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 Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2012 6:18 pm
*Sigh* Alright.. Here are my characters which I ought to RP here and forever they will be.. emotion_dowant Unless I want them to die emotion_awesome
Teachers:
Abel Valentine
Colleen Xing
Charlie Andrews
Students:
Ayu Fennel
Freayah Evans
Eros
Pending:
Eve
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 8:01 pm
I need to remind myself more often.. Since I'm using complicated characters with different behaviours and unique not to mention trying not to overpowered themselves..
Ayu Fennel
- Indeed, she's quite unpredictable.. Sometimes childish and once in a while being matured..
- During the first weeks of RPing and since she's the very first character I ever launched at Rosentale.. She's been quite a sleepy head just like Xochi.. But lately, she seems so energetic =w= maybe because of being inspired for Kentoy.. So yeah, I need to remind myself that she's sleeping everywhere.. And easily starved, the reason why I'm throwing her to eat most of the time.. I'm clinging unto it! emotion_donotwant
- I need to remove the 'Hated to be treat as a Child' since she's being acquainted to Sethrian (who is like a big brother for her)
Abel Valentine
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 8:37 pm
I am trying to finish up all my feedbacks. emotion_donotwant I still have lots of people to post for ;o;
Okay--here is my feedback on your characters.
~You've done a good job RPing Abel and Ayu's flaws--like his arrogance and her childishness and denseness. LoL. I hope they stay as grouchy and derpy as they are now.
~ your characters have a lot of non-flaws - things like clumsy, or getting sleepy, or weirdness and other stuff we don't count. Abel, Ayu and Eros all three have at least three valid flaws so they're fine as they are. Freayah and Charlie both have two valid flaws and then "getting sleepy" so you should probably add a flaw for each of them Colleen, though, only has one valid flaw which is "prideful" and I don't think I've ever really seen her be prideful in the RP.
I think that to be fair, you should probably go through and make sure no one has flaws we wouldn't accept from other RPers. I mean, a lot of the earlier characters have all kinds of flaws but since we've gotten a little more strict on it, we've been trying to make sure everyone is all consistent now so all the crew members and older members are going through and removing the non-valid flaws and replacing them with better ones.
~ A lot of your characters have really vague powers. Since we've really started to take a harder stance about making people explain their character's powers, I think it's fair for the crew to do the same thing. (I'm also going through the check out all my characters and make sure their powers are explained.) When you get a chance, I think you should try to explain the following:
- Ayu's undiscovered powers. If she has any powers you intend to put in the RP, I think you should be sure to list those out in the profile.
- Charlie's blood related magic. Because right now it doesn't explain what he can do and he's done some really unrelated stuff with it like dim the lights in class and create clothes (And I don't think he used his blood for it either time??)
- Colleen's object based powers and pendant. This could mean anything and we'd actually never let any new member have something so vague. So I think you should explain what it is.
Um...that's it I think. I hope you start using Charlie more. 8( He doesn't show up enough and it makes me saaaaaad. XD
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 8:53 pm
Lol.. haven't finish the whole set of changing xD.. Read everything and indeed I'm changing a lot! emotion_dowant -About Ayu's hidden powers.. I couldn't think of anything right now.. So I just let her be on the healing thingy.. Since Abel transferred most of his energy unto her =w= So indeed, that would be left hanging until I finally had my brain back from being nommed Dx.. haha -I think as far as I remembered he did used his blood there 0_o.. But I failed to put at the profile details on how he will be doing it.. 0_o -I'm actually working on Colleen and Freayah right now, since those two were a bit contrast when it comes to their personalities.. Since I love you much Esh.. I'll finish my first post.. reconstruct and continue our love back at the slow pace RP emotion_awesome Abel just couldn't wait.. emotion_donotwant
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 7:29 pm
Hi Mhai! You're probably still doing a lot of fixing and you have a lot of characters and stuff to do so I'll try to make this as short as possible!
