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♝Deborah Daymare - 7th Division Captain

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2012 5:56 pm


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► Personal Information

    Full Name: Deborah Daymare
    Nickname/s:
    Famous Title:
    Gender: Male
    Ethnicity: African-American
    Physical Age: 25
    Real Age: 480
    Height: 6'0"
    Hair Colour: Black
    Eye Color: Brown
    Reiatsu Color: Purple

    Biography:
    Deborah was not always such a serous person, in the past he was laid-back all the time and didn't even want to be a captain. Deborah always made an effort to appear at the same level of everyone around him, not that he was extraordinary or anything but he trained a lot in secret had a skill level fare greater then his rank. Deborah enjoyed being in the middle because he though no one would expect much of him but he could stay at the bottom forever. Dispirit his best efforts Deborah found himself getting reconized and moving up in rank to Vice Captain at the same time he gained the ability to use bankai and the 7th Division lost it's captain. Deborah felt it was time he stepped, he went strait to the Head Captain and showed him he had what it took to be a captain, after that the rest is obvious.

    Personality:
    Deborah is normally a serous and work-oriented person most of the time and does not allow any foolishness from his division members. However on other occasions he may be more laid-back, patent, and even a little sarcastic. Hes very confident in his abilities but never under estimates others based on rank. Daborah likes to finish battle of quickly and never holds back on an enemy, using bankai more often shikai.

    Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual
    Likes: Unknown
    Dislikes: People that fight for fun
    Family / Bloodline: Unknown

    Affiliation: Gotei 13
    Division: 7
    Rank: Captain


► Attributes

    Offense: 90
    Defense: 100
    Intelligence: 80
    Reiatsu: 100
    Physical Strength: 90
    Mobility: 90
    ► Total:550


► Zanpukuto

    Zanpukuto Name: Akuma Jū Daburu [Japaness for Demon Gun Double
    Type: Kido
    Unreleased form A normal Katana
    Zanpakuto Spirit
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    Zanpakuto Spirit Personality: Akuma Jū Daburu has a very serious personality and is often overbearing.

►Shikai

    Release Command: "Ready to fire, Akuma Jū"
    Shikai Appearance:
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    Zanpakuto becomes a large bazooka that fires equity large beams of Reiatsu, nicknamed the Kido Bazooka
    Physical Changes: None
    Battlefield Changes:None
    Shikai Boosts: Spirit Energy & Offense
    Shikai Techniques:

    Kido Beam: Consists of firing a powerful blast of concentrated spiritual energy at the target from his Kido Bazooka, blast are very quick moving and can be fired at a rapid rate.
    Duration N/A
    Cool Down N/A
    Power Level 6/10

    Burst Shot: A greatly larger and more powerful blast of energy shot from the kido bazooka, capable of hitting large areas and multiple targets at once.
    Duration 1 turn
    Cool Down 5 turns
    Power Level 8/10


► Bankai

    Bankai Command: "Bankai, Akuma Jū Daburu"
    Bankai Appearance: Two Kido Bazookas
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    Physical Changes: none
    Battlefield Changes: none
    Bankai Boosts: Mobility & Strength
    Bankai Techniques:

    Kido Beam: Consists of firing a powerful blast of concentrated spiritual energy at the target from his Kido Bazooka, blast are very quick moving and can be fired at a rapid rate.
    Duration N/A
    Cool Down N/A
    Power Level 7/10

    Burst Shot: A greatly larger and more powerful blast of energy shot from the kido bazooka, capable of hitting large areas and multiple targets at once.
    Duration 1 turn
    Cool Down 5 turns
    Power Level 9/10

    Double Burst Shot: Basicly the same as a normal Bust Shot but fired using both kido bazooka for even greater coverage of the targeted area, dodging is unlikely
    Duration 2 turn
    Cool Down 8 turns
    Power Level 10/10



► Shinigami Abilities


    Zanjutsu
    Darborah's sword combat skill is nothing short of what is expected from a captain.

    Hohō:
    Daborah is extremely skilled at using High speed techniques and performs actions like shunpo effortlessly

    Shunpo (瞬歩, Flash Steps)

    Senka (閃花, Flash Blossom)

    Damage Resistance: Deborah is cable of creating an armor with his spiritual energy in a similar way as Kenpachi Zaraki, capable of preventing enemies weaker enemies from cutting his body.
    [3/5]

Hadō

    1. Shō (衝, Thrust)

    4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning)

    11. Tsuzuri Raiden (綴雷電, Bound Lightning)

    31. Shakkahō (赤火砲, Red Fire Cannon)

    32. Ōkasen (黄火閃, Yellow Fire Flash)

    33. Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down)

