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PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 12:08 am


Name: Arianne Lyye
Nicknames: Ari by her friends, Little Tio by her family
Age:14
Birthday: August 7
Origin:adoptive from the temple orphanage of Goddess Destra in the Aurentine Empire
Occupation:Student
Height: five foot one
Bodytype: Short but thin and petite, very pale. Her skin is pale due to a rare skin allergy that is found in the Aurentine Empire. If she is exposed to changes in light quickly, she breaks out in hives that bleed as though cut by a knife. So she usually covers her skin most of the time and uses her prescription lotion when needed to.

This disorder is based on a skin allergy called sun allergy. This version of the allergy is based on a allergic reaction I saw my mom's skin had to shellfish particles picked up by the wind.
Hair:Wavy short purple with bright blue on the ends, all of it not her natural hair color.
Eyes: light purple
Fashion: during school...normal uniform with a small splash of purple tye dye socks. After school, a cross between gypsy meets street wear.

Personality:She is quiet, a listener more then a talker with her friends. In her school uniform, she looks really young and is often mistaken for the wrong age. When she is out of her uniform, she looks like the right age with a slight bit of makeup on her eyes. The reason why she pulls pranks is very simple, to overcome her shyness in a effect.

But sometimes it backfires in negative ways. One time, it backfired on her when she had that crush on the foreign exchange student. She made cupcakes with peanut butter filling, hearing he disliked it greatly to play as a small prank. But she heard later on he was allergic to peanut butter and was sent to the hospital. He was so furious with her, he transformed out of her school and no one would talk to her for a long while.

3 good traits
~Helpfully- She helps her friends out if they are in a tight spot or need another pair of hands. If help is needed with researching, she can help pick out the right book in the public library. Even if her friends are doing something..not good..she helps them out. But it involves a animal or injuring one, she puts her foot down hard.

She has gotten into trouble with one prank, it is on her permanent record. She had helped a 'friend' get back her stuff from her ex-boyfriend's apartment. He called the cops and had them arrested for breaking and entry. She later found out her 'friend' made a deal with the police so she would get it on her record and her 'friend' gets off free. When she gets a bit overwhelmed, she sometimes bugs her friends.

~Loyal- Stick to her friends till the end of the world. If somebody need a shoulder to lean on, she is your girl. To earn her loyalty, help her with a animal in her mom's clinic and she is there to the end. Her first friend she was loyal to, helped build a make shift bird's nest for the eaglets sound in a downed tree. Loosing her loyalty is quick if you harm a animal and meant to do it....beware at your own choice. Her first real friend as he got older, got ruder and kicked a old dog in a side one day. She grew silent and for the next two weeks, he was pranked publicly which humiliated his ego. Usually, she showers her friends with gifts of homemade natural jewelry.

~Calm- On the line with a deadline, she is cool as a watermelon. This comes from helping her mom out with scared animals in her clinic. Rarely she looses her calm except when she is on her own, making choice without any guidance from friends or family. She panics a bit, talking really fast into a babble that anyone hardly understands.

She really hates being looked as being in charge. Ari doesn't see herself as leader, more like follower. At school she is looked as head leader in projects, which make it very hard for her to speak up. And when she does, it is in a fast babble. The boys think she is very weird and the girls think she is plain heartless. Although, most adults think this shows how wise she is. Her calm ability came from her now foster mom. When she came to her new home, she wouldn't speak and was nervous about everything. So Mom brought her to the clinic and set her with what ever baby animals were there that day. Slowly over time, Ari was taught about being calm even though she was afraid of harming the baby animals.

3 bad traits
~Naive- She has a little problem with lies and truths, can't tell the difference between the two. Her ex-friends used this to their advantage to twist her to their every whim. It wasn't long before she kept getting into trouble 'helping her friends'. She was transferred after the major fire at the private school Saint Lumois. Her 'friends' never bothering to keep in touch. Learning from this in her shrink sessions, she is learning to be more carefully with people. Her shrink is teaching her to be more confident and aware of her trust issues.

~Shyness- Ever since she was lost in a festival at age three by her first foster family, she has had this terrifying shyness that makes her very hard to open up to people.

Her first foster family took her to the capital's festival of Seren. She was dressed in her finest, walking with her big sister. Leading to a small puppet show, her sister told her to watch it while she went to get some hot tea. Little Ari watched the show, but she grew bored and curious about the tent next to the puppet show. She got up and looked in it and started to wander away from tent to stall. Getting tired after a while, she turned back to the area where she thought the puppet show was. She was lost and did what her foster parents told her to do when lost. Talk to a adult for help, so she wandered into a tent that was for drinking of high spirits. In the large and loud area, she asked for help from a really drunk noble. He picked her up roughly and set her on a tall chair. He then made a bet with all of his drinking buddies to see if he can make her quiet within a hour. Every time she asked for help, she was yelled at to be quiet by him or one of his drunken drinking buddies. Every time she tried to get off the chair, she was picked up and shoved back into the chair. By the end of the hour, she sat there listening and crying in silence with the drunk lord laughing and counting his money. Her foster uncle came in and found her. He slapped her and told her to never wander off again.

