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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2012 2:39 pm




Name:
==> FIND YOUR NAME
That's not a quest at all! No games, no daring acts...boring! All the same, your name is Nervit Lafute. If you tweaked your name a little bit, you might get Nerve Fault, and the middle of your name spells Vital. But of course that's not anything to do with you. You're hardly a well-read troll and as far as you - and anybody else - know it's the first syllables spoken by pyredad.

Blood colour:
==> CHOOSE YOUR CLASS
You're a short-lived fast-paced never-stay-down orangeblood girl. You're smack-dab in the middle of yellow and red, for all it matters - a lowblood is a lowblood, after all. The caste system to you is a matter of normalcy. Yeah, you don't like it, what lowblood does, but it's how the world works, how the world has always worked, and probably always will.


Gender:
==> SELECT GENDER
Luckily for you your body matches you perfectly. Female, that is. You might have short hair and be scarred up but your thoratic chest sacks are pretty obvious along with your more female figure – that is slender with some pretty nice hips.


Symbol:
==> ASSIGN SYMBOL

The symbol you have been assigned to match your caste status is a flame-like image. It's got a thick outer casing that's slightly decorative, more like a lamp, then an inner flame symbol. It's a pretty visual symbol compared to some of the more abstract ones, but you're okay with that.



Personality:
==> DETERMINE ATTRIBUTES
The first thing people notice about you is your scars - the ones on your skin and the silvery robotic limbs; they tell every troll two things. One; you're a fighter. And two; you don't know when to give up. One robotic limb could be an accident; two means you're either hot-headed or accident prone. You're a bit of both. You leap into most things with nigh on a thought on whether you're actually qualified to do it, and you don't like to give up.

The most accurate description of you would probably be a THRILLSEEKER. You always want the next adventure, the next adrenalin rush. Be it desert-surfing or mountain climbing, sassing a highblood or eating some potentially-poisonous food cooked by the person you're crashing with, you never say no to a challenge. You're spunky and loud and really a terrible example of a lowblood because you never shut up and never stay down and never let anybody tell you what or what not to do.

(your lusus would be so ashamed.)

You don't like lusii. They make you sad. You don't have one, and if anybody asks you never had one! Never! This leads us onto another of your personality points; denial. You refuse to accept things that you don't like. This includes mentions of your past, concilatory gestures and anything that MAKES YOU FEEL. You know that eventually, you'll need a matesprit and a kismesis, but adulthood is so far off, and frankly you don't really give yourself much of a chance of making it. You know that your behaviour is unacceptable. You know that you're a borderline cull case with your metal limbs and messed up thinkpan but you can't stop.

Nobody needs you anyway.

But that's really morbid and paints a picture that isn't quite you. Despite all this...JUNK INSIDE you generally act REALLY PEPPY and OUTGOING and you're always ready to chat with, about or up people! You don't like SERIOUS EMOTIONAL CONVERSATIONS though, but other than that you're ready to chat about anything and to just about anyone.

Strengths:
==> BE STRONG
Adventurous
YOU NEVER SAY NO TO A CHALLENGE. Be it stealing or climbing, free-falling or spelunking. Fighting or sparring, desert-surfing or seeing how far you can get out to sea before a seadweller starts to chase you. You live for adrenalin highs, that moment when your body stars to say : oh ********, and your brain is flying on chemicals. When your bloodpusher is pounding away like it's going to burst and your muscles are trembling and your pupils are dilated and everything boils down to this. one. moment. Well. That's when you truly feel alive.

Accomplished FLARPer
You've reached the top level for your class. You're a decent clouder (though you tend to overlook a few things here and there) as well as a player. You're actually a little well-known in the FLARP world. Your FLARP character that is, not you as a person. This means you are good at COMBAT, but more than that you are good at TACTICS and POSISTIONING. This includes climbing rockfaces and attacking from a distance, as well as hiding underwater breathing through a reed, but not so much long-term planning such as traps or ambushes. You've made a name for yourself in FLARP as the PEERLESS PLEBEIAN. This is intriguing enough without being overly offensive to highbloods. Indeed, the plebeian in the title means you can get away with playing FLARP with almost anyone. Of course this often ends badly for others. You are very, very good.

