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Name: Avacyn Makenzie Zak.
∴ While Ava's heritage is a definite mix, her family takes pride in their German and Irish roots.

Nickname: She prefers to be called Ava by most.

Age: 20.

Birthday: October 30.

Sign: Scorpio.

Gemstone: Opal.

Blood Type: B positive.

Orientation: Bisexual.

Favorite Food: Italian cuisine.

Hated Food: Seafood of any sort.

Favorite Color: Pink.

Favorite Number: 5.

Favorite Animal: Cats.

Hated Animal: Snakes.

Favorite Flower: Hibiscus.

Favorite Season: Winter.

School: Graduated from a mediocre high school in the top quarter of her class and searching for work.

Hobbies:

∴ Go to Hell, Real Life (Gaming) - Games are a huge part of Avacyn's free time. They take her mind off the "here and now" and let it roam the "what if". She has been known to play to the point where it's seen as obsessive and when anything interferes with her ability to do so, she responds in an unpleasant manner. Some of her favorites include board games like Clue, Sorry, and Life, console games like Pokémon, Catherine, Final Fantasy, Dance Dance Revolution, and Soul Calibur, and computer games like The Sims, Skyrim, and (just to see how far she can make it) Slender. On the normal basis, horror games are her least favorite - she's so easily scared over nothing. She prefers multi-player situations, but isn't bothered by playing alone.

∴ Shake It Like a Polaroid Picture (Photography) - Click! Ava loves capturing everyday life and events on film. Aspiring to be a professional one day, she always has her camera ready for action around her neck. At home, she has a password protected external hard drive that she keeps all of her photos on. Her desire to digitally document everything sometimes gets her into trouble. For instance, she once snapped a shot of her sister with a male friend of hers whom Ava believed she was secretly dating during an embrace and when confronting the two with said photo, caused the fall of their friendship, since who wants to feel like the paparazzi are after them?

∴ Allons-y (Doctor Who) - As a fanatic of the show, she owns all seasons and the decorations throughout her home prove evident of her fandom - from the posters on her walls to her Tardis tea pot to her bath towel. Her favorite doctor is, without a doubt, the tenth one, alongside companion, Rose Tyler. When the two were separated, it took her nearly a week to shake her depression. She'd acted as if someone she'd known had passed on! Having said that, fellow Whovians are greeted with welcome arms. Even a stranger who shows the same love for the show is treated as a long lost relative upon this knowledge. Also, she has a tattoo on her left shoulder blade of the Time Lord seal.

Virtues:

∴ I'll Follow You into the Dark (Loyal) - Before her father passed on, he said, "Look out for your mother and sister for me." This, Ava takes to heart. To her closest friends and family, she is very supportive and protective. She tries to always be there for them, even when inconvenient to her own schedule. Their well-beings come before her own every time.

∴ Land of Confusion (Moral) - Avacyn has a high sense of moral and always tries to what she feels is right, whether or not it's lawful. Her parents instilled a mindset in her that society doesn't always know right from wrong so she must be mindful of her decisions and their consequences at all times. She agrees, wondering why certain aspects of life that were once deemed rude, vulgar, or illegal now seem to be acceptable and easily overlooked.

∴ The Early Bird Gets the Worm (Punctual) - Ava simply cannot be late to an event or meeting. She is normally at least twenty minutes early to anything she attends. She becomes frenzied when rushed, and a complete wreck when, heaven forbid, she does happen to be even a moment late to an appointment.

Flaws:

∴ Please Don't Leave Me (Codependent) - Have you ever just needed the companionship of a being to help you get through a situation? Avacyn has a need for someone to be near her all of the time. She is difficult to motivate if she has a task to complete solo. Without an accompany, she is vulnerable, wary, even more jumpy than her usual self. It definitely wears on her closest friends and family.

∴ Did You Hear That (Frightful) - Almost anything can give Ava a heart attack if she's not on guard. If she watches a scary movie, expect the lights in her home to be on throughout the entire night - sometimes for days on end! Even if she hasn't seen or heard of anything frightening, situations like meeting someone unexpectedly around a corner can give her a fright that will last for hours.

∴ Who Ordered The Nuke (Short Fuse) - Piss off Ava and she'll go down fighting. She is quick tempered and slow to forget. Any sort of tiff will send her into a rage, searching for any and all ways to harm the target of her hatefulness. The quickest way to set her off is to make a derogatory comment about the people she loves.

Physical Description:

∴ Eyes: █████ "Beryl Green", medium in size, and round in shape, like Acanthite's.

∴ Hair: █████ "Chestnut Rose", with spiraling buns, and long bangs to frame the face. (Reference: Here.)

∴ Face: Round in shape, with thin lips.

∴ Body: Pear shaped, tan in tone.

∴ Tattoo: Time Lord seal on her left shoulder blade.

∴ Height: 5 feet tall.

∴ Weight: 150 pounds.

∴ Clothes: Summer Outfit; Winter Outfit.

Father: Roger William Diederich. [Deceased - Age 42.]
∴ Avacyn's father was a family man with the desire to provide the best to his loved ones. A heart attack took his life.

Mother: Brenda Margaret Gallagher-Diederich. [Age 44.]
∴ Brenda is a very religious woman who does not see eye to eye with her daughters most of her time due to that.

Sister: Liliana Rose Diederich. [Age 18.]
∴ Liliana and Ava have come a long way in their relationship. As children, the two were always fighting and nagging, but as teenagers, became friendly with each other.

Pets: Kalypso. [Age 2.]
∴ Kalypso, sometimes called Kaly for short, is Avacyn's two year old domestic long haired black cat with white chest and a very snooty attitude. Ava's had her since her second week of life and has spoiled her ever since.

Added family, changed name, added a few blurbs here and there.

So I reworked a lot of her senshi side. I think I have an idea for the eternal attack - something where the affected persons contemplate the direction of their life. [That's not quite the way I'm meaning for it to come out. I'm just not sure the exact way to describe what I'm thinking. xP] Any help is greatly appreciated! Thanks in advance.

Hiya Xevra! So sorry it has taken me so long to look at your quest, school came up and ate me! Let’s have at your profile now, though~

It looks pretty good to me, actually, there’s just a few little things that I would like to bring up before I can trial stamp you! First off, and this isn’t that big of a deal, but where did Avacyn graduate from? And what is her job now? We like to know what the ‘adult’ players are doing for jobs, just so they don’t, you know. Make themselves the CEO of some big company or something like that!

Your hobbies, virtues and flaws nearly all look solid to me, but I just have some confusion on your last flaw! Right now it reads as this;

I Heard it Through the Grapevine (Gossip) - Ava is quick tempered and slow to forget. As a result, any sort of tiff between a small disagreement or an all out brawl will send her into a bloodthirsty rage, searching for any and all ways to harm the source of her hostility by creating falsehoods to damage the offending party's reputation. The quickest way to set her off is to make a derogatory comment about the people she loves.

And it really doesn’t seem as though it reads as gossip at all. It seems that she has more of a short temper rather than for it to be anything that gossiping really caused!

Other than that, I really think her civilian profile looks pretty solid! Let me move on to the powered section now!

I really like your attacks, and I think you have done a very good job at making sure she doesn’t come off as an over powered senshi! But, I almost think that you can go a little longer on her attack times to be honest!

If you wanted to add ten seconds to the length of each of your attacks, I think that would be just fine!

And, I think that is really all I have to say about the profile! Feel free to quote me when you’ve made your changes, and the best of luck to you for getting the character!

So sorry it has taken me so long for this!

I missed the quote and got absolutely distracted from school! Your revisions look pretty solid! Take this! 8D

That sounds good to me. smile