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Pyro_Bandicoot
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2012 5:42 pm


This page is for the Writing Contest. Heavenly Angel 999, Tacado and me myself, Pyro_Bandicoot will judge on the writing and see whos is the best. (If anyone submits of course. Read the rules on the announcement for more info.) Other than that get writing my fellow Nightwriters!!!
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If we get enough writers to this we can also make things interesting with 3 rounds of writing and the best writers will go on and each time you must right something different for each round.
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Hey Everyone, Heavenly Angel here, just want to let everyone know that I am thinking about deciding on a deadline for entries. This Deadline will be discussed with the other judges then added as an update in a few days.
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Hey everyone, I have an update. All entries must be submitted by October 31st at 11:59pm. All winners will be announced by November 4th. Thanks to all who partcipate and Good Luck!
PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 12:38 pm


She woke the next morning with a pounding headache; she looked around as she tried to make the pounding stop. The room was dark and she seemed to be on the floor, she had no visible injuries besides a cut on her side. She stood and made her way to the door by feeling for the walls; she thought, "This has to be a nightmare."
She found the wall and followed in until she reached a light switch, she flipped the switch and a bright glowing light filled the dark as night room; she found herself to be in an opperating room at the hospital. She had no clue how she ended up here or how badly she was injured; she found the door and slowly made her way to it, the door was locked.
She looked around then went to set in a corner of the room, she curled into a ball and started to sob. She could not remember anything not even her own name, where she was from, or how old she was; her leg and arm were broken and she had a good sized gash on her side. A guy with a doctors suit walked into the room with a nurse behind him; he smiled at the sobbing girl and replied, "We need to opperate still, Lizzie. Now be a good girl and lie down on the table."
Lizzie looked at him fearfully and finding her voice replied, "No, no I won't." She slid towards another corner farther away from the creepy doctor.
"Lizzie, we can do this the easy way or not, personally I don't care either way," He replied with the same smile on his face as he walked towards her.
"No I won't, you can't make me," Lizzie cried in fear; by now the doctor had reached her, he picked the girl up like she weighed nothing and slammed her down on the opperating table.
"I tried to be nice Lizzie, but you are wearing down my patience," He replied as her back snapped and she screamed in pain. The nurse came over and jabbed her in the arm with a needle and released medicine to make her sleep then they strapped her arms and legs down to the table.
Later she awoke to both the doctor and nurse knocked out and her brother standing next to her unstrapping her from the table; he carefully lifted her and put her in a wheelchair he had grabbed from the hall and as quick and gently as he could he got out of there with Lizzie. She blacked out and awoke later to IV's in her arm and on some type of spaceship with several others besides her brother staring at her.

((This is what I have so far for a story I am writing, I thought I would submit this part.))

SuperGurl999


forever82900

PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2012 5:42 am


Will lay in his bed for an hour after the silence descended upon the house. That was when he was sure Foster and Mittie were asleep. Even if Mittie wasn’t asleep, she wouldn’t stop him – couldn’t stop him.
He kicked the covers back and sat up, wiping away the last of the tears streaming down his cheeks like waterfalls. He used the back of his hand to wipe his nose. He put on his clothes and a coat.
Then he pulled a duffle bag out from under his bed. He had gotten up early before school that morning to pack. Everything he could possibly need was there, including water and extra food in case he would have to live in the wild a few days. He slung that on his shoulder and pulled out a pre-written note for Lyman apologizing and explaining that he wasn’t Will’s reason for leaving.
He set that and the journal on his unmade bed to be found when people came looking for him later in the morning. He took one last look around his room; and, satisfied with what he left behind, turned his back on it and walked straight out the front door.
The air was slightly chilly. It was only the end of March so Will would have to deal with the nippy air for a while to come. He crossed his arms under his armpits to keep them warm and allowed the duffle bag to beat against his leg with every step. That, the sound of his feet almost echoing on the sidewalk, and his breath he could see rising under the street lights of his apartment complex were the only things to accompany him on the long, winding path to freedom.
The path was only long and winding because he lived in the very back of the complex, in the cluster of smallest apartments that the owners didn’t want anyone to see from the street. And after he reached the street, he had an even longer and more treacherous walk to take until he could meet cars he was actually comfortable stepping into.
The street right outside Will’s apartment complex had no sidewalks and very minimal working street lights. He and Lyman knew for a fact that the weedy grass lining the road on either side was both snake- and rodent-infested. Will had to watch his feet to make sure nothing was moving in front of him before each step.
As he walked, someone spoke to him.
Will turned around and inspected the empty road behind him. He looked ahead. “Who’s there?” he asked the empty street.
“Won’t you quiet down? What if someone drives by and sees you talking to yourself?” the voice said, no quieter than Will just was.
“I’m talking to you. Who are you?”
“I guess I can be considered a friend. And you don’t have to actually talk to me. You can think something and I can hear it.”
Really? Will thought.
“Yes, really,” the voice sounded quite annoyed. “I’m Fritz Cedrick Palmer. And you’re Will Arnold Redder. I already know you because I’ve been with you for a little while now.”
Where are you?
“I’m in your brain,” Fritz said casually. “But don’t be alarmed. You sort of invited me. I mean, how else would I be here?”
Why are you here?
“Because you invited me.”
I don’t remember inviting you.
“Well you did. Maybe you just don’t remember doing it because you’ve been stressed and angry the past few days. Maybe you’d remember if I told you that I was the voice in your head telling you to run away.”
That was my idea.
Fritz sighed. “Don’t you get it? I am you!”
What? So, like, I’m schizophrenic?
“I wouldn’t put it past you. Have you seen the world you just left behind? Personally, I wouldn’t have stayed home long enough for your father to do that s*** to you tonight. Happy f***ing birthday.”
At least I got the money from him. Why didn’t you tell me to leave earlier anyway?
“Because I wasn’t strong enough until now. It took a lot of energy just putting the thought in your head a few weeks ago.”
Why are you suddenly stronger now?
“S***, you ask a lot of questions. I’m tired. Bye!”
But wait! Your answer?
Fritz sighed again. “I guess…because you had all you could take tonight. What your father did…it was worse than ever before. And it broke you, didn’t it?”
Will shivered. So what does this make us? Will tried to think quickly before Fritz left.
But it was too late. Fritz was gone. Will could feel that he was gone within himself and in the air around him. He was alone again.
PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2012 2:05 pm


