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Vanna1994

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 9:52 am


Long story short, this pose was inspired by the game 'Mega Man Maverick Hunter X'

I'm using my characters Seth and Nathan they're twins.
One has kind of half passed out, the other is trying to help him.
(Seth is the one who's suppose to be kinda half passed out and Nathan is the other one)
His head was supose to be lower, like.. resting on hos shoulder but.. I really stink with head angles obviously >.<
And it just looks.. weird.. not how they should be..

Any critique, or even redlines, would be greatly appreciated ^.^

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That and I never posted the final product of my last picture ^.^'
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 7:55 pm


I will probably do a redline for this, so I have one question. Is the head that is resting on the shoulder, from the guy that is passed out? Or the one standing?

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 7:59 pm


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I will probably do a redline for this, so I have one question. Is the head that is resting on the shoulder, from the guy that is passed out? Or the one standing?



That person is the one who is passed out. Having difficulites figuring out how to draw a .. well.. mostly limp body? ^.^'
Thank you very much ^.^
PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 8:35 pm


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I will probably do a redline for this, so I have one question. Is the head that is resting on the shoulder, from the guy that is passed out? Or the one standing?



That person is the one who is passed out. Having difficulites figuring out how to draw a .. well.. mostly limp body? ^.^'
Thank you very much ^.^

Alright, thanks for the clarification.

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 12:02 pm


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I will probably do a redline for this, so I have one question. Is the head that is resting on the shoulder, from the guy that is passed out? Or the one standing?



That person is the one who is passed out. Having difficulites figuring out how to draw a .. well.. mostly limp body? ^.^'
Thank you very much ^.^

Alright, thanks for the clarification.


Your welcome ^.^
PostPosted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 8:28 pm


Sorry it is taking me so long, but I am working on sewing a birthday present for a friend, so I will have to put off the redline until I finish it. : )

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 8:29 pm


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Sorry it is taking me so long, but I am working on sewing a birthday present for a friend, so I will have to put off the redline until I finish it. : )


No problem ^.^
I've put this project on hold anyway.
Got some art assignments to do, and going to try and enter this person's art contest.. ^.^'
PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2012 9:55 pm


I haven't finished the lineart yet, but I do have a bit of a tip for you. (although, I am pretty sure you have heard this before) It would probably help a lot to draw the structure of the body (you know, the circles and cylinders thing) If you skip the basic steps, especially in the learning stage, proportions and angles can get skewed.

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2012 10:22 pm


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I haven't finished the lineart yet, but I do have a bit of a tip for you. (although, I am pretty sure you have heard this before) It would probably help a lot to draw the structure of the body (you know, the circles and cylinders thing) If you skip the basic steps, especially in the learning stage, proportions and angles can get skewed.


I've finally gotten some art lessons this summer, I;ve only had three of them. We did start covering proportions last Friday, and we learned out to start the head.
Pretty sure next class might be on how to do the rest of the body.
I'm suppose to do some heads, and gesture drawings for my assignments this week ^.^
PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2012 10:25 pm


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I haven't finished the lineart yet, but I do have a bit of a tip for you. (although, I am pretty sure you have heard this before) It would probably help a lot to draw the structure of the body (you know, the circles and cylinders thing) If you skip the basic steps, especially in the learning stage, proportions and angles can get skewed.


I've finally gotten some art lessons this summer, I;ve only had three of them. We did start covering proportions last Friday, and we learned out to start the head.
Pretty sure next class might be on how to do the rest of the body.
I'm suppose to do some heads, and gesture drawings for my assignments this week ^.^

Wow, that's great. Art classes really help. I still can't believe how much I improved after taking a few myself. Good luck. smile

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2012 10:28 pm


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Wow, that's great. Art classes really help. I still can't believe how much I improved after taking a few myself. Good luck. smile


Yeah, I mean.. you can go to the internet, and people will tell you stuff.. but they dont want to go in depth and you cant actually see how its done, you cant get the step-by step instructions like you can in a class.
I know there have been a few things mentioned from being on the internet, that I've heard about in class. I didnt understand it until I got these classes.

I cant wait to see how my art looks after I have done all the classes xd
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