illness when he was young, maybe 6 or so. no matter what he did or didn't do, no matter what he was blamed for, she still found the time to give him a hug and a kiss. She is, perhaps, one of the root causes of his more pleasant attitude to women.

A sister: His sister is a sweet young woman. She is afraid of her brother- no so much what he could do to her personally, but mainly what he is capable of doing to others. She feels it is up to her to hold him back.

Veshki - brother (deceased): The only male Earthling that Lash could be said to have liked and respected. He looked up to his brother, but when veshki died the 'weak' way he did, lash felt betrayed somewhat.

Ranla – Sister-in-law: Ranla was Veshki's wife. She dislikes Ruelash intensely and tries to keep him away from her children... which is difficult when her daughters actively seek him out. She feels that he is responsible for her husbands death and remains convinced that he is a murderer.

Niece 1:
a very energetic lass, this niece thinks her uncle is the greatest. She loves talking his ear off. Its annoying but not so much so that he would hit her... yet.

Niece 2:
This niece is quiet and sweet. She, like her older sister, thinks her uncle is a good man deep down. She is a good cook and likes to bring him food and bandage up his wounds. It makes her feel warm and fuzzy and gives her a spring in her step.

Nephew: a mere infant. Neither knows what to think of the other and, if Ranla has her way, neither will really meet.





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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 11:10 am


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Despite the fact that battles are common within Tendaji, unjustified killing is frowned upon and punishable by death. If he has killed someone just because he wanted to, he is probably a wanted criminal who will be tried and, perhaps sentenced to death, whenever he’s found. You say that he was exiled, but if he was just randomly going around killing off his fellows, his life probably would’ve been ended to stop the treachery…
The government in the Wind Tribe is a bit sturdier than any of the other tribes, so it is highly unlikely that they would’ve given up their search for a monster… they would’ve recruited back-ups and killed him.

He seems very hard-hearted and lacking in conscience… so it seems strange to me that there would be any softness in his heart, even for those weaker than him. If he has enough of a conscience to think about it before attacking women, how can he be alright with spontaneously killing those who have done nothing to deserve death?

xD I certainly wouldn’t describe him as being on the chivalrous side…. Although it’s amusing to me if he thinks that hesitating to not kill someone constitutes as chivalry. I really can’t imagine him opening doors for women or bringing them gifts/doing things for them out of the kindness of his heart, because he thought she’d appreciate it.

Kana will have to take a look at your physical description and accessories before he could potentially get official art. Wind Tribe members don’t usually wear fur on their clothing; it doesn’t normally get quite that cold down at the base of the mountains, in Sauti. They do carry many different bags and satchels, due to their nomadic nature.

I think that Ruelash is a unique individual, but he definitely needs some editing to be able to survive in Tendaji.
If you'd like to PM me with your response to this, Draconic, I have a few suggestions that I think might make him work. c:

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 12:19 pm


Alright, description crit :}

Wind tribe members are typically varying degrees of blond, so if you're alright with it, "dark" would end up being like a sand-color, maybe light brown. If you want to make it more lively looking, it could have a hint of a more orange/red hue to give it a strawberry-ish color.

Typically, wind tribe members have crystals on their shoulders and arms (more-so on their elbows), but I'm fully alright with one or two stray crystals on the face (and the hand counts as arm, so that's alright).

I'm perfectly fine with all of the trinkets and trophies he wears for belts, and he sounds alright in his clothes except for the fur. It really is not cold enough for fur in Sauti. It's just cooler than the sweltering heat of Tale.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 7:55 am


updated

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 8:56 am


1. Why is he nice to women? What about females causes him to show them more mercy than anyone else.

2. How does the rest of the tribe react to him, do the people he used to torment avoid him, make his life more difficult etc? For someone as aggressive and anti-social as Rue appears to be life cannot be easy. You say he can focus his rage for the protection of the tribe but how many people would actually trust him?

3. Given that his rage appears to stem from some sort of personality disorder it might be a good idea to define the boundaries of it. How dangerous is he to others if he goes into a fit, is he cruel to the animals he hunts, cruel to animals in general? It's important to know if Rue is the person parents point out to their children and tell them never to speak to or not etc.

4. Just a general question but where exactly are you planning to go with Rue as a character, what sort of things do you want to do with him ala story arc and how do you plan to entice other people to want to rp with him?

5. What does Rue do when he's not out being violent, what does he think about, wish for, dream of etc

6. I'm curious about his family and how they react to / treat him now .

7. Also remember that he is a prentice which means that while the tribe may be sending him out to do things on occasion he would not have same amount of responsibilities and tasks assigned to him as someone older and who had already been promoted. Right now he'd be sort of like an unruly teenager being given tasks as a form of training and discipline, he's not a high ranking valuable person who's s**t they have to put up with, so there has to be a limit on what he can get away with.