Social

Despite your dislike for emotions, you have a visceral need for interaction. You're LONELY. You talk to anyone who'll listen. And when you're not on the hunt for an adrenalin high by inciting fights, you're actually a pretty decent listener. You even give pretty decent advice and you have a whole bunch of stories to tell. You generally keep your socialising to the lower blooded castes and the occasional mid-blood, because high-blood socialising usually ends pretty badly for one of you. (usually you.)

Quick Reflexes

FLARP has also heightened already good reflexes into what could almost be called ninjaquatic-level skill. Or could also be called over-active paranoia. If trolls had such a thing. Even when you're hiding in FLARP you struggle to keep still. When you talk to people you tend to runyourwordstogether and talk too much too fast. You never struggle to come up with an answer or pause at awkward moments in a fight because after years of snap-second desicions it comes naturally to you. Your brain is overactive quite alot of the time. Most of the time this is very useful to you, but occasionally it does get you in trouble.

Flaws:
==> BE WEAK
Footloose
And fancy free. You don’t stick around anywhere for longer than a few days. You’re a wanderer, an adventurer, you sleep in half-built shacks that might crumble in the sun, and you NEVER EVER stay long enough to start to care about someone. You're a social butterfly and you can get on with anyone, but you're just that - a butterfly. You dart from place to place, person to person. It's difficult for you to form lasting relationships because you're too afraid that they'll get hurt. Not that you'd ever admit that.

Afraid
And deep down you’re afraid. You love being social but you're afraid to stay long enough to care about someone because you don't want to lose them again. You're afraid of highbloods because they're unpredictable. You're afraid hanging out with lowbloods will increase the chances of you getting culled. You're afraid of getting culled. You're afraid of surviving to adulthood because then you'll be put to work - as a lowblood you don't have any rights. You want to rebel but you're afraid of getting caught - do you know what they do to rebellers? You act like a bigshot but you're afraid of letting people in. You are so, so very afraid of your emotions. You're afraid of the world and you close it all up so nobody can tell.

Reckless
We've already mentioned YOU DON'T SAY NO TO A CHALLENGE. This means however, you often take on too many! You've hurt yourself doing this before - taking on a seven-day fast whilst mountainclimbing led to the loss of your leg and some nasty frostbite scars. You tend to dive into things without considering how they might hurt you, and usually you do end up hurt!

Casteist
You're afraid of everybody. And thanks to a society where fear is a weakness to be eroded, it turns into hate. You hate highbloods. You hate them for having longer lives, for being stronger, healthier. For getting more money and being the cream of the crop. You hate them for being unpredictable, for being dangerous, for being able to have fun. You hate their giant houses. You hate lowbloods. You hate them for being weak, for being easy to control, for the fact they'll dob others in to help themselves. You hate that nobody stands up and says 'this is wrong' and if they do they get culled. You hate that they have to scrape by on nothing. You hate them for surviving and perpetuating more of themselves. In essence no matter what blood shade they are, you distrust them for various reasons.

Weapon:
==> CHOOSE YOUR CLASS
Your FLARP CLASS is a WHIRLING DERVISH. Your weapon fits with this title easily, two razor-sharp almost diamond-shaped blades attached to a length of long chain. You also have two ROBOTIC LIMBS which can get you out of a pinch by virtue of being pretty darn strong.


Appearance:
==> ROLL YOUR STATS
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You rolled and you rocked! Yeah!

Home:
==> RETURN TO BASE CAMP

You actually don't really have a basecamp. I mean...you do. You have an apartment in a hivestem in New Hemisect. But the key for it is rusted, and if anybody were to break down the door, they'd find it covered in layers and layers of dust. (They'd also find some brown bloodstains on the floor, and the bones of a giant salamander.) You haven't got back there since you were three sweeps old. You're not the only hiveless lowblood, but you're certainly one of the more hand-to-mouth ones. You tend not to stay in a single place for more than a few nights. You crash with FLARPing buddies or hole up in a cave, and once or twice you've made shelters yourself out of blackout cloth and tent poles.

