|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 12:30 pm
Hello! The name's Deadman Wonderland(Not my real name, obviously)! But, I go by a pen name, of which is Akatora! You may call me by whichever you prever, my username or pen name. Now, since there's really no need to further introduce myself, I have some questions!
First, I am thinking of posting a story. It would obviously go into the Fantasy category, but I am wondering if it will be good enough, or even catch anyone's interest. A brief plot follows: She was a witness of her family's death. During her escape, she encounters a beast thought to be extinct. The beast, the dragon, takes a liking to the human child who threw away everything for that beast. The dragon vows to protect her with his life as she would do so in return. The years have past, twelve, to be exact. The girl, Valencia, is now eighteen and traveling the world in search of her family's murderers. On her travels, many complications arise and even feelings for a friend start to form. Knowing what she was feeling is wrong, she starts to distance herself from her dragon. Will she be able to overcome these complications and find revenge for her family's deaths? Or will it all be a lost cause? --Ok, so what do you think? Is this good enough to post? I only started it yesterday, so I'm not a full chapter in yet. It will take a few more days, at most, three.--
Two, I could really use someone to help me enhance my writing skills, and if possible, my editing skills, too! Is anyone willing to teach me more? I'm MORE than willing to learn!
~~Thank you for reading! Have a nice day!~~
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 12:32 pm
It sounds like you have a variety of conflicts, both physical and philosophical, which is always good in a story, especially if their emotions are realistic.
I'd give it a go.
|
 |
 |
|
|
His Majesty Satan Captain
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 12:38 pm
Sounds like an interesting plot to me. As Astrauld said... "Give it a go!" XD And as for the learning part and such, that's what the guild is for. We're all here to help you. c:
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|