    54. Haien (廃炎, Abolishing Flames)

    58. Tenran (闐嵐, Orchid Sky)

    63. Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Sear)

    73. Sōren Sōkatsui (双漣蒼火墜, Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down)

    88. Hiryūgekizokushintenraihō (飛竜撃賊震天雷炮, Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon)

    90. Kurohitsugi (黒棺, Black Coffin)

    91. Senjū Kōten Taihō (千手皎天汰炮, Thousand-Hand Bright Heaven Culling-Sear)

    Unnumbered Gaki Rekkō (牙気裂光, Raging Light Fang)
    [7/10]
    Unnumbered Hyōga Seiran (氷河晴嵐, Glacier Vapor Storm)
    [7/10]

Bakudō:

    1. Sai (塞, Block)

    4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope)

    8. Seki (斥, Repulsion)

    9. Geki (撃, Strike)

    9. Hōrin (崩輪, Disintegrating Circle)

    21. Sekienton (赤煙遁, Red Smoke Flight)

    26. Kyokkō (曲光, Bent Light)

    30. Shitotsu Sansen (嘴突三閃, Beak-Thrust Tri-Flash)

    37. Tsuriboshi (吊星, Hanging Star)

    39. Enkōsen (円閘扇, Round Lock Fan)

    58. Kakushitsuijaku (摑趾追雀, Trace-Catching Pursuit Sparrows)

    61. Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six-Staff Light Prison)

    62. Hyapporankan (百歩欄干, Hundred-Step Rail Parch)

    63. Sajō Sabaku (鎖条鎖縛, Chainlink Chain Bond(s))

    73. Upgaded- Tozanshō (倒山晶, Inverse Mountain Crystal)

    75. Gochūtekkan (五柱鉄貫, Five-Post Iron Weights)

    77. Tenteikūra (天挺空羅, Heavenly Void Net)

    79. Kuyō Shibari (九曜縛, Nine-Daylight Bonds)

    81. Upgraded- Dankū (断空, Severing Void)



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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 1:58 pm


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I have completed my character and it is ready for your opinion, though I already can guess what you will have problems with.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 4:22 pm


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Midnight Xsis


I have completed my character and it is ready for your opinion, though I already can guess what you will have problems with.


It's actually pretty good, despite some missing details. Do you think you could cut your attribute points down by another 10? Since your total is 560 right now. And the only clear problem is that there's way too many of the 10/10 shots.

Maybe make it you can make 30 of the weaker shots but only say...15 of the 10/10 ones. Is that okay?
PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 5:32 pm


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Oh just a bunch of typos xd only the double bust was suppose to be 10/10

as for making the 30 weaker shots none of them are 10/10 the generic shot is suppose to be 5/10 so just more typos fixed

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 6:01 pm


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Oh just a bunch of typos xd only the double bust was suppose to be 10/10

as for making the 30 weaker shots none of them are 10/10 the generic shot is suppose to be 5/10 so just more typos fixed


Ah my bad. I read it wrong too. Sorry! You know you can have more than one 10/10 attack ;>

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 6:12 pm


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I'd rather not, it be too flashy. I found another typo the Damage Resistance: ability was suppose to 190 total for strength and offense in-order to cut him and I change that aswell

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 6:14 pm


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I'd rather not, it be too flashy. I found another typo the Damage Resistance: ability was suppose to 190 total for strength and offense in-order to cut him and I change that aswell


Actually about that damage resistance...leave that for now. I'm setting up a PL system for the defensive skills as well. It'll be done in tomorrow or something.

Now go RP~ Oh, don't forget to do your Captain's Duties.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 7:14 pm


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I'd rather not, it be too flashy. I found another typo the Damage Resistance: ability was suppose to 190 total for strength and offense in-order to cut him and I change that aswell


Actually about that damage resistance...leave that for now. I'm setting up a PL system for the defensive skills as well. It'll be done in tomorrow or something.

Now go RP~ Oh, don't forget to do your Captain's Duties.

damage resistance is separate from PL it's an ability that works likes an arrancar's heirro

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 7:15 pm


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Midnight Xsis

I'd rather not, it be too flashy. I found another typo the Damage Resistance: ability was suppose to 190 total for strength and offense in-order to cut him and I change that aswell


Actually about that damage resistance...leave that for now. I'm setting up a PL system for the defensive skills as well. It'll be done in tomorrow or something.

Now go RP~ Oh, don't forget to do your Captain's Duties.

damage resistance is separate from PL it's an ability that works likes an arrancar's heirro


It's not separate. The PL has a defensive section as well, except it's not up yet so don't mind it.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 2:33 pm


I went and fixed them issues so now my gonna make this officials, Power Levels added, New Kido added, other stuff added.

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