I think there's a lot of potential for a good darker character here, he just needs to be a bit more strongly defined in the hows and why's of his personality, in my opinion.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 5:41 am


ok. Gonna do some quesitonaires. Will be posting them and then re-editing the thingie.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2012 6:42 pm


Still editing. My response to the questions, which you dont need to read, and is only for my future reference:


1. Why is he nice to women? What about females causes him to show them more mercy than anyone else.

He doesn't have a particular reason to be, if not nice, than not unpleasant to, women. He just likes women. Clearly hormones and an odd, odd mindset.

2. How does the rest of the tribe react to him, do the people he used to torment avoid him, make his life more difficult etc? For someone as aggressive and anti-social as Rue appears to be life cannot be easy. You say he can focus his rage for the protection of the tribe but how many people would actually trust him?

They dont like him, and they tend to either avoid him, have as little to do with him as possible, or deny him services. They don't outright upset him though: they dont want him to go apeshit on them

3. Given that his rage appears to stem from some sort of personality disorder it might be a good idea to define the boundaries of it. How dangerous is he to others if he goes into a fit, is he cruel to the animals he hunts, cruel to animals in general? It's important to know if Rue is the person parents point out to their children and tell them never to speak to or not etc.

He doesnt have fits so much as he is dangerous to provoke, as he takes to it with gusto and ferocity, and hes dangerously easy to provoke.
2. Animals: he is cruel but not unnecessarily cruel. Just merciless and pitiless. Sow while he might be willing to kill a little puppy, he wont do as those boys did in Elfen Lied and randomly murder the puppy. Torment it maybe. Hurt it a little. Make its owner cry and forcing them to give him something in return for the puppy. But he wouldn't feel like killing it. Just wouldnt see the point in killing such a wimpy, unchallenging thing. He'd be more likely to just leave it there injured and walk away bored.
Parents generally dont like him, and people, even those he didnt torment, either avoid him, whisper about him, or are just generally uncomfortable around him.


4. Just a general question but where exactly are you planning to go with Rue as a character, what sort of things do you want to do with him ala story arc and how do you plan to entice other people to want to rp with him?

he might very well be interested in the new tribes appearing in Zena. He might even try challenging them or stalking them... or just talking to pretty women. That too.

5. What does Rue do when he's not out being violent, what does he think about, wish for, dream of etc

he sulks.
And he enjoys, in a gruff way, nature and all of that stuff. Being away from the tribe suits him fine.


6. I'm curious about his family and how they react to / treat him now .

His sister is slightly afraid of him but knows that she has the power can hold him back, and that he listens to her. So she tries to keep on his good side so she can do her duty to her tribe and keep him from seriously hurting anybody.


He had a huge respect for his late brother, and regrets not being fast or strong enough to save him from a bad and unlucky fall... and is pissed because he was blamed for his death. He couldn't save him, but it wasn't his fault, damn it. They'll know when someone's death is his fault!

His sister in law hates him, makes sure he knows it, and keeps his nieces and nephews away from him.

His nephew is a teeny youngling. No opinions here.

His eldest Niece adores him in a sweet way for some reason, possibly out of rebelliousness. She likes to make him food and shes one of the few people he can do more than tolerate.

His second eldest niece is positively disposed to him, but keeps her distance all the same.

The ages for the nieces are... unclear in my head.

7. Also remember that he is a prentice which means that while the tribe may be sending him out to do things on occasion he would not have same amount of responsibilities and tasks assigned to him as someone older and who had already been promoted. Right now he'd be sort of like an unruly teenager being given tasks as a form of training and discipline, he's not a high ranking valuable person who's s**t they have to put up with, so there has to be a limit on what he can get away with.

Yeah, exactly. He's more sent out on busywork-that-gets-him-out-of-here-for-a-bit tasks than anything, like 'check these traps' or 'check on this person we actually like who's been out for a while' or... things like that.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 8:22 pm


edited... now on v3 @.@

I'm worried about overthinking him...

I really want a dark character but...