An Army of Dreamers


World Helmets!
Just put on the helmet, goggles, and gloves!
Press the little red button and be transported to a world of your own creation!
The helmet reacts to your thoughts and brainwave patterns creating your own virtual world tangible to sight, taste, touch, scent and hearing!
The helmet monitors the world around you and creates obstacles that match!
Just $39.99 a set!

Posters, adds, pop-ups, and billboards proclaimed this in glaring red letters with images of fields and lakes and piles and piles of gold or candy.
I sat back at my café table sipping a cup of coffee whose genetically modified beans had been grown in an climate controlled bio-dome on the moon base and watched these adds grow more numerous until they plastered every surface. I watched the kids walk by with slim boxes under their arms, business people with the boxes tucked into bags and briefcases.
“What do you think of these ‘world helmets’?” I asked the person sitting at the table next to mine.
“My daughter bought one yesterday. She put it on after school and didn’t take it off until dinnertime. I had to lock it up so that she would do her homework. I might buy one for myself.” The woman took a sip of tea and resumed reading on her palm-book.
I got up and paid for my coffee. Then I wandered through the streets watching the kids wearing plastimesh helmets that covered their ears, mirrored goggles, and plastimesh gloves. The gloves looked like loosely woven white plastic strips, the helmet looked like the same material but it had been stiffened into a helmet shape. They were wandering around, fighting virtual enemies, or picking invisible flowers. Then adults joined the crowd of wandering children. A few at first but the crowd grew. I didn’t notice much until one day I went to the café and no one was there to make the coffee. I ‘let myself in’ and made myself a pot of coffee in the deserted kitchen. I was sitting at my favorite table when a bunch of small white parachutes carrying white boxes fell from a drop plane. One landed on the table in front of me. I opened it and inside lay a plastimesh helmet, gloves, and goggles.
“They must be getting desperate. All their consumers are dream walking. I have nothing better to do.” I shrugged and put it on. At first everything was blank white. Then it started to fill in. Slowly a table, a street, a green striped awning, and a cup of steaming coffee formed in front of me. It was a warm summer day and people were strolling up and down the cobblestone road. A waiter swooped down with a refill and I waved him away. I don’t know how long I sat there, luxuriating in the warm sun of my childhood. Wait! The sun is warm here! This isn’t real. A gray blanket of smog in all but the highest places now covered the sun. Once I realized that the image broke into pixels and returned to blank whiteness. I wrenched the helmet and gloves off, panting. I stared at the innocent looking white thing. It seemed to stare back. I turned my back to it and continued on my now ice cold coffee. Truly ice cold; a thin skin of ice had formed on top. I tossed it out onto the slushy sidewalk and went back inside to make a new pot. I returned outside with my new cup and watched the dreamers stagger around when something caught my eye. A little girl maybe six was lying on a snow bank in a summer dress. It was made of that gauzy material that girls that age seem to like. Patterned with flowers and cats. She wasn’t making snow angels, she was just lying on her stomach picking invisible flowers and weaving them into an invisible chain. Then she put an invisible daisy chain on her helmet covered head and curled up for a nap with a happy sigh.
“Wake up!” I scrambled up and out of the little fenced off café area. “You’re going to freeze to death!” I grabbed her by the arms; they felt like clothing covered metal, hard and strong beyond their size. I tried to wrench the helmet off but the girl shrieked and punched me in the chin hard enough to make stars dance before my eyes. I sat down in the slush hard. She ran off. I chased after her, once I could stand up that is. She was wearing shoes at least and that gave me clear tracks to follow. She was fast! She got enough of a lead on me that I was glad of the footprints; in summer I would have lost her. By the time I found her curled up in the snow, asleep. I had taken long enough that her lips were already blue. I scooped her up and ran back to the café. There I turned the heat up full blast and put her down next to the heating vent. After I had removed that cursed helmet of course. While she slept I went to the store across the street and took a child’s winter coat and snow-pants out of the window display and brought them back. A closer look at her dress showed a badge from the Kamari School. It was a school for the genius kids who had been created from the last stealth war. They would act as human calculators and computers. The brain behind the stealth, you might say. They were created, used, and discarded as the government willed. She woke just as I finished making hot chocolate for the both of us.
“Good morning. Have a good sleep? I found you sleepwalking in the snow and brought you in here.” I handed her a mug.
“Its winter? But it was summer just a moment ago!” she sipped her coca.
“You were dreaming that.” She didn’t say anything more. I left to find blankets and to bring my cat to the café. She had recently had kittens and I wanted to keep an eye on her. When I returned the girl was gone, as was her helmet. I was glad to see the winter gear I had found for her was gone as well. A note in wobbly handwriting was left on the table,
Thanks Mr., I like the clothes but the helmet is calling. I like that world better them this one.
She had better handwriting than I did. I wonder what her dream was like? Was she normal there? Did she have a family? What did she mean by ‘the helmet was calling’? Calling? Then I felt it. The faint feel of sunlight on my skin, the taste of coffee, the sound of people chattering echoed in my ears. I wanted the sunlight, the never-ending coffee, and the old world. As if in a dream I put out all the food I could find for the cats and put my warmest clothes on. Then I put that cursed helmet on. Why resist? There was nothing left out here anyway. The coffee would run out eventually, and then I would find more people freezing to death. Why bother? I left this grey world for the sunny one that was waiting. I wanted to believe.

