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Name: Weywot Kuiper
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Blood colour: Blue #0000CD This color hex code

Gender: Female

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Personality: Awkward. Shy. Loud.

Since Weywot spends, literally, most of her time under ground in the dark, she's not up to date on everything. Speaking with other trolls is a chore for her and she doesn't really like to do it. However, since her Badger mom is getting out of hand and old, Weywot has been spending more and more time away from her, thinking about how she needs to merge herself into troll society somehow.

Talking with other trolls, they will notice she tends to speak loudly, despite how painfully awkward it is. She also doesn't speak unless spoken too, in fear of looking like a complete moron. Out of fear, she sometimes says the most awkward, inappropriate things based on assumptions she makes about a fellow troll.

Once someone gets to know her, though, she's a huge bundle of energy that seems unstoppable. She'll listen to problems, maybe quip up some kind of pity insult or something to make someone feel better. If she thinks of you as a really good friend she'll get sassy and sarcastic with you.

She was educated in the hemospectrum, however....

Due to her life underground she didn't have much contact with troll society. If she does run into some trolls she feels more awkward around them than superior. If it was up to her there would be no hemospectrum and she would treat everyone equally without worrying about scarying them away when she's more scared of them or living up to the image of being a blueblood.

Strengths:

▲ Hardworking: Any project she starts, she'll put 110% into and see it through to the very end. She'll never stop mid way, no matter how hard it is. She might take a break from it to get her thoughts together, if it is a stubborn project, to figure out a better way to go about it, but she always picks it back up.

▲ Energetic: No one can say she's not an energetic troll. She likes to just go, go, go until she can't go anymore. She doesn't like to procrastinate on anything. She likes to get things done fast. She's always moving. Walking, crawling, cleaning, the girl hardly ever stops unless it's to eat, drink or sleep.

▲ Loyal: Once you get to know her, she is actually going to be a loyal friend, in her own way. Be it sassy insults or just listening to a troll's problems.

Flaws:

▼ Awkwardly loud: Until you get to know her, Weywot usually has one volume. It's loud and high pitched and you can just see the discomfort clear as day on her face. Don't let it stop you from talking to her. The longer you talk, the calmer and quieter she gets.

▼ Shy: She won't come up to a random troll; that's not how she is. Usually she avoids them, but she knows she can't stay alone anymore. Certain things have to happen and she has to break out of her shell. Still, she'll end up sitting by herself, watching other trolls like some kind of creeper.

▼ Inappropriate: As a sort of defense mechanism for being talked to or made fun of for anything, she'll spout out inappropriate comments about someone's look, the way they talk, and sometimes, if she knows it, what lusus some other troll has. She knows it's a huge turn off, so she's trying really hard to control that. It doesn't always happen.

Weapon: Shovelkind

Appearance:
Weywot is burly. She's a huge muscular girl who doesn't take pride in how she looks. She dresses in minimal clothing because jeans always rip, nice shirts are always dirty and there's no point in getting new clothing.

She gives herself hair cuts with a pair of dull scissors. She tried the long hair, but it was just a hassle. She'd have to wash it all the time, put it up somehow, get it out of her face, off of her neck. It became matted, muddy, stinky and she just had enough of it. She gave up being 'girly' and just went with whatever she felt most comfortable with.

Her teeth are broken and jagged because of accidents that happen. She's had limbs broken before because of tunnels that collapsed. But, she's happy the way she is. Until she's in troll society and they look at her like she's some kind of freak.

Appearance: Here

Home: Forest

Lusus: Honey Badger

Power: N/A

Just with a quick read through I notice you mention she pent a lot of time underground, but then you never explain further. Why has she been underground? What has she been doing there?

heya! let's see what we can do with weywot

first, why does she shout? is she slightly deaf? and why does she say things out of fear? she's a blueblood, so she is high enough up the spectrum to not have to worry about getting kicked around by other trolls.

maybe you could write a bit up about her lusus, and why she chose to raise her troll underground? what kind of a relationship they have? <- what gal said

also, how does she feel about the hemospectrum? that's always a good thing to have, as it's a big part of troll society.

The longer you talk, the calmer and quieter she gets. <- again why?


what weywot needs, i think, is a bit more explanation for why she does the thing she does, and why she is the way she is. we know that she's loud and awkward, but we don't see any reason for it. what happened to make weywot the way she is? what's going on inside?

these are good points, but the whole point of crits is to add them to your troll's profile so that other people who have the same questions know the answers! :>

the thing is, all trolls are raised by strange creatures, yet all of the creatures take time to teach their trolls about the hemospectrum. so badgermom must have given her some rudimentary lessons on the fact that other trolls have different blood colours, and use them to judge each other. what her personal opinions on this are, and what she's told weywot, are up to you. but there is no way a troll could have gotten to her point in life without experiencing the hemospectrum and forming some sort of view on it!