It clamps down on her hard, making her physically unable to talk.This shyness kept her away from saying hi to a boy she had a crush on before she was transferred. To get close to her is hard and a long process. A way to get close is visiting her mom's clinic or the library where she is looking up animal and vet books.

~Vindictive- She only gets like this when a prank goes wrong or if she is blames for a prank that she didn't do. This side of her comes out also if you harm a living creature and brag about it. When she realizes that she has been made a fool of, at first does nothing since she is not confident about confrontation. But, if it continues on, her anger grows to a boil. When this happens, she plays a fierce and humiliating public prank for all to see on those who wrong her and not get caught.


Family:Adoptive family
Latisha Gravewitch, otherwise known as Mom: Wildlife Officer. She works rescuing wild animals that come into the city. Sometimes she brings a really sick one to be nursed at home. Ari has been her daughter for seven years.
Maximo "Max" Burns, otherwise known as Dad: Stay at home Dad. He used to be a a special force of the police till he met Ari's Mom, three years ago. Ari has been her daughter for two years.
Zei: Older brother. He is home from college working at Mom's clinic part time. He is studying a fusion of bookbinding arts and being in buisness. He has several odd books found in collage that he lets Ari borrow if she wanted to. After the summer of Ari having very odd dreams, she has been sneaking into her brother's secret books. He wouldn't mind if she would bring them back when done with!...
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 12:33 pm


Senshi Name:Sailor Owl, Senshi of Owls!
Civilian Name:Arianne Lyye
Power Source:Owls The true source of owl power

Base Color:light red
Accent Color One:White
Accent Color Two:purple

Sailor Collar:transparent white with red.
Bodice:transparent Purple with a white swirl. Looks more a corset.
Bows:Small red bow on the bodice
Sleeves:none
Gloves:fingerless white that ends at the elbows.
Bottoms:light purple skirt with three barn owl feathers hanging off on one side of the skit.
Shoes:red slippers.
Tiara:White with a purple stone
Accessories: a pair of red shades..like this but the frames in purple and lens clear. She does need these glasses to see in her civilian life, for reading.
Brooch:A feather
Choker:white

Weapon: A large purple and red fan
Normal Senshi Transformation Call:Owl Power, Makeup!
Super Senshi Transformation Call: Owl Nebula Power, Makeup!
Eternal Senshi Transformation Call:Owl Eternal Power, Makeup!

Normal Senshi Attack:Flight Attack
~Effect: Summons three small owls/spirits of owls to surround and confuse the enemy.
~Usages: Maximum amount is three.
~Duration: 1.5 post
~Cooldown: three posts
~Weaknesses: During this time, She has a blind spot with her eyes. Her eyes see only heat signatures because she is connected to spirits of the owls and see through their eyes.
Super Senshi Attack:Call of the Huntress
~Effect: Summons five large owls to hunt down the enemy and blindside them from the sky.
~Usages: 3
~Duration: two posts
~Cooldown: three posts
~Weaknesses: If not in control or calm, this will make her more immersed in the hunt. Ignoring her allies.
Eternal Senshi Attack: Wild Claw
~Effect: Using the magic of the Owl, she attacks the enemy dead on with the spirit of the Great White Owl. Using her fan, she directs the attacks.
~Usages: 3
~Duration: three posts
~Cooldown: four posts
~Weaknesses: Since this attack goes wild and all over, it could hit a fellow scout. When it does......it could be crippling.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 2:23 pm


Hey there! You asked for some input in thread so I figured I would offer some.

Her personality section is very small. A good example of a decent personality explanation can be found here. 3 good traits, 3 bad traits, each with their own explanation. And tied in together so they work together to describe her. :3

Second, your senshi attacks also could use some fleshing out. If you note the format I have, I have...

Effect: What this attack does. It might not be obvious from the name!
Usages: How many times can she use this attack?
Duration: How long is the effect from this attack?
Cooldown: How long do I have to wait before using this attack again?
Weaknesses: Perhaps this attack can also hurt friends or will fail if my senshi is not concentrating.

Each attack is different and so the usages, duration, and cooldowns of each attack will usually vary but it should all balance out to have a non-overpowered attack.