In a gray city, in a grey building, in a grey office suite, in a dim grey room, sat the CEO. His grey hair was combed perfectly back, his grey suit impeccably pressed, his grey eyes watching another grey man who sat at the grey control panel in front of him. He lounged comfortably in a charcoal grey chair that was made from the skin of a now extinct animal.
“The last one has linked in sir,” the second grey man said. He adjusted the grey earpiece that rested, mostly hidden by his grey hair, in his ear.
“Very good. Get them into the transport planes and into the barracks. Then start controlling their reality.” The CEO said.
“Yes sir.” The man pressed a couple buttons on the control panel and typed in a command.
In each “city of dreamers”, the people turned as one and started walking toward the main square’s where transport planes waited.

Three years later…
An army of grey ecosuited, white helmeted, gloved and goggled people of all shapes and sizes waited in silent lines below the mirrored office building waiting for the command. Their minds locked into their personal dreams, their bodies controlled by the CEO.

The only reminder of our nameless man was a family of well-fed cats and an untouched cup of coffee.

KuroNekoNyanNya

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jaysuss

Newbie Hunter

PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2012 3:09 pm


"This is it" was the last thought in his mind as he slipped into the abyss of his own mind. The walls burned holes in his retinas with their damned shade of white. White, white everywhere he looked, causing him to fall further and further into insanity.
Maybe "insanity" was a strong word. Maybe he could bring himself back. Was it too late? Was it too late the night he was brought here?
He can hardly remember it now. It was a week ago... no, was it a month? Two?
He couldn't even remember that much. He heard a chuckle in the back of his mind, "You're pathetic."
It resonated, bouncing off every corner of his subconscious. He could almost feel the voice engulf him in the despair he felt... or should feel. What should he feel, anyway? Guilt? Shame? Pain?
Emotions were lost to him a long time ago. If he could just feel, maybe this situation would have turned out a different way. Maybe then he could plead that he wasn't, in fact, insane. Maybe it was a new level of insanity that brought him to this point. Maybe the insanity took over and was the one holding the knife that night as he pierced his skin, pushed through the muscle, and severed every damn nerve, vein, and tendon in his wrist. If he was concious he would have smiled. Instead he floated in the emptiness while the voices grew louder and louder, taunting him with their chant.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2012 8:53 am