I think Esh said everything that needed to be said, but I couldn't help but notice this quote in Ayu's profile: "To be honest I can read your minds BUT preferred not to do it, it’s boring and would cost me so much energy *yawns*"
And I know that Ayu will probably never read minds, but I think just to be safe, you should take out the power just to be fair because no other member in the guild would be allowed to have a character with this power in Rosentale. It's not a big deal or anything, but I just think that it's best if she just didn't have the power at all. ^^
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 7:32 pm
That was her previous profile that I need to update >.< I'm aware of it actually.. Since I'm currently busy in school today.. I'll go after my characters one at a time ^^.. Thanks for reminding me..
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 7:48 pm
Okay! Take your time and try not to stress out too much about it. ^^
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2012 7:12 pm
Alright.. I need to reevaluate my characters profile one by one! emotion_donotwant Since I let the event done before doing what I need to do for the profile updates and clarification!
I, Angel Mhai, will bap herself not to get sleepy and lazy while doing this update.. I need to edit the profile format too.. I'll use the format from the character profile thread at the main forum..
For the meantime don't interrupt me while doing it so... Because if anyone of you does.. Mhai will be lazy again Dx *whines*
Note:
Dear Diary,
I'm setting the MP3 volume in MAX just to keep me inspired and awake!!
and yes this is a crappy and nonsense post.. 8D Just to let everyone know that I'm working on it!! >8D
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2012 7:52 pm
AYU FENNEL Things need to get done with this and comments for myself: 1. Profile format changeNote to self: Mhai you need to follow the character profiles format from the main forum2. Age is around 15 years oldNote to self: Actual age is almost 15,000 years then convert it to a human actual age.. 15.. She needs to grow and be a lady too. 'Coz Abel is getting older too.. heh.3. Need to elaborate her appearanceNote to self: Crap! While reading her profile.. It shows how bad I am making it so... Not to mention Rosentale is my first RP guild.. EVER!.. Okay need to rephrase the sentence.. And add some more to describe Ayu best!4. PersonalityNote to self: Make it tabulated and elaborate it too.. Like what I did with Ayah's profile.. a. "Always found sleeping everywhere" is not part of the personality!.. Place it at the extra information.. And add it to her LIKES..
b. And so is "Always gets hungry and starved"5. Reveal her bio..Note to self: Since Ayu is my first character.. I need to discuss why she left Hell and ended up in Rosentale. Her previous name, and correlate it from the original RP... Not to the extent that I need to alter everything.. I need to brainstorm how she got her flaws and personality... Oh! and also her ability as well!6. Delete unnecessary abilities which she fails to demonstrate and focus to her healing ability ONLY!Note to self: Omit her ability to read people's mind (Now I know its part of Godmodding.. YAY! for the experience learned!). And the attraction from the opposite gender. Mary sues! >( and let it be natural though..)7. Update her status from in a relationship to single..Note to self: Since Kentoy and Ayu broke because of the third party.. (Only in RP xD ) And yes, Ayu finally moved on thanks to her friends! ^^8. Update her Likes and DislikesNote to self: Remove Hates to be treated like a child.. Since from the very start she's childish =,= and people tends to treat her as a little sister.. Not to mention her actions, looks and the way of her thinking sometimes shift to a six year old girl (recalls Sethrian's post)9. And there! Once you're done twitching her profile.. Re-evaluate again through RPing!.. And stick the changes in mind... More to add: *Birthday: February 14 *Grade: 2nd year *Blood type: AB *Height: Around 5'4" flat *Pichi! (she's alive remember! include her in Ayu's posts.. Since its a pet from Kentoy!)
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 6:49 am
ABEL VALENTINE Things need to get done with this and comments for myself: 1. Profile format changeNote to self: Same as Ayu, I need to follow the character profiles format from the main forum2. Age is around 21 years oldNote to self: Actual age is almost 21,000 years then convert it to a human actual age, 21.3. Need to describe his appearanceNote to self: I got lazy doing this and since its a rush profile.. I forgot to update it...4. PersonalityNote to self: Make it tabulated and elaborate it too.. And add more since he's been active interacting with different people.. 5. BioNote to self: Add and tell his story more.. Correlates it with Ayu 8( 6. Elaborate his abilities weaknesses...Note to self: ..)(U/C)
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