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Devils Trickery (song)

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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2012 3:48 pm

This is probably going to be the opening/ending/battle song to one of my stories. I dont have the whole thing written, so any help would be MUCH appreciated

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Don't be
Don't be
Don't be deceived
By the Devils Trickery

Hiding in the shadows
I can barely see your light
But I can still hear your words
Sayin its alright

(maybe chorus?)

And I promise I wont quite
I promise I wont fail
I promise I will fight
And I promise
I wont be deceived
By the Devils Trickery

Even though I can't stand
I know your here by my side
Giving me a hand

Well thats all i got so far....not sure about it though....

Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2012 5:16 pm

I like the part of how it's like, "Don't be deceived by the Devil's trickery."

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Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2012 5:17 pm

OhhBissh

I like the part of how it's like, "Don't be deceived by the Devil's trickery."

Thank you! In the story it is for the main character is constantly fighting tricks by devils/demons/evil things and people.

I just wish I could finish it.

Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2012 5:19 pm

Snowblazer

OhhBissh

I like the part of how it's like, "Don't be deceived by the Devil's trickery."

Thank you! In the story it is for the main character is constantly fighting tricks by devils/demons/evil things and people.

I just wish I could finish it.

Just… keep trying.