If you enjoy I'll post the rest soon. 3nodding



Awakened by the non-stop squealing of birds outside I glanced at my projected time on the ceiling; 7:15 am. I sighed and rolled out of bed. I let myself be unruly for a while. It wasn't like I was going anywhere special, that is except the kitchen. I swung open my cabinets to find spices, poisons, remedies. Ha, not what I wanted, I pushed the rotating swivel to show lines of a variety of alcohol and downed my whiskey.. There really is nothing like it to start my day and cure a headache.
I wandered through my house haphazardly glancing back at my walls. They were lined with hidden passages and rooms... full of weaponry. Some life threatening and accumulating dust. Some with memories attached... these I swore once again to never touch. I moved upstairs to my study that overlooked my abode. The garden was starting to get unruly as the weather got colder. (Note to self : work on garden.) Pulling out some of my document to go through; it gave me a headache just looking at them. Name after name of people lost, stolen in the sake of revenge and greed. Then my name and identification. John Vee Ziranda. It was not my real name, but one I had used since birth. My real name was even unknown to me... Therefore, John it was. No need to ponder on past. I flipped through the documents until once again I came to the last person, Lacey. The girl who got away and ruined my life; or saved it depending on how you look at it. I flipped on my computer and immediately looked for evidence of her existence. As expected, nothing. I heard the doorbell ring.

I opened the door and to my surprise no one was there. My hairs stood on end and I flipped around still half drunk and dazed only to catch a throwing knife inches from my face. Someone was here! Anger rose and bubbled inside of me.
“I'm done with this! Let me be!,” my voice was ragged and worn from life. After all I'd gone through to stay hidden. To build a refuge worthy of my accomplishments. Who could've found me?
I heard shuffling to my right and flipped a statue on the ground over. Instead of busting it stood inches from the ground and the wall next to my front door slid over to reveal a small hand gun. I told myself I wouldn't use it unless necessary so I stashed it in my sock and grabbed the sword hanging. I ran to the noise and found myself staring at a small framed old man. Wire framed, gray hair and a thin grin on his face.
“What do you want old man?” I asked menacingly holding the sword out with and expert grip.
He just chuckled a little. “You know why I'm here! You never completed your last mission John! The girl is still alive. We have a witness. Tell us where to find her or your life will be gone!”
My head swirled with emotion. Lacey, how had they found out? … no. “I will never tell!”
He lunged at me and I dodged swinging the sword down at and angle but the old man twisted and caught my blade. Soon we were dancing across the room in a flurry of blades. I glanced at the counter and saw my whiskey bottle still out. Rolled, jumped, and kicked the old friend right into his head. He was knocked out instantly.
“Haha!” I couldn't help laughing. However, there was a serious matter to attend to.


Hi, my name is John Vee Ziranda, ex assasin.

Baby Bunni Bear


dancingdemise
Crew

Neophyte Firestarter

PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 10:03 am


Dark beauty is the only way I know how to describe this place, however most people only saw an old graveyard surrounded by a rusty iron gate with a few barren trees every few feet or so. It was so much more than what the bland people of my town saw. The crescent moon set a shining veil over the place illuminating it in a warm pale glow. The epitaphs were little stories just waiting to be read, like pages of a book made out of cement and dug into the ground. The trees were bare of leaves but were still strong and held memories of me playing on them like a jungle gym when I was younger. They were still beautiful even now; their spider web patterned overlapping limbs and thick trunk big enough for multiple people to lean on. The irons gates were old and rusted along the bottom but still held their dark midnight black like color in most parts and the gothic spiked pattern on the very top were lovely. The few patches of grass felt soft and fluffy and were perfect to lie on. The wind wept such sad little songs to you which echoed off the sweet barks of the trees and danced with childish delight on top of the gravestones. If you looked close enough, you could see the elegant souls of the dead in the shining light of the moon. I saw it all as a perfect beautiful paradise, a little nirvana in the s**t hole that was my town. The Garden of Eden had nothing on my graveyard, to me it would always be paradise and it still is now even though I’m gone. It’s where I fell in love, it’s where I met her, it’s where I made my first friend, and it’s a place that changed my life forever.

I've posted this on a few separate accounts around the internet and on gaia too so if you've read this before this is an original piece of work by me
PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 11:17 pm


Do not leave (Villanelle)

Do not leave me for the night.
I am pleading, and begging.
But you left me alone in the light.

You may have thought this was right.
But believe me of how wrong you are.
Do not leave me for the night.

You were my dark knight.
We were always together.
But you left me alone in the light.

I was waiting dressed in traditional white.
But I heard you have left.
Do not leave me for the night.

I tried to be okay with all my might.
But everything reminded me of you.
After you left me alone in the light.

After all these years I learned to move on,
without you in my life.
You left me alone for the night.
And left me alone in the light.

Lennerox

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