Lusus:
==> REMEMBER PYREDAD

You'd rather not.

==> DWELL ON HIS LOSS

You'd really rather not, mysterious voice.

==> PRETEND HE'S STILL ALIVE?

If your lusus was alive, your life would be a whole bunch different. Your pyredad was a tiny little lusus - a terrestial salamander, no good for attacking or fighting. He always told you to PICK YOUR FIGHTS and TO KNOW WHEN TO BACK DOWN. If he was still around you'd probably be more of an appropriate lowblood. You'd be like you were when he was alive. Calm and quiet and subservient, always ready to help out a highblood that needed assistance. You were almost destined to be a PERFECT SERVANT. Until, you know. He died. He died being crushed in a highblood’s lusus’ jaws after they’d ordered you around for two weeks. You lost your arm too.

After that THINGS CHANGED.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2012 2:51 pm


just to let you know, she'll be classified as orangeblood :3

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 9:38 am



Derpherp, I shouldn't write up quests at midnight. /changes/
PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 12:41 pm


she's pretty good! nothing seems glaringly out of place or needs fixing, it's mostly information that you're lacking.

first off, while you mention her lusus is dead and gone, what was it's species?

The social trait breaks off at the end mid-sentance, and when i read 'overload' i didn't think of what it describes. Uhhm, i'm trying to think of better words to describe it, reckless would work? It seems that she does things without thinking about how they'd hurt her, so i think that would describe it better?

For location, since you said her hive is in NHC, that's the background i'd put on her cert. Just checking if that sounds ok, or does she hang out in another area more often?

I really like her accomplished flarper strength, it's pretty unique and makes sense! :3 I am curious though, if she's so wild and thrill seeking, quick to charge into danger, it seems a little weird that she'd be good at the clouding side of the game, tactics and planning, as those mindsets usually clash. I still think that if she was more focused on the combat side, it would be a good skill, as flarping is essentially combat training disguised as a game for younger trolls.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 1:00 pm



Lusus was a salamander, edited that in~ The highblood took offense to the fact it was semi-aquatic. *n*b

Oops, yes. I wrote something then decided it didn't quite fit, I'll just n** the last two words off, thanks.
Also reckless does fit better and I added in what you said, that describes it aptly.

No, she hangs out in NHC most of the time, being the busiest place that's where the most FLARPers are.

Yes, that's a fair point. I edited that in so it's more combat-posistioning than long term planning such as traps or tactics and changed it to decent clouder rather than good. *n* b
PostPosted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 4:11 pm


"long-term planning such as traps or You've made a name for yourself"


when you fix that, quote me and i'll approve her :>

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 5:23 pm


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"long-term planning such as traps or You've made a name for yourself"


when you fix that, quote me and i'll approve her :>




Huh, lost a word there. Mysterious! FIXED. 8D<3

(thankyou ami for all these super-fast crits.)
PostPosted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 5:26 pm


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PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2012 6:06 am


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Name:
==> FIND YOUR NAME
Pyredad graciously giften upon you the name Nervit Lafute. Though highbloods may of course call you whatever they want – you would never dare to contradict someone of a higher status than you, so you answer to most things.

Blood colour:
==> CHOOSE YOUR CLASS
You are a orange-blooded young lady. This blood colour means (as your lusus has repeatedly drilled into you) that you are liable to be culled very easily unless you behave perfectly! You dedicate yourself to being a perfect young servant and it makes your lusus very, very proud of you.

Gender:
==> SELECT GENDER
Luckily for you your body matches you perfectly. Female, that is. You have long hair neatly tied and with little brown ribbons in it.