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 9:04 pm


[8/17/2012 11:40:11 PM] Ritsa: uugh that good forever
[8/17/2012 11:55:18 PM] Ritsa: what is are the boundries to his anger
[8/17/2012 11:55:29 PM] Ritsa: does he have any moments where he isn't angry?
[8/17/2012 11:55:58 PM] Ritsa: how does he react when hes beaten by another male earthling?
[8/17/2012 11:56:12 PM] Ritsa: just thoughts to think out to help flesh him out a bit : )



[9:05:19 AM] draconicfeline: i think i need more help with ruelash. hes kinda up your alley.
[9:05:44 AM] melanath: I probably did. My brain is not working well this week.
[9:06:25 AM] melanath: Just base him on Mel. Slightly mad, bitter and twisted, but deep down has a hard core of beliefs that he can't shake, even if he wants to.
[9:06:38 AM] draconicfeline: hmm. the hard core...
[9:07:00 AM] draconicfeline: Could be the chivalry, could be his love of living out in the wilds?
[9:07:10 AM] draconicfeline: i mean, hes in a village-level society but...
[9:07:25 AM] draconicfeline: he doesnt seem as lawful as mel
[9:07:57 AM] melanath: ...Mel... lawful?
[9:08:43 AM] melanath: You could have anything really. You could base his unshakable belief on his conviction that marmeit is better than mayo if you liked, lol
[9:08:54 AM] draconicfeline: O.o
[9:09:00 AM] draconicfeline: dafuq?
[9:09:28 AM] melanath: I was being facetious.
[9:09:32 AM] draconicfeline: lol
[9:09:43 AM] draconicfeline: He wouldnt know what either were XD
[9:10:00 AM] melanath: But you know what I mean. Dark and amoral outside, unshakable core of beliefs that keeps him going
[9:24:46 AM] draconicfeline: hmmm
[9:25:02 AM] draconicfeline: what else can you say about him?
[9:26:41 AM] melanath: Let the chivalrous nature break through of its own accord. Don't try to force it or else the character will come across as schitsophrenic. Instead, wait for opportunities to let it break out.
[9:28:21 AM] draconicfeline: how do i do that
[9:29:33 AM] melanath: wait until an opportunity arrives in the plot that would be of your character's interest. Like the boris thing when nath was going to burn down the village. Mel wouldn't have given a s**t and stayed out, except that he knew Boris would have hated it
PostPosted: Sat Aug 18, 2012 10:25 am


Awww, baby! D: He’s just meant to be an angry thing… all those violent tendencies, fueled by the mean, mean tribe after the only person he ever liked’s death.
/shakes head/

I like Ruelash a lot better now. =D He’s still pretty vicious (I’d like to see what would happen if he met Jerarda… lawl), but in a way that the tribe would probably be fearful of him and the Elders walking on eggshells to keep him busy and as non-threatening as possible. After all, it’s much better to keep dangerous people close than to turn them loose. >>;

Okay, so, only two real questions for you:

What are his parents like and how does he feel about them?

Aaand I still want a better excuse for how he treats women, because hormones can have the opposite effect on some people, making them even more mean to the people the find attractive. So, maybe something happened in his very young childhood where a girl was nice to him, or maybe there’s some female who believed he hadn’t killed his brother… just some sort of more concrete explanation as to why his violent urges are quelled by a pretty girl.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2012 1:32 pm


A bit of editing :3

He now has a mommy and a daddy :3
PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2012 8:21 pm


I like the thought of his mom being the root for why he's gentler towards women. Perhaps you could carry that further - were there other women who were kind to him as a child? And, as contrast, were other males negative or cruel or hard on him? I'm not sure if gender roles have been really established for the Ice tribe at this point but his treatment of women could also be related to how other males treat them as well.

I would be curious why he blames his troubles on everybody else, and I'm not sure if you've answered this already. Is he in denial? Does he have narcissistic tendencies and truly believe he can do no wrong? (Ohgawd, sorry the social worker in me is coming out) Is it just an easy way to channel his anger?

Since the Elders send him out to help re-focus his anger, does he recognize this as a necessity? If he does, does he make efforts to re-direct his anger as well, or does he think that it is other people's job to find things for him to do?

I really like your character and I'd also love to see him and my own quest character Shiri interact at some point. I think that there would be a lot of really interesting plot and growth potential there. Good luck!

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2012 7:26 pm


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PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2012 9:24 pm


Oh, hi there!
Just a few more baby questions. I feel like he's coming along splendidly. =D

You mention that "he's humoring them, for now." Is he plotting something against them? Does he think that following along with their desires is the best thing for him at the moment? Is he worried that, if left on his own, he won't be able to control his temper as well as he can with the Elders giving him tasks?

I agree with Fae's comment about his mother being a root in his kindness towards women. Since she died when he was so young, he might even be unaware of the effect she's had on him, but I like it.

At some point, it might be nice to give names to the sister, nieces, and nephew - and perhaps being able to add a few of them to the adoptions page.=D
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