I'm the kind of person that has trouble finishing things--I have four novellas/wannabe novels and one short story on the go sweatdrop --but here I hope to change that. People have told me that I'm an outstanding writer/artist--for my age, which is 14--even though I've seen many people much, MUCH better than I. I know where my strong and weak points are in both assests--I spell things wrong, over-use adjectives and under estimate the knowledge of the reader, and for drawing, I'm horrible at hands, shoes, and properly spaced eyes xd but I'm not here to talk about that...--and I hope to get some valueble (but not too harsh xd ) crit from my fellow peers.
I start my existance in the CWG with a quick, short poem I wrote a while ago. (I don't usually write poetry)
Library
The door beckons you
Ordered and stacked,
The taps of knowledge
The door beckons you
Ordered and stacked,
The taps of knowledge
Yes I know, it is short. Maybe too short, some are saying. But some say it's to the point. *shrugs*
Let me know what you think, and if this thread doesn't get deleted, I'll add some more of my work. (or, if you're impatient, my journal has a few works) 3nodding
~~Crit me, and I shall crit you!! *note: I do not crit/read: gay/lesbian genre, GX-XXX rated pieces, or anime fanfiction*~~
Thank you to all who actually read all this.
-Sakura heart