Symbol:
==> ASSIGN SYMBOL

The symbol you have been assigned to match your caste status is a flame-like image. It's got a thick outer casing that's slightly decorative, more like a lamp, then an inner flame symbol. It's a pretty visual symbol compared to some of the more abstract ones, but you're okay with that.



Personality:
==> DETERMINE ATTRIBUTES
You strive very hard to be the PERFECT LOWBLOOD. This means you are SERVILE, SOFT-SPOKEN and READY TO PLEASE. Your lusus and yourself have a modest home in a busy hivestem that is kept neat and tidy. This neat and tidiness is a good practice for your main hobby – serving highbloods! Lowbloods are destined either to a life of servitude or life on the front lines. You are most certainly not suited for the latter, so you best dedicate yourself to the former!
Most of your hobbies are themed around this. You enjoy STITCHING, but mostly repair work instead of actual seamstressing. This also helps you in your THRIFTINESS. Lowbloods don’t have a lot of cash to burn, and even trading or bartering is difficult. Your jumper is a cast-off from an older neighbour that you dyed the proper colour, and your dress is made of a skirt you found in a dumpster. Whilst you couldn’t sew anything new, you’re certainly pretty handy with alterations!

This thriftiness applies to other things too – whilst you’re thorough with your servitude, you never buy expensive cleaning materials when cheap alternatives work just as well. You MAKE YOUR OWN BLENDS OF TEA by harvesting and drying out the leaves.


Strengths:
==> BE STRONG
Quick Reflexes
Serving means picking up things. It means catching things people drop and dodging out of the way when what you thought was rubbish turns out to be a vicious squeakbeast. Your lusus isn’t big enough to protect you and you’re not old enough to do more than whack it with a broom so you’re used to dodging, running and in general getting the heck out of the way! Your reflexes are well-trained and rather fast indeed. This also applies to speech! You always tend to know what to say and how to react thanks to pyredad’s training, and unless you’re doing it strategically, you don’t umm and ahh like some lowbloods. That could be annoying, after all!
Appropriate
You would never dream of sassing a highblood. You are always willing to help them out. You never use rude words and you don’t quadrant dream above your station! (Okay you might have a few fantasies now and then about a highblood being so taken by your care of their belongings that they become your pale protector, but you’re allowed dreams, okay! You would never ever propose anything in reality.) You are subservient to those higher than you, civil to those on the same level, and distantly polite to the few redbloods lower than you.

Caring
You really care about the people you serve. You check their sopor mixes are clean and strain them out by hand if the silly trolls have got in with bleeding cuts that makes the sopor clot or left food crumbs in so mold begins to grow. You fold their beautiful clothes so there isn’t a single crease. Part of this is due to pyredad’s upbringing but the other part is honest gentility. You care about people. You enjoy talking to people, striking up conversation. Helping them if you can or just being a listening ear if you can't. You like making tea, pouring from a pot into translucent cups and watching people's faces light up as they appreciate the blend. Sometimes when you’re tired-dizzy and you sink into the not-very-clean sopor you can afford you think you might have been better born as a jadeblood, born to look after grubs and tend to the mother of all trolls. But that is a treasonous thought, so you don’t think it very often.
Flaws:
==> BE WEAK
Biddable
You do what you’re told, even if you don’t like it. Pyredad is very exacting about this - if you obey you're safe, if you do what you're told and do it well then you're a good troll, best grubling. If you don't you're in trouble, you'll die you'll get hurt you'll get culled. So as soon as a highblood gives you an order you do your best to complete it to their satisfaction and the highest standard you can. Even if it's really gross like that one time you had to clean up after a cull and it gave you night-terrors even in the sopor and Pyredad had to lick your face over and over to catch all of your tears.

Afraid
Pyredad is always telling you you might get culled. You know that some of it is because he’s paranoid he can’t protect you as well as a bigger, stronger lusus might, and that he worries. But some of it is true, and it makes you so afraid. You don’t want to die! Or get culled! Whichever! You like life. It’s full of exciting adventures and interesting people – even if according to Pyredad 80% of those people want to hurt you – and whilst you keep a veneer up, a lot of the time you are pretty darn scared. It’s not like Pyredad can protect you, after all. He’s too small, too weak, too amphibious. You spend most of your time caring for him instead of the other way around.