Also, unless you want the artist to completely decide what her fuku looks like, you might want to give references. What kind of bottoms does she have? What kind of shoes? Fukus can look very different from what you see in the anime so you can really personalize them! Of course, if you want it to look like the ones in the anime that is also completely fine. <3

Overall, stuff could use a bit of expansion so we can really understand who Arianne is and what she does. <3
PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2012 10:08 pm


Well, the helpfulness and loyalty could be tied into something of a gullible trait, as people could take advantage of people like that. The helpfulness could also tie into a busybody or overbearing trait, such as if she is constantly offering help without being asked.

It's also helpful to ask where her positive traits stem from. Does her helpfulness come from a desire to be liked? Could this be tied into a low self-esteem trait? How about her loyalty? Does she tend to be blinded to the faults of the people to whom she is loyal? Is she the sort to follow somebody blindly? You also mention in your brief description of her that she is the sort to enjoy pranks as revenge. This could translate into both a playful trait and even a vindictive trait if taken far enough.

Hope I helped, feel free to ask if you want any more suggestions.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2012 10:42 pm


Elaborate on her personality traits,like if there is any down sides to it, what happens when bad things occur or when her pranks don't go the way she wants them to; or why she acts the way she does and why she likes playing pranks on people, what caused her to decide to use pranks..and what not.. I'm not a very good critter but yeah.  
PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2012 11:24 pm


thanks guys for the input!! 4laugh "goes to work on it."

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 7:49 pm


Nope, her fuku isn't too simple, you have some nice hint of color with the red and a pattern on the top! I'm a little confused about the little red bows, like where are they located?

I like her traits, but it seems like they could be expanded on just a bit.

It seems odd that she is shy but likes to pull pranks? Wouldn't that draw attention to her? And if she is shy, why does she get mad when she is ignored?

How far does her loyalty go, is she loyal to a friend even if they are in the wrong. And does her helpfulness extend outside her circle of friends?

I'm also a little confused about her Eternal attack, if it is "wild" which I translate as "chaotic" how does it rarely miss. It would make more sense if she attacks a lot but only a few hit....

Otherwise she is cute, love the owl theme!
PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 8:53 pm


One thing I forgot before, and this is from an artists standing, it would help to explain how her hair is blue and purple, like is it streaks, or is it blue tips or something else. This is just me nit-picking D:

I still feel like her Sullen trait isn't really a trait, I think something like vindictive would work better, because she gets back at people with pranks? Sullen is just like a reaction with the way you word it.

The shyness still seems out of place for someone who pulls pranks....maybe it is more of a fear of large crowds? Usually if you are shy, it isn't just in large crowds....

and the only other thing that sticks out is that you say no one would blame a young student for pulling pranks.....but if they thought she did it they would, I don't think that would normally stop anyone unless it was like really really young, ie a five year old or something. So you are saying, when no one is around, she pulls pranks, to get even for wrongs to her?. I would just state that, ignore the whole young thing. I like that she looks young, but it doesn't make sense when it is the reason she pulls pranks.

I'm sorry I write too much D: But she is coming along <3

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 10:54 pm


One thing, please post a link to the celestial body you're basing her on,

Thanks! <3
PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 11:05 pm


okay! 3nodding "goes to find link."

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 11:18 pm


Ah, you seem to have misunderstood a bit; if she were based upon the Owl Nebula she would be called Sailor Owl, just as Sailor Moon is based on the moon. If you can't find a celestial body called Tio then unfortunately you're going to have to change the name :<

This is a great resource, you can find all sorts of awesome names on this list: www.minorplanetcenter.net/iau/lists/MPNames.html

For your idea about plotting in Cygnus, this is a list of possible stars you could use: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_stars_in_Cygnus

Sorry for the misunderstanding <3
PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 11:46 pm


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Ah, you seem to have misunderstood a bit; if she were based upon the Owl Nebula she would be called Sailor Owl, just as Sailor Moon is based on the moon. If you can't find a celestial body called Tio then unfortunately you're going to have to change the name :<

This is a great resource, you can find all sorts of awesome names on this list: www.minorplanetcenter.net/iau/lists/MPNames.html

For your idea about plotting in Cygnus, this is a list of possible stars you could use: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_stars_in_Cygnus

Sorry for the misunderstanding <3


Ah, thanks! hmmm" goes back to rewriting."

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 11:52 pm


"whipes brow." okay..changed name and added a little bit more new info...and now..I think I am done 3nodding
PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 6:33 am


Now that makes more sense and flows better! <3 Nice work!

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 7:24 am


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Now that makes more sense and flows better! <3 Nice work!

Yay!!! thanks!! 3nodding
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