Casteist

You might serve highbloods but that doesn’t mean you don’t hate them. You resent the caste system at the same time you embrace it. This dichotomous opinion causes you stress, most of the time, and comes out as casteism. The higher the highblood the more subservient you are whilst being reticent to involve yourself personally with them. The lower the lowblood the more you feel sorry for them but also the more you're afraid to associate with them incase they have unsuitable behaviours. Essentially you believe the worst about everyone. This doesn't really intefere with you feeling sympathy and caring about them (because all trolls are broken really) but it does feed into your paranoia about people.

Appearance:
==> ROLL YOUR STATS
You dress appropriately with most of your skin covered and only in browns and blacks. You wouldn’t dare dress in anything else! Your hair is kept long so you can practice braiding and brushing without causing pain – appropriate skills for any young maid to know! You don’t ever make it too fancy, though.

Home:
==> RETURN TO BASE CAMP
You live in a modest hivestem in the middle of New Hemisect. You count yourself lucky to have any home at all, even if the ceiling drips and the respiteblock's tiles are cracked. You know a few people who run about with suncloth and poles, waking at the crack of nightfall and living a life even less pleasant than yours!
Lusus:
==> REMEMBER PYREDAD
Why would you need to remember him? He’s right here! Pyredad is a little amphibious salamander who mainly lives in your collar, whispering advice consistently (and sometimes annoyingly.) You keep damp cloth inside your big collar especially for him so he doesn’t dry out and in the pockets of your pinafore you keep a water spray just in case.

Pyredad worries and bugs and fusses, and fusses and bugs and worries! He’s not big enough to protect you physically so he has to make sure you don’t ever (ever) get into any trouble by talking instead.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2012 12:15 pm


hey, kid looks good so far, the one thing i'm a little hesitant to mark off is the fact that the strengths and flaws are so different from her teen stage. while i get that she's changed a lot, why doesn't she have the social trait when she's little, or the quick reflexes one while she's grown up? what happened to her thinking the worst of every blood caste?

try and see how many parts you can bring together, she's still the same troll after all!

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2012 1:03 pm


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hey, kid looks good so far, the one thing i'm a little hesitant to mark off is the fact that the strengths and flaws are so different from her teen stage. while i get that she's changed a lot, why doesn't she have the social trait when she's little, or the quick reflexes one while she's grown up? what happened to her thinking the worst of every blood caste?

try and see how many parts you can bring together, she's still the same troll after all!



Swift Reflexes leads onto the FLARPing trait - Pyredad would NEVER let her FLARP as a youngster, and it builds into her fighting/flarping trait. *n*b

I thought the same with the gentle-->Social trait, also.

She still does think the worst of everyone! I'll edit that into her teen profile in the afraid section. -edits-
PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2012 1:14 pm


Idk it's a little hard to see the connections, when for example, gentle says nothing about talking to other trolls. it actually reads more like 'doormat', and i'm not sure how it helps her??

also several parts of quick reflexes seem to disappear when she gets older, like her fast talk. also flarper never says anything about quick reflexes at all?? it's about tactics and positioning.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2012 4:02 pm


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Idk it's a little hard to see the connections, when for example, gentle says nothing about talking to other trolls. it actually reads more like 'doormat', and i'm not sure how it helps her??

also several parts of quick reflexes seem to disappear when she gets older, like her fast talk. also flarper never says anything about quick reflexes at all?? it's about tactics and positioning.




Renamed gentle to caring, and edited it to get across more what I tried to.

Added both 'casteist' and 'quick reflexes' to her adult profile as four +/- are allowed. c:

*u*
Sorry this took so long, RL ate me.
Thankyou for everything, you know.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 3:41 pm


sorry for the delay!
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for the kid and adult changes

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